Rated for a few reasons don't say I didn't warn you.






Ever had one of those days where you feel like you hit rock bottom? During work this afternoon a very vulgar man entered the sushi resturant I was waitressing at, in a very bad mood. He slammed his fist on the table he was sitting at and ordered many drinks, unfortunatly for me, I was his waitress.

I rushed back and forth bringing him almost every kind of beer we had. He would spit it on me if he disliked it and would lash out at how we didn't carry his favorites. I was about to kick him out, however the manager told me not to. He stated that this obnoxious man was a regular customer and usually spent a great deal of money whenever he came...For the next hour the man became more drunk and nailed me everytime he saw a flaw.

By the time my shift ended I was exhausted and ready to go home and take a long, hot bath to make me calm down and ease the tense feeling I had in my muscles. I walked home, not bothering to take a taxi for the rush hour of the day had taken effect.

When I reached the campus I walked directly to my dorm section and took the stairs two at a time eagerly wanting that bath. I sniffed my shirt and scrunched my nose, disgusted at the stench of fish and beer. I continued my climb until I reached the top floor where my room was located. Second door on the left. I pulled out my key and unlocked the door surprised not to see Yura sitting on the couch watching television.

I slipped my vintage purse off my shoulders and onto the floor and went directly to my room hearing voices emerging from it.

'Oh god not again' I thought warily as I yanked open the door.

"God Bankotsu! Faster!" Moaned Yura from underneith my covers.

"Yura Maru!" I felt my jaw snap open in utter shock. This was the third time in the past two weeks! I fumed with anger and quickly gathered all of this Bankotsu's clothing.

They both bolted up starring at me, I knew my face had anger and annoyance spelt all over it. 'Why does she do this to me!' I frequently found myself thinking. I Flung Bankotsu's clothing at him and pointed warily to the door giving him an icy glare.

"You...Out of my bed and out of my dorm, right now!" I growled. I watched him as he slipped his boxers and dark jeans on from under the covers.

"Call me." He told Yura forming his fingers into a phone symbol, as he ran out the door.

I pinched the bridge of my nose and turned to scold my "best friend" who always seemed to end up in my damn bed.

Oh she was in for it this time...

I like you.

Continue :3

Hmmm...

The story is alright but you could work on detail and such. For example, since this is in first person, a lot of detail is required. How it was said in first person was well a little... how can I put it nicely? A little cliche. Starting off the very first sentence with "I had just..." "I am now..." "my name is...." are all big time cliches in most first person fanfictions. I used to have that problem and it is still a problem for me (hence why I no longer write in first person).

And if this is more of a story for adults, then you may want to fix your dialog and such. You're spacing a little too much and really spacing isn't required until you reach four sentences minimum. The maximum amount is eight sentences. Sorry but that is an unwritten law when it comes to dialog. I honestly used to have this problem three months agoand four sentences minimumwas a troubleshoot for me until I eventually got used to it. Nowadays I can finish up a paragraph in no more then two minutes without much worries. It's that useful. That and it makes you seem smarter as a writer.

Well, that's the only problems I found with the story. I am not discouraging you from writing, but I am trying to encourage you. That's all. Sorry if I sound harsh.

Nah its alright. Im glad for the tips, I'll put them to good use too. I read your story unforgiving sins its really good XD

Thanks. You seem to take constructive criticism really well.

Im not gonna turn down something that will help me become better at a skill and hobby I truly love. I'll take what you got. If I don't like it then I won't use it, if it makes sense to me then I'll embrace it with open arms...easy as that.

Minor spelling errors, but other than that, good re-write

I still like you :3

Thank you for the tips Saku I edited it...with help from Michelle lol and I fixed those errors, I hope its a bit better...and you were right...my begining was clishe' lol

Chapter 2




Yura was a doctor in training, she took a vast interest in the human body and was unbelievably seductive. She's had many boyfriends which were inevitably one night flings. She always told me her love for the human body resulted in many "experiments" which always seemed to take place in my bed...

I paced around trying to calm myself down from the event that had just taken place. I turned to point my finger at her accusingly however, not finding the words to say, I remained silent. All of a sudden a laugh emerged from her plump, tiny lips. I crossed my arms at her and scowled.

"And what would be so amusing to you right now?" I questioned with annoyance.

"The look on your face, your acting like my mother." She grinned while brushing her short, lucious locks. She yawned and looked out the window. "You'd think you would lighten up after a bit Kagome." She sighed.

