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me -a fox demon
celen -a wolf demon
inuyasha-a sexy demon lol
kagome - a nice girl
ed -you know
roy-a cool dude
kouga-a brother to celen not related like bffs with me too.
bankotsu-tsk,tsk,tsk :excited:
miroku-still a perve .ugh

chapter 1

me,kouga,and celen were walking in the forest like soooooooo lost .just then we came across a camp site and we saw four people.we went and asked where we are. "um do you guys know where we are ?''
"actully no this our tent village.well im inuyasha ,and thats kagome,thats ed,he came through time cool eh ,and thats roy ,he came with ed.miroku and bankotsu are in their tents"
"well we have no idea where we are ,we've been walking for days"celen said
"thats horrible ,have some fish.''ed said
"thanks.were so starved.why do you guys live here ??"i asked
"well its just so dang nice."ed said
"awsome.why do you where gloves ?"i asked
"because i have a metal arm."
"thats awsome .im a fox demon and shes a wolf demon.my name is rae and shes celen and this is kouga,he a wolf too."
'rae is so beautiful.i wonder if she likes me ?'ed thought
'ed is so hot i wonder if he thinks im pretty?'i thought.
'roy is so cute'celen thought.bankotsu came out of his tent then miroku out
of his.
"hello im miroku "miroku said in a flirty tone .
"hi. "i said emotionlessly"im going to the river with celen to swim .do any of you guys want to come?"
"ill come !''every one said except for kagome then a minute later she said she wanted to tan.'oh well same place.'i thought
i went into a dressing tent to put on my bikini and i looked sexy.
'wow :bigeyescry: 'ed thought
"do i look o.k "i asked
"you look very nice"ed said drooling alittle.
"um you have a little something right here "i said wiping the drool off his lip
"thanks ."he said sweetly.celen had the same bikini i did except hers was purple and mine was green. ed was wearing blue shorts .when we got there i jumped into the water and every one follwed .except for kagome .she wasnt being mean ,she just couldnt swim.miroku kept swimming behind me ."why do you keep swimming behind me?!?"i yelled angrilly.
"im just swimming."he said
"well swim over there "
"whatever."he left. then i swam up to ed and he was just floating there.
"hey "
"whats up rae?"
"oh nothing"
"well nothing should happen without me there."
"whats that supposed to mean?"
"you know know what i mean "
"what if i dont want you there ?"
"you know you do and i want to too."
"how did you know i liked you like that? are you a mind reader ?"
"kind of"
"well do you do you like me like that ?"
"hell yeah your the nicest, most sarcastic ,foxy fox ive ever seen"
"thats reallllllly sweet :blush: "i blshed
"and your red face is cute too"he said as he rubbed his hand on my face.
then he kissed me ,his tounge dancing with mine.
"you can kiss foxy."
"is that my new nick name?"
"you know it !!"


Hope you all like it please reply

i wouldnt mind meeting those dudes myself LOL interesting :fan:

Me: Very interesting indeed. Episcally Mc Shorty.

Ed: WHO ARE YOU CALLING A TINY WINY STONE! I"LL KICK YOUR ASS YOU!!!!!!

Me: SHUT UP SHORTY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ehh...

That was so out of character, that was sad.

((*thinking* Hopefully in this fanfic Banki-kins would be singe))

glad youall like it


"so your nick name is shorty."
"WHAT!!?!?!?!!?!?"
"im kiddng."i said laughing my head off
"oh oops . you know what ,i think your friend likes roy."
"probobly , she always goes for the coolest guys.i go for the awsome ones."
"is that why you love me .?"
"no i love you cuz your funny ,cute and your hair."
"what about my hair?"
"its color and that you braid it ."
"whats up with its color ?"
"its awsome."
"ok ,look there leaving together .lets spy om 'em."
"thats sooooo wrong ........ but ok lets go ."we followed them untill thy stopped in a clearing .
"i really like you roy."
"i really like you too.but i thought you were dating kouga."
"no he's my best friend."
"oh,wel-"
"hold up someone's there"
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"oh crap ,get under this cloak"i whisperd.
"oh i thought i smelled rae.what were you gonna say?"
"well,i was wondering if i could take you to the cherry tree."
"sure.but ,what do we do there?"
"we just hang out and talk and stuff"
"oh ok"
"see ya"roy said as he was walking away.
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"lets go before we get caught !"i said.
"ok "we went back to the tents and i put on a blue shirt and a black skirt .my
tail was sticking out of a hole in the skirt.
ed put on a white mucle shirt with jean shorts.
"hey ed,come here!"inuyasha yelled.
"ok!im coming!!!.ill be right back.
"ok bye."
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"yeah inuyasha?"
"why'd you kiss rae?!!?!?!?"
"cuz i love her!"just then inuyasha punched :boxing: the shit out of ed.they got into a huge fight . i ran up and yelled "STOP IT NOW!!!!!"and bit inuyasha in the arm.you knowi have fangs and i wanted to use 'em.
"what the hell are you doing?!?!?!??!?!??!?!?!?"
"we're fighting"
"why???!??!"
"cuz he started yelling at me!!!!!"
"inuyasha your a mucle headed idiot ,i hate you :devil: !!!!!!!"
"come on rae lets go."
"oh my gosh your nose is bleeding!!! lets go wash it off"
"ok what ever."
"he is such a jerk."
"dont worry about it ,it doesnt hurt."
"ok well why do you put up with him?"
"he helps us all the time and thats the first time we got into a fight"
"oh ,well that was wrong.first time or not."
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[SIZE=14]celen's POV[SIZE=1]
"roy im here !!"i yelled out
"hey"he said
"well......what are we going to do? "
"oh. here"he said as he handed me some flowers
"oh these are beautiful!!! :) "
"thanks .where did you come from?
"i came from kunati,its abeautiful little demon village ."
"cool.how old are you?"
"me , rae and kouga are 19."
"oh im 23"
"cool."just then i jmped on him and started making out
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"are you feeling ok"
"yeah rae im fine really fine."
"wow hahaha your funny"
"i have a question.why do you have orange streaks in your hair and a
tail????"
"because im a fox demon "
"oh .yawwwwwwwwn.im tired lets go to bed ."
"where am i supposed to sleep?"
"in my tent ,nothing will happen."
"ok ."


