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DarknessAngel712 - January 13, 2008 07:02 AM (GMT)
Bittersweet Love© Jess,

Chapter 1 -Love Bites- OR -Flashback pt 1-

They were inseparable throughout Middle school. Always by each other’s sides. They were the perfect couple. Nothing could break them apart.

Except, graduation.


Flashback

Mark and Haley, the ‘it’ couple. Both smart, cute, and their personalities matched perfectly. Haley was the dynamo that always kept a conversation up-beat. Mark was the sensitive sweetie that could brighten up a bad day. They met at the very beginning. The first day of 6th grade. They happened to be in the same homeroom. The two shared an English class together. They were the only two out of one hundred and thirty eleven year olds that HATED the teacher. It was then they knew they were meant to be. Sounds odd, no? Just a bit, but they were perfect for each other from the very beginning. Sounds corny…but as you know, all good things come to an end soon enough.

Eighth grade came soon enough, two years into the relationship, Mark dropped the bomb shell.

“Haley…I really need to talk to you.” He whispered, gently stroking her hair as they sat together in a grassy field out by the school.

“Don’t say it…” Haley murmured, closing her eyes, enjoying the tender touches from Mark’s smooth hand, “There’s only two weeks left…we can still enjoy it.”

Two weeks left…and their Middle school career would be over.

Two weeks left…and Mark would be leaving, moving to another state.

Two weeks later…Haley would STILL cry over him.

“Haley,” Mark started, once again, “You know we can’t keep this up. It would only be worse if we wait.” He told her, continuing his gentle caresses on her head.

Haley sniffled, her eyes watering up, tears begging to flow out from her gray, blue eyes. “But…I love you,” she whispered, “We can make this work!” she begged.

Mark sighed, running a hand through his fluffy dark hair. “I love you too, but I told you how I felt about long distance relationships…they never work, I’m sorry.”

“Fine…if that’s how you feel,” Haley, barely, sobbed out. She stood up, knocking Mark’s hand off of her, “Call me later.” she muttered, walking off, leaving her boyfriend in the meadow.

That call never came.

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End chapter

Meh, I'm not good with writing, I just needed to get this idea down before I forgot. I don't really care for your constructive criticism, I wrote this story for myself, though I wished to share it, for whatever reason. Say whatever you want I guess.

IronReaver4058 - January 13, 2008 07:59 AM (GMT)
Damn..nice job Jess ^__^

DarknessAngel712 - January 13, 2008 06:03 PM (GMT)
Ehehe, thanks Mike. xD


There is something I dun like about it @_@


I typed out like..3 more pages, so I'll update in like..3 minutes. :3

DarknessAngel712 - January 13, 2008 06:19 PM (GMT)
Bittersweet Love© Jess,

(This story is still in Flashback, that's why the italics will remain. <3)

Chapter 1 pt 2 -Misery-

Two weeks passed, no sign or call from Mark. Haley knew he was gone, she had gone to his house, but it was empty…no signs of life anywhere around or in it.

That night, and many of the following nights, Haley cried herself to sleep. She couldn’t call Mark, his house number changed when he moved. She couldn’t go to his new house, it was three thousand miles away. She was a mess, and everyone felt bad.

High school was a living hell for the poor, single girl. She was unable to forget Mark. Her grades collapsed, the once smart, beautiful girl was trapped in a shell that just wasn’t herself. She never heard any sign, or talk of her ex boyfriend. Most of her friends had moved on, forgetting her, and leaving her all alone. They got tired of her constant moping and talk of him. Even her parents wouldn’t talk to her. Haley was alone in the world, a reject to her peers and parents.

Haley lived out the rest of her High school life in misery and silence. She had her phone on and with her always, just praying that the call would come and it would all be fine.

Something in her mind told her that it wouldn’t be fine…that it was over, nothing good could happen anymore. She looked up, noticing that she had spaced out a bit. She checked to see if she was in the right side of the hallway. She wasn't. That's when she fell, crashing to the floor.

She screamed, being knocked over by a heavy force. Her head collided with the hard, polished, tiled high school floor. She looked up, staring into the bright light, hissing and wincing in pain. She rolled over and sat up, pulling her hair out of her face. Haley looked, wanting to know the, soon to be dead, source that made her fall.

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End Chapter.

DarknessAngel712 - January 13, 2008 09:06 PM (GMT)
Chapter 1 pt 3 -Senior Prom-

Something in her mind told her that it wouldn’t be fine…that it was over, nothing good could happen anymore. But that’s when she fell, crashing to the floor.

She screamed, being knocked over by a heavy force. Her head collided with the polished, tiled high school floor. She looked up, staring into the bright light, hissing and wincing in pain. She rolled over and sat up, pulling her hair out of her face. Haley looked, wanting to know the, soon to be dead, source that made her fall.

“Sorry, babe, here lemme’ help you up,” A gruff voice, about a foot away spoke. It was a male, he let his hand out, for Haley to grab.

Haley grabbed the male’s hand, and let him pull her up, he was rather strong. Haley examined the boy, recognizing him, quickly. It was Kenny, a quiet kid, who did nothing but make a joke about everything. He was a literal class clown. Haley gave him a quick smile and a “Thank you,” before running back off to class.

A few days later Haley had ran into Kenny again. Yet again, a few days after that they ran into each other again. It was starting to become a pattern. They talked, got to know one another. They had some things in common. Kenny wasn’t the sharpest tool in the shed, but he was funny and outgoing. Just the type of person Haley needed, to get over Mark.

After a few months Haley and Kenny were officially a couple.

Haley was happy with the way things turned out. Kenny was ecstatic about the whole thing. He helped her, in a way that brightened up her spirits. She started to do better in school, and she started to get her normal shine back. It seemed all of her problems were solved.

But, High school doesn’t last that long. Haley feared graduation, terrified of having her heart broken again. She was with Kenny for three years, just about the same time she was with Mark. Even though she didn’t love Kenny the same way as she did Mark, she still found him special.

It was the night of the senior prom, Kenny and Haley went together. Haley spent the entire night before, getting totally ready. She picked out a beautiful dress, red and elegant. Kenny matched with his suit and red tie. He even went as far as to comb his hair for once. Haley thought it was adorable, that he would get the knots out of his hair, just for her.

The couple danced and had a wonderful night, but of course, Haley still thought of Mark. She wondered if he was at his senior prom, with a new girlfriend. She sighed slightly.

“What’s wrong?” Kenny asked, concerned.

“Oh, nothing,” Haley, muttered, giving Kenny a sweet smile.

“We should get out of here…” Kenny murmured, whispering in her ear. His hot breath, tickling her neck, “Go to a hotel or something…” he trailed off.

Haley gasped, her eyes went wide. She knew Kenny was a bit of a perv, but THAT, that was just too much. “I-I-I..I can’t do that.” she muttered, looking at the ground.

“Why not?” Kenny questioned, a bit upset and annoyed.

“I…I just can’t, were still too young for that.” Haley said, refusing to admit that if she wanted to go to a hotel, she would only go with Mark. As far as she knew, Kenny had no clue who Mark was.

The couple sighed, dancing separately to the last song. Kenny took Haley home, with no more complaints. He was visibly upset, but he still said nothing.

High school finished quickly after the dance, Haley and Kenny were still together, but they saw each other, less and less each day. Kenny always found an excuse to not hang out with Haley. Haley suspected Kenny of doing other things while she wasn’t with him. But she said nothing, in fear that maybe she was wrong, she didn’t want to upset him.

Haley sighed, laying in her bed, as she wrote in her diary. She always wrote in it, when she was sad. She laughed, it was almost completely full of poems that she wrote after Mark broke up with her. ((Will insert a poem here, as soon as I find my book ><))

Though for now, she just wrote.

Dear Diary,

High school is over, I’ve officially graduated. I wonder if Mark is done as well. Kenny and I haven’t spoken for a few days. I feel bad for turning him down at the Prom, but I..I just don’t think he’s the one. It makes me upset to say that, but I do, still have feelings for Mark. I just can’t let him go. I’m leaving for college in two weeks. Two weeks…I’ve come to dread those two words next to each other. I miss Mark, I regret walking away, each night I would wait by the phone, just waiting for him to call. I wonder what Mark is doing for college, or even if he’s going. He’s always wanted to be an Astronomer. I told him, to always fight for his dreams, he can be anything he wants to be, with his grades. It’s 3am, I haven’t slept well in days. I guess I’ll go and try to catch some sleep. Tomorrow I’m going to go shopping for new clothes to take with me. Then I’ll spend a few days packing and saying goodbye to everyone.


Haley sighed, putting her diary behind her pillow, before turning the lights out, to try and at least get a few hours of sleep.

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End Chapter


IronReaver4058 - January 13, 2008 09:39 PM (GMT)
Nice update Jess..i'm looking forward to the next chapter ^^

DarknessAngel712 - January 13, 2008 10:03 PM (GMT)
TY Mikey ^^

DarknessAngel712 - January 13, 2008 11:35 PM (GMT)
Chapter 2 -Hysteria-

Author's Note: Keep in mind, that this story is no longer a flashback, but is now set in the present. Haley is off to college. The last chapter was the ending of all of the flashbacks.
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Haley sighed, driving to the air port. She couldn't find a college close enough to her, that she could drive to. She was going to a college somewhere out in the Mid West, USA. Her home was 3000 miles away, back in Vermont.

She boarded the plane and sat in her seat, near the window. She thought of Kenny, she hadn't spoken to him for a week. She sighed, wondering if they were over, she figured so. She literally lugged her luggage to her new car. She traded in her old car for another one, so she would be able to drive around, instead of walking.

Haley sniffed, arriving to the campus of her new, college home. She sighed, parking her car in an empty spot. She grabbed her suitcases and headed inside, to the office to get the key to her dorm room.

She got her key, but she was arguing with the woman, over why she had to share her room with someone. It wasn't going over well. Her spirits drifted lower when she found out, she would be sharing with a male. "Well, what's his name then?" she snapped, getting a tad annoyed.

The woman paused, thinking, "It was M something...Max, Monty, Michael..no..oh I can't think of it, give me a second.."

"Mark..." Haley whispered, the first name to begin with an 'M' came to mind. She sniffed, feeling fresh tears wanting to surface. She scowled, not going to cry in front of the office lady.

"Yes! That's it!" The woman cried, happily that she figured it out.

Haley closed her eyes, pausing for a brief second, she just walked out, not even saying goodbye, or thank you to the woman for the key. She walked through the halls, observing her new school. She knew she was going to have a hellish nightmare of a time. Her roommate's name was Mark...how horrible could fate be to her? Now she was stuck with some random guy, who shared her lover's name.

She was stumbling with her luggage, unable to carry it up the many flights of stairs. She tripped and fell backwards, she grabbed a railing, so she didn't fall down the stairs. But at the same time, she had to let go of her one suitcase, filled with her new clothes, diary and jewelry, to plummet down the flight. She muttered a few curses.

"Hey! You okay?" A voice called, from the very top. A male, around the same age as her, short, puffy, dark brown hair and light hazel eyes was looking down at her, "Wait there, I'll come help you." he said, he literally flew down the stairs. He went right past her, and to the bottom, he placed her clothes neatly back into the suit case, her diary and other miscellaneous things as well. He picked the suitcase up with one hand and carried it up the stairs, he moved swiftly.

"Thank you very much." Haley said, smiling at the boy, who just seemed to grin.

"You're welcome, Haley," The male answered, carrying the bags up the stairs for her.

Haley paused, wondering how the boy knew her name, 'it couldn't be..no..it isn't' she thought, shaking her head, and sighing. 'He read it off my diary when he put it back into my bag..' she concluded, going up the stairs, finally after two minutes.

"Jeez, you're slow," the boy teased, laughing, "So where's your room?" he questioned.

Haley handed him the key, a label '127' on it. "Take a left down this hallway,"

"Then go straight, 'til the end and make a right down the final hallway before you reach the dead end," the boy finished, grinning at her, wolfishly.

"H-How did you know that?" Haley questioned.

"I'm Mark, your roommate," the boy answered, running a hand through his thick, fluffy hair.
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End Chapter

DarknessAngel712 - January 14, 2008 02:16 AM (GMT)
Chapter 3 pt 1 -Reunion-

"Oh, that's cool" Haley responded, watching as Mark opened the door.

"You can have the bed over there, by the window." Mark said, pointing to a bed that was filled with clothes.

"Isn't that your bed though?" Haley questioned, raising a brow as she watched Mark strip the sheets and place then onto the other bed.

"It was, but you probably prefer the window," Mark responded, grinning.

"How did you know?" Haley questioned, wondering how this Mark person knew so much about her.

"You were always such a blonde," Mark cooed, laughing at Haley's glare.

"What the hell are you talking about?!" Haley snapped, brushing her honey blonde hair out of her face, as if masking it, and hiding it from his sight.

Mark's only response was a laugh, "I was surprised to see you still had that necklace as well." he muttered, staring at the chain across Haley's neck, with a heart pendant and a Celtic sign inside.

"Oh this?" Haley questioned, taking the necklace off, "I've had it for years my...friend gave it to me, you know, a birthday present." she muttered, sniffling, she was staring at Mark. All of her old feelings started to surface, she knew it was too good to be true, she was still in denial.

"And you thanked him by taking him out to dinner, a candle lit picnic on the beach," Mark muttered, brushing a stray lock of honey from Haley's face.

"M-Mark..." Haley murmured, her eyes wide, and teary. She responded faster then she could think. She tackled him with a gigantic hug, knocking both of them onto her bed, "I can't believe it..." she muttered, crying, both tears of happiness and sadness. "I never thought I would see you again," she sobbed, clinging to him as if he would disappear into thin air in any second.

Mark whined, "Let gooooo," he complained, "You know how I feel about hugs!" he laughed, prying the older teen girl off of him.

"Well were not in public now are we?" Haley questioned, laughing. She knew Mark hated to get hugs in front of people, he was always shy.

Mark rolled his eyes and wrapped his arm around Haley's waste, "I've missed you Haley," he muttered, burring his nose into her hair, smelling her sweet aroma, "Lavender and roses..."

"Like always," Haley muttered, closing her eyes and wiping her tears.

"We have a lot of catching up to do," Mark said, with a laugh. He stood up and held his hand out, "Join me for dinner?" he questioned, grinning. He had a twinkle in his eye, seeing Haley again made him excited.

Haley nodded, she quickly brushed her hair, before following Mark out of the dorm room.
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End Chapter

IronReaver4058 - January 14, 2008 03:47 AM (GMT)
Awww..nice ending to the chapter..keep up the good work Jess ^_^

princess_jojo_owns_fluffyinu - January 14, 2008 04:13 AM (GMT)
Omg, I really like this Jess!
Pleaseee update!

^_____^

DarknessAngel712 - January 14, 2008 07:03 AM (GMT)
@ Mike: I dislike happy endings. xP You can tell when you read the ending to this one. xDD

@Jojo: Thanks <3

I had this chapter typed out for like..4 hours, but due to retarded computer problems, I couldn't paste it..
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Chapter 3 pt 2 -Don't forget about us-

Mark showed Haley around the campus, he had been at college for a month, so he knew his way around pretty well. Haley was grateful, for him helping her out.

Haley walked with Mark across the block from the College, Mark took her into a cute little resturaunt, "I came here a lot last month, it's very cheap and the food is great." he said, smiling.

"You always liked to take me out to dinner," Haley muttered, holding Mark's hand, even though they were sat across from each other in a booth.

"I'm not going to disappear, you can let go of me..." Mark laughed, brushing his fingertips along her palm.

Haley blushed, embarrassed, and let go of him. "I'll pay you back when we get back to the room," she said.

"Don't you dare, this dinner is on me," Mark retorted, giving her a wink.

Haley smiled, looking around at all of the pictures on the wall, "Just like old times..." she muttered, sniffing faintly.

"Yeah.." Mark trailed off, he sighed and took a sip of his drink, so he wouldn't have to say anything.

Haley paused, an awkward silence occured, "So...what have you been doing with your life?" she asked, trying to think of something to break the ice.

"Not much, you?" Mark answered, too quickly, and semi suspiciously.

"Same..." Haley muttered, playing with her hands, nervously, her feet shifted uncomfortably under the table.

"What's the matter?" Mark questioned, giving Haley a stern look.

"Huh?" Haley muttered, looking up, "Oh..nothing.." she lied, swiftly.

"Liar, tell me." Mark retorted, giving Haley the same stare.

Haley sighed, "You always read me like a book," she murmured, staring into his hard eyes.

"You aren't telling me." Mark stated, his stare not retreating.

"FINE!" Haley snapped, her hands slamming on the table, "I have a boyfriend, that I left..but I think were over, so it doesn't matter." she said, growling and sniffing, looking away.

"That's all?" Mark laughed, "And here I thought someone died," he teased.

"You aren't mad I had a boyfriend?" Haley questioned.

Mark shook his head, "Why would I be mad?"

Haley shrugged, "So, since I'm single, maybe we can pick up where we left off?" she questioned, blushing and staring at the table, she was holding a paper napkin on her lap, though half of it was in shreds on the floor.

"Er...I can't." Mark muttered.

"Why?" Haley questioned, her eyes softening, and her lips curving into a frown.

"I...I kinda have a girlfriend."
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End Chapter

princess_jojo_owns_fluffyinu - January 14, 2008 11:34 AM (GMT)
What!?
That ending is like soooo evil.
;_;

But good Lol

DarknessAngel712 - January 14, 2008 07:29 PM (GMT)
xD That isn't my worst, at least he ain't dead. <3


But yush, I like teh thriller parts and like retarded twists. xD

Since I'm not in school >D I'll proly get a few chapters done.

DarknessAngel712 - January 14, 2008 11:11 PM (GMT)
Chapter 3 pt 3

"I...I kinda have a girlfriend."

Haley's world collapsed, she was upset, no..., despondent, anguished, forlorn. Nothing could have been worse then those five words he just said. She wanted to cry, just crawl into a hole and sob her breaking heart out, like she used to do. She was so spaced out she didn't even hear Mark calling her name.

"Haley..Haley Haley!" Mark said, getting louder each time he spoke her name, "Haley..are you alright?" he questioned, looking concerned.

"Oh, yeah..totally fine," Haley muttered, giving Mark a faint smile.

Mark grinned slightly, "She's the best thing that ever happened to me."

Haley gasped slightly, digging her nails, under the table, to try and calm herself down. It wasn't working.

Mark ate his food, not really paying attention to Haley's flushed, red face and watery eyes.

Haley all but broke the table, as she dug her fingernails into the dark colored wood. She stared at her food, her appetite gone, completely.

She felt useless, she felt no better then an old chewed up piece of Bubble Gum, stuck under a table when the user was done chewing. Which, was exactly what she was digging her nails into at that very moment, there she was, a piece of rubbered gum, with no flavor left, and nail marks. Stuck under a dreary, dark table.

"Are you finished?" Mark asked, breaking the silence after five long, dreadful minutes. Haley nodded, meekly and left her plate on the table, she followed the boy, whom she once thought she would only see in her dreams.

Mark had a class during the night, he was gone from 5-6:30pm every Tuesday and Thursday.

Haley spent that Thursday evening crying her heart out once again. She sighed and called Kenny.

"Hello?" A male voice, answering the phone questioned.

"Kenny..hey, it's Haley." She muttered, trying to keep her voice steady, so it wouldn't be too obvious she was upset and crying.

"Oh, hey babe, what's up?" Kenny asked, "Haven't seen you around in a while," he said, coughing a bit. Haley could hear a voice in the background, a female voice.

"I'm at college..remember?" Haley said, a tad disappointed that her own boyfriend didn't know where she was.

"Uhm..sure, yeah..'course I remember," Kenny muttered, speaking in a monotonous, uncaring voice, he pulled the phone away from his ear and whispered several, "Shut up! She can't hear you!"