"How can I possibly lighten up when your "getting it on" in my bed?! I had an aggrivating day! During classes I had a very frustrating test and work sucked the living hell out of me! I come home to relax and I have to deal with this!" I was begining to go a bit hysterical so I sat down in one of our roomy leather chairs and layed my head back.

"I apologize Kagome." Yura said in an inoccent voice. I turned my head and starred at her pleading eye's.

"Its alright..." I mumbled, irritated that she won yet another argument. I heard her gasp in excitement as she hopped onto my lap.

"Yura w-" She clapped her hands with a huge grin emerging on her smooth features.

"I know! Kagome...your very pretty and I know exactly what you need!" She giggled. "I know for a fact that you've never had a boyfriend or even kissed a male before and I think you deserve to feel that pure lusty feeling that only a man could give you...I'm going to set you up with my friend Inuyasha!" My jaw fell open as she grabbed the phone and rapidly began to dial.

"Yura NO!" I growled. I went to grab the phone from her grasp but she slapped my hand away giving me an icy stare.

"I am doing your single butt a favor, so shut up, be nice and quit whinning!" She snapped. That shut me up pretty well...I heard her whispering over the phone and laughing one in a while. She stayed talking on the phone for a half an hour before she closed it. "All right!" She said enthusiastically, "Come with me Kagome! I'm gonna help you get ready for your first date! You'll be meeting Inuyasha at the new teen club down town, Blue Fire, come along we have a lot of work to do."

I was still shocked as she played around with my hair and for the first time I actually felt the thrill of my first date coming on...I hope this guy isn't a jerk...

xDDDD

"Yura had many boyfriends and experimented on my bed."

That part somehow made me giggle. So Bankotsu is another one of her 'guinea pigs'? x3

Poor Bankotsu huh lol

Yeah.

x3 Oh well; I'm not surprised that he volunteered to be 'experimented' on.

Lmao true, true he always seemed like the type to me XD

Same here.

x3

:hilarious: Oh dear.

Saku... I am beginning to wonder how some of our fellow authors come up with such great story ideas like this one. ^^

Yura having many "guinea pig" Boyfriends. :hilarious:

Bankotsu and Yura being caught by Kagome on her bed. :hilarious:

And Yura setting Kogome up on her first date with Inuyasha! :kittylove: :victory: :cheer:

Melody, Please continue when you may!

Psst Jostanos Guess who...Matsuo says hi LOL

Chapter 3


Alright, so I've never been on a date before and I'm kind of worried at this moment. After Yura "beautifide" me we got into her Volvo and drove to Blue Fire, with her rambling on about Inuyasha and how good he was...in...bed?!

"You slept with him!?" I asked horrifide. We pulled up at a red light and she turned to me. She placed an angelic smile on her lips and shrugged.

"Sure, I had a crush on his older brother a few years back and slept with Inuyasha to make Sesshomaru jelous...It didn't work out to well but damn, Inuyasha was sure something." I sat there gawking at her in utter shock.

"Your hooking me up with one of your guinea pigs!? Yura you are unbelievable!" I snapped. I crossed my arms in disgust.

"Oh come on Kagome, he's an old friend, he's going into the same feild as I am."

"Oh my god...Another sex addict!? You have got to be kidding me...." The car began moving again and soon we pulled up at a stylish looking club with Yura giggling. She pulled the key out of the ignition and smirked at me.

"Kagome, Kagome, Kagome...Inuyasha is one of a kind, he admires women just as much as I men. You'll love him trust me." She got out of the car and I took a deep breath stepping out as well. I was wearing a little red coctail dress that was knee high. My hair was piled on top of my head with smooth curls cascading down to my neck. My shoes were high-heeled, shiny and black. Yura looked gorgeous as usual with a yellow silk blouse and pinstripe mini skirt showing off her short, creamy legs.

We walked into the club and Yura almost instantly started yelping in excitement as she dragged me past dancers to the back of the club. In a wide, round booth sat a young man, he looked about 20 like Yura and I and he had very handsome features and long black hair. His eye's were a dreamy shade of violet and he wore black jeans with a white shirt and suit jacket ontop. I could tell through his clothes he was very muscular and most likely had a six-pack. Glasses were hung ontop of his head and he was casually flirting with a waitress when Yura screamed.

