Title: New fallen snow
Description: a U_U poem
Unique_Username - December 23, 2005 08:23 PM (GMT)
The snow falls silent, through the night,
leaving a blanket that covers all.
Undisturbed, perfect, untainted,
calming, silent, and pure.
The cold winter air
blows away all my fears,
all my imperfections, my flaws.
And so I sit in the middle of a field,
silent and pure as the snow.
princedrake - December 23, 2005 09:31 PM (GMT)
Well done. What it lacks in rhythm (no apparent syllable structure) is made up for by its ability to convey a beautiful idea in so few lines.
sephyr - December 25, 2005 03:55 AM (GMT)
Quite beautiful, actually, as I believe the intent was. Good job!
Unique_Username - January 2, 2006 04:16 AM (GMT)
^_^ Thanks! I did this one for school, and it was supposed to be a free verse, which my teacher desribed as having no specific rules. Shortly after that however, she said that it wasn't allowed to rhyme which realy confused me... :(
arr - January 7, 2006 04:27 AM (GMT)
That's very pretty. :3 I enjoyed it very much.
Unique_Username - January 11, 2006 03:13 AM (GMT)
sephyr - January 12, 2006 04:27 AM (GMT)
*Sephyr is waiting for more works of art from you* ^_^