Epilogue

At one time I'm sure that life was okay it had to be. I'm 245 years of age life had to be good at one time.
Everything was fine in the little town of Lyndon before Taylor arrived. New girl from Port Neches, moved here with her parents, comes and knows nothing of our secret, that me, Katrina Jones, and my family Thomas, my husband, Barbra, Nathan, and Johnathan, and my newest son Derick are vampires that protect this little town from anything and anyone. In return they don't tell our secret and provide education for the younger ones, Nathan, Derick, Barbra, and Johnathan. Taylor just showed up and ruined everything!! We are no longer just a family of 6 now we consist of 7 so lets just see how this happened.

Chapter 1
Taylor Lynne

"Mom I still don't see why we have to move this is ridiculous!" I argued with my parents, Robert and Julie Lynne. We were moving from Port Neches to Lyndon, a small town I'd never even heard of! I had to kiss my friends goodbye, my popularity, and my boyfriend Frankie I would miss him the most. We got along so well we hardly ever faught.

"Taylor, honey, we have to move their so we can help take care of Sarah Lee. She is old and needs help and besides your father got a job there remember?" my mom always made things worse. We were moving to go take care of an old women We hardly even knew, family or not. Well I guess if it is helping family... what's the worst that could come from helping family.

"Yeah, mom I know dad has an option of being the manager of the bank there. I guess I can make more friends no big deal." I sighed and smiled. UGH!! This sucks I'll probably end up in a fight the first day there, or at least I wouldn't be surprised.

"Dad, how am I related to Sarah again?" I asked hopeing it would lighten the mood.

"Taylor! How could you forget your great grandmother like that!!" he scolded me. I was wrong it only made the tension worse.
Finally I agreed just to sleep on the ride there, it was gong to be a long one. I wonder what the 17 year old kids are like there? I hope their not totally lame, that would suck. I listened to the motor hum it became hard to stay awake and I finally dosed off into a dream.

I woke up gasping for air and luckily my parent weren't in the car they had stopped to get some gas. I thought about the
nightmare, I was running around in a dark alley that was unfamilar. I turned around because I heard a snarl, vicious, and dangerous, coming from behind me. I turned to see a Pale figure in front of me , red glowing eyes and sharp teeth. It was sitting on it's hands like it was about to attack. Then it smiled a evil smile and walked up to me grabbing my shoulders and digging it claws into my arms. The monster slapped my face to the right with his right hand it lowered it's head to my neck. It breathed deeply then bit out a huge chunk of skin in my neck blood gushed out and the I woke up. I wonder what it was about usually dreams mean something. I wonder if I'm gonna.....die?

"Taylor? Are you OK you're sweating like crazy, are you OK?" my mom always saw through when it when I lied so time to tell a lie and hope she doesn't catch it.

"I'm fine mom, just a bad dream that's all" I can't tell her what it was and that I'm on the edge to losing my cool.

"Well...OK." my mom got in the car while dad walked to the car with some food.

"Hey Dad what did you get?" I was still about to lose it but I was starving. I hope that it's something good, my dad has no idea what I like to eat.

"This place has a Taco Bell in it so I got you a couple of tacos, is that OK I think you like them right?" told you my dad has no clue, but this time he did good.

"Thanks dad and yes I do like tacos." I smiled and sighed when he gave me my food I was cold and the food felt warm on my skin. That was oddly pale instead of tan, and my thick, blond hair was tangled and messy. With the way I look right now I wouldn't be surprised if my eyes wee green instead of blue. We started to drive again to Lyndon the sky was dull, when I rolled down the window I found that it was hot! It's winter, I would know because my birthday is in December and unlike many things I actually keep track of that. Well at least this way I can still play soccer and if I don't make the team ,which I seriously doubt, choir is on side for sure.

The ride lasted another hour and a half till we finally arrived at Sarah's house. It wasn't a house it was a freaking mansion! It was huge, white, and beautiful. Maybe I wouldn't die from the dream. The only thing that scared me is the thing drank my blood and it relished in it with joy. Like a vampire or something.....cool I had a night mare about a vampire. Why now they don't scare me the last time a scary movie scared me as when I was 7 years old why would they scare me now?

"Taylor? Is that you...Oh you've grown so much since I last saw you! You're quite the young lady now." I heard a voice. It was dry and worn I looked in the door way to see an old women grey hair, lots or wrinkles, and icy green eyes.

"Sarah, oh It's so good to see you again!" my dad yelled as he ran up the stairs to the porch.

"Don't worry Taylor his hyper active side will pass soon." my mom hugged me and we laughed. I grabbed my bag and Julie and I walked up to he old house.

"Go on in Derick will show you to your rooms." Sarah looked at me and smiled.

"Hello Sarah." I smiled and hugged her gently.
"I think you'll like Derick. He's very nice and helps me out a lot." She whispered in my ear before letting me go.

"Miss come with me I'll show ya were your room is." I heard a voice from me it was warm and comforting."

"Oh ...Uh... yeah just let me grab my bags." I was a bit puzzled I didn't even here him come in. I turned to look at him he was at least five foot six. His hair was dark brown and his eyes were blue but they had some grey in them. He was a little bit tan, and he had a muscular build he was very handsome.

"Ah, don't worry 'bout your bags I got "em." Derick walked over to me and picked up my baggs with a smile on his face. His teeth were white and straight almost perfect except four teeth, two on the bottom two on top, came to a point.

"Uh..OK. Lead the way I guess.." I smiled and held he door open for him.."So..you help my great grandmother right?" I tried to small talk the silence is awkward.

"Yeah. I cook, clean, and live here. She got you and your parents to come here because when I'm at school she's alone with no care, and I could use the help." he smiled looking back at me.

"Oh I get it you're living here and the price or rent is taking care of Sarah, right? Yeah I got it. Whose good I'm good...Oh yeah!" I teased him I hadn't had a chance to be totally weird in a while.

"HAHAHAHA! You are funny! What school are you gonna go to? Lyndon High or Sam Jones High?" he rolled his eyes at me while we walked upstairs.
That question caught me off guard I didn't know this little place had two high schools. I don't know which one I'm going to go to, probably which ever one is closer since I didn't have a car and would have to walk.

"I don't know which one is closer to this place?" I really wanted to go to the same school as him that way would at least one person on the first day.

"Well I go to Sam Jones high because it's closer. So you're probably going to go here to right?" He smiled as he opened the first door on top of the stairs."Well here you go." Derick set my things on the bed and stared at me. I couldn't help but wonder what he was thinking but the silence started to bug me again.

"So you go to Sam Jones I'll probably go there because it's closer and my parent would want me home as soon as possible for a little while. Just until there sure that this town is at least a little save." I went and sat on the bed it was a queen size bed with red, silk bed spread. The whole room consisted of red, black, and white it had black curtains and a white dresser .It was gorgeous and I loved the colors maybe this wouldn't be so horrible.

"Hey if you want I can show you around town, Taylor. You know because you have never been here before." he smiled and leaned against the wall.

"Uh, yeah sure that would be cool." I spoke a bit to fast and I could feel my-self blushing but he just laughed at me again.

"Well then what are we waiting for!?" Derick walked over to me and grabbed me down the stairs and out the door." As we darted out the door I could here my mom yelling something.

"I'm taking Taylor to see the town we will be back soon promise." Derick yelled back as we were just getting to the street. How he heard what she said was beyond me. I wonder how he heard?




there fixed is that better?

kay nothing like twilight sept ya know vampires :scaryangry: :moji:

Okay, good, you changed the names, and such, but, you need to write like a rea author would. -_-

None of the 'Perfect 4 teeth' It should be 'Perfect four teeth'

Put spaces between the paragraphs, it's annoying and hard to read like that. Also, when people talk, you need to put spaces between it. -_- once again, it's annoying and hard to read.

Also,the paragraph, or whatever the hell it is, since it doesn't even look like a paragraph, needs to be SPACED OUT and SEPARATED. It's too squished together and looks like it was all just thrown together like you don't give a rat's ass about it.

If you start writing like a real author, and with none of the n00b-mixed-with-real-words-crap, I'll start to read and give real replies to this.

^^;; Sorry if I have offended you in any way, just stating some helpful points and what it looks like to me.

~Kari

ok hats cool no offence taken i'll come bake tonight and fix it up if yu will come back and read it once it's fixed deal?

Awesome more soon

:kittylove: ok i'll update a little later today

*nods* That's much better. ^_^ I'll keep reading.

~Kari

Glad you like it! :kittylove:

Chapter 2
Around Town
We walked out to a big field on the edge of the forest line. It was beautiful. It was about a five minute walk from the house.

"So Taylor you like sports?" Derick asked coolly. He ginned like the vampire from my nightmare and I shivered, out of pure fear.
I was happy that he didn't see me shiver. i mean what was I going to tell him, Oh yeah sorry about that you just remind me of a vampire that scares the living day lights out of me. I don't think so I would sound like a total nut job!

"Yeah I like sports, why?" Why would he care if I liked sports I mean what is he gonna do try and beat me? Huh if he does try he's a chump I'm unbeatable, but of coarse he would think he's better like all people do. It's part of human nature to think everyone is better than everyone else. Isn't it, or is it determination that makes us think that way?

"Good! So were do you wanna go first, movies, Sam Jones High, or do you what to try and beat me in a sport after all it is in our nature to think we're better than everyone else right." when he spoke he sounded depressed and sad, but also a little bit smug, Why would he say that. Did he know what I was thinking? What is he a psychic or is my face that readable?

"Why do you say that? I mean that it's in our nature?" my voice broke on nature but I didn't care.

"Well...Uh...Um...I guessed that was what you were..um..thinking..because of the face you made when you thought about the sports and guessed...uh yeah that's it..." Derick shied away and looked to the ground.

"I didn't think I was that readable! HA! Guess I was wrong! Hehehe!" I laughed when he looked up. Derick had the dumbest look on his face as if to say "Why the hell are you laughing".
"Well I guess I would like to see the high school!" I said warily really only wanting to sleep some more.

"OK let's go then it's about three miles from here so we better get walking!" he smiled and lifted an eye brow.

"OK WE BETTER NOT BE WALKING!!!" I yelled in a stern voice. "I am not about to walk three miles to a freaking school! Nu-Uh no way never gonna happen!" my voice broke a little and got shaky. I hope he was just kidding about walking.

"Hahaha! You really thought we were going to walk didn't you! HA! I'm not about to walk three miles what are you crazy!" he laughed some more with a fierce expression on his face. He walked over to me and grabbed my arm.

"Hey were are we going now?!" I yelled because he pulled me so hard I almost fell! Who is that strong I mean it wasn't like I wasn't expecting him to pull me. I shouldn't have stumbled at all not even a little bit, but he pulled me so hard I practically bit the dust!

"Oh sorry about that, well you'll see when we get there!" he smiled and stared to run really fast I tripped at least twenty times!
We ran back to the house, but we went to the back. Were a little shack or garage stood. Derick looked at me from over his shoulder and grinned he dropped my hand ,finally, and ran over to the shack.
He was in there for a few minutes and when he came out of the grage in a brand new Corvette!

"How do you like my ride?" he chuckled at the expression on my face.

"Like? I don't like it I love it! I hate you for owning such an awesome ride though." I smiled evilly and ran over to his black Corvette. I jumped into the passenger seat which was black leather. How could he afford this car are his parents rich or something? He drove away from the house seeding faster and faster.

"You like any kind of music?" he asked in a smooth, warm voice. His voice reminded me of eating chocolate, because it's smooth and
warm as it goes down your throat.

"Yeah I like HIM, Evanescence, Chris brown, Finger 11, Missy Elliot, Ciara, and Marilyn Mansion. I guess I like a little bit of everything." I looked at him and he was smiling the biggest, goofiest smile.

"Really, you like HIM and Marilyn Mansion?! You don't look like you would. Hum." he looked out the window for a second with out saying a word. It made me wonder what he was thinking again. Did he like me or hate me? I wonder if he watches Death Note or Bleach or Drawn Together? Does he like stars or hearts? I wonder if he like scary movies or vampires and werewolves?

"Ya' know you're not to bad." It's almost as if he knows what I'm thinking! How did he answer my unasked question!
He reached over to the glove box in front of me and grabbed a CD holder.

"What are you doing?" I stared at Derick as he rummaged through his Cd's.

"I'm getting Dark Light by Him. You want to listen to it?" he asked me in his Chocolate smooth voice.

"Yeah, sure!" I answered and started to day dream about Villie Valo. Which was interrupted by Derick.

"Good because if you didn't want to that would be tough, we would've listened to it any ways." he chuckled and put in the CD. I started to day dream about Villie Valo again.

About thirty minutes later we showed up at Sam Jones High. It was an old school but in good condition there were four portables next to the tennis court, but what caught my eye was the soccer field!

"Hey want to play me in a game of soccer?" as I asked him I looked at Derick who was staring at me the whole time. He smiled and got out of the car. He walked over to my door and opened it for me.

"I should warn you you're going to lose." his chocolate voice made me feel even warmer.

"How can you be so confidant?" I asked him as he wallked over to the trunk or his beautiful Corvette, he pulled out a soccer ball and looked at me confused. Why was what I was saying confusing him so much?

"Why shouldn't I be confident? I mean like you could really beat me! HA! Yeah right."

"OK you wanna be that way then bring it on boy!" I growled at him. What he said made me very mad. I mean Who in the world does he think he is, Pele! "I bet I can beat you in a race to the soccer feild!" I challenged him just to size him up and see what I was dealing with.

"Alright first one there wins. You can count down, three to go." Derick smirked and then laughed, at an inside joke I presume.

"Kay, three, two ,....one!" we took off. Derick and I were about the same speed but I refused to lose to him. I pushed my self harder and harder I passed him and I won the race to the feild.

"HA!.....I...beat.....you!" I gasped for air and laughed at his shocked face.

"Y-y-y-you actually beat me!!" he yelled and his expression grew fierce.

"How could you be so confidant?" I composed my self and asked coolly, just to rub it in.

"You are fast. No one has ever beaten me at any thing, but you did. How I wonder" his expression softened and he stared in awe at me. He tossed the soccer ball at me and I kicked it right back to him.

"Nice reflex!" he smiled and winked. Suddenly it started to pour down rain really hard. It hurt my skin when it hit my body.

"Wow! Come on taylor we should take a rain check on this." He smiled and put his arm around my shoulder.
We laughed at his joke as we ran back to the Corvette. We listened to Join Me by HIM on the way back.

"Taylor, Did you have a good time with Derick?" Sarah asked me as Derick and I waked into the house our clothes were soaked and we were laughing.

"Yeah it was fun Sarah, thanks for asking. I need to go take a shower and get into some dry clothes." I smiled at Sarah secretly thanking her for so much more than I was letting on.

"Don't forget to get a good nights sleep it is Sunday and you have school tomorrow. Oh yes by the way you're going to go to Sam Jones with Derick." Sarah said sweetly saying "you're welcome" with her smile and eyes.
I ran up the stairs Derick following close behind me.

"So do you want me to wake you for school and give you a ride?" he asked with his chocolate voice again making me melt were I stood.

"Yeah if you don't mind. I never wake up on time for school anyways." I smiled as sweetly as I could. Trying to make him melt like he made me.

"Alright well if you need anything my room is right down the hall OK?" he smiled and sighed. I think I made him melt, YES!

"OK thanks." I giggled when he tripped walking out the door.