"Inuyasha!" Inuyasha stood up and they shared a brief hug. He was about six-feet-tall by the looks of it; I was about his shoulder height. I stayed behind Yura looking down to the ground awkwardly. I really felt like I should be at home eating a pizza while watching "Gossip Girls" instead of here at a club with one of Yura's friends who was obviously a player.

"Well! I'll just leave you two to get aquanted." Stated Yura turning to me. "Kagome, Inuyasha, Inuyasha, Kagome." She intoduced us gesturing with her hands. "Kagome, Inuyasha will drop you off after, maybe..." She winked at me. I flushed and looked down at the floor again. "Have fun" She sang as she skipped torwards the door.

I looked up at Inuyasha and he smiled at me. "A little shy miss?" He asked, his tone amused.

"Err....." I mumbled, I honestly had nothing to say. He chuckles and grabbed my hand, he lead me to the booth and made me sit down next to him. He leaned over, his elbow on the table with his hand holing his face. He smirked at me.

"Can you talk or are you disabled that way? Cause if you are write a note to Yura saying I don't do charity work." He mocked. I frowned at him, he really was a jerk!

"Thats not very nice." I growled at him.

"Feh, I don't play nice...Dance with me." He demanded. He made a reach for my wrist but I jerked it away.

"I refuse to dance with you until you treat me with the respect I deserve!" I snapped in anger. This Inuyasha acted like a spoiled, rich little brat asking for a chocolate. His expression became surprised and his smile became smug.

"Fiesty, I like em that way. Baby, you aint ever gonna get better then me, so don't argue and do me a favor and just cooperate...Cause if you don't how are we ever going to have some fun?" He said while arching his eyebrows.

I slammed my fists on the table and gave him a sweet fake smile. "Inuyasha, your so right...Let me just go to the bathroon and...Freshen up, alright?" I asked sweetly.

"Mmm" He grinned. "Thats more like it, I'll be waiting right here when you get back." He promised leaning back against the leather seats of the booth.

'Keh, thats if I come back you cocky bastard.' I thought annoyed as I left from his view.

Heehee.

Inuyasha and Kagome get hooked up. x3

By the way, Inuyasha and Kagome's POV will be in this story. It will be obvious when its Inuyasha's POV I promise lol.


Chapter 4


Ugh! He was so full of himself! I was infuriated. I glared at my face in the mirror of the bathroom, pulling my hair down out of the artistic hairstyle Yura worked for an hour on. My hair hung straight down and over my shoulders, for some reason I thought this looked prettier. I sighed and leaned over the sink and put my hand on the knob turning it. I watched the cool water flow from the pipe and washed my face. After I wiped myself dry I decided 'the hell with it' I'm going home.

I walked out of the bathroom cautiously, I peered over at Inuyasha's table. He sat there with his face in his hand taking glances at his watch. I sighed feeling a little bit guilty that I was going to ditch him but...He truly did deserve it. Just as I was about to walk out of the club I felt something bound into me and I fell down. The purse slung over my shoulder colapsed wit me.

"I am so sorry miss." A warm husky voice stated. It was hard to hear over the loud music, but I heard it. I rubbed my lower back it stung a bit from the fall. I looked up to see who apologized to me. He had black hair tied back into a semi-long ponytail, his eye's were a vibrant green and he was as well built up like Inuyasha. He looked a little bit taller then Inuyasha though...Which made me feel even shorter. He wore a dark blue muscle shirt and black suit pants. Without me relizing it he was holding out his hand to help me get up. I gently grasped it and was brought to my feet.

We looked at eachother for a minute and then he bent down and grabbed my purse off the floor.

"I believe this is yours." He grinned while I grabbed my purse and put it over my shoulder.

"Thank you." I said quietly. I wasn't sure if he would be able to hear me or not. I looked up at his perfect features. (Ugh there are so many handome men in this town!)

"Not a problem. I'm sorry I bumped into you. My buddy Ginta's dancing is like a leathal weapon." He laughed. I laughed too and then relized one of my favorite jazz songs was playing. Usually I'd just be reading and I'd play the soft, slow tune to calm me. Sometimes I'd even sing to it while dancing in my seat.

"Um.." Stammered the man. "Would you care to dance?" He asked. He looked slightly embarassed and I couldn't help think it was kind of adorable.

"Sure. My names Kagome, by the way." I smiled. He returned my smile and clasped my hands in his own so we could start swaying to the rythmic tune.

"Its sure nice meeting you Kagome, my names Kouga, Kouga Fang." We twirled along the dance floor for a few minutes, just talking about casual stuff. After our song was over we danced to another, and another. This night didn't turn out so bad after all I suppose.


Inuyasha's POV

What in hell is taking her so long!? She left nearly a half an hour ago! I was tired of waiting. I was so impatient tonight. Last month Kikyo, the love of my life broke up with me...I was devastated, no one had ever turned me down before. I Banged almost every girl in my dorm since then and have picked up lots of girls at places like this. My charm had always gotten to them, but tonight when Yura called I was in a plain bad mood, I thought if I came here Yura's little friend could pleasure me and make me feel a bit better, But NO she has to take forever in that fucking bathroom!

I got up and was about to go over to the ladies room and call for her when I saw that cute little red dress she was wearing twirling on the dancefloor...Her hair was down...It looked very beautiful to say the least. I was angry she didn't come back however, what got me worked up most was she was in the arms of another man! How dare she!

I stomped over to where she was dancing and saw my arch rival in Martial Arts at our collage. I hated him to the bitter core.

"Kouga!" I growled. Both Kagome and Kouga stopped dancing to look over at me. Kouga's face became smug and Kagome went dead on pale.

"Get away from my date you bastard!" I snarled. "She came here with me!" Kouga let go of Kagome and walked up to me. We were both head to head and he laughed.

"You must have been some crummy date if she decided to run away mutt face!" I roared and shoved past him up to Kagome.

"What are YOU doing with HIM!" I barked at her. She frowned.

"Inuyasha you are such a jerk UGH!" She yelled at me as she brushed her hair back and fast tracked out the door.

"Get back here!!!" I called after her. I would never let a girl turn me down, ever again.

"Oi! Mutt face. She's mine now! I'm going to ask her out again. She even gave me her number!" Bragged Kouga.

"Ive had her number for years!" I retorted. Actually I've had Yura's...Makes no difference in the case.

Kagome's POV

I Can't believe that just happened! I stormed out of the club with Kouga's number and quickly called for a taxi. The last thing I wanted to do was drive home with Inuyasha.

Matsuo: Musami? Ummm.... :hehe: Do you know when Sabine is going to update Dark Hearts? It has had a couple replies. *coughs* Excellent update by the way, Melody.

Sylt: Matsuo, are you sure you are ok? That wasn'r Musami.

Mastuo: :fan: Please update when you may.

Sylt: *sighs* Sometimese he never listens.

I need more replies xD

Matsuo: You've already had a couple there, and you know how Jostanos-sama is about people not updating because they are not getting enough replies. :hehe:

Sylt: -_- That isn't Secret_miko, Matsuo.

Matsuo: *whistles a merry little tune as he walks back to his apartment*

Sylt: *blinks* He's walking back?

Shippo: *sighs* Perhaps he left his car at home and got a lift here.

Sylt: But who, Shippo?

Shippo: Musami. ^^

Sylt: :scaryangry:

xD Ah so now Matsuo actually lets Musami drive LOL

-_- Let's just say that Matsuo persaded some techs to design a "Musami proof crash proof vehichle" and leave it at that, shall we? ^^

The show begins now! Yay!

Chapter 5



I paid the taxi driver in cash and skillfully stepped out of the cab making sure I don't trip on the wet ground with my heels on. I trudged swiftly past all the dorm buildings until I came to my own. I ducked inside and sighed, I sat in the lounge on the bottom floor of the building.

'Ring Ring'

'Ring Ring'

"Kagome." I said breathlessly as I flung open my cell phone. I pressed it to my ear without checking caller ID.

"KAGOME HIGURASHI! How dare you ditch Inuyasha and leave your date! Inuyasha's been looking for you everywhere and when he called me to tell me he lost you I nearly went nuts! Where in hell were you!?" Yura screamed panic swallowed all of her words.

"Inuyasha was a jerk Yura. I came home...I'm sitting in the dorm lounge. I can't even believe you'd even hook me up with someone like that!" I yelled at her, she knew me better then to go out with a man for a mere one night stand.

"Kagome listen to me. Inuyasha has had a very hard month this month...Give him a chance...You may not understand it now but soon you will. I swear to you...He's very much worth it."

"Hmph..." I snorted. Icicles will float in hell when Inuyasha learned kindness and curtiousy.

