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yinandyang17 - December 30, 2007 06:49 PM (GMT)
[But I cannot]
-Mr. Yin


I want to change our world of Imperfection;
Though it's nearly impossible.

I want to accomplish something;
Though I do not have the knowledge nor the determination.

I want to see a greater time,
Though it's physically impossible.

To see what you cannot,
To accomplish something grand,
To....Have something work for me,
And let that grow to let me be great.

I want the confidence, strength, and ambition, to change everything I can grasp.

But I cannot

sunnygirl - December 30, 2007 06:52 PM (GMT)
i like it ^___^

LonelyKikyo - January 10, 2008 10:31 PM (GMT)
I just wish there was more... explanation or detail...

but I thought it was well done, for how short it is. ^^ I have nothing against short poems, though... I think it's powerful, emotionally... and the way you said things.

Nice job.

yinandyang17 - January 12, 2008 04:12 PM (GMT)
THANKY KIKYO AND SUNNY. <3

I'LL TRY TO MORE DEPTH INTO MY POEMS, I JUST FEEL MORE COMFORTABLE WITH SHORT POEMS; BUT AS WE ALL KNOW SOMETIMES WE HAVE TO BREAK AWAY FROM THOSE COMFORTABLE SPOTS.




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