Title: Inuyasha: New Friends New School
Description: Redone
Kagome07_16 - May 8, 2008 02:26 AM (GMT)
"Kaiya wake up, KAIYA! It's your first day of high school and you want to look somewhat descent." Kaiya's older brother said well laughing. He always loved to pick on his younger sister.
"Ha-ha very funny Inuyasha". She said throwing off her white and pink blankets. She slowly sat up on her comfortable bed and stretched. As she stood up she ran her fingers through her long chestnut brown hair first turning on her straighter to make sure her hair was perfect.
Well waiting for the straighter to heat up she went over to her closet and pulled out mini shorts and a white graphic tee that had the words Hollister in pink.
She then grabbed a silver locket her mother gave to her when she was younger. Her mom ended up leaving when she was young. Leaving her with just her two lovely brothers, and in her mind she said she would she would never forgive her, but her heart told her otherwise. Her dad InuTaisho died right after she was born.
She just stared at the mirror for a while, wondering if she would ever be good enough for this new school.
She erased the though for her mind, then she just put make-up on and then well doing her hair she kept thought to herself, "First day of high school in a new city, now don't make a fool out of yourself the first day."
"Kaiya, breakfast is ready.'' called Sesshomaru. Wow that’s the first time since I in Jr. High that Sesshomaru made breakfast for me.
"Ok, be down in a minute" Kaiya called back. She made little adjustments, and grabbed her light blue book bag and headed downstairs.
When she got went down the long brown hallway seeing pictures of when they young, and what she considered the happier times. She quickly came out of the daydream to make sure she didn't fall the stairway. When she got downstairs she saw her brother Inuyasha sitting at the table. His black hair was blowing in the air because of the breeze coming through the window that was right above the kitchen sink. He was wearing a black American eagle t-shirt with dark blue jeans with faded spots here and there.
Next to him was Rin in a little pink dress and black shoes her hair was put up in a ponytail, Kaiya was jealous of her even though she was so much younger Kaiya considered her to be much prettier. Rin just sat there smiling at Kaiya then would look down at the floor every once in a while kicking her feet together. She was also waiting for the delicious pancakes and eggs that Sesshomaru was currently finishing up on. Sesshomaru was actually an awesome cook but quite for no reason at all.
Finally next to her was Jaken an ugly annoying toad that Sesshomaru for some reason kept around. Maybe just to boss him around and get him to get him a drink every now and then. Jaken was just staring at the floor in a completely different world. Kaiya then sat next to her brother Inuyasha and impatiently wait for her brother Sesshomaru to finish making breakfast. There was a deep silence and Kaiya just wanted to break it but didn't say a word.
Suddenly Inuyasha burst out "Ready for your first day of high school sis?"
Kaiya just looked at him for a minute then said, "Always ready Inuyasha always ready." Even now that she was so nervous that she could puke.
Sesshomaru came with our plates of food and handed them out to each of us. There were two yummy looking chocolate chip pancakes with whipped cream on top, eggs, and them some bacon to the side of the plate.
Everyone just ate their food without a sound. Inuyasha of course was the first to finish and headed stairs to grabbed his book bag. He always had to wait for his sister to make sure that she got there safe. He headed back downstairs and Kaiya had finished her food and was waiting for him at the door. Inuyasha looked at her at first then walked toward the door.
Inuyasha and Kaiya walked together in on direction well Rin and Jaken went with Sesshomaru in the other. Rin and Jaken were headed to 5th grade, which was a while away from their house so Sesshomaru took them to school in his lovely Envoy.
Inuyasha and Kaiya get along very well even though sometimes it's hard to tell because they can get into a good amount of fights over something really stupid. Inuyasha makes fun of her a lot because she's a demon but not once used a sword or her powers. No one not even Kaiya knows why.
Kaiya and Inuyasha walked for a while with complete silence. They just walked along until Kaiya just came out of know where a said,
"So ready for this new school?" Kaiya asked.
"Kind of, I hope 10th grade is easier than 9th." Inuyasha said in an I really wish I wasn't here kind of way. I couldn't blame him we were just getting used to our old school then we had to move.
"Can't help yah there bro." She said then continuing with the following question.
"What's the name of the school again?" Kaiya asked in an I really don't care but I hate the quietness tone. Kaiya like it better loud, she hated that deep silence.
"Umm, it's Tokyo High,” said Inuyasha.