"Come up and sleep on it Kagome...Please? Inuyasha's called me over five times. He's panicked and is worried sick, he feels so guilty." She pleaded.

"I'm coming up..." I snapped my phone shut and sat in the love seat for a moment before I stood up. "Kami...Whats in store for me next?..." I asked warily climbing up the stairs to my dorm. Yura was standing at the door, seeing me she jumped me and almost brought me to the floor.

"Oh thank goodness your alright!"

"Lets go inside...I've had a long day..." I said to her as I walked inside to have a nice bath along with a long, lazy sleep.

Sorry its so short g2g)

Jacrose: *being rather studious* Sometimes brevity is the best course of action, Melody... *gets viscious* Especially when you are wiping out a squad of Pegasus goons! YEEEHAH! *SHURIKEN GRENADE STORM*S a platoon of Pegasus troopers destroying them in about 5.6 seconds.* O_O WHOA! A new Record! Go me! :victory: Top that, Strife. HA!

*coughs*

:hehe:

Please continue when you may, Sabine.

Matsuo: -_- Told ya it was Sabine, Sylt.

Sylt: -_- Did not.

Actually pretty good, though there are spelling errors in there that make me twitch a bit.

Chapter 6



Bright yellow rays of the sun seeped through the blinds of my window. I sat up warily and yawned, stretching my stiff arms over my head. I could use another hour or so, I thought sleepily. I groaned at the sound of my alarm clock; for the love of god, I actually set it last night and I woke up before it rang...smart Kagome, smart.

A sweet scent caught my nose making my mouth water a bit, I wiped the drool and stood up going to see what it was. Once I entered the kitchen I saw Yura making vanilla waffles while dancing to her I-pod singing. I smirked as I watched her hips move back and fourth while singing to one of her songs (she wasn't that great of a singer :chidorisd: )

-He had tatoo's up and down his arm
There's nothing more dangerous then a boy with charm
He's my one stop shop
Makes the panties drop
He's a sweet talking sugar coated candyman!

"Yura, Yura, Yura, save it for American Idol huh?" I teased laughing at her red face when she noticed I was watching her. He composed her face and brought me two fluffy, crisp waffles. "These look great!" I stated clasping my hands together. I quickly reached for the syrup and drowned my waffles in them.

"That sugar is seriously gonna do damage to your figure Kagome..." Yura grimaced with disgust. She grabbed some strawberries and slopped them on her waffles topping it with whipped cream. "On the other hand, you wouldn't need a good figure anyway" She scowled. "I hook you up with men and you turn them away like the plague, with an additude like that you'll never let laid or even kissed." She sighed stuffing a mouthful of waffle into her mouth.

I frowned. "What makes you think I'm so eager to get laid Yura? Maybe I'm one of those traditional woman who like to wait for the right guy." I took a sip of my coffee. "Besides it may not have worked out with Inuyasha last night but I sure did get someones number."

Yura's eye's rose and her scowl turned into an eager grin. "Who is it!? Do I know him? Is he cute? What's he look like?" She shot out.

"Cool it Yura!" I smiled, trying to calm her down. "His name is Kouga Fang. I bumped into him yesterday night and we started dancing and talking. He seems really nice." I really did like Kouga and I felt confused when Yura's grin was wiped away replaced by a hard line and a twitch.

"Kouga...Fang...Eh?" I was starting to panic a bit. What was wrong with Kouga? He was sweet enough. "Kagome...Are you trying to make your life a soap opera?" She slapped her forehead in remorse. I crossed my arms.

"Whats that supposed to mean? Kouga is very nice and I like him." I retorted. She stood up and started clearing the table of out empty plates.

"Its not whats wrong with him Kagome. Its what your getting yourself between." She rinsed the dished and placed them in the washer. She turned to look at me, her small frame leaning against the sink.

"What are you talking about?" I was honestly confused.

"Inuyasha and Kouga have been bitter rivals since day one. They hate eachothers guts." She started. I actually think I could have figured that one on my own from last nights performance by Inuyasha.

"What's your point?" I sighed, she was obviously trying to tell me something. I peered at my purse hanging on one of the coat hangers, Kouga's number was hiding in one of the pockets.

