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Title: She Was My Porcelain Doll


Ninja.girl - April 13, 2008 05:46 AM (GMT)
She Was My Porcelain Doll.

Have you ever own a porcelain doll? You know, those beautiful, pale skin dolls in which every child wishes to own? And yet, are not allowed, because their hands seem so fragile, they'll break with the lightest touch? Yes, those amazingly delicate dolls whose pale blue eyes seem to stare right into your soul? Yes! You do know what I am talking about! Good!
I am proud to say, i've had the pleasure of owning one of these dolls. Not very manly you tell me? Well, let me say this.
My angel, was no ordinary doll.
We found her one day, she was sitting on a dirty street corner, no place for my darling. Hm? Who just leaves a doll on the street corner? Haha, my my, what a silly reader you are! I told you, my dearest doll was special, she was a child.
And a rare kind of beauty. Her childlike innocence...
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Oh, I guess I should have seen it coming...
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The way her beautiful eyes looked at me...
Hm?
Your looking at me funny.
A pedophile?
My, you really are such a silly reader! You make me laugh, because, you've mistaken me, I looked at her like a daughter, like a child whose future seemed so uncertain if I didn't step in.
When I walked up to her, I could feel his eyes penetrating into my back, without even looking into his gaze, I already knew the emotions running through his eyes.
Confusion, mainly. Curiosity, maybe. And anger, morally.
When I looked down at her, and asked her name, she looked up at me and said.
"Myaako."
Now, dear reader, if you were paying any attention at all, you would know how I felt.
To have her bright, turquoise eyes stare into mine,to have her eyes just stare. As if she knew the answer to everything, like she ruled the world, and I was just a little pawn in her game.
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Whose to say I wasn't?
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I just smiled.
"Well, Myaako, do you have a place to stay?"
I felt his presence beside me then, I could feel his heat. His anger, jealousy and bitterness towards this young, beautiful child.
My darling Myaako hadn't noticed him yet, instead, she was staring out into the people filled streets of London. She stared out, as if she was trying to find an answer.
Oh my dearest child, you won't find an answer there silly, silly, child.
Am I starting to scare you? Or did I scare you a long time ago? Do you really think i'm a pedophile? She was a child of just 6! Ah ha ha ha, you sound just like him. But, no worries, I promise you that she wasn't like that in my eyes.
"No"
Came her answer finally.
"I don't"
She looked up again, and I felt my other beloved tense. I looked at him, though my narrowed eyes, to see him simply, surprised.
Ahh, bad taste, 'surprised' is to simple of a word. Let me say, in astonishment. Do you know what that word means? You do! My, what a good reader you are! You've made me proud indeed.
"Well then Myaako, would you care to stay with us?"
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Oh, what I was getting myself into...
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I have no idea on where that came from.
BUT I LOVE IT!
<3333

CREDITS: YES! I NEED TO GIVE CREDITS!
To one writer on DA, I got my idea from one of her stories...
And also, the whole, writer talking to the reader thingy I kinda got from a random fic I read...
And I felt I needed to give out credit where needed
T.T
BTW: THE WRITER IS A GUY.... AND YES. HE IS GAY. >> <<
IF YOU DIDN'T GET THE GAY PART, YOU'RE NOT VERY OBSERVANT...

Fallen Rain - April 13, 2008 09:54 PM (GMT)

I am never one to pass up on such a weird but awesome style of writing.

I too write like this. I love how the writer describes the child in such, a pretty much flowing manner and answers questions as though I am standing right near him.

Ha-Ha, the writer however reminds me of my English teacher.

La- - April 13, 2008 10:54 PM (GMT)
Dude.

Pro.

Hm?
Your looking at me funny.
A pedophile?

xDD

Will there be more?

kaitlyn - April 13, 2008 11:55 PM (GMT)
Not a pedophile? That's what they ALL say.

Loved it.

<3

Makes me wanna write some original fiction.

Ninja.girl - April 14, 2008 02:27 AM (GMT)
She Was My Porcelain Doll.
Chapter 2

My, what a loyal reader you are! Sticking with me! I am very proud of you for that. Would it scare you if I said 'I love you' for it? It would! My, you make me sad dear reader.
But, I suppose I should get on with the story, it is why you're here.
After my dearest doll came to love with us, by Beloved took a liking to her, and her to him. She stuck to him, like a little sister to a older brother who promised her protection...
From me you say? Dear reader... You're really starting to hurt my feelings...
Well, I was like a father to her, she looked up to me, for my approval. Of course, she needn't worry about that. She always had my approval, after all, she was my dearest doll.
Approval of what?
Oh, I apologize dear reader, for not telling you. Myaako was very gifted, even from the start she drew amazing detailed pictures. So very detailed, as if you were looking at a photograph. Her pictures varied, sometimes scenery, other time, people. Sometimes they were people we knew, other they were people we didn't. It was all so amazing..
And also, when she smiled, it was like a porcelain doll come to life, like a angel had come down and blessed it.
I couldn't help but smile back.
How could you not?
Do you believe you could dear reader?
You do? Please! Do not make me laugh!
You're to naive dearest reader...
My beloved treated her different then the way he treated other members.
She was special, very special.
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I would figure that out later...
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The other members, they treated her different to, she was treated like the porcelain doll she was. Very carefully, as if, if she were to drop, all hell would break loose. As if life itself would break apart and the world would come crashing down. I treated her the exact same way, with the utmost care.
Sigh, dear reader, are you still not convinced of my innocence? I am deeply saddened by that. Please, don't think that... Think what you ask? Oh, well then, if you do not know, I shall not tell you. Unfair? Maybe. But, isn't like itself the exact same way?
Oh... those days of childlike innocence.. How I miss those days.. She grew up fast, my precious did.
But, she was always close to my Beloved. I envied them sometimes. Silly emotion, I know, but you've felt it to, haven't you dear reader?
The feelings of jealousy towards another, when it is just silly talk.
No? You tell me you haven't? Are you positive dearest reader? Or, are you just trying to fool yourself? Trying to tell yourself you've never felt this 'wicked' emotion called jealousy.
Stop? You tell me to step? Well, if it is for my dear dear reader, I guess I must.
Of course, my darling Myaako still looked up to me, still looked for my approval..
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Oh.. what happened to those days?!
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Except, when the new members came. She left us for them.
I know this is how all parents feel, when their beloved son or daughter leaves them. Moves away from them... It hurt. Of course it did. But this is a feeling you've yet to experience dear reader.
I still don't know what made her go to those inexperienced, immature dolts. But she was a teenager. She needed to be around people her own age I guess...
Oh, my darling angel...
Hm?
Who are these 'newest' members? Who are the 'members' themselves.
My my dear reader, you needn't worry about them.
They are of no importance.




WHEE
This chapter isn't as good as the first [I think], so, to make up for that, I made it longer! : DD!
This chapter is kinda about her growing up... I guess Oo
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I SWEAR HE ISN'T A PEDOPHILE.
He just.... sounds like it... >> <<
Thank you for all the compliments <3
And yes, THERE IS MOAR! : DDD
Actually, theres just one more chappy...

La- - April 14, 2008 03:02 AM (GMT)
Only one more?!

Aw...

LOL

But... I really do want to know what he's talking about

T.T

kaitlyn - April 15, 2008 09:15 PM (GMT)
Really good, I love the style.

Listening to some song that's really appropriate. Wish I could recall what it was called.

Ninja.girl - April 16, 2008 02:03 AM (GMT)
Aww... xD And thanks :3


@ Erin: You don't need toooo, they are srsly of no importance Oo they don't even show up in the next chapter...

BTW: The next chapter will take awhile because I haven't written it yet...

Sowey




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