"I'm OK and you didn't see that." Derick grinned crazily and walked out of my room quickly. I took a shower in the bathroom that was in my room and unpacked my clothes. I climbed into my silk sheets and almost instantly feel asleep.

I slept deeply dreaming again of the leech that haunted my unconscious mind. He was different this time though he didn't attack me. Instead he reached out for me with his hand and his eyes were softer not as driven to kill me. I stared at him for a moment that was broken by the ground under my feet shaking, and dissipating instinctively I reached out to him for help to live. I grabbed his hand and he smiled, dragged me into his arms. I struggled to get away but it did nothing he was to strong. He put his lips onto my neck and nipped the skin he began to drink my blood. It wasn't painful but in a matter of seconds my whole body felt like it was on fire!
My eyes shot open and I was sweating like crazy but I was freezing, again much like the first time. I sat up and held my head in my hands, why am I having nightmares about vampires! I mean ,as much as I wish they were, they are not real!

"Hey, Taylor get u-" Derick walked into my room and stopped in mid sentence probably from the way I looked. He walked over to me and sat on the bed. His blue grey eyes staring into my icy blue eyes.

"Are you OK you look like crap?" He smiled the smile that made me melt and spoke in his chocolate voice.

"Yeah I'm OK just a nightmare, that's all." my voice broke and I sighed.

"Well it must be some Stephens King **** because you look really bad." he laughed and hugged me. I felt my self blush and I hugged him back because he felt good against my skin he was cold but warm at the same time.

"OK I should get dressed, so we can leave." I let him go but he held tight onto me.

"Tell me what was your dream...please tell me..." Derick whispered into my ear and leaned back to look me straight in my eyes.
"Tell me, Taylor, please.."

"Well...Um....I...There's a vampire with pale skin and bright red hair. He ripped out a huge chunk of my skin the first time I had the dream." he stared at me very seriously and I saw a streak of pain cross his eyes. Why would he feel pain?

"The first time you had the dream?" he questioned me sternly but still in his chocolate voice and I melted again.

"Yes last night he reached out to me and I grabbed his hand because the ground broke beneath my feet. He grabbed me tight in his arms, I struggled to get out but it did nothing. He bit me and my body began to burn then I woke up." I stared at him and he grabbed me into a tight hug.

"Wow that is weird." he whispered but I couldn't tell if it was to me or not.

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Chapter 3
New Girl


He held me there for a few more minutes until releasing me.

"OK get dressed and hurry or we will be late!" Derick got up and walked out of my room and I got dress in to a pair of cargo pants and a HIM T-shirt. I brushed my teeth and my hair then ran down stairs with my school thing from Port Neches. Derick was at the end of the stairs waiting for me with a smile on his face.

"Come on Taylor, time waits for no one!" he shouted as I finally made it down the stairs. He took my books and bag from my hands.

"Hey! What are you doing!?" I demanded puzzled. Derick looked at me in confusion, I did it again.

"What do you mean? Don't boys carry your things and open doors for you were you came from? Are they not gentleman?" his question puzzled me I'd never me anyone like him before, a gentleman.

"Well..Um..No they weren't gentlemen and they only did those things when....Um.." I started blushing I could feel my face getting hot.

"When what?" he pushed the answer out of me and I reluctantly answered.

"When they are...going...steady or dating." I saw the shock run through his face. What did he think doing those things meant, just being nice? What era is he stuck in!

"Oh...Well...Uh...Um..Here are you things then." he stared at my things that he didn't give back yet then he smiled. "Never mind, I guess I'm just old fashion but I'm going to Carry your things and be a gentleman." Derick turned and left me there with my mouth open my and my jaw touching he floor. Who does that any more? I mean no one is a gentleman any more. Just thugs, perverts, and creeps!

"Taylor, Derick is old fashion. He seems to live in a different time than everyone else and I would tell you why. If I could....but he has to tell you.... Well go on and get to school don't want you being late on the first day do we!" Sarah interupted my thoughts with her scratchy voice that was soft and filled with love. I smiled and ran after Derick who was holding the passenger door of his black Corvette open for me. His expression was soft but his blue grey eyes were now more grey than what they were in my room.

"Hey why are your eyes more grey?" his smile faded and was replaced by a dark look, like the orange hair leech in my dreams.

"What in the world are you talking about!" his voice boomed as he laughed at my question. "Just get in the car so we can listen to HIM and go to school." he rolled his eyes at me and smiled warmly at me. I jumped in the car and when he shut the door I looked them and giggled . When he tried to open the door and it stayed closed he looked at me with the puppy dog look, Derick looked so hot I just had to let him in.

"Damn!" I mumbled to my self and he chuckled getting into the car.

"How do you all fall for that every time!?" he asked me in a sly voice, I grinned evilly to my self.

"I don't know probably because your so cute! Oh wait a sec. that can't be it 'cause you're to ugly! Here just let me think about this for a while and I'll get back to ya." I looked forward and glanced at him from the corner of my eye. He was SMILING!

"HAHAHA!! Well I should have seen that one coming." I looked at him and he stared at me intently. I noticed his eyes were a bright blue not a hint of grey in them, they changed again!

"Your eyes are bright blue now!!" I said in a horse voice.

"You are losing it Taylor, but that's OK I'll help you through you "problems"!" he laughed then turned on "Vampire Heart" by HIM and "If I were Your Vampire" by Marilyn Manson. About thirty minutes later we showed up at the school. Derick got out of the car and opened my door for me. I grabbed my books and got out of his car, then he grabbed my things again! Why! Why does he have to be so, so, so old fashion! On the other hand it is nice to have a gentleman around, especially since he's totally cool.

"So we should go get your schedule from the office. Come on, Taylor." he made me melt again so I couldn't argue about my things, but I am determined to melt him every time he does me.

"Alright then, Derick, lead the way." I tried to make him melt like he did me and....IT WORKED!!
He sighed and walked over to me and laid his head on my sholder then sighed again.

"Why do you all fall for that?" I smiled evilly, lifted his head with my hands.

"Well maybe you're just so charming and cute." he whispered and lifted his head from my hands, smiled then started to walk away toward the office. I was blushing and felt light headed. Was he serious? That was so nice and sweet, he just seems so perfect. Perhaps mabe even to perfect...What if...What if he's..a..

"Taylor, are you coming?" Derick said smoothly and I lost what I was getting at.

"Yeah I'm coming Derick." I walked up next to him and we went to the office. When we walked in there was an old man sitting at the front desk.

"Well Hello Derick how are you to day." he smiled at us and stared at me.

"We're fine Stanley. Just here to get Taylor's schedule." his voice turned icy towards the old man as if he had just heard the man curse at me.

"Of coarse let me get it, Derick. So Taylor what's your last name?" his warm expression that was for Derick disappeared when he looked at me.

"Um, Lynn, sir." why is he giving me a death glare!! Jeez what did I do to him!

"Ah, here we are miss ,Lynn." Stanley handed me a short piece of paper with a list of different classes.

Athletics 1st. Harrison
History 2nd. Sheets
Reading 3rd. lyles
Math 4th. Hartley
Science 6th. Camp
English 7th. Jenkins
Choir 8th. Priscella

Derick looked over my shoulder at my schedule.

"Hey we have Harrison, Sheets, Camp, and Priscella together. SWEET!" Derick ginned stupidly at me.

"Cool, well could you show me to class? Because I'm totally clueless." I laughed sheepishly.
He shot a look at Stanley as if to say ' Drop dead loser and back off!'

"Yeah, lets go, Taylor." his voice was cold as he walked toward the door and held it open for me. Again with being a gentleman.
I sighed and walked out the door.
As we walked down the white hallway filled with staring eyes. I couldn't tell if it was at me ,the new girl, or Derick with me. It felt awkward and weird.
So I decided to distract my self.