Well they were walking they looked straight in front of them and there was this huge white building in front of them with students running in. They both we thinking what did we get ourselves into when Inuyasha said. “Well this is it."
"Yah, this is it."
They both walked in together to get their schedules for their new classes. As Inuyasha and Kaiya walked into Tokyo High they saw many students around their lockers chatting with each other. Kaiya and Inuyasha looked around taking in the new surroundings.
The other kids didn't seem to care that they were there. They just stared at them then continued talking to there friends. Acting like they we aliens from a different planet of something.
Kaiya just wanted to turn around and run away. Inuyasha just kept looking for the office. They made a left turn and saw the words "Senior High Office" posted above the door. They walked in when and saw a women with short black hair and a navy blue blouse. She looked up and saw the two standing there and said, "Good morning children, how many I help you?"
"I'm Inuyasha Taisho and this is my sister Kaiya Taisho, we're new here." Inuyasha said. And then looked at his sister.
"Oh, well I my name am Ms. Konoe I am the senior high secretary. Well then, I will just need you two too fill out a couple forms and we will get you your schedules and locker numbers."
Inuyasha and Kaiya shook their heads in a yes motion well she handed each of them a two sheets of paper and each a pen. Kaiya looked at the forms it mostly just wanted normal information like: name, age, address, phone number ECT, like a regular school form. As they were filling it out the heard the first bell ring and looked at each other. When Ms. Konoe said, "Oh, don't worry if your late your, new it will be fine that your a little late for your first class." So Kaiya and Inuyasha just went back to filling out their forms. Kaiya was the first to get done and handed them to Ms. Konoe. "Well, Kaiya your going into the ninth grade this year how exciting."
"Yah" Kaiya said in a nervous tone well also rolling her eyes.
"Oh no need to be scared there are a tons of kind students in this school and they are very easy to get along with."
Within just a few minute Inuyasha had finished his forms and handed them in as well. Ms. Konoe typed their information into the computer and started printing out their new schedules and locker numbers looked up and said, "Now lets go get you two too your new class now shall we." Inuyasha and Kaiya just smiled. Ms. Konoe led them to each of their lockers to put their book bags away. Ms. Konoe said" So, which one is going to go first." Before Kaiya could speak up Inuyasha said, "Kaiya will."
"Ok then lets go Kaiya your first class is Algebra 1." Ms. Konoe said
Kaiya just glared at Inuyasha the whole way to her classroom. When they reached Kaiya's classroom and Ms. Konoe knocked on the door she completely froze. A young man answered the door and Ms. Konoe said, "Mr. Soto this is Kaiya Taisho, Kaiya this is Mr. Kadone your new algebra teacher."
"Well hi there Kaiya nice to meet you." Mr. Sato said.
"Hi, nice to meet you too, Mr. Kadono." Kaiya said in a hushed tone.
"Well, there you are Kaiya enjoy you first class." Ms. Konoe said happily.
Kaiya smiled and walked in with Mr. Soto well Inuyasha said behind them "Good luck sis." Kaiya looked at him back and made a little smile then headed into the classroom.
When Kaiya got into the classroom she saw tons of student looking at her. She noticed all that the room was quite bare just a whiteboard, desks, and classroom policy that was it.
"Class can I can see I have your attention now this is our new student Kaiya Taisho, Kaiya tell us a little about yourself." Mr. Sato said.
Kaiya wanted to run out of the class but instead she said, "My name is Kaiya and I am from Kagoshima."
"Well then now Kaiya lets find you a seat, Aww there's an open seat by Kanna you may sit there.
After that Mr. Sota started talking about classroom rules and all the things that we would be learning over the year. I didn't think it would be too hard for me I have always been a straight A student. "I just hope that I don't get made fun of for being smart, " Kaiya thought.
Jostanos - May 8, 2008 02:50 AM (GMT)
An excellent story. Not too many speeling errors, if any at all. But I do have a question about a teacher's name..
Is it "Mr. Sato" or "Mr. Sota"?
Just curious. ^^
Please continue when you may, Kagome. ^^
Kagome07_16 - May 8, 2008 03:59 AM (GMT)
Mr. Soto, thank you for that Jostanos i must have missed that. and thanks for the commet
Ok i am going to continue and maybe finish chapter one tonight since i finish by bio project
Chapter 1: First Day of School :worried: (Continued)
Well, Inuyasha time to get you to your first hour class; Biology." Ms. Konoe said. Inuyasha wasn't very excited to hear that. Not only did he hate biology but having it at the first hour of class just makes it a hundred times worse.
