You shouldn't have seen what I long for you.
Help me heal my endangered soul.
And hold it in your grasp while I stay here and weap.
Don't touch my heart, not this minute.
I only need you to kiss it gently, so it can breathe.
And when you are in my sight at last, there will be no turning back.
If you wish to hold me in your arms, I need you to commit you mean what you say. To stay by my side, you must need me, not want me.
I am the pitiful engraving of a daughters broken life.
Whilst she runs along smiling and waving goodbye.
Whilst she is not happy, she would rather fall asleep to no awakening.
You must understand how much of the little girl remains with me.
While the same child rests in my soul, she has carried out her far off dreams.
And while I tell you everyday that I need you and I miss you, the same persistent litle girl pounds in my head.
She is speaking sadly, and I know she has been crying.
She does not want me to start something else.
She knows the troubles, she knows the sorrow.
Still I trust her, but now she aggravates me.
I shove her gently aside and step forward.
She may cling to me and plead, but I know who is right and who is wrong.
Neither of us is right nor wrong.
We can not begin describe how incorrect we are.
The natural human instinct is to hold what you have left, but to always keep things in the future an open option.
She still stays in me somewhere, and now that you have brought more sunshine into my life, she will realize that new things aren't always bad.
When I cry she sits beside me and rests her hand on my back.
She smiles, I feel her warmth.
And although the timing is not right, she will leave me and play a game by herself.
The little childhood memory needs me the most.
I tell myself to keep what I have, and to never forget anything.
So that is why she still exists.I love you so dearly, and I know the little girl will someday too.

//EDITED//

Please try writing it like this or something.
It's must more understandable.
Please and Thank You.

^___^


You shouldn't have seen what I long for you.
Help me heal my endangered soul.
And hold it in your grasp while I stay here and weap.
Don't touch my heart, not this minute.
I only need you to kiss it gently, so it can breathe.
And when you are in my sight at last, there will be no turning back.
If you wish to hold me in your arms, I need you to commit you mean what you say.
To stay by my side, you must need me, not want me.
I am the pitiful engraving of a daughters broken life.
Whilst she runs along smiling and waving goodbye. Whilst she is not happy, she would rather fall asleep to no awakening.
You must understand how much of the little girl remains with me.
While the same child rests in my soul, she has carried out her far off dreams.
And while I tell you everyday that I need you and I miss you, the same persistent litle girl pounds in my head.
She is speaking sadly, and I know she has been crying.
She does not want me to start something else.
She knows the troubles, she knows the sorrow.
Still I trust her, but now she aggravates me.
I shove her gently aside and step forward.
She may cling to me and plead, but I know who is right and who is wrong.
Neither of us is right nor wrong.
We can not begin describe how incorrect we are.
The natural human instinct is to hold what you have left, but to always keep things in the future an open option.
She still stays in me somewhere, and now that you have brought more sunshine into my life, she will realize that new things aren't always bad.
When I cry she sits beside me and rests her hand on my back.
She smiles, I feel her warmth.
And although the timing is not right, she will leave me and play a game by herself. The little childhood memory needs me the most.
I tell myself to keep what I have, and to never forget anything.
So that is why she still exists.
I love you so dearly, and I know the little girl will someday too.

mmkay (:
I usually just jumble it up like that hehe.
I'll try to put it in paragraph or line format next time.

Aw... ^^
It's long, which I appreciate. But a word from the wise: if it's going to be long, make sure people don't get bored halfway through and want to stop reading. The reason is, they'll either stop reading, or they won't pay attention, which just means they're going to give you a cliche response. So make sure you use words, phrases, mataphores and similes to keep the reader engaged, and paying attention to the story.

And well, I do like the end... because it made me think 'aw.' xD

Lol. Keep writing. In verse form for a poem - please. :3

alright then chum