"Ok here's the deal. Those two are always at eachothers necks, they get into some sort of fight everytime they look at eachother. Both of them are jelous of one another...In my opinion. They go to school at a rich collage like this thats located downtown. They compete in everything, Martial Arts, grades, money, valubles and girls. Their fathers are very rich buisness men, both partners. In the presance of their fathers both of them act as if best friends...In reality they hate eachothers guts. Both of them are stubborn fools...I just prefere Inuyasha because his father is close friends with mine aswell."

I tried to take in everything she was telling me. I was still confused. "What does all of this have to do with me?" I wondered.

"Kouga obviously likes you. That makes this a game of love...Your just making it easy for the both of them...You've already marked yourself as their prize...Its easy to see that both of them are now taking part in the game."

"Game?!" I gasped. Then suddenly...We heared a hard, clear knock on our door.

Sylt, shippo, Jacrose, and Sonic: O_O GAME?! OOOOOOHHHHHH SHARDS!

Shippo: I knew that Inuyasha and Kouga were rivals in the show but this takes it to a whole new level.

Sylt: Yeah... But... Didin't Yura start this mess to begin with? She was the one that set Kagome up with Inuyasha in the first place that led to thier date going down hill fast and Kagome dancing with Kouga.

Sonic and Jacrose: O_O That... was a mouthfull..

Shippo: O_O What they said...

Sylt: :hehe:

all: *coughs* ANY WAY!

Any way...

What is going to happen next?

Who is at the door?

Kouga? Inuyasha? Somebody completely dif... completely dif... completely dif... completely dif... *Sylt bops me on the top of the head saying "Stop that!"* Kouga? Inuyasha? Or Somebody Completely different?

Please update when you may, Sabine. ^^

I can see this happening. xD

I'm actually very glad your replying to my story. When I was first a noob on my other account you replied to one of my stories and you liked the idea but you weren't so impressed with it, so I'm very happy I'm getting good reviews from you ^_^

I really like the idea and story! Please continue when you can. :moji:

Hi everyone just a head's up. I'll be updating soon and also I began a new story called King. Its a Bankotsu fiction I'm looking forward to continue so check it out the first chapter is posted.

What was your other account?

Secret_miko lol

Chapter 7


Yura and I glanced at eachother before I decided to get up. I walked cautiously to the door, Yura vanished into her bedroom, probably getting dressed.

"Who is it?" I asked from behind the door. My fingers wrapped around the knob waiting for an answer.

"Open the door and you'll find out" Inuyasha's muffled voice said through the door. I all of a sudden felt sick, I didn't really want to deal with him right now. "I won't bite, I promise" I heared him sigh as if he knew what I was thinking the whole time. I slowly opened the door, a low creek following it.

"May I help you?" I asked emotionless. Inuyasha scratched his head and turned away from my gaze sheepishly looking at the floor.

"I wanted to apologize about my behavior last night." I stared at him in surprise. "My father taught me better then that, I guess I was just in a bad mood and I know its a bad excuse and all but I-" He rambled.

"Inuyasha, Inuyasha stop" I said abruptly. I couldn't believe it. He was so rude cause of a bad day? It actually made sense...Yura was so sure of him, yet he was a jerk. Coming to me to apologize takes a lot of guts...especially from a guy....I think he deserved a bit of slack. "Its alright." I continued. "I wasn't having the best day either, your human...Bad moods happen."

He took a breath of releif and smiled. "I'm glad to hear you say that, I was so sure you'd just shut the door in my face." He grinned.

"Oh I was sure contemplating it" I laughed, and he laughed too. We both stood in the hallway for a few moments gathering up our thoughts.

"Would you like to come with me to the boardwalk today?" He asked out of the blue. I looked up at him suspiciously for a moment. "So I can make it up to you of course. You don't even need to think of it as a date." He spoke. I sighed and then smiled at him.

"Sure. Not as a date?"

"Not unless you want it to be. No pressure whatsoever" He casually stated.

"I'll go get dressed." I stated blushing. I glanced down at my PJ's and gestured for him to come inside the dorm and wait on the couch while I got ready. Inuyasha walked in and politely obliged.

"Oh, Kagome." Inuyasha called before I could close the door to my room. I turned around to look at him.

"Yes?"

"Keep your hair down..If your planning on doing anything to it..." He said looking at the floor...I could see the faint pink on his cheeks, I thought it was cute.

"Ok." I replide quietly as I went to get ready.

Inuyasha's POV

Hazah! YES!!! Stupid Kouga, I'm not losing to your punk ass. Oh dear...I'm going to be a doctor and I'm thinking like a fourteen-year-old.

