| QUOTE (Saku-Tatsuya @ Jan 27 2008, 03:56 PM) |
| The only flaw with the writing is paragraphs. A paragraph is a minimum of 4 sentences and a maximum of eight. Just the way it is. |
| QUOTE (Ojousama @ Jan 27 2008, 07:24 PM) |
| Sweetie. This isn't original. At first, I was thinking, "It Started With a Kiss", the Taiwanese drama based on the unfinished Japanese manga, "Itazura na Kiss" (Mischeivious Kiss), staring Joe Cheng and Ariel Lin. But.. That's not the case. This story is exactly based off Wei Xiao Pasta or Smiling Pasta. The Taiwanese drama, staring, Cyndi Wang and Nicholas Teo. PROOF. Smiling Pasta Oh my god! And what makes me so angry about this is that you didn't even try to make it your own! You did it EXACTLY like the first episode. And you set up the characters EXACTLY like the plot. Inuyasha = The Arrogant Idol, He Qun Kagome = Bad Luck Girl, Cheng Xiao Shi Kikyo = The ex-girlfriend, whom the idol still loves, but she loves his brother, Rita You say you're trying hard for your readers? No. You didn't. When a person tries hard for their readers, they don't watch dramas and STEAL the directors work and call it their own. They watch dramas, plan their OWN ideas and come up with something, FRESH, ORIGINAL, and EYE-CATCHING. You didn't try at all. So I really don't want to hear that from you. Ha, you worked hard? Do you know how hard it is to plan a story with originality? It's very difficult. But, I have seen writers here whose styles might not exactly be perfect, or their grammar may be horrid, but they write with their hearts. You didn't. And I am very, very disgusted and disappointed. This fanfiction section has really taken a fall. |