"Why was Stanley giving me a death glare?" I asked looking at Derick and his cold expression he grimaced. I wonder why I don't think I asked anything that would be offencive.

He paused then said," Because he doesn't approve of you moving here. He also doesn't like the fact that we are staying in the same house together. For the same reason he doesn't trust you." he looked down at me and smiled warmly.

"How do you know? He didn't say anything." I looked into his eyes, they were a dark grey!
"Hey your eyes are dark grey! Why do they keep changing!?" I demanded in a whiny voice. I could feel more eyes staring at us.
He looked panicked as if he were searching for an answer.

"Well...Um..I....Just...I....um...I just thought that would be something he might think by the look on his face, that answers your question." he looked straight ahead and I wanted to brush my fingers through his dark brown hair and say 'good boy'.

"Well if you say so, but...." I paused for a moment wonder what he would say for this next question.
"What about your eyes...They keep changing, why?" I snickered to my-self.

"Do you want the truth?" he sighed.

"Duh. Why wouldn't I." I pressed him for answers. Why doesn't he just tell me. It would be a lot easier.

"Well Taylor, I have like mood eyes when I'm happy or excited my eyes are bright blue. When I am really pissed off they turn grey.......When they are gold it means I'm hungry. You'll never see them gold though." He smiled looking back at me his eyes were bright blue again. Derick walked faster to the gym after rounding a few corners we were there. When we got into they gym he gave me my bag.

" See you later." he said and his eyes turned dark grey as he said this. He was mad about leaving me! Wow. He stared into my eyes like he longed to kiss me or something.

"Later..." I whispered and I could feel my self blush.

"HAHAHA" he laughed rolling his eyes and walking into the boys locker room which was on the right side of the huge hallow room. I walked over to the girls locker room to find Mrs. Harrison.
I walked in and saw a short, brown haired, green eyed women.

"You must be the new girl, Taylor, right?" she asked in a soft voice looking at me.

"Yes ma'am." I answered.

"Good. You have locker number B45 and your combination is 12, 15, 38. Got it?" she said as she walked into her office. She grabbed me a new uniform.

"Yes I got it." I said, looking around the locker. It was crowded with girly preps or nerds! No tomboys or punks, Gothic, or skater girls!
UGH! This sucks now who am I gonna hang out with!?

"Destiny! Take Taylor to her locker please. Thank you." Mrs. Harrison said to a tall light brown skinned girl. She had short brown hair and blue eyes. She had black eyeliner on and a pair of red, plaid, pants on. With convers on and a black shirt that said
"Mess With fire
you get burned!!"
Maybe this won't be so bad after all. She looked me up and down then smiled.

"Sure, Sure. I'll show her." he voice was deeper than I expected.

"Hey, I'm Taylor." I spoke coolly smiling back. Wow she seems cool, guess I just found my favorite person in the school. I trailed after her.

"So you like any music or have any hobbies?" she asked pointing to were my locker was.

"I like pretty much all music besides Oprah and christian music. I like singing, trowing, writing, and soccer. What about you?" I said as I felt a tap on my shoulder. I turned and saw a tall, pale girl with hazel green eyes, and short, curly, brown hair. Dressed in a blue mini skirt and a pink V neck shirt with white flats on.

"Hi! I'm Christina Chev." she said smiling. I didn't like her not even a little bit she repelled me. One look at her and I want puke. She's probably a teachers pet and a total ***** out of class! That's one of the reasons I hate preppy, cheerleaders, and big headed jocks.

"Hi, Taylor Lynn." I tried to sound as nice as possible but I had a cold edge to my voice. I turned back around to change into uniform, a black pair of shorts and a light grey shirt.

"Well just to let you I run this place and you hanging around with that Freak over there is like totally bad for you rep. M'kay Taylor talk to you later. Later Freak!" she said coldly. What a snob!! How did I know. I sighed, turned and as she started to walk away i tapped her shoulder.

"Hey Christina?" I said sweetly still with a very cold edge.

"Yeah" I glared at her. Hopping she could read the look on my face , as Derick sad I was esally read, saying " Screw you".

"Just to let you know I don't hang out with Freaks so-" Christina cut in.

"Oh goodies! Then you can come with me!" she glared at Destiny and looked back at her and winked.

"Oh but you didn't let me finish! That's why I'm not going to hang out with you. FREAK!" Everyone had started to listen by hen and they busted out laughing. Christina's and Destiny's mouth dropped open. Mission humiliation success!

"You'll regret that loser! I can make you life a living hell!" She fumed and ranted.

"Sure, sure like I haven't heard that before!" I teased her as she stormed over to her locker to get dressed.

"Dude that was wicked cool, Taylor! Thanks." Destiny smiled as we changed. Well i know that it's not the end of it though they always come back, thirsting for blood. We walked out into the gym were I spotted Derick with another boy.
He was pale, tall, he had a muscular build. His hair was blond and shaggy and his eyes were a light brown. He was a total hottie, but bot as hot as Derick!

"Now everyone pick a team of four people. We're playing tennis and soccer! Meet me out on the courts when you're done!" Coach Harrison yelled over all the talking people. I grabbed Destiny and walked over to Derick and his cute friend. When we got there she stood behind me and stared at the floor. She was blushing too! I think she likes this Blondie or Derick!
I can't say that i blame her for it though he is charming both of them are hotties. So why not?

"Hey Taylor!" Derick grinned wildly as his eyes turned bright blue again.

"Hey Derick! Who's your cute friend?" I teased him and pulled Destiny out from behind me. " This is Destiny." I said softly and saw her staring at Blondie! Woooo! I have to help my new friend out!

"Cute! Huh..Yeah right.." Derick mumbled to him-self. I got him jealous! Aw how cute!

"Hahaha! That is so cute Derick!" I laughed at his pouty expression.

"What?" he asked confused.

"You're jealous!" I laughed again. His eyes widened as if he discovered horrible truth or he'd been caught stealing.
he shook his head and looked back at Blondie.

"This is my friend Taylor." he said looking back at me.
"Taylor this is my brother, iiethan Jones." They are brothers! Wow now I see how their both extremely hot!

"Hello Taylor" he said my name in a sigh of joy. " Destiny. So Taylor you live down at that mansion with Derick?" he asked curiously moving closer to me, totally ignoring Destiny.

"Um, yeah, but if you're Derick's brother why don't both of you live there?" I asked weakly.

"Well I do I just went out hunting with our dad, Thomas. We go hunting every other weekend with Derick." he said nicely as he looked me in the eyes. His eyes and voice ere like caramel good but messy. His eyes looked displaced and messy and his voice was so smooth. His eyes lightened to almost a golden color.

"I decided to stay behind so I could greet you, Taylor." Derick said in the voice that makes me melt. I walked over to Derick and grabbed his hand that was oddly cold and hard.

"Thank you Derick that was very sweet of you." I smiled as a streak of shock passed through his eyes that were so blue the almost looked like icy. " Now Destiny let's go and kick their but in a good old game of soccer!" I said running out of the gym still holding Derick's cold hand. Hopefully Neithan would start to notice Destiny if i was out of the way.


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Chapter 4 part 1
Frankie

"Hey are Neithan's eyes the same way as your eyes are, just brown?" I asked as when we finally got onto the court.

"Yeah pretty much, but his eyes get a red tent to them when he's mad. When he's hungry his eyes are black." he paused and looked at me puzzled. "Taylor?" he ask cautiously.

"Yeah." I said blankly.
I turned to look at his beautiful face. OH NO! I'm becoming a melting, mushy, googly eyed, lover girl!!! Nooooo!!

Derick chuckled as if he had heard my little realization. " Did you mean what you said , ya know, about me being jealous?" he looked worried. It made me want to grab him and say " Oh it's OK my sweet!"