Haley sighed and just hung up, obviously Kenny couldn't help her. She put her phone on the desk and went to take a shower. Scalding hot showers were her favorite, it relaxed her and allowed her to think.

She finished in ten minutes and got dressed, she laid on the bed and grabbed her i-pod. She blasted one of her favorite songs, to the point where either the speakers would die, or her ears would.

She sung gently to the song.

"He’s going out to forget they were together
All that time she was taking him for granted
He wants to see if there’s more
Than he gave he’s looking for"


Haley laughed at the disgusting irony of the next verse, it seemed she just played out the song in her life.

"She calls him up
She’s trippin on the phone now
She doesn’t want him out there
And alone now
She knows he’s movin it
Knows he’s using it
Now she’s losing it
He don’t care"


"Yeah..he doesn't care..." Haley muttered, to herself, she wasn't laying down anymore, she decided to get up and unpack a bit. She saw her necklace, the heart with the Celtic sign in the middle, laying on the dresser. She sighed and picked it up, she placed it in her drawer with some of her school supplies.

She kept that song on repeat, for the rest of the time she was unpacking, she knew it by heart now.

"We break up
It’s something that we do now
Everyone has got to do it sometime
It’s okay, let it go
Get out there and find someone.."


It was then, Haley's thoughts and song were interrupted by Mark walking into the room. Haley pulled out the headphones and turned the iPod off, setting it in the drawer, next to the necklace. Irony liked to make fun of her, make her upset. Though almost every song she knew, she could relate to her love life somehow.

Haley sighed and pretended to do, homework for an hour, or study. She had a novel opened on her bed, she tried to read it. She sighed, re-reading the same line over and over again, she couldn't absorb the book at all.

Mark had left, a few minutes after he came back inside. Haley sniffed, 'going to meet his girlfriend no doubt.' She narrowed her eyes and chucked the book across the room, with a huff. "Screw it all." she scowled, she didn't need Mark. She survived for 4 and a half years without him. Just because he was her roommate now, doesn't mean she has to give in.

"I don't wanna be in love." Haley whispered, before closing her eyes to take a nap.
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End Chapter

The song "I don't wanna be in love" By: Good Charlotte, doesn't belong to me. Though I did edit the lyrics, I switched 'he' with 'she' and 'him' with 'her' to make it fit better.

Full Metal Jacket - January 14, 2008 11:15 PM (GMT)
GAH. DAMN YOU LOVE FIC WRITERS.

One comment; It needs more death D<

But that's my insane side speaking :B

DarknessAngel712 - January 14, 2008 11:17 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Full Metal Jacket @ Jan 14 2008, 07:15 PM)
GAH. DAMN YOU LOVE FIC WRITERS.

One comment; It needs more death D<

But that's my insane side speaking :B

AM NOT IN A DEATH MOOD.

IT'S 'SPOSE TO BE ALL LOVEY AND S H I T.


I WOULD KILL KENNY BUT THEN MIKE WOULD BE MAD. xD

Full Metal Jacket - January 14, 2008 11:18 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (DarknessAngel712 @ Jan 14 2008, 06:17 PM)
QUOTE (Full Metal Jacket @ Jan 14 2008, 07:15 PM)
GAH. DAMN YOU LOVE FIC WRITERS.

One comment; It needs more death D<

But that's my insane side speaking :B

AM NOT IN A DEATH MOOD.

IT'S 'SPOSE TO BE ALL LOVEY AND S H I T.


I WOULD KILL KENNY BUT THEN MIKE WOULD BE MAD. xD

DAMN YOU TO HELL.

I WANT SOMEONE TO FIGHT FIRE WITH FIRE!! DDD<

DarknessAngel712 - January 14, 2008 11:20 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Full Metal Jacket @ Jan 14 2008, 07:18 PM)
QUOTE (DarknessAngel712 @ Jan 14 2008, 06:17 PM)
QUOTE (Full Metal Jacket @ Jan 14 2008, 07:15 PM)
GAH. DAMN YOU LOVE FIC WRITERS.

One comment; It needs more death D<

But that's my insane side speaking :B

AM NOT IN A DEATH MOOD.

IT'S 'SPOSE TO BE ALL LOVEY AND S H I T.


I WOULD KILL KENNY BUT THEN MIKE WOULD BE MAD. xD

DAMN YOU TO HELL.

I WANT SOMEONE TO FIGHT FIRE WITH FIRE!! DDD<

HOW ABOUT I PUT YOU INTO THE STORY, AND KILL YOU OFF?

Full Metal Jacket - January 14, 2008 11:25 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (DarknessAngel712 @ Jan 14 2008, 06:20 PM)
QUOTE (Full Metal Jacket @ Jan 14 2008, 07:18 PM)
QUOTE (DarknessAngel712 @ Jan 14 2008, 06:17 PM)
QUOTE (Full Metal Jacket @ Jan 14 2008, 07:15 PM)
GAH. DAMN YOU LOVE FIC WRITERS.

One comment; It needs more death D<

But that's my insane side speaking :B

AM NOT IN A DEATH MOOD.

