Unforgiving sins

Disclaimers: *Being chased by men in black suits* Okay, okay, I admit it. I do not own Inuyasha or any of its characters in any shape or form. They all belong to Rumiko Takahashi. But I do own Ogen and Tatsuno. Steal them and you can die.
Warnings: lemon, cursing, extreme violence

A/N: Basically, this is about what may have been Bankotsu’s life before Shichinintai were executed. You better read and reply. And also, you guys get to know who Tatsuno really is. ^.^


Chapter 1


“Ah, Tatsuno and Bankotsu have grown up so much over the past nine years in this small little village. I can’t believe that the twins are now sixteen years old. It seems like yesterday that they were only eight.” An old woman praised along with other women as they kept their glance at two young men napping under a huge tree.

These boys appeared as though they were identical twins in fact. There was however, a difference in especially their facial appearance. One had let his long black hair tied loosely in a neck based ponytail; he had a mole on his left cheek which added the appeal to his beauty. But unlike his twin, he was paler. The other one had a purple cross on his forehead, he allowed his hair to be tied in a braid and the look on his face seemed more ‘aggressive’ then his paler brother’s.

The paler brother finally woke up and yawned, only to see old women talking about him and his brother.

The pale one tapped his brother’s shoulder and pointed to the direction of the women. “Brother, they’re talking about us again. What makes us so fascinating to them?” one of the brother’s questioned. The sleeping one woke up and gazed into his twin’s eyes and then shrugged.

“Well Tatsuno, all I can say is that we’re famous around these parts for the reason that we’re orphaned twins who came here wounded.” The other twin replied. The paler one was obviously the one who was called “Tatsuno.” For a second, Tatsuno was going to say something back but then he had thought about it for a bit. Then, finally it came to him.

“Bankotsu, I suppose you’re right but something tells me that it’s not the full reason why we’re well known around these parts. I think it’s because of our birth rights that we have.” Tatsuno replied being as sure as possible that Bankotsu was listening. “Bankotsu” was obviously the name of Tatsuno’s twin. Bankotsu turned his glance to Tatsuno and smiled a bit. He knew that Tatsuno was right and it was a pretty darn good thing.

“Drop the subject Tatsuno, what are you planning on doing in the future? As for me, I think I’ll go for joining the military considering I have trained myself enough with my halberd at home. I’ve killed enough demons to be considered powerful so why shouldn’t I join the military?” Bankotsu asked his twin as he noticed the concerned look in Tatsuno’s face. As Tatsuno was going to answer, a tall, old man appeared before the twins. This man had well built arms and hard armor, and the look on his face showed the look of passion to kill.

This old man in particular caught Bankotsu’s attention easily for he seemed to be a general in the army. Bankotsu could feel his heart beating quickly; it was finally the day for him to join up with the military.

“Bankotsu, whichever one of you two is him, you have been asked to join us but you refused to go to our training sessions, instead you go off to do your own thing so therefore you cannot join us until you have reached the age of twenty five. We are unable to trust you for this.” The old man shouted at the twins as he read a scroll passage out loud.

Anger built up inside of Bankotsu, two years of rough and brutal training for nothing. The training was brutal enough that Bankotsu had nearly died of starvation for the fact that he lacked eating during the time. He couldn’t understand what made him so untrustworthy for that. He longed to shout right back at the old man. “Hey old fart, I trained myself for two years. I had to miss two weeks worth of supper just to train; I almost died through training myself for these past two years. I endured hunger, lack of sleep and I also endured listening to Tatsuno’s lectures of why I shouldn’t over train myself. The training set up by you people was too easy for me, so I decided to go through much more then I should’ve. Just think of it this way, if I had decided to stay with the group, then I would’ve never been this tough. I would’ve been a lot weaker then you think.” Bankotsu shouted, he smirked when he saw the shocked look in the old man’s face but soon it turned into anger.

WHAP! Bankotsu froze for a second as he felt pain stab into his left cheek. Indeed the old man had slapped him for talking back and objecting being rejected by the army. “Young man, I do not know exactly how brutal your training had been but I know for a fact that with that type of attitude you’re unsuited for us.” The old man shouted then started walking towards his horse. In a few seconds he got onto his brown mare and the two galloped off.

“Brother, I’m sorry. I am appalled that they never accepted you to join them, especially after how hard you tried to get extremely strong. I wish I could just beat them down and kick them in the behind, we all need that sometimes.” Tatsuno tried to cheer up Bankotsu with his short speech, but it was of no use to Bankotsu. he just turned around on Tatsuno and shrugged.

Only Bankotsu knew that he was unsuited to follow too many orders at once anyway. Anger boiled in him. “I’m pissed that they never even taken the time to listen to what I had to say. All that training for nothing at all, nothing! Those bastards will pay for wasting my time.” Bankotsu shouted, but only soon to see Tatsuno running off after the old man to see if he could resolve the problem. “Good luck Tatsuno.” Bankotsu called out to his brother as he disappeared after the man and horse.

