Uhm...the title was Yin's idea xD

Anyways. This ficcy was for Kaitlyn...Actually it is for her...but I haven't finished it and...Oh well, stop babling and start typing.

[Aang’s point of view]

Night fell upon my arms. Heavy thoughts gather around my mind. Things get worse with the fire nation after me; not to mention my hard training to become an earth bender. I can’t sleep…I haven’t slept during the past nights. Katara, Sokka and Toph seem to be so tranquil. I envy their sleep.
I take a walk near the river, watching as the moonlight reflects on the cool water as the fishes swim peacefully all over. I sigh deeply and dive my feet inside the water, it did wonders with my hurt feet. Sometimes I wish this ends…I’m tired of running away, hiding….I’m sick of Zuko and his sister, I can’t stand their horrid nation, neither their flames of corruption…I just want this to end…
I look down, watching myself on the watery mirror. A sudden noise from behind me wakes me from my silent dream. I turn to face the intruder…it’s…
-Zuko- I stand up immediately. He doesn’t seem to fight me back.
-What…what are you doing here? - I won’t let him catch me…not now.
-You know…You don’t choose who to love, Aang…love chooses you- He approaches slowly to me, I step backwards…what’s wrong with him? This is not the Zuko that’s always wishing to catch me.
He touches me gently, running his cold fingers on my bare cheek, playing with my warm ear.
-What…are you doing here, Zuko?- I frown, looking into his eyes…I can’t see anger, just Zuko’s pure soul. I realize his suffering, he’s lonely.
-I’m sorry…-He kisses my forehead. –I wish things didn’t have to be this way-
-What….I don’t understand…-I try to get away, but he holds me tight.
-Aang…You have no idea how lovely you are- He kisses my cheek this time.
-I couldn’t take it…I can’t bottle up my feelings for you…- Zuko presses our noses together and looks into my eyes.
-I loved you all along- He smiles at me with his eyes
-Zuko…what’s wrong? - I touch his scar…I could feel how he felt inside. He closes his eyes and rested his forehead on mine. His hug overwhelmed me…What to do?
I hug him back. I could hate him…not now. He is devastated, Somehow, I can understand him…
-I’m alone too- I close my eyes. He was not my foe now. He was a human being, with feelings and boulders on his shoulders. I can’t tell how much time we spent in each other’s arms. I could feel his cold body against mine. I hug him tighter, trying to warm him up.
He breaks our hug and grabs me by my shoulders. I stare at him, confused… His lips touch mine… Strangely enough, I don’t push him away. I never imagined my first kiss would be with another man, especially Zuko.
His tongue rapes my mouth, licking softly my wet muscle. I pull it back, trying to avoid his cares. He holds me closer by my cheeks; his tongue eagerly enthusiastic. I push him apart.
-What are you doing?- I frown at him, he smiles at me and leads me into the water, slowly taking my orange and yellow outfit off; he does the same with his own clothes. Patiently and peacefully, he holds me again, our bare bodies floating in the cool water. Inside the pond, he kisses me again…this time more hungrily. I give up and let him take control.
Embraced by our own ecstasy, we let our lusty emotions flow. I run my hands all over his back, he holds me by my waist, for leverage. Our sweet, hungry kisses turn into passionate lust for each other; he moves nimbly his hands upon my rear and squeezes it softly, I let a soft moan escape from my throat. He smiles and bites my tongue slightly, making waves of pleasure run through my veins.
-Z-Zuko…- I whimper, he won’t stop. His strong arms held us tight, making a slight, but pleasure contact, of our crotches.
-Hush…- He kisses my lips again, suckling my lower lip. Moving down to my sensitive neck; licking and suckling with joy… His tongue makes wonders with my collarbone and chest. The sweet pleasure of having him here with me, loving me…
We float in balmy water, always in each other’s arms… I rest on his strong chest, full of war scars. I draw an invisible line around them with the tip of my finger. He holds my hand and kisses my forehead, as if trying to say everything was alright.
-Why do you keep fighting, Zuko? Why do you hurt yourself like this?- I frown, Waiting for an inexistent answer. He just rests his head upon mine and leads me out of the water.
-Don’t ruin this beautiful night, darling- His rose lips touch mine once more. He lays me down on the smooth earth. Our bare, wet bodies made a slight but pleasant contact; he rolled me on my stomach while kissing the back part of my neck, then my back and lower back.
-Zuko?- I look up at him. His eyes no longer sweet and lonely… They burn in lust, he became into a wild animal in a matter of seconds. He holds me tight by my waist and kisses my lower cheeks.
-Zuko, don’t- I cry out, he doesn’t listen, I try to get away from him, but his grasp is strong…
-It will not hurt- He whispers. Heavy tears escape from my eyes. I cry out once again, hoping for help…
-You’ll like it- He bites my neck and tackles me down, pressing his powerful hand against my neck, for control. I feel his hard member pressing upon me. I close my eyes shut.
A sudden noise from behind the bushes catches our attention.
-Aang?- A familiar voice calls me out,,, It’s…
- Sokka!- I call his name desperately, he just stands there, in front of us, looking at the awkward scene before his eyes.
-What…what’s going on here?- He’s about to take his boomerang out, Zuko lets me go and walks towards my friend. Sokka stands still, watching the nude, erect fire bender.
-Mph…Maybe it’s because of the lusty hunger…but…Sokka, you look attractive under the moonlight- Zuko pulls him closer. I can’t look…I close my eyes and curl up in a ball.

