Title: Ego's Lament
Description: a poem by princedrake
princedrake - August 18, 2005 08:41 PM (GMT)
Ego's Lament
Little girl I often see,
With you near I am not free.
You are not a friend of mine.
Run away, and leave no sign.
Little girl following me,
You are not my destiny.
Why won't you leave me alone,
Leave me here upon my throne?
Little girl inside of me,
We simply cannot agree.
Just give up; do not fight.
You are not my guiding light.
sephyr - August 19, 2005 02:11 AM (GMT)
Awesome. aabb - aabb patterned poem at it's best. Short but sweet ^^
princedrake - August 19, 2005 02:24 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE (sephyr @ Aug 18 2005, 09:11 PM) |
| Awesome. aabb - aabb patterned poem at it's best. Short but sweet ^^ |
Thanks! This is typical length for my poetry, so feel free to get used to it. :P You have your style, I have mine.
sephyr - August 20, 2005 01:15 AM (GMT)
Hehehe, indeed. Well feel free to show us more ;)
princedrake - August 20, 2005 01:23 AM (GMT)
| QUOTE (sephyr @ Aug 19 2005, 08:15 PM) |
| Hehehe, indeed. Well feel free to show us more ;) |
You can count on it.
Meric - August 20, 2005 04:25 AM (GMT)
I think your poems have a different effect on me cause I know you, but this one is still pretty good.