""Why? I mean you looked jealous and acted jealous.....So I assumed you were jealous." I was confused now. For a little word to bother him so much, why? Derick why are you so confusing and so damn hot!

"Well I've never been Jealous before and it felt weird and I didn't like it. A lot of girls have tried to make me jealous but it never works. What confuses me though is why you can get me jealous." he he touched my cheek with his cold, perfect hand. "Why..How can you get me jealous...I wonder..." Derick trailed off.

"How can you melt me." and make me a girly, googly eyed, lover girl! " I wonder..." I grabbed his hand and he pulled away quickly. "Hey!" I pouted. He just laughed and smiled. Derick melted me ,again, but I wasn't going to give up yet. I turned away and saw Neithan and Destiny walking towards us. Neithan was looking around for me and Destiny was staring at him. When he spotted me he ran to me and he stood by my side.

"So are we gonna start playing or what?" he said happily. How can he totally disregard Destiny like that! It's as if he has no clue she is there. I ignored him and smiled at Destiny.

"Destiny come on!" I ran over to and saw a very troubled look on her face. Oh god, why did I leave them alone! Please don't say something really mean or tell me to go away. Please!

"Hey Taylor." she said sadly.

"What's wrong Destiny?"

"The whole time we were together he didn't even say one word to me he stared out after you. It's like he doesn't even know I'm there! Could you help me?" Destiny begged . I couldn't tell her no so I agreed.

"Sure, what do you want me to do?" I asked.

"Will you help me be more noticeable for Neithan." she said simply.

"WHAT! I don't see why you should want to change for some guy! If he doesn't notice you than it's his lose!" I protested with her choice. She is so cool and beautiful why should she change for some guy!

"Taylor please. I mat him about three years ago and I have liked him for three years. Yet he has no idea I exist! Now he does know , but has it in for you! Come on you have to help me." she pleaded again.

" Fine... Well you're emo or punk right?"

"Yeah..." she smiled.


"Well wear darker cloths and straiten your hair. We'll see if that works first before trying anything else OK." I spoke softly and quietly so the guys wouldn't hear us. We got back to the boys and Derick was giving Neithan a death glare saying " Drop dead jerk" or " Shut up loser!" We paired off Derick and me against Destiny and Neithan.
We kicked butt! We all played tennis and the final score was like 15 to 45.

"Wooo! We win! Oh yeah uh-hu! What now!" I pranced around the court getting another chance to be weird again. " C'mon Derick!" I yelled grabbing his hand and started dancing around with him.

"Hahaha, Taylor you're a nut!" Derick shouted as I let him go to lay down on the court and catch my breath. I could hear Neithan and Destiny laughing. I looked over at them and for once Neithan was staring at destiny and not me! YES! Derick laid down next to me and grabbed my hand. I started to day dream about what he was thinking. Did he like me as much as I did him? Does he find little things about me perfect? He interupted my thoughts.

"Lets go Taylor, before we're late for history." he smiled getting up then helping me up and he never let go of my hand. Frankie did that he always held my hand, but Frankie was his nickname his real name was Jason. He did a lot of things I liked, I would probably miss him more if Derick wasn't around.

"Hey are there anymore people in your family that live in the mansion?" I asked curiously trying to distract my self.

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"Lets go Taylor, before we're late for history." he smiled getting up then helping me up and he never let go of my hand. Frankie did that he always held my hand, but Frankie was his nickname his real name was Jason. He did a lot of things I liked, I would probably miss him more if Derick wasn't around.

"Hey are there anymore people in your family that live in the mansion?" I asked curiously trying to distract my self.

"Well lets see my step mother ,Katrina, my other brother ,Johnathan, and my sister ,Barbra. Katrina and Thomas adopted us from different families. That's why Barb and John are dating." he stopped talking and looked thoughtful and sad. His eyes turned a light grey. I guess he is sad.

"What's wrong? You look sad." I said stepping in front of him to look him in his eyes.

"Nothing." he said in a little bit of a surprised voice.

"Your eyes give you away, lier. What's wrong?" I said coolly.

"Oh yeah, that's kind of a give away huh." he laughed and his eyes turned a blue-grey color. Good he's happy again.

"Yeah it is. Sucks for you!" I smiled. For some reason when he was in a good mood it made me want to be wild and have a great time. Derick smiled and sighed.

"The last girl I went out with called me a freak and told me that I was a monster and that I terrified her." he stopped smiling and looked me in the eyes. I stared into his eyes for a moment and started to get really angry.

"Man she's just a stupid ,air headed, hoe! She doesn't know anything! You're a handsome, unique, gentleman, and a good person!" I grabbed him in a tight hug and felt tears of rage stream down my face. That happens when I get really mad and could just beat up anybody. His body stiffened. After a few seconds he relaxed and his body molded with mine. This is so comfortable and even though he is so cold and hard it was warm and soft. It felt like I was hugging Jason, he was always hot, but for a almost unreal reason.

"Why are you crying?" he whispered into my ear and I melted.

"I cry when I get really mad. I can't get out my anger any other way. Besides beating up somebody but last time I did that I got suspended." I laughed a little bit and buried my head into his muscular chest. How could somebody be so shawllow? I shook the thought from my head and stood there it was pure heaven nothing could ruin his. Derick sighed and laid his head on mine. Then at that very moment realized what had happened. I had falled for him. A guy I hardly knew yet it felt like we had known each other for years.

Derick chuckeled and gently pushed me away about two inches and looked me," Now we seriously need to get to our next class." he stared at me as if he wanted to kiss me again. I loved the wild, thoughful, flirty look in his eyes. I felt wanted and needed. I placed my hand on his cheek, he smiled wildly. Derick grabbed my hand and as hard as it was I pulled away.

"Hey! What did you do-" he stopped and laughed a loud and booming laugh. "Payback. Huh?" he smirked.

"Yes now lets go!" I took off running because it would suck so hard to be late on the first day there. I darted into he girls locker room to a sertain Christian glaring at me with hate filled eyes. I glared back at her and then turned my head to get my cloths out of my locker. As I was putting on my clothes Destiny came up next to me and she looked pathetic. I wonder what happened.

"Taylor, Neithan wanted me to ask you something for him..."she souned much worse than she looked.

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Chapter 4 part 2
Frankie

"Taylor, Neithan wanted me to ask you something for him..."she sounded much worse than she looked. I knew what those words meant that's the same way Jason ,aka Frankie, asked me out. He was somebody who I couldn't forget. His dirty-blonde hair and dark brown eyes, his absolute gorgeous half-smile, and tan, muscular, six foot body.
We always had a blast together, playing around being weird. I would miss him a lot more if Derick wasn't here, but Derick is just to perfect. Jason was close but not quiet there because he had secret. One that made him almost unreal. Jason is a werewolf I promised I would never tell anyone. He always thought that if he told me I would think of him as a monster and run for the hills, but I didn't think of him as a monster more of a big, playful puppy. When I saw him as a werewolf he had a pitch black coat that shined in the moon light. He would grin and be funny ,in that form, when he was around me.

"Taylor..He...He..He wants to...Like...Well...to go on...A...Date...as friends." Destiny said in a meek low voice and my heart dropped as I saw how sad she looked. How could I make her feel better. I could turn him down but that wouldn't do much good. We could all go me, Destiny, and Neithan...but then he would just ignore her. I could like make it a double date! Derick and me, Destiny and Neithan...that might work if she can grab his attention. Well it's worth a shot!

"Hey, if it's just as friends you and Derick can come to. I could hang out with Derick while you hang out with Neithan." I saw a little bit of doubt rise into her face. "It'll be like a double date they just won't know it!" we giggled as we walked out of the locker room.

"Thanks Taylor, that sounds great." he smiled a high and cheerful grin. " So what's your next class? Mines math , Ugh! It's so boring!" I laughed at the face she made.