Soon enough, Bankotsu’s anger cooled down a little bit. He shut his eyes and started to daze off into his own little world in his head. It was then he felt a soft hand touch his cheek, he woke up to see a woman.

This woman had neck length black hair which matched her purple eyes. She wore a red kimono decorated with birds on it and her red lips somehow made her seem…. lustful. Immediately Bankotsu could recognize this woman, it was Ogen Tamashi, the head priestess of the village and Tatsuno’s fiancé. What did she want from Bankotsu?

“Tatsuno, I know that you’re going to be heading off to a big city to be priest and we cannot marry. I don’t want to marry another man but you nor do I want to lose my virginity to another man. There is no law against this so, could you please take me now?” the woman pleaded with tears in her eyes as she embraced Bankotsu.

Bankotsu felt butterflies in his stomach as he heard what Ogen had to say to him. ‘Holy shit, she thinks I’m Tatsuno.’ Bankotsu though as his face turned crimson red; this woman’s words made him feel shy. But he knew that Tatsuno wasn’t going to be home for quite some time though, so he may as well pretend to be Tatsuno for now, although his own virginity will be at cost though. And if Tatsuno found out, maybe he’ll forgive Bankotsu for being human and tempted into doing this. It was a sinful act indeed, but it wouldn’t make any difference to Ogen who she slept with first, would it?


‘Forgive me Tatsuno.’ Bankotsu thought as he forced himself to kiss Ogen. With his lips sealed to hers, he forced her closer to his body and allowed her to let her tongue explore his mouth. He felt some arousal when he slipped his hand down Ogen’s hakama to feel her rounded breasts. He flinched when he saw Ogen’s lips slip off his and dragged him into her hut.

He started to blush as she covered all opening of the hut, so that no one would see. “What’s wrong Tatsuno, this first time too?” Ogen asked then giggled when Bankotsu nodded. For some unknown reason, Bankotsu wanted to get this over with and quickly. With no control, Bankotsu found himself taking off his shirt. It exposed his muscular chest, but he didn’t really care what was exposed. Before he noticed, Ogen was already undressing.

She approached the shy man and started kissing him roughly. Bankotsu thought for sure he was going to faint from being overheated, fortunately for him, he didn’t. Oddly enough, Bankotsu started to feel ‘pressure’ going on when he felt Ogen’s cold hand explore his pants, then taking it out after feeling his pressured cock.

What seemed to be hours but just a few seconds, Ogen’s kisses were heating up Bankotsu’s mouth once more. ‘I wonder what Tatsuno will think of me if he saw me with Ogen like this? Damn it, I shouldn’t be too worried about that.’ Bankotsu thought as he realized that Ogen had taken his pants off of his body. She stared at his hard manhood for a few seconds and then she finally took off the remaining of her clothing, her fondoshi. Quickly, Bankotsu laid Ogen down and forced his finger into her womanhood, just to see of course how she would respond.

Ogen’s moans excited the hell out of Bankotsu, he pulled his finger out of her and then, in a torturous way, he started lick her womanhood. “Oh Tatsuno; stop teasing me. I want you now.” Ogen yelled followed by her groans and moans. She then had an orgasm and continued to moan. In response, Bankotsu flinched and pulled back. He didn’t know what to do now. Perhaps Ogen did.

Mind in a daze, Bankotsu shot wide eyed when he felt Ogen mouth over his manhood. Not once in his life had he considered this but it did feel a lot better then he had expected it to be. Only thing that worried him was Ogen biting it. After a few seconds, Ogen took his manhood out of her mouth and looked at Bankotsu. In showing how desperate she was, she moaned and lay down with her legs spread apart. She seemed ready enough at this point.

Bankotsu lowered himself so that his hips will meet Ogen’s. Before he was just about to fully loose his virginity, he played with Ogen’s nipples. He allowed his tongue to lick her nipples in order to make them hard, enough to make her seem aroused enough. “Tatsuno, stop teasing and put it in already.” Ogen cried out as Bankotsu stopped. With a blush, Bankotsu forced his manhood into her wet womanhood. He heard Ogen yelp in some pain as he slowly got into her. Bankotsu put Ogen’s legs over his shoulder and slowly started to thrust as beads of sweat was dripping down his face. He was soon motivated to start thrusting when she started to moan and pleaded for him to go faster.

How they wanted this was in the forbidden matter. Soon enough, Bankotsu found himself lying on the ground, sweating and grunting as Ogen was on top of Bankotsu and allowing him to thrust while he was on the ground. “Go faster Tatsuno…” Ogen pleaded before Bankotsu even considered going faster on her. He started to go slightly faster but somehow, this wasn’t satisfying enough for him.

