First of, Hi, and welcome to Fusion.... :)
I've read your bio and had my eyebrows arched quite a bit. now I've been on an extended LoA, and thus might have missed something, but as far as I know, Whitecloaks generally don't go about raping women.
Sure, there might be an occasional one (there's darkfriends n bastards everywhere), but I hardly doubt they'd be in a raiding group... and even less that the one doing said multiple rape and plain murder would become lord captain commander of the legions of the light.
Perhaps you could edit your text a bit, let it be normal thugs or so, or even the rare evil Whitecloak on his own or so.
a bit more reason behind why all of a sudden he'd come back to murder someone he raped years ago might make things clearer too.
Also, could you please read trough
this page and sign up there?