Look i am woring out the bugs, but i will have this posted by firday, so for now, here is the prologue.

I dont own Inuyasha.........for now......

I am Kiara Kamatashi. I am what is considred to be a 'Half-breed', and I was all by myself until that one faithful day when I met the love of my life, InuYasha.

I have always been on my own ever since I was 5 years old. Now, I live with Inuyasha and our friends come to visit every day.

My life before Inuyasha was a living hell.........


So wat do u think????
reply plz!!

sounds pretty good...u should continue!!

Can you please explain how she met up with Inuyasha and friends? It would be like, more helpful ^^;

i will get to that in the story.....

dont rush it

Sounds good to me Kyoto!
Please continue!
Can I be in it? Pretty please?
I'll send you what I want my character to look like and be like!
Oh, before I forget, I'm trying to figure out a chappie that revolves around your character. It's difficult, but I'll get it!
n_n

Sorry for double posting! My computer went haywire there for a moment!

Please continue this story sounds god and I want to here the rest

Ok ^^

Well of course you can!!! Just let me figure out wat is happenin first, but you can PM me with the details. Thanks for offering.

o ya, and THANK YOU FOR TRYING TO DO A CHAPTER ON ME!!! I feel luved!

So, dont laugh, but i am going to attempt to write the first chapter.

Once again, i dont own Inuyasha.

Chp. 1 The Unloved Hanyou

"Help me!" I heard a voice cry. I ran as quickly as I could to get to where the voice was coming from.
By the way, my name is Kiara Kamatashi. I am 17 years old and I live on my own. It wasnt always this way though....

*Flashback*
"Kiara!!! Kiara?"
"Here I am mother!" I called.
"Come in for dinner dear! I am waiting on you!" she called back.
I started to run tward my house and when I got there, I found my house on fire. I ran inside, and i found my mother.......
Dead.

*End Flashback*

I wasnt gonna let someone else die because I didnt get there fast enough to help them. I ran faster than normal. I ran so fast, my feet barely touched the ground.

I stopped. What I saw just about made me sick.
An entire village, slain just for the hell of it.
i looked around for any sign of life, and found none.
Who could have done this? I thought
It hit me, the Band of Seven must have done this by the looks of these marks on the ground.
"Damn you Bankotsu!" I shouted,"Why would you do that? Slay an entire village for no reason? Are you really that heartless!?!"
Kiara..............

Cool update! But detail would be appreciated ^^

oooooooooooooooh awesome!!!!
a story thats about my charater!
you f'ing rock!!!
i never expected this... i feel loved

Well you should. I want you to feel loved.

can not wait till next chapter or more of this chapter but oh well Yay! update! update soon PLEASE!!!!!

awwwwwwwwww thanks!!!!
yay me!!

Yes yay You!

Up date! Up date!
Do it!
Do it because I said it!
Update
UPDATE!!!!!!

Ok sorry it has been so long since i have last updated, i have just been so busy!!!! I had my first football game yesterday and we ROCKED out LOUD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ANd school has been killer.

But anyway, here it is!!!

Chp. 2 My lonely past

Kiara....

"What?? Who's there?" I called.
"Who else?" A deep voice called.

O.o That voice, it sounds so familiar...... I thought
"It cant be! Bankotsu! Where are you you bastard! I will kill you for doing this!!"

"I am not the one you should be yelling at my dear." he whispered. I didnt even here him approach! "I didnt do this. but i would have loved to help."

I slowly looked over my shoulder without him noticing. I flung my arm around to slap him, but he caught my wrist and pulled me close to him.

"Get the hell away from me you stupid mercinary{sp?} I would never love you even if you begged me to!!!!!!" I yelled at him.

"I never said you had a choice my dear."He said as he pulled me in for a kiss.
I struggled away and slapped him hard in the face.

"I will have you!! With or without your permission!" He was screaming as I ran away.
I had no idea where i was going, but my heart told me to get as far away as possible from that monster.
"I was so weak then, Never again." I said to myself.

*Flashback*

"Where are you mother??" I screamed as the house started to fall on top of me.
I fell on my knees and started to cry.
"Mommy? MOMMY!!!!"
I felt the fire coming down on me until a strong, firm hand grabbed me around the waist and threw over his shoulder.
The next thing i knew, i was sitting on the ground watching my love and memories burn to the ground.
I looked up into the face of what looked to be a loving face. I felt like i could trust him. After all, he did save me, didnt he?
I got up and quickly got on my hands and knees before himand spoke to the dirt,"Thank you kind sir. If you hadnt grabbed me when you did, I would surely be dead. I am forever indebted to you."

