Title: >.<
Description: Critque please?
Saku-Tatsuya - December 28, 2007 10:19 PM (GMT)
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h279/SakuTatsuya/Taro1.jpgThere is something about this picture that I am not satisfied with and I'm not exactly sure what though. Its been bugging me all day. Can you people please point out what's wrong?
Oh and that ghostly invisible hand thingy is called a 'vector'. Those people who watch Elfen Lied would know what it is. And the guy in the picture is my character, Taro. Looks messy, I know, I'll fix that after once I know whats wrong. And those who have seen my drawings since last year; have I at all gotten any better or worse?
Haiyato Berzerker - December 28, 2007 10:23 PM (GMT)
The neck, to me, looks to long
Saku-Tatsuya - December 28, 2007 10:39 PM (GMT)
I'm going yo fix the neck now
anime dragon - December 28, 2007 10:55 PM (GMT)
It's really good, but the shirt could be a little more detailed.
Kagome+Inu-Yasha - December 29, 2007 03:25 AM (GMT)
I agree with Haiyato and anime dragon but also......
I think the face and arms looks a little to........blocky, they need more curve. And the expression....is she supposed to be dead or choking?
If she's dead she need more relaxation in the face, if she's choking she needs more expression......But this is only my opinion.....
The best part is the hair, though, its so detailed, I love it!!!~
Saku-Tatsuya - December 29, 2007 06:50 PM (GMT)
Thank you all.
I knew there was something wrong with the expression.
Kagome+Inu-Yasha - December 29, 2007 09:25 PM (GMT)
No problem, this actually the first time I've actually critiqued someone's artwork. Thank you for taking my opinion and using it for your advantage.~
Saku-Tatsuya - December 29, 2007 10:50 PM (GMT)
Kagome+Inu-Yasha - December 29, 2007 10:55 PM (GMT)
Yes! Much better!!!~ Saku its so pretty!~
Saku-Tatsuya - December 29, 2007 10:56 PM (GMT)
Yay!
Thanks for the critques everyone. =D
Kagome+Inu-Yasha - December 29, 2007 11:35 PM (GMT)
anime dragon - December 30, 2007 01:42 AM (GMT)
The new one is much better!! =D
Saku-Tatsuya - December 30, 2007 04:36 AM (GMT)
http://i66.photobucket.com/albums/h279/Sak...uya/unsins3.jpgSomething else I drew. It was out of boredom. Those who read UnSins should be able to identify who is who right off the money. xD
anime dragon - December 30, 2007 04:52 AM (GMT)
It's cute ^_^ Bankotsu kinda looks like Ed from FMA
Saku-Tatsuya - December 30, 2007 04:54 AM (GMT)
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It's cute ^_^ Bankotsu kinda looks like Ed from FMA
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I've always thought that he does. xD Well, I thought that when I watched FMA. "OMG! Is that a blonde Bankotsu?!" was my first thought.
Inari - January 8, 2008 01:41 AM (GMT)
yayyyy!!!!! your letting people critic your art???? coool!!! nows my chance to critisise you!
:cryriver: :cryriver: :cryriver: theres nothing to insult!!!! oh welll, i geusss illl just colpiment it.
WOW! THATS AMASING! you are reallly good, but one of the necks is too thin, and the mouths are a little lopsided.... hey thats sort of a insult.....
kikya - January 9, 2008 11:59 AM (GMT)
oh! You're good artist :kittylove:
it very cute ^^
Lady Lilith - January 21, 2008 09:50 AM (GMT)
Amazing!! I love his eyebrow, both of their eyes and ears.
i think her upper arm could be cleaned up a bit and I dunna mabe her bust could be made a bit perkier.