"My next class is History and then I have reading, math, science, english and choir." I smiled. "I hope we have some more classes together."

"We do! There's reading, science, and english." She began to laugh again I just chuckled at her enthusiasim. How could someone be so excited about school? I turned around because I heard somebody calling my name, but nobody was there...Creepy!
I turned back to Destiny to see Derick coming to me. He looked so graceful and beautiful, I'm at least glad i'm falling for him.
I thought to my self as he held out his hand for my bag.

"OK you two can talk later, right now we've got to go. C'mon taylor." he said in his melting voice and he grabbed my hand and dragged me away.

"Buh bye Destiny!" I managed to croak before we were out of the gym. We had to practically run to history because it was on the other side of the school! Thankfully we made it to class on time. Derick sat next to me in Mr. Sheets' class room, oddly it mad me feel at home. I started to think about that double date as Mr. Sheets talked about the up coming dance. It's the winter dance and it's boys choice witch was not a good thing! The dance was going to be in a weeks on the 15th about two weeks and two days away from my brithday 12/29/90. I'm gonna be seven-teen. I decided to ask Derick about the double date he has no clue about! So I wrote him a note.

*Derick, me Neithan and Destiny are going out this Saturday.
Probably this Friday. I was wondering if you wanted to come with us?*

I wrote quickly and acted like I was taking notes since the teacher had started his lesson. I looked forward but saw Derick smiling out of the corner of my eye.

*Yeah, sure Taylor I would love to come.
Were are we going?*

I read his cursive, it was beautiful. Like he had done it for centuries! It made my writing look sloppy, which it was actually pretty good.

*Not sure yet, but I want to go to the movies and catch a bite to eat.
Hows that sound to you?*

Derick paused a moment before writing, probably so we didn't get caught.

*Sounds good to me, but what movie are we gonna see?*


I thought about it for a second. I had seen a few movies back home that I wanted to see but I ended up moving here.

*Well there was this one movie I wanted to watch back home but never got the
chance it's called "Night Stalker" it's about vampires.
If there isn't anything good playing though I was
thinking we all could go hiking.*

Derick shot me a disapproving and shocked face.

*Wait!! What about the vampire in your
dreams!? Doesn't that scare you enough to were you don't
want to see a Vampire movie....?*

Derick complained at my choice of movie with a disapproving face.

*Well then call me crazy but I love vampires and werewolves.
They fascinate me and they don't scare me. Even the vampire in my dreams fascinates me. Because he does scare me, anymore I look for things that might scare me but they don't.
So if you think I 'm crazy that's OK cause I'm used to it. ~.^*

That is one of the reasons my friends and I were so close. Because together we felt like we belonged. Maybe not with the higher ups, Jocks, or the best kids but with each other. We were our own, we did fit in with each other and excepted each other. Like true friends should instead of these little clicks that stick together but just talk bad about each other and spread rumors for kicks.
Derick looked at me and smiled.

*You're not like most people i know, Taylor.
That's a Very good thing. So tell me
this though, why do they fascinate you?*

His eyes were soft and they made me want to blush and giggle. I look down because if I didn't I would end up giggling and being weird.

*Well I think there awesome for some reason and different things
about me are like a vampire. I prefer the darkness and I'm
considered an outcast only excepted by others like me. I
have always like vampires I used to day dream about what it would be
like to be one. i wished that one would come and visit me to be my friend when I was sad.
My other grandmother ,Becky, always got mad at me cause I was so quiet, and I
looked sad all the time, even when I wasn't! She would ask me 'what's wrong'
and when I said nothing she thought I was lying and got mad.
I tried to look more happy but I couldn't pull it off for long. That's why I have
to hang around people like me because they do accept me for how I am and
all my flaws. Derick I even have my own fangs!!*

I really do have fangs like Derick's. I even have to try not to bite my tongue because if I bite to hard it will start to bleed. The truth was I wasn't a sad child I just looked like it. I could think I was smiling ear to ear but it would be a frown I came to the conclusion that I had a permanent frown on my face. I thought that mabe if I stopped thinking about vampires and werewolves I could be more happy, so for a very long time I didn't think hey were real. Jason cured me of that though he brought me to what I wanted and what I knew, I will always be thankful for him and what he did.
Derick looked at me with sad eyes that yearned to grab me and accept me and all my flaws, and I wanted despretaly to grab him and cry into his cold body letting out all my secrets.

*I accept you.
But not just because were alike.
There's something about you I'm drawn to....
Oh Yeah can I see your fangs?*

I giggled and blushed, looked at him and smiled, ear to ear.

*SEE!!*

He chuckled and smiled showing off his fangs which I had seen so many times already.

*You weren't kidding! Hehehehehe!
That's cool! I have fangs to but I'm
sure you've seen them as much as I smile around you. ^^;*

Derick pushed the paper over in front of me I read it and rolled my eyes. Not long after that class was over and I wish it wasn't. I wouldn't get to see Derick until lunch which should be in fourth period and then I see him in Science and then Choir. He stood up after I did and took my bag.

"Look you really don't have to do that I can carry my own things." I sighed as he looked at me puzzled again.

"We already disgust this I'm going to carry you bag."

"But-" he cut me off.

"No buts about it so just drop it." he said sweetlly as his eyes turned a bright blue agian.

"Fine..." I sighed. Why can't I beat him!?
Derick chuckled.

"C'mon I'll take you to reading!" he said cheerfully. We were walking down the hall when a short, dark skinned, boy came right up to me and got in my face. He had black messy hair and looked tanned all over. He was about my height and he had dark brown eyes.

"Hey you're kinda close, don't you think!?" I complained as i pushed him back.

"Oh, hehe, yeah sorry." the boy said in a scratchy voice as he scratched the back of his head."I'm Walther."

"Hi Walther....I'm Taylor. Is thre something that you wanted or do you do that to everybody?" I askd sarcastically it made all three of us laugh.

"No you just loooked like someone I know and I wanted too see if it was her." he said simpally.

"Oh, OK, well bye Walther." I said as Derick and I walked away.

"Yeah, bye Taylor!" he said excitedly.

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OK probably should have done this before but here are the characters

Taylor Lynn

age:17

appearance:

Derick Jones

age: looks 17


appearnce:

Neithan Jones

age:17

apperance:

Destiny Lee:

age:17

apperance:

Christian Chev

age:16

apperance:

Jason

age:17

apperance:

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Chapter 5
Singing Time
Derick and I walked off to reading he would soon go to his next class, and I would be able to talk to Destiny about our double date. I walked into Mrs. Lyle's' room and saw Destiny sitting across the room saving me a seat.

"Hey, Taylor! Over here." she exclaimed with a giggle.

"Coming Destiny." I turned around to see Derick staring at me. "Good-bye Derick." I spoke a bit sadly I didn't want him to go.

"Bye Taylor and don't worry we'll see each other at lunch. Bye." he said again and walked away. How did he know what I thought how did he answer my unspoken question? How does he do that? It's like he hears my thoughts...cool! I wish I could do that.

"Taylor, Come here. There's someone I want you to meet." I turned around to see Destiny waving me over. Next to her there was a pale, skinny boy he had blonde, spiky hair. He looked at me with a big and goofy smile. I laughed and walked over to them.

"Hey, who's the twerp?" I smiled to let him know I was kidding.

"I'm Joey Smith." he grinned a evil grin. "Oh yeah..I heard what you said to Christian." he sounded smug. and his dark blue eyes gleamed with pleasure.

"Yeah? Well I'm only sorry you couldn't see the look of embarrassment and shock planted on her face!" I spoke smugly and my mind wandered back to Derick.

"Taylor?" I heard a husky voice say from behind me.

