Title: Poetry is my thing
Description: first of many
Mandasy123 - October 15, 2004 11:23 PM (GMT)
A Deck
Delicately the wind blows,
But the house stays strong.
The foundation is 20 cards,
And they work together as one.
Though they are from different decks,
They all remain the same.
Some are hearts, some are spades, some are clubs, and some are diamonds,
But the fact is they are like us.
They can stand strong in the delicate wind,
But when the furious winds come they fall.
Why is that?
Because there is nothing to hold them together,
Like there is nothing to hold the world together.
Foss Gly - October 16, 2004 12:08 AM (GMT)
Very well done! And thought-provoking, as well. Good stuff, please share more!
On a side note, I love the creativity of this forum!
Kellym - October 16, 2004 12:20 AM (GMT)
Very good, Mandy and like Foss said, please share more th:
Loren - October 16, 2004 12:26 AM (GMT)
Sandecker Fan - October 16, 2004 08:37 PM (GMT)
Very good and a point that others would do well to pay attention to.
tonym5 - October 16, 2004 10:48 PM (GMT)
Excellent writing Mandasy!!! I myself have dabbled in poetry since high school but it is a madness that can overtake a writer with its power. So beware!!! p:
Kellym - October 16, 2004 10:50 PM (GMT)
Why don't you post some, Tony ;)
hiramyaegar - October 17, 2004 01:05 AM (GMT)
Excellent work!! th: This is a very creative forum.
j2pphillips - October 17, 2004 02:12 AM (GMT)
Hey Mandy, keep it up th: th:
Mandasy123 - October 17, 2004 05:41 AM (GMT)
Thanks for the encouragment
More to come :)
Mostly Heep - October 17, 2004 05:53 AM (GMT)
Thats some good stuff Mandy th: