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AlyPhantom
Posted: Mar 18 2006, 06:40 PM


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Title:Tokyo?!

Author:AlyPhantom(me)

Disclaimer:I do not own Danny Phantom or Tokyo Mew Mew, just Chloe Yang....

Chapter 1:

"Bye Danny! Bye Chloe!"yelled Jazz as she saw Danny and Chloe get onto a plane to Tokyo, Japan. Mostly due to a foriegn exchange program. On the plane there, Danny kept staring out the window while Chloe was reading manga, Japanese Comics! Danny then turned to see what Chloe was reading.

"Chloe, you do know that, that book is backwards"asked Danny as he pointed to the book.

"No it isn't"answered Chloe.

"Yeah, it is"said Danny.

"Danny, this is a manga, that means it's japanese, which means they read like this"said Chloe. Then she went back to reading her book.

"Do you have anymore?"asked Danny.

"Yes, why did you want to read some?'asked Chloe. Danny nodded his head. She then got out another book and handed it to Danny. Danny then started to read it.When they land, their met by 3 girls.

"Hello, I am Ichigo, these are my friends Minto and Zakura. Are you Danny and Chloe?"asked a girl with pink hair.

"Yes, I'm Chloe and this is Danny"answered Chloe. Danny only nodded. Then they followed the 3 girls to a place called Cafe' Mew Mew.

"This place is so pretty!"said Chloe. Then Minto saw something on Chloe's neck.

"Excuse me, but what is that on you neck?"asked Minto.

"That's my birthmark, it pretty strange, huh?"answered Chloe as she pointed to the mark on her neck. In was in the shape of a skull. Ryou just happened to see it as he was passing by. He quickly went into the kitchen and found Keiichiro.

"The Shadow is here"said Ryou. Keiichiro just stared at Ryou.

"Are you sure, how can it be in Toyko?'asked Keiichiro.

"Because it's talking with Minto"answered Ryou. Keiichiro then glanced where Minto was and saw a girl with Death Black Hair laughing with Minto.

Meanwhile with Minto and Chloe...Chloe found out that she had so much in common with Minto.

"So you take ballet?"asked Chloe.

"Yeah, what about you?"asked Minto.

"Same here, we should practice together sometime"answered Chloe.

"Yes, we should"said Minto. Then Minto saw Danny just standing around.

"Danny, you know you guys can go for a walk at the park, it's just down the street"suggested Minto.

"Come on Danny, it'll be fun"said Chloe. Then she and Danny went to the park. While Ryou was talking to the girls.
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Posted: Mar 19 2006, 12:46 AM


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Ok, two complaints:
1. Who's Chloe? Could we get a good description please?
2. Could you get the story to move a bit slower please? It's confusing. :wacko:

Other then that it was good. Yay Tokyo Mew Mew/Mew Mew Power!!!! :D
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Posted: Mar 20 2006, 05:10 PM


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Here's a description of Chloe:

Chloe has Death Black hair with white highlights. Her eyes color is Blood red, She has a birthmark in the shape of a skull on her neck. She wears a Black Shirt with Whte long sleeves, Her Skirt is Black, She wears 1 black combat boot while the other is White. She carries around a White bookbag.

Chloe is sometimes known as the "Shadow", but she's also known as a mewmew. In her mewmew form, she has Long White hair with Black streaks. She also has bat ears, she has bat wings on her back which has spikes on it. She wears a Black dress with the bottom a little puffy like Ichigo's. White Bows are attached to the waist, a White Collar. Her boots are the same is Human mode except they have a bow attached to each one.

Chloe has a personality too! She much of a loner, but she's also a bookworm. She knows ballet and can speak Japanese. Her mood most times is normal, but if sometimes gets her upset it goes from random.

So I guess that's a pretty good description of her. I post the second chapter soon...See you later! :D
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Posted: Mar 20 2006, 09:15 PM


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Ok, please continue.
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Posted: Mar 20 2006, 09:16 PM


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Tokyo mew mew is one of my all time favorite anime shows/mangas. (only FMA and Inuyasha and Ruroni Kenshin beat it) i luv the story. plz post mor when u can.
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Posted: Mar 21 2006, 05:04 PM


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Chapter 2:

While Chloe and Danny were at the park, Ryou was talking to the girls.

"I want you guys to be careful around Chloe"said Ryou. The girls just looked at him.

"Why?"asked Minto.

"Because, she's known as the shadow"answered Ryou.

"What's the shadow?"asked Lettuce.

"The Shadow, is a dangerous thing you don't want to get messed with"answered Ryou.

"But Chloe seems nice and harmless, how could she be the shadow?"asked Ichigo. Ryou then pulled out a book, and opened it to a page title "The Shadow". It had a picture of someone with the same birthmark as Chloe. The girls just stood there looking at the book.

"But that can't be right, how could Chloe be dangerous?"thought Minto. On the page, there was a description of the Shadow, it read-

The Shadow, a very dangerous thing. It is usually a being who seems harmless but is the complete opposite. If you encounter this being, make sure it doesn't morph into it's orginal form. If it does, may hope by with you...

"But what if Chloe doesn't know she's the Shadow?"asked Ichigo.

"Well then, she'll find out somewhy, but I want you girls to make sure she doesn't morph, ok?"said Ryou. They just nodded their heads...Meanwhile with Chloe and Danny...

"Wow, this park is so beautiful"said Chloe.

"It's okay, I guess"said Danny.

"What do you mean by that?"asked Chloe.

"It just seems a little deserted, do people even visit the park?"asked Danny.

"Who knows, but it is pretty though"answered Chloe.
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Posted: Mar 21 2006, 07:50 PM


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Chloe EVIL!!!!
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Posted: Mar 22 2006, 12:51 AM


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Chapter 3:

All of a sudden, Chloe and Danny hear screams coming from somewhere in the park. They then see people run out of the park, screaming about aleins.

"Danny?"asked Chloe.

"Yeah?"asked Danny.

"Were those people just screaming about aleins?"asked Chloe.

"I think so"answered Danny.

"I thought so"said Chloe. They just stood there watching more people run out of the park. Then they see these plant things come out of the shadows...

"Ehhhh! What are those things?"yelled Chloe very grossed out. Danny just stood there looking at them.

"Their my plants, you like them?"asked a boy floating in mid-air with strange elf ears.

"Dud, what happened to your ears?"asked Danny as he started to giggle at the sight of the kid's ears. Soon Chloe and Danny burst out laughing at the kid.

"Stop it"yelled the kid. Then another kid with elf-like ears appeared out of nothing. He saw Danny and Chloe laughing at Taruto.

"Taruto, what are they laughing at?"asked Pai.

"My ears"answered Taruto very gloomly. But all of a sudden a blue arrow comes straight at Taruto and Pai....

"Wow, what was that?"thought Danny and Chloe...

"Come on, Danny let's get out of here"said Chloe, then she grabbed Danny's arm and tried to get away but couldn't. The Plant things were blocking their way out...

"Any ideas?"asked Chloe.

"Yeah"thought Danny, but he couldn't exposed himself in front of Chloe(By the way, Chloe doesn't know about Danny's ghost powers)...

Danny then saw Pai looking at Chloe's neck..and so did Chloe...

"You got a problem with the neck!"yelled Chloe...

"Why you looking at her neck, Pai?"asked Taruto...

"Because she has the symbol of the Shadow on it"answered Pai. Then 5 strange looking girls appeared...

"Guess it's time to kick your butt...again"said a purple haired girl who had wolf ears and a wolf tail...

TBC
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Posted: Mar 22 2006, 09:03 AM


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Go Zakuro/ Renee! Go Zakuro/ Renee!

Yeah... anyway. Cyniclons have big ears! :lol:
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Posted: Mar 22 2006, 09:12 PM


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lol! i never really thought about their ears...but now that you mention them they are really huge, and funny! mor when u can!
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Posted: Mar 22 2006, 09:43 PM


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Chapter 4, Part 1:

"Pudding Ring Inferno!!"yelled a girl in yellow who had a monkey tail and ears.

"Ribbon Minto Echo!!"shouted a girl who was wearing a blue outfit and had bird wings.

"Ribbon Lettuce Rush!!"yelled a girl wearing a green outfit.

"Ribbon Zakuro Pure"the wolf girl yelled. Their attacks destroyed the plants, and Chloe and Danny ran off, well behind a tree to watch the fight...

"Hey, why'd you do that?"shouted Taruto. Mew Pudding then stuck out her tounge at Taruto. Taruto and Mew Pudding started to fight each other while the rest of the team fought Pai.

"Danny, do you know who they are?"asked Chloe. She got no answer. She then turned around and saw that Danny was gone.

"Danny...Danny, where are you"said Chloe as she started to search for Danny. Meanwhile, Danny was in his alter-ego mode kown as Danny Phantom!!!


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Posted: Mar 22 2006, 09:57 PM


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FRIGGIN AWESOME!!!
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Posted: Mar 24 2006, 07:49 PM


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Chapter 4, Part 2:

Danny then flew over toward the fight while being invisible. He then shot a ectoplasmic blast at Pai, sending him flying through the air. Tokyo Mew Mew then turned around to se who did that. Danny then became visible, getting gasps from Tokyo Mew Mew.

"Who are you?'asked Mew Minto very coldly.

"I am Danny Phantom"answered Danny Phantom. Lettuce and Pudding just stared at him. He then saw Chloe behind at tree, looking amazed at him.

"He looks just like Danny, but that can't be possible"thought Chloe. She then continued to look for Danny, while Tokyo Mew Mew and Danny were busy fighing Pai and Taruto.
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Posted: Mar 24 2006, 08:21 PM


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Chapter 4, Part 3:

Chloe then bumped into a boy who fell to the ground. She quickly helped him up off the ground.

"Sorry about that"said Chloe as she looked at him. She suddenly gasped.

"Your one of those kids with the strange ears"said Chloe. He then grinned. He grabbed Chloe's arm.

"You got that right, but how come you have a mewmew signal"asked Kisshu.

"Let me go"shouted Chloe. Danny and the others heard Chloe shout. They suddenly stopped what they were doing, and raced over toward Chloe. They saw Kisshu holding Chloe's arm.

"Let her go, Kisshu"ordered Mew Minto. He then saw something on Chloe's neck.

"What's this?"asked Kisshu as he looked closley at the mark. He then saw Pai and Taruto floating in the sky. Chloe was becoming really mad, and then she transformed into her mewmew form. Her hair turned White which had Black streaks, her normal ears were replaced with bat ears, which were very long indeed. Wings appeared out of her back that had spikes on them. She was now wearing a Black dress with the bottom a little puffy, White bows were attached to the bottom of the dress. She had a White boot while the other was black. She was also holding a scythe.

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