Okay, so this was posted one time before, and the only reader I recieved was Lady Zeikumi, which I appreciate her for. I am reposting it this time only because I want more people to read it, and I have edited and changed alot. Not so much in the first part, but alot will change in the second, and so on.

This story introduces my three characters, Vixeous; Rotti; and Lillianent.
Weird names, but believe me they are an interesting group of characters.

So, if you would. Please read and review. I thank you.





"DAMMIT ROTTI! This is your shift and I can't keep covering your ass!" Yelled Jenna, a partner store clerk. She stared at Rotti, the crooked teenager, as he leaned back in his chair and lit up a cigarette.

"Relax." He said as he took a long drag on the cigarette and blew a heavy cloud of smoke above his head. "I have some things to do, and I rather not have the weight of work on my shoulders. I'll be back."
He sat straight causing the chair's legs to make a soft thunk noise as he put out the cig and flicked it into a trash-can.

"But..But.."Stuttered Jenna as the bells hanging above the door jangled sounding Rotti's leave.

Rotti placed his mp3 player into his ear as he walked from downtown Kits, the ass town in which he worked. Leaves crumpled under his feet as he threw on his hoodie and bobbed his head to the music, deciding today he would take a short cut. He was already late for what he was supposed to be doing anyways. In his ear the sound of Linkin Park's lead singer rang through his ear as he smirked to himself. He was proudly gay and couldn't help being that way, so the things he thought about always would disgust others.
'If I could get a hold of you..' He thought as he closed he eyes momentarily unaware of what was about to take place.

"LOOK OUT BELOW!" Yelled the childish female voice that belonged to Vixeous. She came crashing down from the tree right above Rotti as she landed ontop of him. His mp3 player flew out of his hand and crashed up against a rock, shattering.

"Dammit!" He rudely pushed her off of him as he stood up and dusted off his dark blue skinny jeans and his orange shirt. He turned to stare at whom the idiot was. "Just who the fuck a-"
He took a closer look at her noticing that she had un-natural looking ears. They were long and pointed and stuck out on either side of her head. Her feet were bare and on each of the bigger toe the nail was sharp and pointed, so were her fingernails. She wore a long white silky cape like material around her neck with green trim and two oversized red beads looped onto it. It also served as a top. Her hair was pulled back by a red stringy material. Her wrists were covered with two giant gold bracelets. Purple fabric was tied around her ankles.

"Ay eh. Hiyo!" She said as she rose to her feet. She was surprisingly small. "Vixeous."
She extended her hand and smiled really wide revealing small razor teeth.

Rotti just stood there staring at her in amazement. She was odd, like she was from another planet or something. Maybe she was. It was just so unreal for her to show up all of a sudden.
"Rott." He answered but didn't shake her hand as he bent down near the rock and picked up the remains of his mp3 player. He sucked his teeth as he stared at it like it was a pet whom of which just passed.

Vixeous frowned momentarily as she scratched the back of her head.
"Rude you are." She said, as she stuck her hand into the blue sash she had tied around her waist. She pulled out a pack of purple, white, and gold cards as she searched through them.
"Let see the thing." She spoke again as she stared into Rott's eyes.

He stared back as he realized she didn't speak in complete sentences. It was cute, like she was some sort of kid creature. Maybe she was. All he knew was that he wasn't going to trust her just yet. "What is it you want?"

She smirked and pointed a slender long nailed finger at his destroyed player.
"Pieces. I fix. Is okay?"

"Oh. sure. Take the piece of shit." He tossed it towards her which she caught miracously quick as she knelt down on the ground.
She placed the player on the ground as she placed the card she had pick out ontop of it.
She spit onto of the card and it began to glow and within seconds the mp3 player was fixed like brand new.
"All done. See. Did good job, right?" She asked as she held out her palm which held the small black player in it.

"Oh...? What the hell?!" Rott said as he fainted from shock.


TO BE CONTINUED!

Aw, cute <3

[loves Vixeous already] :3

Very detailed.

Updatey~

Very nice... well writtin, Ninny said it...great detail. I completley invisioned the vixeous/Rott encounter. :victory:

looking forward to your next post.

Thank you. :]
I'm glad Vixeous is a likeable character; That was my aim.
Thank you; Thank you... I worked very hard on this story and I'm glad you all know!
Here's Part Two.

The Fallen Rain - Part Two
A Place to call "our" own."

Rott opened his turqouise eyes only to see that he was staring into the face of that weird girl, Vixeous. He jumped up only to accidently headbutt her and cause her to fall backwards.
"Shit.." He rubbed his head and then looked at her. "Sorry, Are you alright?"

"Fine. Don't worry about me. No pain. No blood. See?" She removed her hand and there was nothing. Just like he thought she said.

"Okay.." Rott said he stood up again, causing Vixeous to do the same as she smiled up at him with those razor sharp teeth. "How old are you anyways, kid? Shouldn't your parents be around here somewhere?"
He really didn't want to know the answer to that. If she was weird no doubt that the parents were going to be any more normal.
Instead he heard a laugh come from her as she slapped her thigh like some old hill-billy.
"Kid... Me not. I 18." She said smiling again, as she stared at Rott as his jaw nearly flew open.

"Stop pulling my leg." He said as he too began to laugh. " You have to at least be 8 or 9 maybe 10, with a speech problem. But 18...HA! I'm not a complete idiot, ya know.."