Inuyasha and Ms.Konoe started walking to his classroom which really wasn't too far away from Kaiya's. As the walked he saw all the awards the school has won in the past year for singing, track, basketball, volleyball mostley every sport out there. "They must be one of those school that except alot out of there student," Inuyasha thought to himself. He keep looking around when Ms. Konoe said, "Ok, Inuyasha here we are, you can just go on in Mr. Kadono usually lets his student talk for a few minutes."
Inuyasha entered the classroom, the first part was a lab where they would to all of there experiments and everything. There were skeletons of animals and insects in jars, you could easily tell this was some kind of science class. As he kept walking forward he saw a classroom full of kids looking at him.
Mr. Kadono came and said "Ok classroom attention please, this is Inuyasha Taisho." As Mr. Kadono was talking about being kind to the new student Inuyasha look around the room scoping out the room for hot girls, when he came across a beauty.
She had long raven black hair pulled into a high ponytail and the most beautiful innocent looking chocolate brown eyes. Inuyasha kept thinking about her when Mr. Kadono said, "Inuyasha please go sit by Kagome, Kagome raise your hand so he nows where to go."
She raised her hand and Inuyasha walked over thinking so Kagome is her name.
Kagome just looked at Inuyasha thinking, man he's hot. Well Mr. Kadono wasn't looking when Kagome looked over her shoulder at Inuyasha and, "Hi, my name is Kagome." Inuyasha looked and said, "Mines Inuyasha."
"Well Inuyasha, would you like to sit with me and my friends for lunch?'' Kagome said with a smile.
"Sure, that be nice." Inuyasha said. Inuyasha was smiling inside but trying to play it cool on the outside.
Then Mr. Kadono came in the conversation and said, "Kagome, you can get to know the new student later." Everyone looked at them Kagome just blushed with embarrassment. Nowing that talking to the new student was totally uncool.
Within time the first bell rang everyone almost ran out of the class like there was no tomorrow. Inuyasha walked out and looked at his schedule and his next class the lovely english class. Inuyasha has always hated the class but not as much as math, atleast Kaiya knew what to do and she's only in the 9th grade.
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Kaiya walked out of her algebra class when Kanna the girl she sits by to ran into and she turned and said, "Watch were your going newbie." Kanna grabbed onto Kaiya's notebook and threw them to the ground every student walked around well stepping on her stuff and just started laughing at her. Kaiya picked up her notebook and walked to her next class with her head down. Now knowing that this was going to be a long horrible year.
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(Lunchtime)
Inuyasha was so excited for lunchtime and well dropping his notebook into his locker he ran into Kagome. Kagome was with one of her friends Kagome and introduced her, and her name was Sango, Sango has long black hair she was wearing a blue tee that said "little miss trouble" in black and mini demin shorts. It was almost like what Kagome was wearing except she was wearing a white shirt with "i love shopping in.." there were tons of place from L.A. to Paris.
"So Inuyasha, where do you come from? Kagome asked. Kagome couldn't help but look at him, he was so cute she thought. She just didn't want him to know it.
"Kagoshima"Inuyasha replied.
"Exciting, I have been there a couple of times." Sango said.
Inuyasha, Kagome, and Sango kept up the talking until they got in line. Right away Inuyasha smelt one of his many favorite foods...pizza. Right away he though I hope its pepperoni pizza. When we grabbed his tray and look at the pizza and it was pepperoni VICTORY!! He grabbed it like he hadn't eaten in a month. Kagome said, "Must really like pepperoni pizza?''
Inuyasha just shook his head in a yes motion.
After that him, Kagome, and Sango when to a table where there was another boy and two another girls. Kagome sat next to the boy and he grabbed her hand. Kagome sat down and introduced him and her other friends, "Inuyasha this is Satsuki, and my boyfriend Koga. When Inuyasha heard "boyfriend" it kept ringing through his mind but he didn't want to show his anger he just said, "Hi everyone" and sat down. After a few minutes Inuyasha started looking for his sister, he looked around but no sign of her. He though that she was hiding so that he wouldn't embarrass her infront of her new friends, but he was so wrong.
