its been long since i write the story...
i didn't yet finish the fanfic of 'midnight love'......
but this story had been blooming in my mind for a while and i thought that it will be fun to write it down......

Chapter 1-Encounter

"Hey Kagome, don't you think there is a lot of mist in this forest?" Shippo said from Kagome's shoulder

"I know" Kagome said

it’s has been four day since they have encounter Kagura with her fan and they were exhausted. They had been wandering around for four days until they came to this one village. There was a rumor in the village that there was a ghost in the forest where the mists gather around. One of the villager said that while he was chopping the wood near the forest, he heard the flute sound coming from the forest.

"Keh, if there is a ghost in the forest, I can kill it!" Inuyasha said from the tree top

"I feel a lot of yokui auras in this forest" Miroku said "we need to be careful just in case" he said while reaching for.....slap!

"I think YOU need to watch yourself!" Sango said

"Here we go again" Shippo said while rolling his eyes

They keep on walking until they came to this big, nice house in the clearing. Inuyasha came down from the tree and walk toward the house.

"Wait! Inuyasha! We don't know who live in that house!"

Inuyasha walked close to the house but he was bounced right back

"hey!" Inuyasha yelled

"a barrier" Miroku said amused

Inuyasha took out his sword and the sword turn to red color

"I can break this barrier!"

Inuyasha swing the sword and the sword collided with a barrier and there was a high-note sounding but it did not break

"it will not break!" Inuyasha yelled "Kagome use your arrow to break the barrier!"

"ok" Kagome got the arrow out......


i will finish this later :excited:

Umm. Not to be too harsh but, do you even KNOW what the shift button does?

Okay; be prepared for a long wall of text. I am not trying to be rude or anything but you really need a lot of help with this story. If you've got a problem with what I said or that you do not agree with this text; take it to the PMs! It's better that way. Anyways...

1) Capitals and Punctuation:

This is something that Ari had just suggested. You use capitals for titles, names and the beginning of every sentence. It may seem silly to you but this is just common sense that every writer should have! Really, this is stuff you learn in grade 1; I shouldn't be reminding you of this but because you aren't using capitals and lower case letters properly; it seems as though I have to! Also, periods (.), commas (,) and quotation marks (!) are all basic punctuations that you use in a story. You're not using (!) correctly at all nor are you using periods correctly either. May I suggest a beta reader?

2) CHECK YOUR FREAKING SPELLING!

You know what peeves a lot of readers off? Seeing a whole bunch of spelling mistakes in one chapter! I'm not really going into detail with this but just use Microsoft Word to help you with spelling mistakes. That program is really, really helpful. I suggest you use it.

I agree 100% with what Saku just suggested to you, darkmoon.

I, Jostanos, do not use Microsoft word when I post because I post off the top of my head, mostly, and have more experience in writing fanfics and role playing. ^^ ( :hehe: No offence intended or meant.)

It takes time to get to that level, so for now please do as Saku-Tatsuya suggests and use Microsoft word or beta reader to help you post you fan fic(s).

Please do not get discouraged. We are only trying to help. ^^

If you need any further assisstance with your stories please do not hesitate to PM me, Saku, Patriot, or Ubbergeek just to name a few of our fellow writers very willing to help all new fic writers like yourself, Darkmoon. ^^

PLease continue when you may. *bows*

thank you for your sugestion......

i will try harder next time.....

please help me for the further fanfic i will write in the future :excited:

domo arigato :excited:

Doitashimaste, Tomodachi Darkmoon. ^^

For a study of how a fanfiction should be written I suggest that you read at least a little bit of each of the listed story writer's well... Stories. ^^

That way you may be able to see how spacing, vocabulary, punctuation, and capitalization work in each of their fanfics so you may be able to further improve on your own. :)

*bows* Thank you for your time and patience, Darkmoon. ^^

Happy fic writing! :)

Kagome got her arrow out and was aiming at the barrier when suddenly a quiet voice interrupted them from behind.

“What are you doing?” said the quiet, whisper like voice.

They turned around and saw a girl of 16 or 17 years of age looking at them calming from under the tree. There was something flying beside her. When they looked at it closely, they saw that it was a beautiful sapphire blue dragon. But that is not the reason why they looked at her strangely. She was a girl, yes but she was also the most beautiful girl they had ever seen. She had a dark black hair as the darkest midnight that reached to her waist and her pale purple eyes were close to lavender color matched with her pale skin. She had a slender figure underneath her green robe.

This is some of the thoughts that go through their mind……

Kagome was shocked when she didn’t felt any approaching presence ‘how did she approach without me knowing it? I know I didn’t pay attention because of concentrating on breaking the barrier ……but still I should have known the presence of this girl….’

Miroku was amazed that this kind of girl existed on the earth ‘surely this is an angel came down from the haven. But wait she has a pointed ear….is she a demon? But I don’t feel any demon aura coming from this girl…..the aura that is coming from her is different ……the feeling that I have never felt before…..why that is?’

Sango was…….well surprised? ‘She is beautiful. But she reminds me of someone we have met on our journey……I wonder why? But I better watch out for Miroku. He will do something stupid with that girl if I don’t watch out on him…..’ she glanced at Miroku and saw that Miroku was looking at the girl as thought he was blind ‘yep, I need to watch out for him……’

Inuyasha was shocked and amazed. ‘She is beautiful. She has strange smell thought…….not bad but strange smells……kind of like a foreign smell maybe…..’

Shippo was amazed ‘I don’t know why but she looks kind of familiar. The dragon beside her looks pretty thought. I hope the dragon would like to become friends with me and Kirara….’

“I see from the look of your face that you are surprised.” She turned to Miroku and surprised him by answering his question.

“The reason you don’t feel any demon aura coming from me is because I am not a demon” she said a little a bit coldly.

“Then what are you?” Inuyasha demanded

“I’m an elf” she said as matter of factly.

This surprised everybody because they heard a lot of stories about elf but they never get to meet one.

“But what are you doing in the forest?” Kagome asked staring at the girl with still wide eyes.


I will finish this later or tomorrow :excited:
Please tell me what you think and tell me if I had improved :excited:

You have improved a great deal, Tomodachi, Darkmoon. I am impressed at the progress that you have made since your last update.

:excited: :victory: :kittylove:

Very well done, Darkmoon! :cheer:

I see virtually no flaws what so ever this time around.

In essence this update gets, dare I say it?

FLAWLESS VICTORY! ^__^

Sylt: *blinks* A Saphire Dragon and an Elf? Things are about to get interesting.

I see a lot of improvement in between Chapters 1 and 2 my only word of warning will be that a Sapphire dragon and an icy(as in personality) yet beautiful female elf sounds an awful lot like The Inheritance Trilogy.

dear lady lilith....

i have never heard the 'inheritance trilogy'.......

the sapphire dragon and the icy personality of the female elf comes from the story of me and my brother's made up story.......

we call it the 'pure magic' in short term 'p.m'......

please don't think i got the idea from the 'inheritance trilogy'........

i'm writing this because i don't want any misunderstading from you..... :excited:

it is all thanks to all the author who gave me advice........

You are very much welcome, Tomodachi Darkmoon. ^^

@Lady Lilith Darkmoon's Saphire Dragon and Elven Maiden bare no resemblence to the Inheritance trilogy characters what-so-ever except for what race the maiden is and What the coloration of the Dragon's scales are.

The fact that they even look like the characters from the Inheritance series is purely coincidental.

@Darkmoon PLease continue when you may, my friend. ^^

P.S.: Darkmoon did not name the Dragon "Saphira" Did she, Lady Lilith? No, she did not.

“But what are you doing in the forest?” Kagome asked staring at the girl with still wide eyes.

“I live in the forest” the girl said as matter of factly again

“You live in that house?” Kagome asked still wide eyes “alone?”

“I don’t see why I have to answer your question.” the elf said coldly to Kagome “I also don’t know who you are and what you are doing in the forest.”

“Please allow me to introduce myself first.” Miroku said while bowing little to the girl “my name is Miroku and they are my traveling companies” he said and started to introduce each one of them. “Sango, Kagome, Shippo, Kirara and that half hanyou is called Inuyasha.”

“Keh” Inuyasha said from on top of the tree.

“We are traveling around looking for shiko no tama shears” Miroku continued “we heard stories from the near by village that these forest is haunted and we came to check the forest for ghost. Have you seen any ghost in the forest?” Miroku asked the girl politely

“I see that with this mist surrounding the forest, people tend to make stories about it” the girl said “no, there are no ghosts in this forest” the elf replied

“I see” Miroku said “thank you very much”

By the time they exchange answers and questions, the sun has set and it was becoming dark in the forest.

