A song for you all ^_^. Just wrote it now, and at anyrate, tell me what you think. Thanks!



The Rainbow
By Sephyr



Kept down inside of all the stupor; derived from meaninglessness.
Intrepid heroes hold out a saving hand; we strive for our own end.
You say you weren't born on this rotten ground; you say you don't come from that seed.
You're saying all this shit, filling our ears, but you never stopped to feed.

Reject - Down - Rise - Fall again.
Projected - Thrown - Stand up - Fight again.

Blank faces gawking at me shamelessly; sewing it all shut.
Staining my hands with everyone else's greed; I'm the beast I hunt.
You tear out the insides and offer them up; You digest my rewards and f*ck me up. You take away the innocence of living. You -

Reject - Down - Rise - Fall again.
Projected - Thrown - Stand up - Fight again.
You -

You follow me around, impersonating me. You pretend to be like me, torturing.
You push the envelope, package me. You act like a godly entity. But you're not me.

Cough up all the bullshit ingested - I'm too afraid to lie now - Too afraid to wonder how.
Pull trigger, release, reliefe filles the air - Was I ever there? - Who could care?

You follow me around, impersonating me. You pretend to be like me, torturing.
You push the envelope, package me. You act like a godly entity. But you're not me.

The end of the road lies ahead, Just a few more steps. The rainbow is drawing to and end. The same way it all begins.

I really like the lyrics to this song, but I was wondering what genre of music you pictured this going with when you wrote it?

I might be playing this with my band, (I have to talk to my band about it), but anyway, it'd be melodic metal.

Sweet, that would be worth listening to for sure. I can sort of imagine the beat . . .

You may get to hear it one day if I'm lucky. XD

Hehe, that was awesome. :3 I really really enjoyed it. <3