Title: Blood drain rising
Description: ..........
slipknot513 - April 30, 2008 05:08 PM (GMT)
I was battling my worst enemy Blade when he took his dagger and cut my shoulder blade :boxing: he spared my life and telaported away .
Full Metal Jacket - April 30, 2008 05:28 PM (GMT)
Ashita Genki Ni Naare - April 30, 2008 07:44 PM (GMT)
Wtf. Gtfo noob.
....Nice job. Keep it up. Just not on this forum.
Jostanos - April 30, 2008 08:17 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (slipknot513 @ Apr 30 2008, 12:08 PM) |
| chapter1 I was battling my worst enemy Blade when he took his dagger and |
And.....
Where's the rest of it?
Slipknot, I admit that there may have been more to your first chapter and it was somehow deleted while or before being posted.
But why?
Any way, just as good advice from one fic writer to another..
Please read the other fan fictions here on Inuyasha Joureny to see how they are written and learn even from the mistakes found (Or not) in each.
Please do not be discouraged.
Please retype the first chapter with all that should be there and every one should be pleased. ^^
Thank you for your time and patience. *bows*
Full Metal Jacket - April 30, 2008 08:20 PM (GMT)
Patriot1776 - April 30, 2008 08:21 PM (GMT)
Everyone PLEASE do not flame this person. I WILL PERSONALLY SUSPEND
ANY WHO DO SO.
Slipknot, how old are you? Be honest.
slipknot513 - May 6, 2008 04:42 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Patriot1776 @ Apr 30 2008, 03:21 PM) |
Everyone PLEASE do not flame this person. I WILL PERSONALLY SUSPEND
ANY WHO DO SO.
Slipknot, how old are you? Be honest. |
i am 12
Jostanos - May 6, 2008 09:41 PM (GMT)
Everyone,
The situation concerning this fanfiction was explained to me in a PM.
Slipnot was pressed for time at school and was only able to post that one sentence.
More may come later so we must be patient.