Title: Sweet Confession under the Rain
Description: Inu X Kag one-shot
Phoenix - October 16, 2007 03:56 AM (GMT)
Disclaimer: I do not own Inuyasha, only Rumiko Takahashi does. I also do not own the song Trust by Ayumi Hamasaki, from where I was inspired...and also the weather...it was raining... ^ ^; pitiful really...
Sweet Confession under the Rain
As I ran rapidly in the soft grass of the flowery field, the wind blowing strong & sweet, I smiled gently standing still enjoying the feel of the strong currents that swept my raven hair off my shoulders and caressed my cheeks.
A feather slowly sauntered down in a sweeping motion as a dove swooped down to my line of vision. My simple white dress billowed behind me as the mountain's wind flowed like water through my body.
I closed my brilliant gray eyes as the gentle murmurs of the mountains whispered to me secrets of nature. Lying down on the brilliant emerald grass I stared at the gray cloudy sky. I smiled as a tear like drop fell down on my cheek.
Resting my body on the cool ground I sighed as the wind brought sweet scents of blossoms and flowers as well as the freshness of rain and grass. Music to my ears...the rain is music to ears. The harshness of the gravity in the rain combined with the fierceness of the wind and the softness of the surreal setting gave the atmosphere a beautiful heavenly and earthly type of feeling at the same time.
A slightly different sound of quick running and teardrops of heaven pelting down on a corporeal object, make me realize I no longer am alone.
I don't seem to remember when I closed my eyes, but when I opened them I no longer felt the cool feel of water on my damp cheeks and face. I was staring at a handsome face full of love and holding an umbrella over me.
I sat down quickly realizing how my thin clothes were plastered to my skin. I grasped my knees to my chest in a fetal position, sticking out my tongue at him in a childish fashion.
Chuckling he mimicked my position next to me placing the black umbrella between us, before pulling me into his warm embrace.
Suddenly the sky let the ocean pelt down on us. I felt a blush grace my visage as he nuzzled my neck. I inhaled his strong forest like scent.
"You smell like the rain, so pure and sweet," he murmured planting a kiss on my temple. I gasped my heartbeat picking up rapidly, his hot breath prickling my cool skin.
Goosebumps lined my arms as I start to shiver. Unconsciously he removed his warm haori as he placed it upon my bony shoulders. I faced him my face still stained cherry red, when he did the unthinkable.
He dragged my face to him in a chaste kiss. I gasped loudly, though the sound was lost in the pounding rain. My face felt like it was ablaze, as I turned if possible any redder.
"I..."
"I love you," he said simply a slight pink staining his cheeks. Without thinking I pulled him in another kiss. This time anything but chaste, the kiss filled with passion, fire and unadulterated love.
"Je t'aime toi, mon amour," I purr adorning his face with tiny kisses, although I knew he didn’t quite comprehend the language.
"Aisheteru koishii," I murmured resting my head on his repeating the same phrase only in our native language, whilst watching the rain fall on the evergreen grass like tiny diamonds.
"I entrust my very being in your hands."
"Just as I you."
"By the way was there something you wanted to say to me, before you interrupted my solitary moment of peace under the rain?" I queried warmly to my love.
"Yes...I just wanted to say...happy birthday,” he whispered caressing my pale cheek. I simply shook my head in bewilderment.
"You never cease to surprise me."
-one shot was inspired by Ayumi Hamasaki's song Trust
Hope you liked it...my friends certainly did...please post...ja ne... :sleepy:
Kiara-Inu's_hanyou_friend - October 17, 2007 04:59 PM (GMT)
I loved it!
so sweet and cute!
^^
taylor shessy's girl - October 18, 2007 01:14 AM (GMT)
oh wow i love this please continue it's awsome :kittylove:
Phoenix - October 18, 2007 04:22 AM (GMT)
Thank You for reviewing! :moji: I'm really glad you enjoyed it, because I didn't think it was particularly the best work I've done. I'm glad I posted it though if it made you happy. Sadly it was a one-shot because I had no further ideas on how to continue it. Read my story "Moonlit Lake," personally I believe it's better. Thank you very much for reviewing. ^ ^ :daydream: :) And I modified it because Eternal Night and some others did mention it would facilitate (however that is spelled) reading the story.
taylor shessy's girl - October 19, 2007 01:25 AM (GMT)
he he he your welcome and if you don't mind would you read my fic "Sesshomaru" if you don't it's no big deal
but christmas kids got to stick together :victory:
ksuzuhara - October 26, 2007 07:37 PM (GMT)
*blinks, totally speechless*
:victory:
Kudos to you!
;)
I'm not an InuKag fan (InuKikyou...>>) but this...was beautiful....
The imagery was awesome.
Good job!
;)
BlaaBlaa - October 29, 2007 12:37 AM (GMT)
I thought that was beautiful and oh so sweet! Please write more like it. :cryriver:
Phoenix - December 9, 2007 05:25 AM (GMT)
Thank You sooo much for the reviews! Finally I can get on this website, because for unknown reasons it blocked me off. I am glad you liked it. Since I was a bit hesitant about posting it. :moji:
As for BlaaBlaa, I'm posting another one just like it! :)
anime dragon - December 10, 2007 01:29 AM (GMT)
It was so cute!! ^_^ I don't know how InuYasha would know French... but oh well. It was awsome!!
Phoenix - December 10, 2007 05:00 AM (GMT)
I'm glad you liked it! Truth be told, he wouldn't know French! Ha ha ha!
*suddenly stops laughing*
*spots best friend with a big sweatdrop on her head*
umm moving on...thanks for replying, and thanks for the compliment.
*friend shouts ".....not about you!"*
Inu+KagsAddict - April 3, 2008 11:01 PM (GMT)
Awesome!!!!!!!! Keep up the good work!!!!!!!!!!!! :daydream: :daydream: :daydream: :daydream: [COLOR=#7FFFD4]
Naomi_Inuyasha - April 6, 2008 02:42 AM (GMT)
gothicbitchylover_18 - April 19, 2008 12:23 PM (GMT)
Wow. That was a good one-shot. Cute! :)
Ninja.girl - April 27, 2008 05:03 AM (GMT)
OMG
That was french Oo
Beutiful story <3
Phoenix - June 16, 2008 10:51 PM (GMT)
Gah! Gone for a long time and look at all the pretty reviews! I am honestly honored of receiving such wonderful comments. I've been pretty busy so I'm very sorry I haven't responded to any of you great people.
Inu+KagsAddict: thank you that was so nice of you to say.
Naomi_Inuyasha: I'm glad you think it was cute, because now that I'm re-reading it, it sounds incredibly cliche and cheesy.
gothicbitchylover_18: Why thank you I'm glad to find that my little one-shot was so cute and adorable.
Ninja.girl: well the french was gramatically wrong, and I'm lazy so I won't correct it but it was only one phrase, not very well at that, but nonetheless I'm pleased that you enjoyed it.