IT'S 'SPOSE TO BE ALL LOVEY AND S H I T.


I WOULD KILL KENNY BUT THEN MIKE WOULD BE MAD. xD

DAMN YOU TO HELL.

I WANT SOMEONE TO FIGHT FIRE WITH FIRE!! DDD<

HOW ABOUT I PUT YOU INTO THE STORY, AND KILL YOU OFF?

DGSFGSFDGDYDNICMDO

NOOOO

I'LL KILL EVERYBODY OFF AT THE END WITH A RUSSIAN ICBM, K? :DDDDD

DarknessAngel712 - January 14, 2008 11:29 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Full Metal Jacket @ Jan 14 2008, 07:25 PM)
QUOTE (DarknessAngel712 @ Jan 14 2008, 06:20 PM)
QUOTE (Full Metal Jacket @ Jan 14 2008, 07:18 PM)
QUOTE (DarknessAngel712 @ Jan 14 2008, 06:17 PM)
QUOTE (Full Metal Jacket @ Jan 14 2008, 07:15 PM)
GAH. DAMN YOU LOVE FIC WRITERS.

One comment; It needs more death D<

But that's my insane side speaking :B

AM NOT IN A DEATH MOOD.

IT'S 'SPOSE TO BE ALL LOVEY AND S H I T.


I WOULD KILL KENNY BUT THEN MIKE WOULD BE MAD. xD

DAMN YOU TO HELL.

I WANT SOMEONE TO FIGHT FIRE WITH FIRE!! DDD<

HOW ABOUT I PUT YOU INTO THE STORY, AND KILL YOU OFF?

DGSFGSFDGDYDNICMDO

NOOOO

I'LL KILL EVERYBODY OFF AT THE END WITH A RUSSIAN ICBM, K? :DDDDD

EHEHEHE OKAY

Full Metal Jacket - January 14, 2008 11:57 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (DarknessAngel712 @ Jan 14 2008, 06:29 PM)
QUOTE (Full Metal Jacket @ Jan 14 2008, 07:25 PM)
QUOTE (DarknessAngel712 @ Jan 14 2008, 06:20 PM)
QUOTE (Full Metal Jacket @ Jan 14 2008, 07:18 PM)
QUOTE (DarknessAngel712 @ Jan 14 2008, 06:17 PM)
QUOTE (Full Metal Jacket @ Jan 14 2008, 07:15 PM)
GAH. DAMN YOU LOVE FIC WRITERS.

One comment; It needs more death D<

But that's my insane side speaking :B

AM NOT IN A DEATH MOOD.

IT'S 'SPOSE TO BE ALL LOVEY AND S H I T.


I WOULD KILL KENNY BUT THEN MIKE WOULD BE MAD. xD

DAMN YOU TO HELL.

I WANT SOMEONE TO FIGHT FIRE WITH FIRE!! DDD<

HOW ABOUT I PUT YOU INTO THE STORY, AND KILL YOU OFF?

DGSFGSFDGDYDNICMDO

NOOOO

I'LL KILL EVERYBODY OFF AT THE END WITH A RUSSIAN ICBM, K? :DDDDD

EHEHEHE OKAY

AARON WAGNER: FIGHTING FIRE WITH FIRE SINCE 1993. 8DDD

DarknessAngel712 - January 14, 2008 11:59 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Full Metal Jacket @ Jan 14 2008, 07:57 PM)
QUOTE (DarknessAngel712 @ Jan 14 2008, 06:29 PM)
QUOTE (Full Metal Jacket @ Jan 14 2008, 07:25 PM)
QUOTE (DarknessAngel712 @ Jan 14 2008, 06:20 PM)
QUOTE (Full Metal Jacket @ Jan 14 2008, 07:18 PM)
QUOTE (DarknessAngel712 @ Jan 14 2008, 06:17 PM)
QUOTE (Full Metal Jacket @ Jan 14 2008, 07:15 PM)
GAH. DAMN YOU LOVE FIC WRITERS.

One comment; It needs more death D<

But that's my insane side speaking :B

AM NOT IN A DEATH MOOD.

IT'S 'SPOSE TO BE ALL LOVEY AND S H I T.


I WOULD KILL KENNY BUT THEN MIKE WOULD BE MAD. xD

DAMN YOU TO HELL.

I WANT SOMEONE TO FIGHT FIRE WITH FIRE!! DDD<

HOW ABOUT I PUT YOU INTO THE STORY, AND KILL YOU OFF?

DGSFGSFDGDYDNICMDO

NOOOO

I'LL KILL EVERYBODY OFF AT THE END WITH A RUSSIAN ICBM, K? :DDDDD

EHEHEHE OKAY

AARON WAGNER: FIGHTING FIRE WITH FIRE SINCE 1993. 8DDD

STFU

Full Metal Jacket - January 15, 2008 12:01 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (DarknessAngel712 @ Jan 14 2008, 06:59 PM)
QUOTE (Full Metal Jacket @ Jan 14 2008, 07:57 PM)
QUOTE (DarknessAngel712 @ Jan 14 2008, 06:29 PM)
QUOTE (Full Metal Jacket @ Jan 14 2008, 07:25 PM)
QUOTE (DarknessAngel712 @ Jan 14 2008, 06:20 PM)
QUOTE (Full Metal Jacket @ Jan 14 2008, 07:18 PM)
QUOTE (DarknessAngel712 @ Jan 14 2008, 06:17 PM)
QUOTE (Full Metal Jacket @ Jan 14 2008, 07:15 PM)
GAH. DAMN YOU LOVE FIC WRITERS.

One comment; It needs more death D<

But that's my insane side speaking :B

AM NOT IN A DEATH MOOD.

IT'S 'SPOSE TO BE ALL LOVEY AND S H I T.


I WOULD KILL KENNY BUT THEN MIKE WOULD BE MAD. xD

DAMN YOU TO HELL.

I WANT SOMEONE TO FIGHT FIRE WITH FIRE!! DDD<

HOW ABOUT I PUT YOU INTO THE STORY, AND KILL YOU OFF?

DGSFGSFDGDYDNICMDO

NOOOO

I'LL KILL EVERYBODY OFF AT THE END WITH A RUSSIAN ICBM, K? :DDDDD

EHEHEHE OKAY

AARON WAGNER: FIGHTING FIRE WITH FIRE SINCE 1993. 8DDD

STFU

D8<

DarknessAngel712 - January 15, 2008 01:32 AM (GMT)
Meh, I was going to make a chapter in Mark's POV. But then I got a new idea for chapter 4 and it's making me laugh my a s s off, so I don't know when I'll write Mark's POV. It will probably be his own flashback. So I'll write that later on. If anyone cares. 8D

DarknessAngel712 - January 15, 2008 02:25 AM (GMT)
This chapter has two parts, mostly I ended early because it's getting late, and I like cliffhangers. 8D

Warning: Slight swearing... <<;; I think..I haven't reread anything yet.



Chapter 4 -Dreaming-

Haley lay in her college bed, sleeping soundlessly. She had cried herself to sleep.

Mark was gone, out with his girlfriend, doing who knows what. Haley had rather not know. Haley was in the middle of her nap, she was dreaming, back in 8th grade, her 14th birthday.

Flashback

"SURPRISE! HAPPY BIRTHDAY HALEY!" All of her friends shouted, in unison.

Haley gasped, a surprise party..."Who loved me enough to do all of this?" she questioned, with a laugh.

Two hands wrapped around her eyes, shielding her view from everyone, "I did." a male answered.

Haley grinned, "Oh, I love you so much, Mark!" she cried, tears of joy wetting Mark's hands as he pulled them away from her face. "Thanks everyone." she said, smiling at all of her friends.

Haley had a great time at her party. Towards the end, Mark had pulled her aside, away from all of the noise and people. "I had a great time, thanks for doing all of this," Haley said, kissing Mark on the cheek.

"It was my pleasure," Mark said, with his signature grin, "Oh yeah, I got you something.."

Haley blushed, smiling brightly, "You didn't have to do that, the party was enough," she protested, softly.

"Yet again, It was my pleasure...close your eyes." Mark instructed, pulling out a small, black, velvet box.

Haley nodded and closed her eyes, she felt something cold against her neck, she shivered slightly, shifting faintly.

"Okay..open!" Mark said, as soon as Haley opened her eyes, Mark surprised her with a deep kiss on the lips.

Haley gasped, shocked that Mark would pull such a move. She blushed and kissed him back, closing her eyes again. He intertwined his hands with hers, and continued the sensual kiss.

Mark pulled away, a few seconds later, grinning once again. "Your face is all red," he laughed, teasing her gently.

Haley rolled her eyes, laughing as well. She looked down, seeing that Mark had put a necklace on her. It was a silver chain, adorned with a heart pendant, inside the heart a Celtic sign lay. It shined and glistened in the light. "I'll never take it off..." Haley promised.

Mark smiled, "That makes me very happy," he said, kissing her forehead.

End flashback


Haley awoke with a jolt, she gasped. Her vision was blurry and wet...had she been crying in her sleep? She got out of bed and went over to the drawer and pulled the necklace out. All of the years wearing it, never taking it off, left it dull and drab. Haley didn't care, it still looked beautiful to her. She placed it around her neck and laid back down on the bed.

Haley had just closed her eyes and she was startled by a loud bang from the door and a crash to the floor. (Lulz, rhymage)

She screamed and belted up, "What the hell?!" she cried, seeing Mark's unmoving body laying in the doorway.
---
End Chapter

I had planned for this chapter to be like..2000 words, but like..the cliffhanger made me laugh, so I'm ending it here. <333

Full Metal Jacket - January 15, 2008 08:33 PM (GMT)
< THOUGHT THAT HE KILLED HIMSELF. >

...

< LOL'D. >

princess_jojo_owns_fluffyinu - January 15, 2008 08:40 PM (GMT)
The flashback was sooo sweet and cute!
:]]]]

But the ending was just pure evil.
xD

DarknessAngel712 - January 15, 2008 09:12 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Full Metal Jacket @ Jan 15 2008, 04:33 PM)
< THOUGHT THAT HE KILLED HIMSELF. >

...

