I know the format is weird, but it's supposed to be. It's for visual effect. Enjoy.

EDIT: Ugh! The spacing is not showing up. I apologize. The poem is actually written in zigzags. It just won't show on here.

Zigzags


Shattered skin singing gently:
this is my oasis, clear zigzags,
hot pain kissing my flesh
So sweetly. I do hear me crying,
and what of my blood tears?
Threaded skin, I hear it snap;
my rain patters—I cut
where I can, when you scream.
Beautiful dress with flowing, red silk
glazes my wrists in a tight embrace.
How bitter! But oh—
Give me more.
I.
Need.
More.
Can’t.
Stop.
Not.
Yet.

Amazing, you have a natural talent for writing poems. O.O

Thanks. It looked better before when it was in the correct format. >.<

I know it was supposed to be a concrete poem but...
This is a poem that I can really relate to.

I don't write poems I can't relate to myself. In this case, it was with recent occurances.

It does pain me that you can relate as well, though.

This is seriously amazing, you're an awesome writer. I can relate to it @_@