READ THIS FIRST: This is a Harry Potter, and Kingdom Hearts Fanfiction. It does have Harry, HErmionie, and Ron in it, but they're not the main charictors. And also, I've noticed that everyone gets the idea that Slitherin students are evil, or something. Peter Petegrew (AKA wormtail) was a total coward, but he ended up in Griffindoor, so why can't we have a half-decent Slitherin?
CHARICTORS: Toshii has long black hair that she always keeps up in a pony-tail, Sonya has waist length red hair, and Ttrinya has Yuffy style blond hair.
UNIFORMS: I always pictured the girls uniforms with a miniskirt, so thats how it is in this fanfic.
Chapter one:
Sonya got out of her mom's green toyota and walked around to the trunk to get her bags. They were at Kings Cross station in London. As you may have guessed, Sonya was goint to board a a train today. Her mother walked beside her, obviously happy. BOth of Sonya's parents were muggles, but they were proud that thier daughter went to Hogwarts School of Whichcraft and Wazardry. The pair walked up to the barrier between platforms nine and ten. Sonya hugged her mom, said goodbye, piched up her bags and walked through the barrier. On the other side was the platform, platform 9 3/4. All of the many Whiches and Wizards that attended Hogwarts were standing on the platform. Many of them with umbrellas as it was begining to rain. The scarlet steem engine stood waiting, occasionally letting out jets of steam.<p>
Sonya walked aroun the platform fooking for her two best friends, Trinya and Toshii. Trinya was an odd girl. She liked making lethal potions, and was every inch a Slitherin. But unlike most of her classmates she didn't like to scare first years or cursing people in the halls for the fun of it. She had a good heart.
Her other friend, Toshii, had anger issues, adn knew a wicked cat-claw spell. She almost never studied, but used her photographic memory to ace tests.
Sonya found Toshii with her parents who saud goodbye and headed off fofr work. The two of them went in search of Trinya. They found her talking to a bunch of Slitherin girls who walked off when they saw Sonya walking towards them. "Since this is our third year," Sonya said happily, "Did you two get your parents to sign the permission slip for Hogsmead?!"
"Hell yea!" Trinya said with enthusiasm. Toshii nodded. Sonya looked down at her watch, it was five till eveven. "We'd better hurry and find a compartment on the train" She said casually, "One towards the middle would be nice."
Every compartment it seamed was full. They were just about to guve up, when they spotted an empty one. The moment they reached it they noticed that some one else was looking for a place to sit. He had blond spiky hair that seemed to defy gravity. She thought he looked cute.
"Hey!" Trinya yelled at him, "We found an empty one if you don't mind sitting with us!"
Tell me what you think. Is it good or is it crappy? Also, how do you do paragraphs? I can't get it too work for me... What am I doing wrong? :narutoques: