Ok everyone will have to hang in with me on this one. I’ve never written an advertisement before but I met this really, fascinating women the other day and she is an advertising executive. Which of course got me thinking about how Mandana has done a couple of ads? So I came up with the following advert. Hopefully I can capture the right setting for you.
Setting:
Dimly lit inner city apartment.
Women dressed in a black Armani Suit. (We all know which one). Her back towards the camera, talking into a telephone. At a small table near the front door of the apartment.
Action as they say.
She hangs up the phone. Then steps back, and looks up at the clock on the wall. 7.20.
She walks over to a small bar area in the corner of the lounge room. And takes out a glass from under the bar. She places it onto of the bar. She then turns to the small bar fridge and takes out three ice cubes. She then places them into her glass. She picks up her glass, turns around to face the wall which has several bottles of alcohol hanging upside down in a spirit dispenser. She takes two shots of vodka. She then walks over to the middle of the room. She looks up at the clock again. 7.25.
She takes a drink from her vodka. She then places her drink down on the coffee table. Then takes off her jacket and throws it over the lounge. She then walks back over to the same table the telephone was on. Opens the draw, and pulls out a semi automatic 9mm pistol. Then walks back over to the coffee table. Putting the gun down on the table, she then sits on the single armchair. She has another mouthful of her drink. Picking up her gun, she looks down the barrel whilst pointing it at the front door. Then she looks at the clock again. 7.30.
She proceeds to disassemble the gun.
(Show gun in several pieces on the coffee table)
She takes another drink of her vodka. Then she looks at the clock again. 7.35
She starts resembling her gun. When she has finished she puts the gun back down on the table. She takes another mouthful of drink, then looks again at the clock. 7.40
She goes to take another drink from her vodka, but notices it is empty. So she goes to the bar area and makes herself another one. As she walks away from the bar she looks at the clock again. 7.45
She sits back down. Picks up her gun and again looks down the barrel pointing it at the front door. She looks at the clock again. 7.47
There is a knock at the door.
She stands up tucking the gun into the back of her trousers. She walks to the door and opens it.
Camera angle is from behind her. You can see only her back, and the gun.
She steps back into the flat shutting the door. You never see who was at the door.
She turns around holding a pizza box.
She then talks for the first time.
“I just wish for once they wouldn’t get here in under thirty minutes.”
:lol: Interesting idea, Liza