Cool story, Man!

Eh...heh...heh...I happen to be a girl. And thanks. I'm still working on it. Right now.

Very good! I think righting Aang gang member/Zuko fanfics are the most difficult despite how shippers there are *rolls eyes* lol. I think I counted two spelling mistakes. I also think explanations on how Aang feels for Katara, Zuko-the earthbending girl, and Sokka-Suki and Yue(if Sokka is gonna join in. Oh and if Aang was really feeling so horrible about the situation why didn't he go into the Avatar State, after all it seems he has gone a.s. for smaller reasons. Once again I don't mean to rain on your parade I really like it, and I know writing fanfics for such complicated shows is difficult. :)

It takes a lot for Aang to go Avatar state, I don't think he's quite there yet.

And it's awesome so far, Buba-senpai.


But screw you. You make me feel guilty for not getting a chance to type up yours. >O I'm nearly done, I just have to write the actual sex scene. All their .... 'foreplay' is done. xD

Lilith: It's a yaoi ficcy. All we want to read is boys screwing up boys. I should have thought on all the backround and stuff, yes...But come on...it's yaoi. *laughs*
Thanks for the critics, by the way.

Kai: NO SCREW ME D< It's not my fault that you've been lazing around while I write your story.
Nah, jk. I'll be anxious to read it anyday.

And since this is only a 4 chapter story, I won't post part two right away.

Kaykay.

I'm working on yours now.

Here comes the good stuff :9

[Sokka’s point of view]

Something woke me up…it sounds like Aang’s voice. I roll on my back, trying to sleep again. His voice cries louder…I frown and stand up. I look at my sister, she sleeps. I sigh and walk to where the sound is coming… By instinct, I take my boomerang with me…
-Aang?- I call my friend out…nothing would prepare me for the scene before me…
-What… What’s going on in here?- I take grasp of my wooden boomerang. Prince Zuko approaches to me; nude and sweaty. My friend curled up in a ball, naked as well.
-Mph…Maybe it’s because of the lusty hunger…but… Sokka, you look attractive under the moonlight- Zuko places on hand on my hip and draw me closer to him, while with the other, immobilize my hand where I have my boomerang.
-A water-tribe warrior- He whispers in my ear. I close my eyes in disgust and try to get away from him.
-Don’t fight me- He grabs me by the back part of my neck, holding tight.
-You’ll make it worse- He smiles at me…I’ve never seen Zuko smiling…and this is the worse time for his first smile.
He undoes my cloth belt and takes my shirt off. Just immediately, he takes my pants off before I could do anything to defend myself.
-Aang…- I whisper, looking at my bald friend ahead me…Zuko smashes me against a close tree, holding my hands tight against the rough, wooden surface. He shoves his erect member inside me without hesitation; I try to drown my pain inside my mouth. He bites my neck, and thrusts deeper, his moans invade my mind, making it even more painful than it already was.
-Sokka!- My little airbender friend ran to us, Zuko looked at him, smacking his face with his powerful hand.
-Step back!- He growled, increasing his thrusts inside me. He held my ass in his free hand.
-Who would have thought…that you’d turn out to be so…- He licked my ear, I shivered.
-Tasty- He laughed. I bit my lips, like if it made the pain go away… Zuko stopped; he tied me up against the tree. He kissed my lips again and closed my mouth shut with my own cloth belt.
-Sit back and watch, my dear watery friend- He gave to my chick a quick lick. All I could do was watch in horror as he touched Aang with lusty hands.

Oooooooooh. I like it!

sexy.

Love it Buba

More soon

I should have added that Jet boy...he's sexi too.

Are you gonna update?