I don't think i made as many mistakes as my last one.
I hope you enjoy.

I see the end
I’ve been left with to many wounds to tend
so many wrongs to right
I have only tonight

when I find you what will I see
a sorrowed face so unhappy
a expression of misery
I’m really here to be

what will you see
what did you get from me
have I helped you in anyway
have I been stuck in dismay

how have I changed
how should I have been rearranged
how could I make it right
all I have is tonight

so many rights wronged
so many actions prolonged
I see your face so clear
I’ve lost all I’ve held dear

but I’m past shedding tears
only strengthening my fears
how can I make you see
how much of a friend I could be

Will I make everything right
I won’t let my goal out of sight
I’m still bound by regret
I still think your upset

Am I bound by fate
will I ever get past this state
will telling you make it all right
I’ve lost all taste for spite

So many choices to make
to prove that im not a fake
to throw all mistakes aside
there’s no time left to hide

I have to make this right
I wont die without a fight
It’s twilight
And I only have tonight

Pretty basic aa-bb pattern, overall decent ^_^ It intrigued me actually for some hidden reason that I have yet to discover, and that's better than most poems can do for me. Great job!

um, thanks.. i guess, I just right whatever thoughts come to mind.

Whoa, that's awesome! It's way better than your other poem! Not to sound like your other poem wasn't good, it was good too... This one is just better! Way better! =D Awesome job!

That was really good keep it up.