Vixeous cocked her head to the side. "I no lie. I tell truth. I 18." She reached for the cape like material and raised it up.

"GAH!" Rott said as he covered his eyes from her bared chest. "Alright! Alright! I believe you... You can't just go around baring your chest to strangers like that, uh, What did you say your name was again?"

That smile of her creeped right back onto her face as she dropped the cape back overtop of her chest and smiled. "Vixeous!"

Rott nodded his head in approval. Vixeous was a cool name reminded him of the term Vixen, though with her weird features she could be considered one.
'Wait...What am I thinking?!?'

Rott turned away from her as he placed the headphones back into the repaired player, shoving it into his pocket that time.
"Well.. I don't have time to be wasting around here, Vixon.." He said giving her a nickname. "Maybe I'll see you around. Maybe I won't."
He began to walk off only to feel a tug at his hoodie as he turned to see her holding onto it. A frown was on her face.

"I have no where go. Can come with you, please?" She asked as the frown deepened and her two crimson eyes stared at him.

He couldn't just let her follow him, for she was a bit strange. Scracth that, she was very strange. But then he didn't want to just leave her there. He didn't know how long she has been there and maybe she was hungry. He found it best if he just agreed.

"Fine." He said as he slipped off his hoodie. "But you're going to have to put this on to hide your ears AND to keep your chest covered. Got it?"

Vixeous nodded her head as she slipped it on and zipped it up to her neck and over her ears. Her ear mashed to the side of her head as she began to look like a normal teen except for her eyes nails and feet.

"Oh well. Let's get moving. I'm already late." Rott began to run and Vixeous followed holding the hood over her head so it wouldn't spring off.

Leaves cracked and crinkled under their feet as they soon made it out of the forest and onto a buzzing street. They stopped at a traffic light, well Rott having to pull Vixeous back from the intersection saving her from nearly getting hit by a speeding truck. He shook his head realizing that was going to be more like baby-sitting than anything else.

Once they crossed the street, they turned down an alley that lead to a row of three large houses. The one in the middle the largest and by far the creepiest with its own gargoyle statues in the yard and perched on the steps and roof. The shutters were in need of new paint and the once black gate was orange with rust.

Vixeous stared curiously up at the house before looking to Rott.
"Your home?" She questioned abit afraid of the answer.

"Unfortunately yes. But I'm not the only one that lives here. It's kind of been remodeled into apartments." He said as he unlatched the gate with screeched terribly loud and annoyingly.
Vixeous nodded her head as if she knew what apartments were, but followed after him.

He pulled out a key from his pocket and pushed open the main door which stayed open all of the time. Except during storms.

The hallway to the house had an old beige, burgundy and puke green rug on the floor. It was worn and smelt of urine. A chipped up wooden table sat all the way down the end of it under a cracked mirror. Ontop of the mirror was an old wooden cubby that served as the mail storage for residents.

To the left of the hallway there were stairs that had a long burgundy rug running down the old worn stairs that led upstairs to some of the apartments. To the right of the hall was a door that led to a single apartment that was marked:

GROUND FLOOR APARTMENT

Rott snuck past that apartment, since that was where the landlord lived and he was late turning in his rent, as he grabbed Vixeous's hand and led her up the stairs.
At the top of the stairs was another gargoyle statue which was cracked and missing a few teeth. Spider webs hung from it's mouth and claws telling that it has been along time since any cleaning service has touched that house.

He turned to the right of the statue to a green apartment door that read:

APARTMENT 6

And scratched underneath it was:

ROTTI'S PLACE OF PICKINGS

He pushed the key into the lock as he opened the door to the apartment allowing Vixeous to head in first. The whole apartment was wood-floored, except for Rotti's room which had beige carpeting that wore a coat of brown from all of the dirt.

The walls were painted that ugly puke colored green with the burgundy trim. On the walls hung knock off paintings of kings and queens that were supposedly to be related to Mister Snittch, the landlord. Rott would've believed that crock of bull if it weren't for the condition of the house.

Rott tossed the keys onto a small worn coffee table near a red couch that had more wrinkles in it than an old person. "Make yourself at home."

He disappeared down the darkening hall that led to the bathroom, his bedroom, a closet and the small suicide balcony.

Vixeous remained standing for the state of the apartment would scare the dirty off of an homeless person. Her eyes scanned around the apartment momentarily before she bravely took a step forward. After seeing that nothing was going to devour the flesh off of her, she began to explore. She stared at Rott's coffee table; which was littered with bills, old magazines, and plastic wrappers with worn words on the front. All she could make out of them were "Extra...L".

She turned away from the table and walked towards the lone window that provided light in the dully lit apartment.

"Urh..ugh!" Two struggling noises came from it. Vixeous eyes widened with confusion as she peered out of it only to meet the eyeglassed covered eyes of another female.

"ACK!"


TO BE CONTINUED!

This is very Awesome!
I <3 it.

Please update, k?

^______^

Okay, readers of TFR listen up!
Expect an update either Friday or Saturday. I have everything jumbled in my notebook, and have no clue on the order I want to type it.
(See, I type paragraphs for stories out of order and later decided how I want to piece them together.)
Though, I will promise you and extra long update!

To new readers; Please read and review!

-Rayne

Great story

:3

Vixon is hilarious xDD

-to lazy to type her name out-

OMG!!

Ha, I love Rotti... He seems cool.
Vixeous is funny!

YOU MUST UPDATE!

:3