Well, fter a prologue and 3 chapters, which I know some of you have read, I figure I'll make a seperate thread for comments and critique on this one. It's a big poject for me.
Obviously based somewhat on my old 'Megaman War' story, this is a bit... well, MORE than that. I'm taking a much less linear approach to the story this time.
Do you love it? Do you hate it? Tell me. I'm curious.
I have to say, that's a quite awesome story.
But why are Cutman(s) (Cutmen ?) always depicted as psychos ? That's my only "negative" comment. :)
I’ve said it before, and I’ll say it again, you are one awesome writer. That said, I cant wait for the next chapter in this and the other writing you’re doing ^_^
Sorry that new chapter took so long. I've been busy with work and some of the writing gave me some problems. I ended up introducing a slew of characters I intended to save for later, but hey, why not.
I'm going to try and get some more written by tomorrow or Saturday, to make up for the lack this week.
Oh, and as for 'Cutman' always being psychotic, think about it. He's a scissors wielding death dealer. You have to be a little insane for that to work out right. Granted, 'Laceration' is a bit different, psychoticly speaking, than my past variation on the theme of Cutman, or even from the General, so you have a whole new brand of crazy to look forward to.