Note: The preview is different from the actual story. The actual story is in better writing.

Preview:

Tokyo Mew Mew-

Ichigo: What? A pink portal?!
Zakuro: We can carry it... here Ichigo, you keep it, call us if you're going in.
Shirogane: We need to investigate.

Inuyasha-

Kagome: What is this by the well? It's pink... weird.
Miroku: It's a portal, from which you can travel to a different places.
Inuyasha: *Five girls stumble from the pink portal* Who the hell are you?!

Tokyo Mew Mew-

Ichigo: W-where are we?

Chapter 1

Tokyo Mew Mew

Ichigo, Minto, Lettuce, Pudding and Zakuro were battling with Kisshu, Pai and Taruto. It took place by the Cafe, Kisshu thought he would destory their headquarters along with the girls, but it was a disfortune.
The aliens were losing so they decided to teleport back to their world. Suddenly, it rejecting them, they hurled to the ground. They looked up at the portal wide eyed. The portal was... pink?
"What has happened here?" Kisshu asked impatiently. "I demand to know."
The girls didn't want to be distracted by the weird portal, so they finished them off. The aliens were on the ground panting.
"Good, but where are they going to go?" Pudding asked.
Minto kicked them out of the outdoor Cafe Mew Mew, "scram! Make another portal back home!"
"That was harsh, don't you think?" Lettuce commented.
"Do you want them to stay here and destory the world?" Minto grunted.
Zakuro flew up to the portal. Her wolf ears sensed that it was harmless, but inside, it felt weird. She put each of her hands on both sides of the portal.
"... We can pick it up," she mumbled.
"How can you pick up a portal?" Ichigo asked.
"It's different, since it's pink.. I guess," Pudding answered for Zakuro.
Zakuro was starting to leave then stopped, "we'll start tomorrow," she said with her back still turned. She then left.
"What does she mean by that?" Ichigo asked, dumbfounded.
"It means that we're going to go investigate this portal, as in, go in it," Shirogane answered.
"Oh now you show up," Ichigo pouted.

I know short chap... I was writing this at about 10pm.

It is ok. My suggestions are that you use paragraphs. Personally script style is to plain. Needs more detail.

I know, the script stuff, yeah that's only the preview, I do the better writing skills on the actual thing.

Does anyone actually know Tokyo Mew Mew?