“It’s getting late” the elf said looking at the horizon “why don’t you stay at my house for the night” the elf said

“Thank you very much” Miroku said “you are most kind”

“Just follow me” the elf said again “don’t bother the barrier around the house”

“May I know your name please?” Miroku asked coming little a bit closer to the elf

“My name is Illiyea” the elf said looking at Miroku with cold eyes “this is my dragon, Ocean”

Illiyea went into the house and they followed her into the house. The interior of the house was big. They were looking around and the servant led them to the living room. While they were sitting in the couch waiting, a young man came in with Illiyea.

‘Is he her fiancé?’ Miroku thought jealously looking at the young man

“This is Sasuke Karuno. He has been living with me for while and no, he is not my fiancé” Illiyea said coldly to Miroku again.

i need to go now :cryriver:
i know its short but will finish it tomorrow :excited:
i hope more people will read this stories :kittylove:

Two words, Tomodachi Darkmoon:

FLAWLESS VICTORY! ^__^

:spooky: And I dare anyone to say any different. MWA HA HA HAHA!

*coughs*

:hehe:

Seriously though, Tomodachi Darkmoon, your latest update was wonderful! :victory: :kittylove: :cheer:

Inuyasha and friends meeting Illiyea and Ocean and being invited to spend the evening at thier home.

Sylt: Miroku getting jealous over Illiyea's friend near the end was funny too! :hilarious:

“This is Sasuke Karuno. He has been living with me for while and no, he is not my fiancé” Illiyea said coldly to Miroku again

Suddenly Miroku felt the shiver ran down his spine. He only knows too well why he felt the shiver. Behind him Sango looked as if she would want to murder somebody in the group and that somebody was right in front of her.

Sasuke watched with a look of amusement on his face.

‘It looks like the girl want to murder him……this could be fun! I have never had this fun for long time’

Sasuke’s amusement died down when Sango just hit Miroku with her boomerang.

There was a loud giggling coming from the upstairs and a girl with age of 13-14 years age came down with a dragon chasing her down. Beside her was a miniature human with wings on her back.

The girl seeing the guest straightens herself and introduced herself.

“My name is Kaseke Onijiri and this is my fairy, windy. Please to meet you.” She said with the smile.

After introducing herself, the guest was shown into their rooms. Kagome and Sango will share one room and Miroku, Iunyasha and Shippo would spend in other room; opposite side of the girl’s room.

Later that evening, a servant came to led them to the dining room. Sasuke and Kaseke were there but they didn’t see Illiyea and her dragon. Miroku asked the servant where was Illiyea and the servant replied that Illiyea-sama had her meal and had went for a walk.

Meanwhile Illiyea was on the one of the tree in the meadow of spring water playing her flute when she felt the aura of the strong demon in the edge of the forest coming toward her. She ignored the aura and continues to play. That was when the demon show itself under the moonlight.

the end on chapter 1 :excited:
i will start chapter 2 shortly after i come back :excited:

Nice story. ^^ You've improved a lot!

BTW, The Inheritance Cycle (or Trilogy) is Eragon and Eldest in case you didn't recongnise (sp?) them.

Oh, and maybe you should put a disclaimer before each chapter... Just in case

Huuge improvement! The story is quite interesting, please continue. I would love to see a picture of Illiyea. Lol, update soon.

oh i see.....

i didn't know that the inheritance trilogy was Eragon and Eldest.......

i'm so sorry :cryriver:

yes...i have read the books......but believe me i didn't got the idea from the inheritance....the female elf with the sapphire dragon......

if you have seen the movie you will see that spphire's color is kind of dull blue but the sapphire dragon in my story is kind of ocean color blue and little abit lighter.....that is why i have name her 'Ocean'......

please don't be mistaken....... :cryriver:

i'm so sorry again :cryriver:

Chapter 2-weird feelings……..

Sesshomaru had been traveling for weeks trying to find Naruku. But once again Naruku manage to hide his trace and his smell from Sesshomaru. Sesshomaru was frustrated that he was unable to pick up on Naruku’s trace yet. But one day he came to the edge of the forest near the village. He eavesdrops on couple of farmer who said that he heard a flute sound coming from the forest.

‘What a pathetic human and I can still smell the hanyou…….I need to go to that forest….it could be one of Naruku’s creation’

He told Rin and Jaken to find someplace to stay with Ah-Un until he came back. He went to forest as soon as the sunset. He was wandering around trying to sniff out one of Naruku’s creation when he picks up the sound of the flute coming from the west. He followed the sound until he came to the edge of the clearing.

He can still hear the sound but he can’t see anybody in the clearing. He just knows that the sound came from one of the trees in the other side of the clearing. He slowly steps into the moonlight into the clearing and the sound broke off. He heard a quiet rustle like a breeze dancing in the tree. He looked to the other side of the clearing and saw a girl of 16 jumping down lightly from the tree. The impact never disturbed the grass where the girl now stood with a dragon flying beside her.

Sesshomaru was confused but didn’t show it on his emotionless face.

‘The girl….she doesn’t have a aura around her and same with her dragon…she has kind of distance smell and she is not a yokui or a demon and yet she has a pointed ear very much like me…….who is she?’

“What are you doing in this forest?” the girl asked with an icy cold voice.

The voice was very much like a whisper of the wind and yet Sesshomaru can still hear the question.

“It’s none of your business, girl” Sesshomaru replied back with a same ice cold voice

“So you are the Lord of the West…..” it wasn’t a question but a statement of fact

“What are you, girl?” question Sesshomaru

Sesshomaru can’t suppress the curiosity that was bugging him. He can’t figure out what the girl was. She was not a yokui, demon, or one of Naruku’s creations. What was more mysterious about the girl was that she didn’t give off any aura and so he couldn’t figure out what kind of power she had.

“You have a lot of question in your mind, Sesshomaru” the girl replied

Sesshomaru was startled that she knew his name. What was more surprising that she figure out that he had a lot of question in his mind.

“I’m an elf” she replied

This surprised him even more because from his childhood time he heard a lot of stories about elf and when he grew up he thought it was just one of those pathetic stories that adults told their children. Suddenly Sesshomaru felt something stir inside him. There was two feeling that he felt. One of them was curiosity and other feeling was……..he couldn’t quite figure out what the other feeling was. He only knows that the feeling had to do with the female elf that he was talking to.

“What is your name, elf” Sesshomaru asked

The girl looked at the moon and replied back to Sesshomaru and he didn’t know that one word the elf said now would be so precious to him and would have a lot of meaning in the future.

“Illiyea” the elf said and disappear into the forest with her dragon.

i know it's kind of short but i will continue when i come back :excited:
i hope you will enjoy the story :excited:

i want to ask you all who read this story...

but what does 'disclamer' do? :questioning:

i read alot of different fanfic but i don't understand what does 'disclamer' do... :questioning:

hope you enjoy :excited:

A disclaimer is kind of, self explainitory. Fan fiction authors usually put them to let people know that they don't 'claim the series'. I don't do it because it's obvious that I don't. If I did, I wouldn't have a need to write FAN fic. So I usually don't put it. It's kind of pointless....

Claiming is basically the same thing as owning if you don't know...

here is the continue of chapter 2....
hope you enjoy it... :excited:

Chapter 2 continues.............

By the time Illiyea came back from her evening walk with her dragon, the guest were asleep. She went to her room to sleep when there was a knock on her door.

“Come in” she said quietly

She only knew too well who the person is and what the person has come to talk to her.

Sasuke came into the room and close the door except for the tiny crack.

“Illiyea, you know that ‘person’ is going to come right?” he said with a worried voice

“Yes” she reply back quietly

“What are you going to do? He asked “you can’t let them know him……”

“Since he only appears in the place where I am.....” she said thoughtfully “I’ll go to one of the clearing to wait for him…..”

“Which clearing are you going to meet him?” he asked

“The treeless meadow” she replied back “I don’t want any living things when ‘he’ appears” she said

“Illiyea……maybe you shouldn’t meet him……let me take care of him…..”

Even thought Sasuke knew what the reply was, he asked again

“No, Sasuke…..he’s my responsibility and I’ll take care of him” she replied back the same answer.

“But….”

“No” her voice was firm and he knew that the discussion came to end.

‘Beside I have the feeling that somebody is going to find me anyway……..’

She didn’t told this to Sasuke because she only knew that he’s going to ask ‘who’

“Well…..good night Illiyea” he said finally after the silence

“Good night” she replied back quietly

Sasuke went to the door to go back to his room. He was about to go out when suddenly he stop at the door to look back to Illiyea.

“Please be careful” he whispered

She looked at him with a smile and replied back….

“I will and beside I have Ocean with me” she said

He then went back to his room, closing the door behind him.

end of chapter 2......
i know its kinda short but hope you will enjoy it :kittylove:

Chapter 3- The Curse…..

Inuyasha was sitting in one of the tree in the clearing. He was looking through the window to where Kagome was sleeping when his sensitive ear pick up a sound. It was soft and quiet that he didn’t hear it at first. But he listened hard and heard a small footstep stepping softly on the grass. He looked from the tree and saw Illiyea walking out of the clearing.

‘Where is she going? She looked like she is in hurry and at this early in the morning?’

Inuyasha thought this was strange and decided to follow her from the tree. He was on the fifth tree when Illiyea stopped walking.

“Inuyasha, please don’t follow me” she said quietly

Inuyasha was startled that she knew he was following and he thought he heard a tinge of fear in her voice.

“Where are you going?” he asked with the burning curiosity in his voice

“That is none of your business” she whipped out with a harsh, cold voice

“Why are you hiding in the fo-“

Before Inuyasha finish asking his question however, Illiyea raise her hand in front of his face and he started to felt dizzy and saw that the ground was rushing toward him. The last thing he heard was……

“I’m sorry Inuyasha. It’s better this way. Don’t thing bad about me. I was just protecting you” she whispered.

He thought he heard a tinge of sadness in her voice but he could have imagined it and the darkness close in on him.

Illiyea transported Inuyasha to one of the guest room. She quickly went to the treeless clearing at the south side of the forest. When she came to the clearing, she felt the aura of darkness gathering into the clearing and there stood the person Illiyea despised most. He had many names but Illiyea called him the curse giver.

“Well, well, it’s been long Illiyea. How long was it? 50 or 60 years? I think it was more than that. So have got the answer for me? Are you going to be my bride or not?” he asked with a sickening smile

“You already know my answer, curse giver. I will never going to be your bride. Nobody claims me” she said with low icy cold voice

“You do know what happens when anyone defy me” he said

Illiyea felt the shudder go through her body but she didn’t show it. She knew that it will only add to his fun.

“Well……since you defy me…..I think I need to punish you after defying…”

Illiyea got ready for the attack when she felt the piercing pain going into her head. She tried not to scream but the pain was burning like a fire and finally she cried.

“I just love to hear the agony in your voice. They are such a delightful sound.” he said with a laugh

She tried to stop her screaming but the pain in her body felt like it was eating her. She at least manages to make a fire barrier around her.

“Please don’t stop. I love to hear the sound of your voice.”

She knew that she got a few second before he shattered her protection. So in the end she transported herself to place where she felt the presence of the strong aura……

“She escaped again….oh well time for me to go back…after all we will meet again, my sweet little elf”

He than disappeared into the thin air as if he had never have appeared before. It was like some nightmare.

Sesshomaru had been walking in the forest trying to find the elf he had met the day before when suddenly he saw a sudden light in front of him and there the elf was floating in front of him. He didn’t know what made him do it but he was walking toward her. As he was coming closer, the elf suddenly drops and he caught her with ease. She was so light like a feather that he thought she had any weight in her.

‘What is she doing here? How did she get here?’

All kind of question was racing through his mind when he caught the faint scent of blood. It was really faint at first but then the scent got stronger and saw that the blood was dripping from her wrist, leg and on the side of her head. There was some blood tickling down on the side of her mouth too.

‘Who did this to her? Where did these entire wound come from?’

Sesshomaru suddenly felt rage and anger inside him. He didn’t know where the feeling come from but he felt that he needed to kill the person that had inflicted these wound on her. But first he took her to where Rin and Jaken were and together they flew to his castle.

Once he reached his castle, he quickly took her to his private bedchamber and called for the healer. The healer was a bat yokui. He had black wings and he’s ear was very sensitive. He was the best healer Sesshomaru had at that moment. When the healer came, Sesshomaru indicated to the figure lying on the bed. The healer came forward and inspected the figure. He was quite surprise to see that the figure was neither yokui nor human. But he’s surprise passed and looked at the wound closely. The cut was deep. When he was about came in contact with the blood, the figure spoke.

“Don’t touch my blood. It’s poisonous to yokui and human alike” the figure spoke quietly.

The healer was startled and back away from the bed. The figure got up and sat at the edge of the bed. The healer now saw that she was the girl and in fact the most beautiful girl he had ever seen. Sesshomaru sense the healer’s desire to her and dismissed him from his chamber. After the healer left, Sesshomaru got the chair and sat down on the opposite of the elf.

“So I was right. The aura was indeed yours” she murmured to herself

The long silence was issued after that. Sesshomaru had a lot of question to ask her but he didn’t want to be the one who breaks the silence so waited for the girl to speak. The girl finally spoke.

“You have a lot question Sesshomaru. You are wondering how I can appear before you in the forest.” She said with the hint of amusement in her voice.

Sesshomaru was not startled this time when she spoke what was in his mind. He figured already that she can read minds of others.

“Before you start asking question Sesshomaru, I want to have a dew drop of moonlight to stop this bleeding.

i'll finish chapter 3 later on... :excited:
hope you will enjoy my story... :kicking:
Vale!!!! :fan:

Very well done, Tomodachi (Friend) Darkmoon! :victory: :kittylove: :cheer:

And I also am impressed that you continued posting updates when no-one replied right away! Congratulations! You are the first, that I know of, that has done this to date!

Please continue when you may, my friend for this is a wonderful story that should continue! ^^

UUUUU I LOVE THIS PLEASE UPDATE SOON

continue of chapter 3.....

The healer brought the bottle of dew drop of moonlight. He gave that to the elf and she took the bottle. After that, he was dismissed. She took out the cap and stated applying the dew drop to the wounds. Sesshomaru watched this process with an emotionless face. After applying it to her wounds, she recaps the bottle and put the bottle beside the bed.

“Now, you were wondering about how I appeared in front of you suddenly. I teleported myself to the strongest aura I felt that ‘time’.”

When she said that ‘time’ however, a shiver went thorough her body. Sesshomaru didn’t know why but he felt the urge to cross the room and comfort her. But he stills himself.

“What were you doing before you appeared before me?”

She suddenly masks her face with blank expression. Thought Sesshomaru detected more shudder go through her.

“I was…..meeting…..with someone” she said quietly.

Illiyea didn’t know why she was telling Sesshomaru the ‘curse’ she had when she was really young in her elf year. Not that she remembered her past life but she can still remembered that day when he first came to visit……..

-Flashback-

She was playing in the flower meadow as usual. It was really sunny that day and she was in the patch of snow drop flower. Then suddenly she senses a strong aura nearby. She turned around and saw a man by the beech tree watching her.

“Who are you?” she asked with no fear in her voice

“You are a pretty little elf. I was wondering if would come home with me.” The voice had full of authority. It was the voice you had to obey.

He wasn’t asking to her to come with him, he was actually ordering her to come with him.

“Why should I come with you when I don’t even know you?”

“Let’s just say I want to know more about you.” he said

“I need to ask my parents first”

Before she could move one step from the spot she was standing, her feet were rooted to the spot.

“I don’t think that is really a good idea to tell your parent about me”

He started to come towards her and Illiyea was afraid of this man coming towards her. She concentrated really hard to teleport herself away from this man. While she was concentrating however, he was suddenly in front of her and he put his hand on her right shoulder.

“Until you come to me and become my bride, you will have this mark to make you remind of my offer”

Suddenly there was a piercing pain on her right shoulder and she couldn’t think straight. The pain was so great that she lost her concentration. It felt like her strength was draining from her. She couldn’t take the pain anymore she collapsed. She still had little strength in her and she used her strength to teleport herself to the forest.

When she woke up, she was in the forest where there was a lot of mist and she found a house in the heart of the forest it was not deserted but there were few servants in the house. They had been living in the house serving any traveler that would pass through the forest but nobody pass through because of yokui lurking in the forest until Illiyea came by. She decided to stay with them and they had been taking care of her since. She lost her memory because of the pain and the only thing she remembered was her name only.

-End of Flashback-

It was quiet after the story was told.

“I need to get back” she said

“Its late and I want you to stay for dinner. Tomorrow you can go home”

Sesshomaru didn’t know what make him to say it but he felt that he wanted to know more about her after hearing her story. Illiyea searched his face and she found only a look of understanding in his face.

“I’ll stay until tomorrow” she replied quietly.

end of chapter 3...
i know its short but will write in free time....

An update, however short it may be, is a good update, Tomodachi Darkmoon. ^^

Please continue when you may. :victory: :kittylove: :excited:

hi,hi!
it's been soooooooooo long..
been busy lately...
will update soon..

(i have finish too 'midnight love' too)