hope you guys like it

Me: I liked it!

Ed: (Glares at me)

Me: What? Your still mad at me for calling you a midget?

Ed: STOP CALLING ME! SMALL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

three hours later


"yawwwwwwwwn.whats that moaning??"miroku said to himself"its from eds tent"
he said going yo eds tent "OH MY GOSH YOU 2 ARE GROSS ON THE FIRST DAY YOU MET!!!!!!!"
"GET OUT!!!!!"i yelled
"dude this isnt porn ......GET OUT NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"
"what ever "
THE NEXT MORNING
"i thought you said nothing would happen?"
"i lied i knew you wanted this ."he said pointing to his body.
"do you think miroku will tell anyone?"
"yeah i do .oh well im sure they already know."
"ok."
"lets get some breakfast."
"allright."
AT BREAKFAST

"celen, did you and roy get busy??BANKOTSU asked
"NOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!"celen and roy yelled
"are you sure ??"bankotsu asked
"ok we kissed."
"miroku ,you can tell."
"ok,rae and ed did it!!!!!!!!"
"WHAAAAAAAAT??!!?!?!?!?!!?!?"
"yeah inuyasha she loves me."



thats it see you guys toomarrow and remember i love replys :) :fan: :victory: :music: especally yours dr.bob :-)

here is chapter 2
"yeah you heard miroku"i said
"why rae.whyd ya do it with him ??"iauyasha asked sadly.
"because i love him,you got a problem with that ???"
"ooooooooooo,i smell a dog and fox fight !!"kagome said."
"me too."i said as i went up in inuyasha face and started yelling"LEAVE ME AND ED ALONE !!!!!!!"and kicked inuyasha in the balls.
& quot;aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhh
hhh owwwwwww WHAT THE DUCK?!?!?!!?!!!!!!?????"
"leave me and ed alone!!!"
"bankotsu were through!"kagome said out of the blue.eveeryone stopped and looked.
"why!!?!''
"just cuz.......I LOVE KOUGA!!"she jumped into his arms and said"were getting married!!!!"
"WHAT?!?!?!!?!?!?!!?!?!"everyone said


sorry its short .i dont feel good .bankotsu is single ...YAY 4 YOU :cheer:

GREAT UP-DATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! AND FUNNY! :excited: :kicking: :cutelaugh: :hilarious: :blush:

Okay, I really want to voice my opinion now.

1) This story realy needs a lot of work:

Grammar/spelling is horrid, and there is no discription. DISCRIPTION is a good friend to a story and that is the teeny tiny thing that makes up a good story.

2) Chapters are important:

Yes, chapters are needed for a good story.

3) Disclaimers:

Where the hell is the disclaimers?

4) This story needs more of a plot:

This hardly has a good plot.

5) Pairings suck:

Come up with more original pairings.

I'm in a bad mood right now, so don't bother trying to insult me.

im sorry you think its bad . you dont have to read it if you dont want to.
CHAPTER 3
"kagome no.Please nooooooo!!!!!!" :cryriver:
"get over me .I love kouga."
"wow.that was unexpected."i said calmly.
"totally.now back to this shit with inuyasha and me ."
"wich one do you want?"inuyasha asked
"i want ed .so leave me alone. like i said one thousand times !!!"
"fuck you."inuyasha said and i ran up to him as he was walking away i jumped on him and beat him up to a bloody pulp.

