My old friend insomnia has paid me a visit these last couple of nights, so rather than sleeping I've been writing poetry. It isn't particularly good, but I don't usually share my poetry, so be happy what I'm giving you.
Criticism and comments, please!
My Creature's Name
I often think of Frankenstein,
Another waste of a gifted mind.
Victor lived in constant fear
Of the creature looming near.
My creature has a different name,
And yet it stalks me all the same;
Toys with me like it were a game,
Even when it's feeling tame.
It's getting stronger every day.
I cannot seem to keep it at bay.
It won't come from behind, nor above,
Because my creature's name is love.
HMMMM...I really like it. It didn't end up as I expected (obviously) and I liked the aabb - aaaa - aabb pattern that made it flow quite nice. It's not as long as what I usually prefer to do, but it definitely packs a punch, heh.
Awesome PD. I didn't even know you wrote poetry. =(!
Thanks much! I'll make an effort to post poetry more often.
^_^ I'll look forward to it.
Awwww. <3 LOVE. Teehee.. :3
Anyway... XD That was really awesome!
| QUOTE (arr @ Jul 7 2005, 10:12 AM) |
Awwww. <3 LOVE. Teehee.. :3
Anyway... XD That was really awesome! |
I was beginning to worry that you might never post here! Thanks much for the praise!