No longer did Bankotsu want to be gentle with Ogen, so quickly, he made his thrusts even faster then before. He moaned at the thought of how tight Ogen was becoming. ‘Damn, she’s so fucking tight. I think I’m going to reach my limits soon…’ Bankotsu thought as he continued thrusting into her. Soon enough she had reached orgasm at about the same time Bankotsu did.

“Tatsuno… can you do it with my breasts?” Ogen asked as she allowed Bankotsu to exit her soft and tender body. She readied herself as Bankotsu forced his manhood in between her breasts. Ogen slowly pushed her breast against each other as Bankotsu moved around a little. She waited until he came before she stopped and licked the tip of his cock. After hearing Bankotsu’s moans, Ogen sat up and embraced Bankotsu and smirked at how red his face was.

“You’ve satisfied me enough Tatsuno, thanks for listening and caring.” Ogen said which was followed by a kiss. Bankotsu’s face was even more red then ever when Ogen broke the kiss. It didn’t seem right for this to be going on. After all, Ogen was to be married to Tatsuno, not Bankotsu but yet he took away his fiancé’s virginity all because she got the wrong twin.

‘Does it make me a pervert that I enjoyed this? After all, I did like the idea that Ogen came on to me and mistaken me for Tatsuno. I hope that I am forgiven for this.’ Bankotsu thought deeply. He turned away from Ogen and sighed.

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“You soldiers don’t understand, Bankotsu did train; hell, he’s worthy to be much more then a soldier. Please, you must understand. He trained for two long years just to be joining you men. For two years I worried about his life. Please, just please give him a chance.” Tatsuno pleaded to a group of men in attention position and to a general standing among them. Already, Tatsuno was on his knees and begging for the men to at least just listen to his words of wisdom and mercy.

For a few moments, the soldiers chatted about this issue and turned to Tatsuno. They all shook their heads as soon as the chatting was gone. Tatsuno’s eyes watered and streamed down his cheeks as he took a good look at the army’s decision. “Fine, go ahead and be that way. Someday you will all regret this.” Tatsuno shouted as he stormed away from the military base and started heading home. He grumbled to himself as he walked and stomped angrily.

*claps*YAY more more more

tatsuno's gonna be sooooo angry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
XDDDD

That's if, he finds out!

Kudos on an interesting idea! I'll definitely keep reading. The writing was good, too. There were a few problems with grammar, but it was nothing too major.

Hehe. I'm thinking that Tatsuno will most definitely be pissed. xDD Please keep writing.

nice lemon

^.^ Thanks for the reveiw!

Very interesting saku....i must say i'm gonna keep on reading this one, and i didn't notice any errors at all...

And i'm just guessing that tatsuno will be pissed ^.^

anyway..great job!!

That dirty little bastard! Bankotsu how dare you lose you virginity to your brother's fiancee! ;got a little into the story; Weh.. I think it's an original idea, keep up the good work.

Yes keep going it is good.

Kari is so glad Saku put up story!!! ^^ Very, very good! I cannot wait untill the next update. Hm...wonder what will happen next...and yes, I also agree with Kikyophobia, he might be pissed....if he finds out. XD

Update whenever you can!^^

~Hikari

Sorry I didn't reply. It's very good and well written ^^ And mush longer than what I could have written. I agree with Hikari, very pissed. But that's what makes things interesting. Update soon!

Disclaimers: *Sigh* this may get annoying but I do not own Inuyasha or any of its characters, they belong to Rumiko Takahashi; if I did, then I would be rich now, wouldn’t I?

A/N: And here is chapter 2. Oh god, I just love writing this story, enjoy. ^.^



Chapter 2

Tatsuno’s anger motivated him to rant on about how worried over Bankotsu he truly was and all that worrying for nothing at all. “I recall the time Bankotsu had come close to loosing all his blood from that fight with that dragon at one time. I was so worried that I would lose my brother and be alone in the world.” Tatsuno shouted as he tripped and fell on to the ground. He got up and started grumbling again.

‘Maybe it is better if he didn’t join them at all. I mean, he is practically the only family I don’t have.’ Tatsuno thought. This very thought made him calm down and finally be able to make some effort to get home faster. He sighed when he remembered some past events that had happened.

He stared into the crystal singing sky. His heart had many feelings that griped his soul and strangled his mind into thinking that perhaps everything will turn out for the better. He sighed at the thought of his beautiful fiancé and how she would be able to comfort him with her beauty and her beautiful voice. Tatsuno knew for sure that he was going to make things all better. He continued to head home with a smirk on his face.

