I feel it in me
this anger slowly building
this feeling so splitting
my hatred so fitting

looking past reason
to hell with this happy season
it all fit so well in me
how this has to be

how this has to end
I wont let it tend
Blind rage friends
with what my in instinct sends

with what must be done
im all past fun
well past it all
some one has to fall

heart beat rising
this anger deciphering
all passion hiding
from this fighting

is there any reason left
have I been blamed for this theft
is it my fault
tear burn like salt

everything empty
relive to tempting
its swelling in me
corrupting with out plea

with out mercy
I will live without controvercy
with out this pain
I WILL not die in vain

um... tel me how it is.

Welcome to the Abyssal Gate!

Not a bad poem overall, but I don't know if anger is really the emotion I get out of it. It seems more like remorse, isolation, or disappointment. The rhyming is a bit awkward at times. For example, "rising" and "deciphering" didn't quite work for me. Also, the first stanza followed a different rhyme scheme than the rest of the poem.

Again, not bad. I hope that you post more of your work here!

um.. yes I have made a few mistakes here and there, I will try better next time.

Hey there, welcome to AG! Hehe it seems you used my signature poem tag thing :P But that's alright ^_^.

The poem seemed like a random flow of emotion, and I'm not saying that that's bad, but this reminds me too much of something I'd hear from an unoriginal emo band. Take note, that that's actually not bad considering it's more than the majority of the people out there can do.

All and all, a good starting poem to post!

^^ Welcome to the forum! I hope ya have fun!

I thought your poem was very good! ;D How long have you been writing?