"Yeah." I turned to face a man that looked like a Greece god! He was tall and pale & had black hair slicked over one eye which was a violet maroon color. He had on a grey shirt that had a red and purple hectogramme on the front of it, and he had on black baggy jeans on. You know, he was more of a Gothic god instead of Greece. That's even better.

"I heard about Christian. That's great! She has had it comeing for a long time." he half smiled and I practically passed out!

"Yeah. I enjoyed telling her off my self. So you know me but...?" I said still recovering from his glory.

"Oh! Yeah. Sorry, I'm Sean." he looked down at my HIM T-shirt while I looked at his hectogramme, which is the sign for HIM!
He seems cool, I bet we could be really good friends.

"Cool. So you like HIM." it was a statement, not a question.

"Yeah, seems you do to.... so I was wondering...?" he said raising his brow he leaned in a little. "Do you like to skateboard?"

"Yeah I like to board in my spare time it's fun." I spoke as I leaned away a little I had to catch my breath for a moment.

Sean smiled an adorable half smile. " Would wanna come skateboarding with me after school or whenever?"

"Hmm...skateboarding huh?" I said coolly. "Just to hang out, right?"

"Yup....unless you want it to be more..." Sean trailed off and his violet maroon eyes rolled.

"No thanks friends only!" I said a quickly. Don't want this hottie to get the wrong idea about me.

"Now class take your seats!" Mrs. Lyle's said loudly over all of our talking. I sat next to Destiny while Sean sat next to me and joey sat next to Destiny. I wrote Destiny a note telling her about what I had thought out and if she like the idea. Destiny agreed and said that I should bring it up at lunch. Sadly I said that I would. About an hour later class was almost over and I just kept thinking about Derick what was it about him? He is to good to be true..almost like a dream, but I'm sure I'm not sleeping. There has to be something...wrong...or diffrent. My imagination stared to go wild.

What if he's a Vampire....it would make perfect sense! The hot weather and cloudy skies hardly any bright lights, not to mention he wears dark clothes probably to block out any light that might be there! Plus they go camping ever other weekend or something like that. That could be when they feed... That might be why he's so cold and hard. Then it's like he can hear my thoughts. In every book and movie I read and seen about vampires they can do something like that and turn into a bat, wolf, and my favorite black mist. It makes perfect sense, that might be one of the reasons he doesn't judge me. It also would explain why all of his family isn't blood related.

"Taylor, do you want to skate board after school today?" Sean asked me interrupting my heavenly day dream, which if I'm lucky, isn't a daydream.

"I would but I left my board back at Port Neches." I whispered to him.

He giggled silenly," i'll take you out and buy you a new one. You can pay me back later." he whispered back.
Dang, he's nice.

"OK, but can we do it tomorrow?" I asked puckering my black painted lips.

"S-s-sure...?" he said as he smiled dumbly at me. I rolled my eyes.

"Retard!" I whispered to him.
Five minutes later class was let out. I raced to the door leaving my new friends behind. I was eager to find Derick, but he was quickly behind me grabbing my bag.

"Hey." he said winking.

"Hey Derick." I said staring into his bright blue eyes. "I met a boy named Sean. Ever heard of 'em?"

"Yeah he seems cool he moved here about three years ago, lives about a mile away from us." Derick answered as he stared into my eyes, he started to look jealous agin. Hehehehe ^^. "Why?"

"Well he asked me if I wanted to go skateboarding with him...and i told him I would go with him tomorrow after we go out and buy me a new board." I giggled and thought. 'Does that bother you vampire hottie?'

A look of shock and disbelieve appeared on Derick's face. Now I was sure he could hear my thoughts or me telling Sean yes might be what caused that look? Was I right or does he officially find me crazy?
Derick's perfect face smoothed out and he looked a little on edge still.

"Soho....a Vamp. huh?" he said grabbing my arm and leading me away.

"Maybe...It was just a guess...that appears to be right!" I smiled wildly.
Derick didn't say anything instead he just lead me out of the hearing range of the other students. We walked in an awkward silence. Wow......am I right or is he gonna think I'm crazy? Oh well if I totally embarrassed my self mom, dad, and I can move into an apartment....but I would miss him. Wait! Why would I miss him? I barely know him...but... still I can't help but feel strongly for him. Is it weirdness or is it true love? Derick chuckled and stopped then he dropped my arm and grabbed my hand with a soft and loving hold he turned and looked into my eyes.

"So...what makes you think that?" he said softly enchanting me with his beautiful blue eyes.

"Well...The way you act, and the weather is perfect. I mean cloudy so you don't get burnt but warm to heat you cold skin. Oh yeah and the way you can read my mind and you can have really good hearing." I stopped. Derick was staring at me wide eyed and edgy again. This made me want to turn back time so I could stop my self from saying anything.


"It's OK Taylor. No harm done just a little surprising that you figured it out so quickly. The last person that found out it took them about twenty years." he got a jealous twinge in his eyes again.

"Well you are looking at the vampire expert here!" I giggled and shrugged.

"Eh-hem." I heard a voice from behind me. "Taylor?" I hadn't heard this voice yet. It sounded like a man and it was a little bit scratchy. I turned around to see a goody-goody soccer snob behind me. He was accompanied by another boy and Christian.
The first boy had blonde hair and dark blue eyes. The other boy had dark brown shaggy hair with green eyes. They were both muscular and handsome, but what made it worse was that the blonde one thought he was a god or an angle. I could tell by the way he looked down on me. Regular jocks and dirty rich kids...how typical. I might play soccer but that is only because I want a scholarship and because I'm good at it. Plus I don't act like a freaking snob.

"Yeah? What do you and Freak-o over there want?" I gestured toward Christian.
She made a face and turned her head as if disgusted. Derick and I laughed, he put his arm around my shoulder and rested his beautiful head on my arm. The boy with the brown hair giggled too, he must not like her much either. I thought and smiled at him.

"Shut-Up Danny! Taylor don't try and act cool here because the truth is you're nothing here just another weirdo goth to add to the show!" Christian yelled and the blonde one laughed while Danny made a face at her and smiled warmly at me.
I smiled back and turned to Christian.

"At least I don't put on a show or need my friends to back me up when I'm in a fight! Besides I'm only second hand compared to you." I said sweetly as she smiled. Derick turned his head and his mouth fell open.

"I knew you would come around Taylor." Christian said with a grin. "Now let's get away from the freaks here and go and make you a pink power puff cheerleader for the Black Jags football team!" I fell over and leaned on Derick.

"Ahhhh! Now I know I'm in hell!!! And besides I would really hate to take your place as the head freak here. So really stop trying to act cool because the truth is you're nothing but a weirdo preppy tool to add to the show!" I snapped in a girly voice mocking hers. Danny started to crack up with laughter. The blonde one looked me up and down then smiled evilly.

"Danny...enough. Take Christian and get out of here." he said confidently. Danny looked at Christian and then at me he sighed.

"Yeah I got your dumb girlfriend." he said in a low, shadowy voice as the two of them walked away. Derick stood up and laughed.

"I'm Travis." he stopped and looked me over again. "Your name must be "Sexy Monster Girl"! I can be your dark prince if you want....." he said in a seductive voice and gestured towards an empty room.

"Why you over grown perv!! I should kick your ass for that. Or I could shove my foot so far up your ass you won't be able to talk for the next thirty years!!" I started to raise my voice but Derick put his hand on my shoulder.

"It's OK Taylor." he looked at Travis with a death glare. "First off she's my Sexy Monster Girl! And second talk to her or about her like that again I swear it'll be the last thing you ever do!" he said squeezing my waist and pulling me close to him. I stared up at his gorgeous face in awe. That was so sweet! I'm his sexy monster girl... I blushed with realizing it. I looked at Travis who scowling at him in disgust and hate.

"Hmmm... Shouldn't you get over your self Derick? I mean please your ugly and stupid not to mention a.... Oh, yes Sexy Monster Girl have you heard the rumors about him and his family yet?" Travis questioned as he smoothed his face. He was actually handsome but so self absorbed, I couldn't hate him more.