"Inuyasha! Woot you got Kagome to go out with you!" Cheered Yura as she came to hug me.

Well...at least I'm not the only one.


(Anyone else think Inuyasha might accidently kill a person while he's trying to help them as a doctor? XDD)

:moji: You know your probably right! Loved the update. Can't wait for the next one.

Chapter 8


I was cheerful today. There was no classes and I didn't have work either. I walked to my closet in haste and yanked the door open. I flicked on the light and started tossing unwearable clothes onto the floor.

After much deliberating between a brown short sleeved V neck and a cute baby-blue sun dress, I wore the dress. I slipped on some white flats and dabbed a bit of light pink lip gloss onto my pouty lips. I grabbed my purse and went out of my room...Keeping my hair down like Inuyasha asked me too.

I heared his intake of breath as he stood up. "Wow Kagome. You look great." I looked down and blushed. He might actually be a sweetheart after all.

***

It was a sunny but cold day out. We walked along the boardwalk and looked at the different stands and the things they had to offer. I let a soft breeze carry the salty scent of the ocean into my nostrils, it smelt refreshing and homey.

"So what are you majoring in?" Inuyasha asked casually as he carried the bags of things he insisted to buy for me. Whenever he saw me look at something with interest he would immediatly buy it without letting me put in one thought of objection.

"Literature and Law." I smiled. "I'd like to follow in the footsteps of my grandfather and become a great lawyer someday." I remarked dreamily.

"Thats a nice dream." Replied Inuyasha, stopping to stare into my eyes. We just stood there, in the middle of the walk way starring at eachother for an unknown amount of time.

"I-" He began hessitating. "I'm becoming a doctor. I like the medical field and the competition against my older brother."

"Brother?" I asked dumbfounded. Then I remembered what Yura said about Inuyasha having an older brother named Sesshomaru. "Thats right! Yura mentioned something about him."

"Yeah...My father always looked down on us to become buisness men or something...He wanted me to take over his buisness someday and take over the family fortune but I decided I was into the money but not the profession so I took up the medical field...Sesshomaru gladly accepted my fathers wishes and became majored in buisness...He's looked down on me since then...I've felt the need to prove myself to my father and my brother."

I felt so sad for him! Its so much pressure on his shoulders, but I couldn't help but ask. "And your mother?" I hessitated.

"Awe she supports me with whatever I choose to do!" He grinned. "Sesshomaru's only my half brother so my mother and I get along quite well. Sesshomaru isn't to fond of her, but you could say I'm a moma's boy if your wanted." He laughed care free.

I smiled warmly. "Thats wonderful."

"Yeah..."

***

Later on after our "None Pressure" Date. Inuyasha took me to and icecream parlor which had the greatest tasting shaved ice I'd ever had. It was amazing!

"Oh My God this is good..." I groaned in pleasure.

Inuyasha burst into laughter. "My god Kagome, its like your having an orgasim or something!"

I felt embarrassed for a second then joined him in his laughter.

The little bell on the door rang and we both snapped our heads up. It was a natural jerk reaction.

I glanced at Inuyasha's scowling face, he was starting to growl. I quickly turned my stare back to the door to see that Kouga wasn't standing there anymore...he was standing right in front of me.

He picked up my hand and kissed it just below my wrist.

"Why Hello Kagome, it's so wonderful to see you again." He swiftly smiled. Then his eye's went over to look at Inuyasha.

They locked glares for a moment before Kouga smiled an obviously to happy to be real smile. "Having a good time mutt? I saw you two in through the window and thought I should join you." He explained sitting down.

"You thought wrong." Snapped Inuyasha. "You shouldn't have joined us, your not welcome and you should leave." Inuyasha said darkly.

"Keh...Make me mutt...Your not the only one fighting here."

I looked at their silent quarrel with eachother...They kept their eye's on eachother and didn't look at me, both trying to win a starring contest of hate. I quietly gasped.

What if Yura was right? What if this was a competition? What if I was being used as just a prize?!

The thought made my blood boil.

OMG... Those two are gonna get it if it turns out to be true that Kagome is nothing but a prize for either of them.

Shippo: GO, KAGOME! SHOW THEM WHOSE BOSS! :victory: :excited: :cheer:

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Please update soon, Sabine.

Matsuo Shun: And.. If it isn't too much trouble.. Please update Dark Hearts too. ^^