< LOL'D. >

NO..EVEN BETTER. 8D

@JOJO: ..I LOVE EVIL ENDINGS. IT'S RARE THAT MY STORIES HAVE A HAPPY ENDING. SEE, I'LL MAKE AARON POP OUT OF NO WHERE WITH HIS RUSSIAN..SOMETHIGNLETTERSNUMBERS..WHATEVERBIGGUNTHINGY..AND KILL THEM ALL

Full Metal Jacket - January 15, 2008 09:14 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (DarknessAngel712 @ Jan 15 2008, 04:12 PM)
QUOTE (Full Metal Jacket @ Jan 15 2008, 04:33 PM)
< THOUGHT THAT HE KILLED HIMSELF. >

...

< LOL'D. >

NO..EVEN BETTER. 8D

@JOJO: ..I LOVE EVIL ENDINGS. IT'S RARE THAT MY STORIES HAVE A HAPPY ENDING. SEE, I'LL MAKE AARON POP OUT OF NO WHERE WITH HIS RUSSIAN..SOMETHIGNLETTERSNUMBERS..WHATEVERBIGGUNTHINGY..AND KILL THEM ALL

DAMMIT, THAT WAS MY SECOND GUESS

< FOUND OUT ON MSN. >

princess_jojo_owns_fluffyinu - January 15, 2008 09:14 PM (GMT)
xDDDD

How...romantic..
Lmao

DarknessAngel712 - January 15, 2008 09:14 PM (GMT)
QUOTE (Full Metal Jacket @ Jan 15 2008, 05:14 PM)
QUOTE (DarknessAngel712 @ Jan 15 2008, 04:12 PM)
QUOTE (Full Metal Jacket @ Jan 15 2008, 04:33 PM)
< THOUGHT THAT HE KILLED HIMSELF. >

...

< LOL'D. >

NO..EVEN BETTER. 8D

@JOJO: ..I LOVE EVIL ENDINGS. IT'S RARE THAT MY STORIES HAVE A HAPPY ENDING. SEE, I'LL MAKE AARON POP OUT OF NO WHERE WITH HIS RUSSIAN..SOMETHIGNLETTERSNUMBERS..WHATEVERBIGGUNTHINGY..AND KILL THEM ALL

DAMMIT, THAT WAS MY SECOND GUESS

< FOUND OUT ON MSN. >

EHEHE STFU. xD

princess_jojo_owns_fluffyinu - January 17, 2008 04:49 AM (GMT)
WRITE MORE!
D<


xD
Lmaoo

DarknessAngel712 - January 17, 2008 08:37 PM (GMT)
-Hiss-

I have other things to do...and I would like more then a 4 hour night rest before going to school.

<<;;

I'll see if I have anything to do tonight..

DarknessAngel712 - January 18, 2008 04:04 AM (GMT)
Yes I double posted, fear me. >>


Am not updating tonight since it's like 11pm and am tired.

Tomorrow..I won't be home from school until 4:45pm. at 5 I have to go leave with my mom to buy a dress for a dance that is from 6:30-9pm...and most likely I'll be DRAINED when I'm done xD

Though I doubt it..so I MIGHT update tomorrow. ;p

princess_jojo_owns_fluffyinu - January 18, 2008 04:07 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (DarknessAngel712 @ Jan 17 2008, 11:04 PM)
Yes I double posted, fear me. >>


Am not updating tonight since it's like 11pm and am tired.

Tomorrow..I won't be home from school until 4:45pm. at 5 I have to go leave with my mom to buy a dress for a dance that is from 6:30-9pm...and most likely I'll be DRAINED when I'm done xD

Though I doubt it..so I MIGHT update tomorrow. ;p

I have NO school tomorrow.
Four day weekend..
XD

DarknessAngel712 - January 18, 2008 04:11 AM (GMT)
QUOTE (princess_jojo_owns_fluff
yinu @ Jan 18 2008, 12:07 AM)
QUOTE (DarknessAngel712 @ Jan 17 2008, 11:04 PM)
Yes I double posted, fear me. >>


Am not updating tonight since it's like 11pm and am tired.

Tomorrow..I won't be home from school until 4:45pm. at 5 I have to go leave with my mom to buy a dress for a dance that is from 6:30-9pm...and most likely I'll be DRAINED when I'm done xD

Though I doubt it..so I MIGHT update tomorrow. ;p

I have NO school tomorrow.
Four day weekend..
XD

I envy you...

All of the snow should be gone tomorrow too..it's been raining, it's pose to wash it all away ;-;

princess_jojo_owns_fluffyinu - January 18, 2008 04:12 AM (GMT)
Well....I envy you..
I want snow..
;_;

DarknessAngel712 - January 18, 2008 04:18 AM (GMT)
Ehehe. But we don't get that much snow.

I want Florida's heat. xD


princess_jojo_owns_fluffyinu - January 18, 2008 04:25 AM (GMT)
xD

You like it being hot like year round?
Lmaoo




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