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Bankotsu quickly hustled out of the hut with a look of fear in his eyes. ‘Oh please, don’t let Tatsuno find out about this.’ Bankotsu thought with tears streaming down his cheeks. He ran to his house half naked, at least with only his pants on. ‘I have to somehow keep Ogen’s mouth shut about this.’ Bankotsu then thought when he sat against the wall and stared wide eyed to the ceiling. His goal was to somehow prevent Tatsuno from finding out, yes that will work. As his eyes shut tightly, he heard someone come into the hut. He opened his eyes to see his twin. Bankotsu stared fearfully into his brother’s gaze as his breath pumped with his rhythm of his heart pounding against his ribcage.

Tatsuno stared and laughed. He had indeed notice Bankotsu sweating, but of course, that could be anything. “Oh Bankotsu, I see you went straight back to training. Please, don’t pressure yourself this time to work too hard now. Indeed it’s a good thing that you are keeping strong but please; please don’t train to the point where you’re coming face to face with the reaper. You made me worry too sick of you.” Tatsuno said as he pressed his head against Bankotsu’s shoulder and started crying.

Bankotsu thought about what Tatsuno had said and took his advice seriously. But what made Bankotsu worry if his secret was revealed was Tatsuno’s tears that streamed down his chest. ‘Damn, Tatsuno better not know of what I did with Ogen. Oh please, please let him not know.’ Bankotsu thought as he patted his twin’s back and tried to smile to seem comforting but it failed.

The feel of his warm hand made Tatsuno calm down very slightly. He looked up to see his brother’s expression of some fear and smiled. “Bankotsu, you should smile. I trust with all my heart and if there were a time you were to be gone from this world, I shall go with you.” Tatsuno cried as he embraced Bankotsu tighter then ever.

The two teens kept hold of each other in a well mannered fashion. Bankotsu, too, started crying. He couldn’t believe that he had taken so much away from Tatsuno without realizing it. Indeed this sin was going to attack Bankotsu someday.

“I sure do hope you keep your word on that Tatsuno, just like you did for these past eight years.” Bankotsu replied as he kept his twin in a tight embrace. The two both felt a warm aura around each other as the embrace got tighter and tighter on the two. Their bonds as brothers were so strong that not even death could tear it apart. It was also strong enough that not even greed would take over it; the bond was that strong. What reasons were there that their bond was so tight? Maybe perhaps it was the fact that they are the only two survivors of their family line, but soon that may change.

The night was long and boring. It dragged on and on until the brothers woke up with sunlight in their faces. “Mm, Bankotsu, get up now. We’ve got to get on with our day and you must at least try to convince the army that you are worthy.” Tatsuno whispered as Bankotsu opened his eyes to see his brother’s face. For a moment he groaned but then he got up fully when he felt a good smack across the face. “Now is not the time brother, get up!” Tatsuno shouted as he stood up and walked out of the hut.

Bankotsu slowly got up, but soon hesitated to go outside due to the fact that Ogen maybe outside… telling Tatsuno all about yesterday but then to only find out that it really was Bankotsu, not Tatsuno. Fortunately enough so far she didn’t even speak a word about it. Bankotsu crept outside and nervously smiled when he saw Ogen.

“Ogen Hime, this is my twin brother, Bankotsu. Once I’m gone, he’ll take pretty good care of your life until I return to this small village. He may not be as smart as me but he has a heart of gold, he’ll dedicate his life to protect you as he has to protect me knowing that we soon will be married; right Bankotsu?” Tatsuno turned his glance to Bankotsu expecting his twin to nod. Bankotsu nodded nervously as he looked at Ogen’s body, up and down. He blushed as soon as he noticed her cleavage was showing; why would she dress like this?

Bankotsu pretended not to know who Ogen really was. “Umm, hello I see that Tatsuno had just finished talking about me. So you’re the Ogen that Tatsuno spoke of and that I have seen once… I mean well I saw you and Tatsuno together several times.” Bankotsu indeed felt too nervous to speak to Ogen, especially after what happened yesterday. His nervousness only made Ogen laugh.

“Hello there, I am Ogen, Ogen Hime. I saw you as well the other day, you and Tatsuno going skinny dipping on such a hot day. Why if I were you, I would do the same thing only I’m not allowed to considering it’s indecent for women to do so. Anyways, I see that you're my sort-of-brother-in-law. I expected your personality to be very different then all those stories about you I heard.” Ogen replied to Bankotsu with a sweet smile on her face. Her smile seemed lustful and tempting for Bankotsu to lay his lips on. The look in Ogen’s purple eyes made him want her body even more, no matter how sinful the thoughts of it were. Her voice kept a tight grip on him which made him unable to speak out right away.

“Well, I see that you two may get along. Well Bankotsu, I’ll go talk to the government and see what I can do to allow you in the army, okay?” Tatsuno said to Bankotsu with a smirk on his face. That little bastard knew that he was going to get Bankotsu exactly what seems to be what he wants. But little did Tatsuno know what Bankotsu really wanted right now. Ogen nodded and smiled, she knew that Tatsuno would return in about probably three months.

