Ok... I've never written anything like this before so... In my opinion it's kinda creepy and sad at the same time. And the paragraphs are short cuz its all talking... I never thought I'd write a one-shot.


Dear Little Farmer, working in the fields, why must you look so sad?" I whisper to my window as I gaze at you afar.

"Dear Little Farmer, oh where could your Dear Little Wife be?"

"She went far away, to never return to this Dear Little Farm again," I could see the look in your eyes, Dear Little Farmer, it scared me.

"Why did she leave this Dear Little Farm?" my eyes were full of worry.

"She was sent away, my Dear Little Angel, because you are the Dear Little Angel of Death," your eyes bore into me as you spoke these words and fear crept into my bones.

"'Angel of Death'? I sent away your Dear Little Wife? Oh, tell me it isn't so!" your eyes watch lustfully as a tear escapes my eye.

"Did you know, my Dear Little Angel, that you look just as my Dear Little Wife did?" Dear Little Farmer, why must you smile so devilishly?

"'Just like your Dear Little Wife'? Oh joy!" I begin to forget your evil grin.

"Yes, just like her. Do you want to be just as my Dear Little Wife was?" your eyes glint but I scarcely notice.

"Oh, yes!" I exclaim. "To be just like your Dear Little Wife would be a dream!"

"Then you shall be a beautiful woman," your grin broadens.

I smile.


"Dear Little Farmer, working in the fields, why must you hurt me so?" I whisper to my window as I gaze at you afar.

"Dear Little Farmer, why are you doing this?"

"It's normal, don't worry yourself my Dear Little Angel," you smile that smile I've come to know too well.

"Is it truly normal, Dear Little Farmer? You wouldn't decieve me, a child, would you? You wouldn't lie to me, your daughter, would you?"

"Of course it's truly normal. I wouldn't decieve my Dear Little Angel. Now, don't ask questions, it tests my patience. And don't scream, it pains my ears. And don't struggle, it too tests my patience,"

"But-"

"You want to be just like my Dear Little Wife, right? Well, she always did as she was told,"

"Yes, I do want to be like your Dear Little Wife. I shall behave!"

"Good," your wicked smile still haunts my dreams.

It wasn't untill after all those nights of suffering that I finally realized that, maybe, the Dear Little Farmer wasn't so dear after all.


The End.

WOW.

That was good...

So the narrator's the farmer's daughter AND fiancee or whatever?

Creepy..

I love it.

Where'd you get the idea from?

Well not exactly. The dude is taking advantage of the girl wanting to be just like her mother.

I don't know why I worded it so weird. It just seemed right.

Eh.

I have completely no idea where the hell this came from. o.o I was just in alone in my kitchen yesterday and this popped into my head. It weird cuz I never write anything so creepy...

I'm glad you like it!

-hands joo a potato chip-

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NINNY WANTS A POTATO CHIPPY!<333

Awesome fic Oo

Scary farmer...

Lovely. It's chilling but at the same time makes me think. It's very well written too. I like your style. =]

I kinda got what was about to happen half-way through.. And yes, it is creepy. Good job!


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