Title: Demons, Alchemist, and DEATH
Description: Trust me, this is awesome byond compare
inu-elrick - July 24, 2007 08:40 AM (GMT)
Note: this is my first fanfic, dont kill me :bigeyescry:
Disclaimer: I do not own any of the Inuyasha or Full Metal Alchemist Charicters
Chapter one, Back From the Grave Again
bankotsu: Wth, my head, wait I feel pain, that means...
???:You are alive again. I shall bring the others back as well and...
Bankotsu: First, don't bring rinkotsu back.
???:Why not?
Bankotsu: I have my reasons. :spooky:
???:O...K... and the other thing
Bankotsu: Are You Narku.
???:I got rid of him a while ago. Now, I am going to pair you up with some more
teammates. work togerther or ill put you all in a torrent of pain and mysery.
Bankotsu: yah yah, i heard it all before. :sleepy:
???:Im off then.
Bankotsu: Wait, what is youre name?
Kirick: Kirick, don't forget it. (leaves through the window)
Bankotsu: Weirdo
Lust: So you are who we are working with. Who are you trying to kill?
Bankotsu: A half-demon named Inuyasha, you?
Lust: A alchemist brat named Edward Elrick.
Glutiny: Can I eat him Lust?
Lust: For the last time Glutiny, no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Bankotsu: Uh, hi. My name is Bankotsu.
Lust: Well, you know our names now.
Bankotsu: I thought there was 7 of you.
Lust: We were the only ones revived. I thought there were 7 of you.
Bankotsu: Just me and my brother, Jukotsu, were revived.
Lust: Well, where is he?
Bankotsu: still out cold, we should start moving now.
Lust: Shouldn't we wake him up first?
Bankotsu: Trust me, we will get much farther with him out cold. Lets hurry.
Lust: Ok, im ready.
Glutiny:... But i'm still hungry.
Bankotsu: Is he like this alot? :scaryangry:
Lust: Sadly :scaryangry:
Ill update later, till then i leave you with the dancing cow
:dancow:
Dr.Bob - July 25, 2007 02:59 AM (GMT)
Good, good. Up-date soon!
DemonChild=)D - July 25, 2007 04:58 AM (GMT)
YAY My 2 favorite anime in 1 story! Whats not to love? :dancow:
Inuyasha=ausome! - July 25, 2007 04:20 PM (GMT)
Nice story! But...Jakotsu is a guy. He's just gay. Or did you already know that?
inu-elrick - July 25, 2007 05:23 PM (GMT)
Inuyasha=ausome! - July 25, 2007 05:26 PM (GMT)
Im guessing that meens you didint know...
inu-elrick - July 25, 2007 06:49 PM (GMT)
there, i fixed it. (chills) im not going to be able to go to sleep, and neither will Ed, wahahahahahahahahahahahah
ahaha :kicking:
inu-elrick - July 25, 2007 07:29 PM (GMT)
UPDATE!!!
Ed: So youre name is Inuysha?
Inuyasha: Yes, wth are you doing here anyways. I know this isn't youre time. You are half metal.
Ed: i'd like to know that question myself.
Inuyasha: Well, who is youre friend there?
Ed: Thats my younger brother, Al.
Al: Hello.
Inuyasha: hm, younger, but he is so much taller than you.
Ed: :scaryangry: What :spooky:
Al: He he he
Inuyasha: and you brother looks like one of those washing machenes.
Al: Washing machene. :bigeyescry:
Ed: He he he.
Inuyasha: Well you should meet the others, c'mon
Ed: So this is youre village?
Inuyasha: Not really. We just come here alot.
Ed and Al: Can we stay here a while.
Kagome: I don't see why not. Im Kagome.
Ed: Hi ("wow she is hot. I hope that she isn't with that Inuyasha guy.")
Al: Hi, how are you.
Kagome: fine, thank you.
Inuyasha: That is Sango.
Ed: Hi ("wow, she is hot too, there is still hope")
Al: Hi.
Inuyasha: and that is Miroku.
Ed: Hi (& quot;nooooooooooooooooooo
oooooooo, life isn't fair")
Al: hello.
(Bonryu (no idea how it is spelled) is thrown at one of the villages)
Bankotsu: Well well, long time no see.
Inuyasha: Bankotsu!! But I thought...
Jakotsu: We were dead. not yet honney
Ed: ha ha, she is you ennamy, yet she is hitting on you?
Jakotsu: Im a guy and yes.
Ed: ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
hhhhh, my eyes and ears are burning.
Bankotsu: Inuasha, have any last words.
Inuyasha: EAT ADAMANT BITCH! (dose adamant barrage)
Bankotsu: That's it?
(Bankotsu blocks them with his sword and it wasn't even scratched.
Bankotsu: lets see how you like it! (dose adamant barrage)
Inuyasha: wtf (get clobered but not killed)
Bankotsu: (Sheeths sword) prepare youre self for another time. I want an actuall fight. (leaves)
Inuyasha: Dam you to hell. (passes out from bloodlost)
That is all for right now. send replies!
Dr.Bob - July 26, 2007 03:50 AM (GMT)
HEY ED! INUYASHA CALLED YOU SHORT!!!!!!!!
Ed: >_< WHO ARE YOU CALLING A TINY SPECK OF RICE!!!!!! I"LL KICK YOUR ASS! DOG BOY!!!!!! (Punchs Inuyasha square in the face).
O_O; Um.... That was a good up-date!
inu-elrick - July 26, 2007 03:46 PM (GMT)
I thnk Ed had some restrant because he saw the claws, fangs, and the big ass sword.
I was trying to save his anger for Miroku. More funny.
Anyways, i'll update soon
Saku-Tatsuya - July 26, 2007 04:35 PM (GMT)
Hmmmm
.....
Where's the disclaimers?
The chapters?
And most of all, where's the imagery?
If you want to write scripts, you still need detail and dialogs. This is just too random to be even considered a play/script/whatever the hell you're trying to write in.
All this is, is a bunch of sentences and such mushed together with characters speaking and that's it.
inu-elrick - July 27, 2007 07:43 PM (GMT)
im so sorry, but im going out of town for a couple of days so I can't update. :cryriver: Keep this fic alive.
childsnapdragon - August 23, 2007 12:09 AM (GMT)
Dr.BOb! belldandy is indanger on anti reality you better save her!
P.s
Me likey but work on the paragraphs and disclaimers! and inuyasha SAY SORRY! :devil:
Kiara-Inu's_hanyou_friend - September 6, 2007 10:32 PM (GMT)
i like it!
my two favorite jap anime shows in one!
FABULOUS