Tatsuno’s intentions of leaving the village was to work as a blacksmith in another village, not far, far away but far enough that Bankotsu couldn’t just see him everyday. “So long Tatsuno, see you in three months. And please don’t forget to return.” Ogen pleaded looking as sad as possible. Tatsuno embraced Ogen and smiled slightly and then he nodded. Ogen nodded back and let go of Tatsuno. The man got onto the nearest horse possible and galloped away.

“Hmm, I guess that I’m going to have to get to know you Bankotsu within the next three months. Oh well, at least I’ll get to know my future brother in law, right?” Ogen looked into Bankotsu’s blue eyes, looking for an answer from him. He nodded and turned away nervously. This made Ogen laugh. “Oh don’t be so shy, I don’t bite you know. You act like you’ve committed a sin of some sort or something.” Ogen’s wise words were true about Bankotsu; he did commit a bad deed recently.

Guilt was something that Bankotsu didn’t like having. It kept him down to the ground and prevented him from enjoying his regular life without worrying about being caught. Of course, he wasn’t going to say anything about yesterday. “Do you like red?” Bankotsu asked trying to drop his guilt. Ogen nodded awkwardly and raised an eyebrow to show that his question was odd.

“Why do you ask whether or not I like red? Is it because of my kimono?” Ogen replied staring at Bankotsu awkwardly. Maybe perhaps he was nervous over something. However, all Bankotsu did was nod. She smiled a little and then grabbed his hand. Perhaps it was time for the two to get to know each other after all. “I don’t mind that you’re shy but don’t ask totally stupid questions. Now that you asked me one, I shall ask you one. Do you like ramen?” Ogen asked, but only to see Bankotsu nodding. “Damn it Bankotsu, you can just talk you know; it’s not that hard for you to just talk to me, Tatsuno has no problems doing it so neither should you.” Ogen lectured Bankotsu looking a little annoyed. She now was convinced that Bankotsu might have done a bad deed.

“Umm, I like ramen but not a lot of it for some reason. And I just get shy around girls; it’s just how I can be.” Bankotsu finally replied while looking down to the ground blushing. Ogen sighed and smacked her forehead. It was guilt that kept Bankotsu all shy and nervous. Guilt had just over powered Bankotsu’s will to speak to Ogen. Guilt was overwhelming!

“Let’s go to the market together; maybe then you’ll grow out of shyness.” Ogen suggested as she kept hold of Bankotsu’s hand and smiled again. Along the entire walk to the village market, Bankotsu couldn’t keep his eyes off of Ogen’s bosom. They were nicely shaped and developed. He sighed when he turned his glance away. “Ah, look at how huge this place is. I can’t believe that I haven’t been here for months. Come on; let’s look for something good to eat!” Ogen suggested as she dragged Bankotsu near a ramen stand. It was a damn good thing Bankotsu had some money with him.

Bankotsu and Ogen paid attention to the ramen until they heard a commotion right next to them. Two men held another man by his arms and kept his hand against the wall of a stand. This man brought interest into Bankotsu; this man was unlike any other men he had known, this one cross dressed. “I’m telling you, my younger brothers are starving and I need that food to keep them alive.” The cross dresser cried as one of the two men who had held the crosser pulled his hair.

“Excuses, excuses; that’s what they all say when they are caught stealing; you thief; you filthy little thief. You were lucky last time you were caught because we didn’t do anything. Now that you’ve done this crime; you shall be arrested.” One of the two bold men shouted as the cross dresser started crying. Ogen clapped her hands to her mouth and ran up to the cross dresser’s aid.

“Please, have mercy on this man. Sure, he stole but it was for a good cause and it was to help others. What’s so immoral about that?” Ogen asked as she tried to sweet talk the two buff men. Bankotsu ran to her side and glared at the two men.

The two men shrugged and pushed the cross dresser aside, then pointed their swords at Bankotsu. “We’ll let the man go, but this is his last chance.” They shouted as they walked away angrily.

Ogen looked down and helped the cross dresser up from the ground. “Thanks, you can call me by my nickname, Jakotsu. My real name is Jochia but father used to call me Jakotsu all the time, at least until he died that is. So since then, I’ve been forced to look after my siblings.” The cross dresser praised Ogen with a cheerful smile on his face and then he looked into the sky and flipped out. “Oh no; I’m sorry but I have to go now.” Jakotsu cried as he ran off and disappeared from Ogen and Bankotsu’s gaze.

“Well, that was odd but at least we managed to make ourselves useful.” Bankotsu said as he led Ogen away from the market and stared at her breasts. Strangely she didn’t notice him staring nor did she seem to care at all. She looked up and smiled and leaned her head against Bankotsu’s shoulder. He blushed slightly but then accepted the affection and continued walking.

‘Hopefully, Tatsuno will never find out.’ Bankotsu thought while he managed to get Ogen back to her home.

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Me liekei!

