Darkness
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The darkness surounds me, but I do not fear
for shadows are my only friends.
I hide alone, invisible to all
no one notices when I fall
I'll stand alone, alone tonight,
no one notices my internal fight.
So faceless and alone I stand,
waiting for friends who will take my hand,
and lead me out of this eternal darkness.
Until then, here I stay,
waiting for that fateful day,
when I will stand alone no more,
and finaly step out of the shadows.

Well done! The flow and feel of everything is very nice and the theme behind it is supported more than sufficiently.

I like it, basically. You should definitely go further into developing your writing skills because I see a lot more potential in you, too, and would love to see you creating works as a fully developed writer.

So I await your next poem.

Nice. n.n Very good flow and stuff, as sephyr said.

I also agree! Very nice work! Keep working on it and I'm sure your skills will improve quickly.

My only complaint is that there are multiple spelling and punctuation errors. It's not really a big deal, just a pet peeve of mine. If you'd like specific examples, "fateful" and "until" each only have one L.

Thanks for sharing your work with the Gate! We all await your next!

Thanks for all the compliments! (my spelling has always sucked.) I'll try to do another one later. :D