Title: Criminal
Disclaimer: These are not my characters; I just play with them. The belong to Shed Productions
Part: One, of some
Rating: +18
Author's Note: This is the first time I've tried my hand at Helen & Nikki so heaven knows how it'll turn out! Replies loved x

Breathe.

Simple enough, but it’s the one thing you always forget to do as you sneak out of your office, ever so carefully glancing this way and that. Not that you’re doing anything wrong just yet; but one look at you and you’re busted. One glimpse of your shirt left unbuttoned that little bit extra so that when you shift slightly to the side an edging of black lace peeks out: and your game is over. Your skirt hitched that little bit higher, breathing heavy. Your tongue darting quickly from between your lips to lick away any excess anticipation, lust staining the outsides of your mouth. One look and it’s all there, written in your haste. You slip onto the wing, light footed and leaving trails of your secret behind, to tell the tale no one will care to read. A lock slips into place as you push back the door, tantalisingly slowly and when it’s far open enough you slip in undetected. It’s dark inside, and the first thing you make out is her low chuckle from the far end of the cell. She reads what no one else can and smells your wanting fill her room. She inhales until she’s overpowered and moving into the twilight of the window you see she’s as prepared for this evening as you are. A gentle irony flutters around your tongue as you realise you’ve layered on special clothing for her, and she’s removed all traces of hers for you. But then your mother always told you that opposites attract and perhaps she was right. You stand there, mesmerised for a while letting time slip through your fingers and embracing the luxury of simply having some to spare. You’re determined to remember every moment of tonight so you can cuddle up to it tomorrow when you’re back at home with nothing but memories to keep you warm. It’s a slow walk over to her and you kick your shoes off by the door, flexing your toes as you do so. Her eyes have locked into yours and just at that moment you truly understand the word predatory. The only thing is it applies equally to both of you and the clash of your lips against hers exudes a power that shakes you by surprise. It’s primal from there and lingering doubts of uncertainty or inadequacy are thrown through the window and barred shut, heat singeing your skin and stoking your intensity. All too quickly you’re pushed down onto the bed and you place a finger gently across her lips, slowing down the pace to her apparent dissatisfaction. Smirking at her impatience you swiftly slip above her and begin to unbutton your shirt, painstakingly slowly. Swatting her hands away as she tries to help you out you finish with the last button and locking into her eyes you gently shrug your shoulders back.

The audible gasp that escaped her was accompanied by two sets of enquiring fingers jumping out to touch the delicate lace you'd worn just for her, just for this. Tracing small circles in the material and finally discarding it altogether her hands led a dance of their own, out of sync with yours but oh so perfectly off beat. You straddled her and bend down to whisper something when the exclamation from behind you rang out

“Jesus Helen! What the….?”

Oh wow! Fantastic start to a new story! :)

I hope you update soon ..... otherwise I'm going to be driven crazy wondering what happens next .....

this is a great start-hope there is more soon

Great start please do more when you can

Great start Zoe :clap

:clap Great i cant wait for the update...... :)

Hooked!

:devil Okay,you can't leave it there...It's got a REAL GOOD start...Need an Update,Please...

Great!!

Wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

Second that,more please.

Wow. I really like your style.

I hope you'll add more chapters--this first one is definitely a gripper.

xoxo
Emms

Great start! Can't wait to see what happens next.

I can't decide if I like this as a one-off scene or if I need to find out who caught them! Brilliant writing anyway! Hope to see more from you soon, whether it's the continuation of this excellent start, or a whole different animal!

YIKES!!! :eek Great stuff!

:eek SURPRISE,SURPRISE!!!! I'D SAY YOU SHOULD KEEP GOING WITH THIS ONE. I SEE A NEW TALENT ON THE BOARD!

I like your style too, Zoe. Very intense. Excellent details. Love the title; you cannot tell if it refers to Nikki or Helen. :D

Hope to see more from you!

that was hot. great writing, looking forward to more.

YAY! Another new story! Please write more!!

great first chapter

Is this writer still on the board? The story is from 2007. Was it continued on another board? Anyone know?

OMG that was great.

Wow, incredibly good, very gripping! More please?

Fantastic!

I agree with T: it's fabulous as a stand alone, a longer tale, or a series.

So .... what do we need to do to tempt you back to share more? Fruit basket? Chocolates? Lingerie? A really, really nice pen?

Is there an update to this story? The first chapter has gipped me and I want more.....

Hoping for an update soon....please