ME: IF I DONT GET MORE STORY U ALL WILL BE SORRY

*turned into ful demon self*

COLTON:*kisses me and changes too.*

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BOTH : *attack every thing in site!

Don't you have a real comment on the story other then that?

i like how tatsuno didnt find out yet and that bankotsu is all neverous now

Anyone else going to reply?

A full chapter there!! Loved the 'brotherly moments' there so cute.^^

I hope he doesn't find out, otherwise, Bankotsu's in for a lot. X_x

Update again, when you can.^^

~Hikari

I will update most likely Tuseday.

I can't wait Saku ^_^ This story is going awesome so far. :kittylove: :victory: :excited: :fan: :cheer:

Agreed, the story fricken' rocks!

The first chapter's "highlight part" got me horny. x3

Oh! And so the guilt-trip begins! Ha, ha! Sorry, Bankotsu, but you know that Tatsuno will find out eventually. Good luck. ;D

Nice chapter, Saku. I can't wait for the next one. (I only found a few grammatical errors.) Please keep writing. I'll be waiting impatiently for the next addition. xD

Aye..saku ye have written a truly splendid story so far...and i can't wait to see what happens next

Me too! :blush:

Disclaimers: *Sigh* I know that this will get annoying but I do not own Bankotsu in anyway… I don’t own the Shichinintai, okay? And if I did then they would still be around. They belong to Rumiko Takahashi. But what I do own is this fan-fiction and Tatsuno and Ogen use them without permission and I’ll get mad.

A/N: I finally have reached chapter three. ^. ^ I honestly hope that you people read and reply or I won’t update.


Chapter 3

‘Well, I only have to watch over her for three months and it’s not like she is going to bite.’ Bankotsu thought as he started to have somewhat of a hard time sleeping. Ogen’s hand that he felt… it felt a lot different then what Bankotsu would expect it to feel at all. The feeling, he couldn’t get it off his mind. He couldn’t get Ogen off his mind period. ‘Hopefully, Tatsuno will never know of this… unless she’s… no, she can’t be.’ Bankotsu thought as he fell asleep. He slept breathing somewhat heavily.

Something was filled in his head… it was thoughts of something odd. Bankotsu woke up in a damp dark place. He looked around to see something odd… as if it were a ghost of some sort.

It became crystal clear now; he saw Ogen and Tatsuno in front of him. For some reason, Ogen was tied down and covered in scars while Tatsuno seemed very angry. “Brother, you have taken too much away from me. I let you walk all over me and allowed you to have so much I am fed up. Please Bankotsu, fess up your sin.” Tatsuno snarled at Bankotsu… his look in his eyes made Bankotsu shudder in pure guilt.

It was then he saw some items being thrown at him. A rope and an axe, at this point Bankotsu knew it was a dream.

With a shock, Bankotsu woke up. Beads of sweat dripped down his cheeks as he looked around and realized that morning had come already. He looked around and saw only his and his brother’s hut walls. ‘Fuck, I just had a nightmare created by guilt. Now I better be more careful or I may end up dying…’ Bankotsu thought as he got up then got dressed. He soon went outside; only then to see Ogen.

“Hello Bankotsu. I see that you’re up early today. Ah, you’re just like Tatsuno… an early bird! Let’s go take a walk by the bridge!” Ogen said as she immediately grabbed Bankotsu’s hand and started running out of the village with him. The expression on her face was nothing but pure happiness. The look in her purple eyes made Bankotsu a little happy at least, at least for the fact that he’s keeping his future sister-in law happy.

Ogen of course wasn’t a very fast runner so Bankotsu could keep with her pace of running. There was something about Ogen that seemed to make Bankotsu’s mind fly, but he couldn’t quite make it out yet. She seemed so happy lately although other times she would be gloomy as far as Bankotsu could recall correctly.

It was then they stopped at a rather strong bridge. Bankotsu blushed as Ogen kept hold of his hand. “Oh look Bankotsu the fish are swimming upstream. Their colors are beautiful. My god, Mother Nature must be an artist of some kind to have such wonderful fish swimming as graceful as that.” Ogen shouted as she pointed at the water to see fish squirming about.

The fish seemed as though they were small little droplets of paint in the crystal water. Bankotsu couldn’t get over the fact that he had never looked at water this way before.

“Bankotsu-Sama, that night two nights ago, I knew it was you, not Tatsuno. I understand that you feel guilty about it. My reasoning for that was that it didn’t matter which twin I got, in a way I still had a little of both of you no matter what. You both look almost the same and both have like the same voice so in my perspective, it makes no difference which. Also, Tatsuno never even bothered to neither pleasure me nor even talk to me as much as you would.