"Yes you are," said the voice," and i know how you will pay me back. You will be my wife when you are old enough."
I looked up with astonishment and I didnt see the same friendly face that i saw a minute ago, this face was the one of evil thoughts.

* End flashback*

For a moment i stopped and looked around. Where am I? I thought,What is this sweet scent that i smell? Is it that of another hanyou? I need to see where it is coming from.
I started to run tward the scent. The next few moments were just a blur...
I hit something, I thought. What i saw was pure perfection.


HahaHahahahahahahahahahah
ahaha!!!!!!!!!!
I am evil huh??
Is it inuyaha or another hanyou that she meets??

This was for you oshiori. HAPPY BIRTHDAY GURL!!!

very awesome update girl!!!!!
one question tho
WHY R U MAKING BANKOTSU TRY TO GET ME!!!!
:chidorisd:
sorry spaztic moment

u had ur football game yesterday?
awesome
ours is next week!

on September 28
its gonna be hecktic!!
u know why?

hehe nice update!

y? Well, in our show, we get to have actual fun.
we get to sing, dance, and even sit down. one of the times at competion or something, our show will be broadcast on ESPN 2 and i will let you know when that is. I am sorry, but i am tired of Naraku always being the bad guy, i just wanted to change it up a little, plz dont be upset.

oh no im not upset
just surprised is all

oh and on September 28
its homecoming so we have alot going on
and ive got more than anyone else going on
cuz its my 15th birthday
how crazy is that![/COLOR]

omg That is kool how ur bday and yalls homecoming is on the same day!! I hope that your team wins, unless your team is the Lake City Eagles, cuz if u are, we are gonna crush you!!

I highly doubt that you go there, though.

Sorry random moment! My band buds say i have way too much school spirit, but i think that you can never have too much.
U think i am right kiara?

nope u can never have too much school spirit!
oh and nope im not the Lake City Eagles
im apart of the CLAREMORE ZEBRAS!!!!!
WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!1
:victory: :victory:

Well, I am from the one, the only...
FOLEY HIGH LIONS!!!!!

I AM A PROUND MEMBER OF THE MIGHTY BAND FROM LION LAND!!!

Can you guess our school colors???

ummm.........gold and white...?

can you guess my school team colors?

close, but you forgot blue.

We are mostly Blue & Gold

yours are blue and red!

well you got part of it right
our colors are red, white and black

ok....

I might update in a little while...

MAYBE

awesome!
cant wait!

oh i forgot to tell ppl
i FINALLY updated my story Is It Love With Another?

Update it! It was my birthday remember!? You promised!!!

:bigeyescry: Didnt you read the bottom of the last one? I updated like 2 days ago, and i dedicated the entire thing to you for your birthday!!! But i will update here in a little bit ok?

Wah!
You did!
I'm sorry!

I'm just getting impatient....I can't wait to be added....! :cryriver:

You will be, dont worry. I have to write the next few chapters before i post again, so i will put you in there (somewhere)! i am going to add you !!!!!

:kittylove: :victory: :kicking:
Happy! Happy!
La la la!
I'm so excited, hurry and update ASAP!

B-But wait, It can't be me she meets can it? One I'm not supposed to be a Hanyou (Though I don't mind as long as I'm incredibly....powerful) and it's says,
"What I saw was pure perfection,"
I AM NOT PURE PERFECTION!

Ok 1 I love the story 2 is Kira going to be with inuyasha or will he stay with Kags I hardly read any thing but Inu an Kagz stories so I was wondering also I like the story agian so ethier way please update

ok guys, after i finish my chores, i will update. I am still thinkin about the other story. SERIOUS WRITERS BLOCK!!!! uhhh...
I hate school.

I no the feeling both in school and in writers block also you didnt anwser my qustion

now, if i were to answer that, then i would give away my story wouldnt i?? That wouldnt be fair to you and the other readers as well.

sorry, check back at about 7 pm tonight, i will probably have it up by then.
okay??

Ok I will wait but not paitiontly and If you do make Inu leave Kags put her with some one decent k also can you read my story Sibling slavery and tell me what you think please