"Um......What rumors?" I asked praying it wouldn't be stupid.

"Him and his family are Vampires. The all look it to that's one of the main reasons people think it." he said proudly.

"It only shows you have to get past looks I mean you probably never would have guest I could be a psycho ***** now could you?" I said grinning evilly at him. I felt Derick's body start to shake from laughter. I could always scare people if I tried but this thought seemed to give him pleasure, it seemed to arose him. How screwed up can one guy get? That thought should scare or if not scare them make them go away.

"You kids hurry up and get to your next class before your late and you get a detention!" A teacher yelled at us from down the hallway. I looked at the teacher he was a short man with grey hair and tons of wrinkles. I stared at the man a moment he had to be at least one hundred and eight with as many wrinkles he had. shaking my head I looked at the two boys again they looked ready to tear each other apart.

"Derick come on. Take me to my next class." I pulled on Derick's arm he looked down at me and we began to walk down the hallway past Travis.

"See you later sexy monster girl...." he said softly as we past I felt Derick's body tense next to mine.



The next few classes were slow. Derick hadn't said much ever since our little run in with Travis and every time I would try to talk to him he would just and look away. It was time for choir and I decided I would have to get him to talk with me. We walked in together and saw Christian in there next to the teacher, Mrs. Priscella.

"Oh hello Derick! You must be Taylor, right?" she said turning towards us. "Derick is one of my most talented students. From what your old choir teach sent us you are very good to. After class starts I would like you to sing for us so think of a song please before class begins." she said happily. Mrs. Priscella was a tall, pale woman with light red hair that reminded me of fire and her sapphire eyes she was good looking. She seemed nice and "up to date" you could say.

" Yes ma'am" I spoke politely. Derick as glancing at me out of the corner of his eyes.

"So what song are you gonna sing?" he asked in a melt voice.

"I don't know probably 'My Immortal' by Evanescence. I love that song it's really beautiful." I looked at him at him. Just like you.
Derick smiled and hugged me. Suddenly i heard his voice in my head. You are the beautiful one. I began to wonder how I heard it did he want me to hear it or was it an accident i couldn't tell and just gave up on it. We went and sat down in the chairs that were in the center of the blue and white room filled with posters of artist and instruments and notes. Mrs. Priscella came out of a small room that she had disappeared into.

"Now class sit down and shut-up!" after the kids dashed for their chairs she looked at me. " We have a new student. Taylor Lynne, she's new here and I want all of you to be nice to her. Taylor please come up here and sing so I can see what to do with you. No noises from any of you kids keep your mouth shut." She looked around the room and then back at me. I stared at her she motioned for me to come over where she was.

Oh my goth! she didn't expect me to sing infront of the whole class did she!! I would only end up embarrassing my self....dear god what if I forgot the words or that devil Christiana tried to make me- my thoughts were cut off.
You'll be fine I know you will be wonderful. Derick's voice calmed me and my nerves. He grabbed my hand and squeezed it.
I guess he wanted me to hear that.

"Mrs. Priscella I'm going to sing 'My Immortal'...." I sighed. "O.....K.... I can do this no big." I whispered to my self as I walked to the front of the class room.

"Very nice sweetie start when your ready." she said solemnly.

"I'm so tired of being here-
Suppressed by all my childish fears
And if you have to leave
I wish you would just leave
Because your presence still lingers here
and it won't leave me alone.
These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just to real
There's just too much that time can not erase
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you'd scream I'd fight away all of your fears
And I've held your hand through all of these years-
But you still have all of me." I stopped thinking that would be enough.
I looked up at Derick. He was wide eyed and gaping at me. I glanced at Mrs. Priscella.

"Please finish the song Taylor." she said in a pleading voice.

I sighed at looked at Derick knowing that just looking at him would help settle me some more.
"You used to captivate me
By you resonating light
Now I'm bound by the life you left behind-
Your face it haunts my once pleasant dreams
Your voice has chased away all of the sanity in me
These wounds won't seem to heal
This pain is just to real
There's just too much that time can not erase
When you cried I'd wipe away all of your tears
When you'd scream I'd fight away all of fears
And I've held your hand through all of these years
But you still have all of me
I've tried so hard to tell my self that you're gone
And though you're still with me
I've been alone all along."

COME ON DO U people still like it?!?!?!?!? :worried:

Sorrrryyyyy

Ninny doesn't check out fanfics all the time >> <<

More soon

:cheer: :kittylove: :excited: Wonderful story, Taylor!

(If you have a preferred name that you have told me before I have forgotten it, sorry. :hehe: )

My most humble apologies for not replying sooner. *bows humbly*

For the longest time, and I do not know why, I thought that this was a role playing game. ^^;;

Any way..

I have two words for you, Taylor. ^^

FLAWLESS VICTORY! ^__^

Please continue when you may. ^^

I'm soo honored!! Thank you both so much and no you just call me taylor. ^^

i'm almost done with six so i'll have it up there as soon as I can! :victory: :) :kittylove:

Updaaaate

i will soon!!!

Nowww

dude i'm soooo close to being done it's painfull!!

NINJA, BE PATIENT!

*sighs and demures*

We all can be just a little, if not more, impatient with our fellow writers to update their stories.

I know that some of you may be wondering when I may be updating my own two fanfictions. But that is neither here nor there at the moment.


I, Jostanos, have been very impatient with some if not most of you on more than one occasion and I may have said so.

Why allow your fanfcitions to go dormant and or die out completely?

The reason is more than the lack of replies / reviews (You may update with out those you know. ^^).

It is the constant whining and crying for updates every other post or almost every 5 minutes.

Now I may ask for an update near the end of my reviews, but they are subtle and gentle reminders (Usually) and not the aforementioned "POST AN UPDATE NOW!" type of thing ..

:hehe:

Although... I do admit that I have been guilty of that too on more than one occasion. ^^;;;

Taylor, Take your time. there is no rush.

Update when you may.

:hehe: I mean... Look at all the time I have been taking to try to think of ways to update and fill up my two fanfics! :cutelaugh:

Patience, everyone, and the update may come soon. the same goes for all fanfictions that have been posted since the beginning.

Thank you for your time and patience. *bows*

....wow.....thank you

*bows* You are most welcome, Taylor.

Please, take all the time you need to get everything together.

*glares at his fellow readers and writers* We Will be patient now won't we?

LOL!!

PPffft, xD

...

Oh, you were serious..

Indeed I was and still am, Nin.

As I was and still am serious about all of you writers that have yet to update your fanfictions but will not due to lack of replies/reviews.

You do not need reviews/replies to update.

Sometimes it takes time for all of us to get used to new fanfictions/stories, and even if there are stories already posted... nine times out of ten we may have already tracked them so that we may reply/review when we may. ^^

Another thing...

Have you ever checked to see how many views your fanfiction has gotten?

If not.. DO SO!

That means that you do have readers and that they may have tracked your story so that they may review when they may. I know it is true in my case because I have soooo many stories tracked as well as a few Role playing games and other topics.

Everyone...

Please update your fanfictions/stories when you may.

Take your time..
There is no rush..

:hehe:

Take my two fanfictions for example:

A "Fullmetal Pokemon"?!

and

Inuyasha and the Frozen Ryu Youkai

Both are dormant at the moment, but may be updated soon.

Not because I have lost interest in them but because I am taking a break and trying to think of ideas to continue them.

>_> Especially for A "Fullmetal Pokemon"?!

*sighs* I still do not have any ideas for Chapter 20.

If any of you have any ideas, please PM me.

Any ideas used will be credited to the person who submitted it. :victory:

*bows* Thank you for your time and patience, and please...

KEEP ON WRITING STORIES! ^^