“Our marriage was arranged by my father at his own whim and only because Tatsuno was very fond of me. But then there was the day I saw both of you, the day I will remember for the rest of my life. I didn’t exactly love you at first because there is no such thing as ‘love at first sight’. At first, I thought that you were too cocky for your own good. But then I started to become really fond of you when I saw you training all by yourself. You had good intentions and I really loved that part about you; you prepare yourself much further ahead then most soldiers ever did. I only hope that Tatsuno will never find out and take anger out on you.” Ogen admitted bravely while tears started running down her cheeks.

For some odd reason Bankotsu felt love struck. Of course he felt some anger but at the same time he felt love struck. Bankotsu had to think long and hard about what he was going to say next to Ogen. His face of course was crimson red but he couldn’t help but put up a small faint smile to Ogen. He pretended that it was all right that he slept with his brother’s fiancé, even though it wasn’t at all. It was an unforgiving sin.

At this point though, Bankotsu didn’t care if it was a sin or not. Without any hesitation at all, Bankotsu slapped his lips against Ogen’s trying to forget about all the guilt he was currently carrying.

How Tatsuno would react seemed like nothing to Bankotsu now. All Tatsuno would probably do is probably rant and rave and that’s it. Of course, there always was something more Tatsuno might do if Bankotsu isn’t careful enough. He continued to kiss Ogen until his tongue quit exploring her sweet addicting mouth.

It soon that Ogen broke the kiss and stared into Bankotsu’s eyes, she seemed to be begging for something. “Bankotsu… let’s run away from this place and move somewhere far, far away. Out far west and to the lands of peace. Let’s get married there and have a big family.” Ogen suggested as she trailed her kiss down to Bankotsu’s neck and started kissing there. Bankotsu moaned slightly at the feeling but then he gently pushed her away.

“You want me to fuck you that badly, don’t you?” Bankotsu asked playfully but he just stood there eyeing Ogen’s body but then he remembered his bond with Tatsuno.

Somehow, she just didn’t seem to have that lustful touch on her when she looked away and shook her head. This brought guilt into Bankotsu’s mind even more then it already had. Perhaps she might want to wait for a little while before having sex with Bankotsu again.

“Bankotsu just wait until we get out of here first, okay?” Ogen pleaded as she pulled Bankotsu close to her body and kissed him. After the gripping kiss was broken, Ogen smiled gently and then held Bankotsu’s hand tighter. The two ended up walking away together.

It was then that Bankotsu heard hissing coming from behind him. What was it? He turned around to see a demon of some sort behind the two. It was big, tall and it seemed to be taller then Bankotsu or Ogen put together. “You mortals are on my bridge. Get lost or I’ll eat you both.” The demon hissed. Its slimy green body seemed as though it was going to be difficult for Bankotsu to be able to fight it. The yellow orbs glared at Bankotsu’s body and then the lizard demon licked his lips. “I’m going to start with you, young man.” The lizard hissed as he charged at Bankotsu.

Quickly, in a huff, Bankotsu jumped back and tossed Ogen to the sidelines just to make sure of her safety. “Well, you want to me first just so that it’ll be easier to eat Ogen? You make me sick. I bet you won’t even get the chance to eat her once I’m through with you. I fought hydras, three eyed crows and even tough soldiers. I don’t think that you’ll be any different.” Bankotsu said as he smirked at the demon. He was sure that the demon was scared.

Unfortunately the demon punched Bankotsu before he was even ready to punch. He felt pain strike through his back and arms as he hit the nearest tree that was there. For sure he was off the bridge now. “God damn it, I wasn’t ready yet!” Bankotsu shouted as he spat out something. He looked to his hand and realized that a back tooth was missing. Blood dripped slyly onto his clothes as he groaned in pain and rubbed his cheek while he looked up angrily at the lizard demon.

“Hah, I knocked out your tooth. You mad about it now? Awe don’t worry it’ll grow back soon enough.” The lizard demon mocked but then soon it found itself in the river water, hitting the rocky ground in pain. Bankotsu growled at the demon and picked it up by its slimy neck and started chocking it.

Blood dripped from Bankotsu’s mouth rapidly. Then, in a flash he punched the lizard demon away without any effort whatsoever. Being his brutal self, Bankotsu kicked the lizard demon rapidly and stepped on it aggressively. Soon enough it was already dead but Bankotsu didn’t care, he continued to kick it anyway.

It was then someone had grabbed Bankotsu from behind and embraced him while crying. “Brother just stop it, you’re doing overkill! Please brother, just stop.” A familiar voice called. Bankotsu turned his head slightly around to see Tatsuno. Bankotsu felt as though he were to cry as he saw tears fill in Tatsuno’s aquamarine colored eyes.

“Tatsuno, I’m busy killing a demon, leave me alone!” Bankotsu shouted as he pushed Tatsuno away and took out a knife to stab the demon’s corpse. The stabs were getting extremely bloody and sticky for Bankotsu. But if Bankotsu was doing this to feel satisfied, then he would continue to do it. He got up and laughed a bit as he dropped the knife and looked at the blood stains on his clothes.