"thats what you get!"i yelled .
"OWWWWWWWW!!!!!!"
"shut the hell up."ed said
"you."inuyasha said. then ed kicked him.
"haha .you really need to shut it now .bye."
"where are we going?"
"youll see."i said.i brought him to the river and i pulled him in with me with our cloths on.
"youre evil."ed said
"i know ."then he kissed me on the cheek"we are opposites and were dating."
"what if we got married?"
"what???"i asked.
"yeah. what if.thats all im asking"
"well i dont know.what would you want it to be like?"
"i would want it to be sweet and with kids."
"WHAT??? kids ??? slow down were only 19."
"not now."he said.
"oh ok how many?"
"2or 3"
"oh thats ok."
"ok so you do want to marry me."
"well yeah. i love you"



thats it for now :)

heyyyy!!



"so you want to marry me ??"ed asked
"yeah."
"so here ."
"whats this ???"i asked
"your engadement ring."
"so your porposing?"
"yes."he said.
"YAY.im gonna go tell people.!!!!!!"
"bye"
"love ya"i said as i was running away as fast as i can."
"CELEN LOOK!!!!"
"he porposed??"
"yessss"
"oh my god!!!!!!you said yes??"
"DUHHHHHH I LOPVE HIM!"
well sorrrrrrrrrrrrrrry it's short i was just tooooo tired.

I was giving advice to you.

Geeze, and you didn't even bother to take that advice to improve your story.

im not gonna change the whole story for 1 person .i agree with a few things but i dont know what a disclaimer is so stop atacking me about it and let it go.



"oh my god.rae before we left you were engaged.remember??"
"oh yeah with colton.right ?"
"exactly .so you cant marry ed."
"they probobly think were dead.so dont worry about it"
"we have only been gone for 2 weeks you dooface."
"shut up .im gonna marry ed no matter what.bye."then i went back to the river.
"your still here??"
"yep.so is it gonna stay yes??"
"duh .get this,before we left the village........i was kinda engaged."
"what??then whyd ya say yes?"
"i love you not colton"
"are you sure???"
"yes"
"okay then we got alot to do."
"ill say"

theres the short update i will do some more toomarrow.bye.im listenin to natasha beningfeild!!!!!!!!!! :victory: :music: :music:

A disclaimer means that you say that you don't own something within a story/movie/drawing.

And there are a lot of people here who would much rather read a well written story then a poorly written one.

I smell failure within the story. ;<

Aaron is always right! *Salutes*

And the writer, for that matter.

I also think this story needs alot of work, no offence. And is it ok if I edit your layout? Not the story, just the layout, cuz I can barely get through the story without noticing complete errors.

ok i dont have alot of time right now so im just gonna come out with it,Saku-tatsuya you reallllly ticked me off calling me a little kid. im not 6 im 9 so what. if you are gonna call me a little kid say it to my face.im not immature so stop thinking it. im tough .i broke almost all my bones in my body so im plain tough.ive punched more people in the face than you will in your high school so you need to shut up .my damn parents are dead so i lve with my aunt :cryriver: just be nicer thats all im sayin

yes its ok.can i call you sammy?

I highly doubt all of that B.S.

Sure! And I'm sorry about your parents.

I'll IM you about it.

i dont have an im but you can email me my email is irirshgurl1121890@aol.com
YEAH im from ireland

Pfft!

You really think that you are that tough? That isn't even tough to begin with, I know people who ALMOST died from numerous things, and one of them was threatening to beat someone up, which almost did get them killed.

Don't be so full of yourself, breaking bones doesn't make you tough, it makes you careless. Also, you're considered a kid until you're fourteen years old so don't think that you're a big kid just because you're nine years old.

You've just proved to me how immature you really are with that whole speech.

I also have been in more fights than you could ever imagine being in, so shut up little grasshopper until you actually grow up and face the fact that this is no place for you.

hey dont hate just cuz you are a bitch with no boy friend

Do you really think she needs one?

Jesus fucking christ you are immature.

Wow, you sure do come up with a lot of pathetic comebacks.

Oh, and listen to Lenin when he says: YOU FAIL

stop defending foe her and stop being a ho :excited:

You trying to be all gangsta on us eh?

As Lenin says, you fail!

How about you learn some fucking proper grammar, learn to play the game, and SHUT THE FUCK UP.

I'm fucking tired of your shitty excuses. Learn the rules or die.

wutevs i dont care what some lezbos say

...'scuze me, but WTF R U DOIN?

k. Now that You know what I'm talking about, I'm gonna go track your IP and whip out my KM 2000 Kampfmasser standard issue German Army knife.

kthx.

Homophobic, much?

Just because I don't have a boyfriend, it doesn't make me a lesbian.

And Nikoali is a GUY.

the hell wit you i dont have to learn no damn proper grammer if i dont want to so you shut the fuck up

You need proper grammar to get out there in the world.

Or are you planning on being a street whore when you grow up? If so then, good luck.

:chidorisd: oooops

oh well i know i cant write or spell so get off my ass