Tatsuno stared at his brother and then backed away frightened of his own brother. “Bankotsu, what is wrong with you? Are you sadistic or something?” Bankotsu turned to Tatsuno and glared. But soon enough he calmed down and started walking away.

‘What the hell is wrong with me?’ Bankotsu thought as he stared at his own clothes covered in demon slime and blood. He shuddered at the thought that he had just killed a demon and stabbed its dead body with a knife.

omg....bankotsu turned guilt into rage!! hee hee he killed again i miss the old bankotsu....the murderur i love..

OHHHHHHHHHHHHH Good story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Update soon its really good!

Thanks for reading and replying. x3

Very good Saku. :victory: I can't wait for the next update!!! :fan:

Update should be up either today or sometime this week.

I'm not updating until I get more replies.

AHHHHHHHH!!! well thats just mean your just tryin to get me to cry :cryriver: aren't ya!? Yep thats what I thought! Your so mean!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :cryriver: Please update and I'll be you bestest friend!!!!

An update will be up once my internet isn't being a bitch anymore.-

Whee!! I'm excited Saku. ^_^ I hope your internet gets fixed as well...I hate when mine acts up... :scaryangry:

YAY!!! Don't you hate when computers are mean?! Mine was yesterday :(

Yes, I hate it when computers are mean. xD

In fact, update should be up tonight if things go well.

I just read this whole thing. I FREAKIN LIKE IT! -Scratch that- I FREAKIN LOVE IT!
Very originial. I cannot wait until the next update Saku.

Hopefully it shall be tonight!

Agreed.

((A peice of chapter 4 to keep you guys busy))

Disclaimers: This will get annoying after a while. I do not own Inuyasha or any of its characters in any shape or form. I do not make any money off of this so therefore, Viz can’t sue me. Bankotsu and Shichinintai belong to Rumiko Takahashi! If I did own them then I would be stinking rich and the series would be focused on Bankotsu.

A/N: Finally, I made it to chapter 4. I feel so proud that I’m going to make this chapter a page longer then the others (which were four pages long) ^. ^ Enjoy

Chapter 4

“Come on Bankotsu; keep a tight grip on that rope!” Tatsuno called while looking down at Bankotsu as his brother kept a tight grip on a rope. The rope was attached to a fairly strong rock which could easily slip off by the waterfall and make Bankotsu to go falling down and down until he died. Of course, Bankotsu was somehow able to hang onto the rope tight enough so he wouldn’t slip on the slippery rocks covered in silky water.

Bankotsu finally looked up and glared at his twin. “Tatsuno you no good bitchy brother of mine, this is far too life risking for training.” Bankotsu shouted as he tried to climb up but only to feel as though he was tripping and falling.

Although Tatsuno didn’t exactly like seeing Bankotsu being close to falling, he knew that this was the right thing for his older twin. “For the love of the gods Bankotsu, stop your whining and start climbing or no ramen for you.” Tatsuno shouted as he checked to make sure that the rope was tied nice and tight for Bankotsu. He felt a shudder when he noticed Bankotsu glaring at him sadistically. “Okay fine, I’ll pull you up.” Tatsuno shouted as he yanked the rope up quickly, allowing Bankotsu to finally be right next to him on land.

Tatsuno felt a shudder as Bankotsu glared. “Well sorry Bankotsu but you were the one who wanted life risking training so I helped you out with it but yet you’re unhappy about it. Why can’t I keep you happy?” Tatsuno asked his twin brother. Bankotsu shrugged at his younger twin and started to walk away.

For a second Bankotsu had no answer at all but then soon enough he had a comeback. “Well, you can’t keep me happy because you’re too soft core.” Bankotsu replied keeping a good eye on Tatsuno.

Tatsuno looked angry for a second but then smiled as he patted Bankotsu’s head. “Oh well, as long as we’re still brothers with a strong bond, I shouldn’t complain.” Tatsuno finally said, “Besides, we’re family and we should keep our brotherly bond strong.” That comment made Bankotsu smile and embrace his brother tightly. The bond indeed was getting stronger but Bankotsu’s guilt also kept building as he thought of that one night with Ogen.

‘I wish that I can say the same for you Tatsuno but after that night, I shouldn’t be saying anything about keeping our bond strong.’ Bankotsu thought as he let his brother out of his tight, strong embrace. He longed to tell Tatsuno about Ogen and him but he just couldn’t, it would be suicide.

“Bankotsu, I have to get going again to find job opportunities. Hell, I might find you one.” Tatsuno said as he kissed his brother’s cheek. Bankotsu felt his heart beat quick and fast but was soon calmed as Tatsuno walked away smiling.

OMG!

So awesome.

I especially loved this piece.
Aww...So sexy.. :excited:

Cannot wait for the next update. :)