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Kaiya went in line and got her food. She looked around for a place to sit, she saw her brother with new friends but there was no place for her. She had been made fun of since she got book checked no one wanted her to sit by them. So Kaiya went into a nearby restroom locked herself in a stall ate her food and cryed. Kaiya ate her food as fast as she could, made sure it didn't look like she was crying in case she ran into her brother, he didn't want to ruin his great time. So she headed to dump her tray. Within five minutes the bell rang to go to her next class.
Inuyasha heard the bell and quickly left the table, he wanted to forget what just happened.
(end of school day)
At the end of the school day Inuyasha waited for Kaiya at the door but she never showed so he headed home thinking her and her new friends walked together and she forgot to tell him.
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Kaiya stood there in the hallway near the senior high office wondering if she should sign up for volleyball but she didn't know if she should or not. I might meet new people, she thought. If Kaiya didn't join she would be giving up her favorite sport beside choir. Then she thought even if people hate me I still am a good player so I will join.
Kaiya headed home still thinking of how the kids treated her. They were so mean, I wonder what they would say if the found out me and my brother are hanyou's. It would be horrible. She couldn't take some of the mean things people were saying. She got pushed in a locker twice, one time they tried to stick her in her locker. A couple times she was pushed around in the hallway and book checked.
Finally she saw her house. The one place were she felt safe from humiliation but right when she walked in the door she saw Inuyasha and Sesshomaru talking when Sesshomaru asked, "So Kaiya, how was your first day at school?"
Kaiya couldn't hold back. She just ran up the stairs crying to her bedroom and slammed the door behind her.
When Inuyasha saw Kaiya run upstairs he turn looked at Sesshomaru. Then Sesshomaru said, "All I said was how was your first day of school."
Right then Inuyasha ran upstairs to go see if his sister was ok. When he got to Kaiya's room he knocked on her door. All over the door there were pictures of her old friends sitting at the beach having a great time before Kaiya had to actually leave. Near the top of the room there was a good size blue glitted poster that said "Kaiya's Room."
Inuyasha knocked on the door and said, "Kaiya are you ok."
But all he got was,"Inuyasha leave me the hell alone I don't want to talk to you right now."
"Oh come on Kaiya let me come in, I hate it when you cry." Inuyasha said.
"No, just leave me alone." Kaiya yelled.
"Oh, Please come on Kaiya." Inuyasha said well leaning on the door.
"NO GO AWAY!!!" Kaiya yelled.
Inuyasha finally didn't care if Kaiya wanted him in her room or not. He entered Kaiya room which smelled like her Mary-Kate and Ashley Coast to Coast Tokyo Fusion perfume. He loved the smell, he realized that Kagome was wearing something similiar.
He really had never been in her new room. Her room was a nice bright sky blue and pictures of friends and celebrities everywhere.
Finally he saw his sister in her bed laying on her white and pink comforter on her stomach crying.
Inuyasha then sat on Kaiya's nice comfy bed and said, "What happened today at school that was so bad?"
First Kaiya sat-up and glared at Inuyasha for coming in her room when she said, "Well, when I first walked into the classroom it seem..ok until Kanna bookchecked me at the end of algebra so of course everyone started laughing at me." Then she whipped her eyes and continued to say, "I was made fun of all day long being pushed around and being shooved into my locker everything it was just horrible, I didn't think people could be so mean. Kaiya said curling up into a little ball crying.
When Inuyasha heard that he said something that maybe would make her laugh Inuyasha said, "Well today my day started off perfect, I met this gorgeous girl named Kagome, it was all good tell lunch when she introduced me to Koga who turned out to be her boyfriend."
Kaiya just looked at Inuyasha for a minute then smiled. It was funny but not funny enough no make her laugh. It must have really been that bad because Inuyasha could usually make Kaiya laugh very easily.
Then Inuyasha said, "Don't worry Kaiya, it will get better soon."
"Yah I'm sure and how long will that take." Kaiya said in an angry voice.
"Kaiya, it will don't worry about it, you will meet someone nice that will be your friend." Inuyasha said.
"Yah right, I wanna got back to Kagoshima, I wanna be with my friends." Kaiya said in a angry voice.
"Well we are not going back there so your going to have to get used to Tokyo." Inuyasha said in a annoyed tone.
Kaiya stood up and yelled at Inuyasha saying, "Well it's all your fault we had to move here in the first place!" Kaiya really didn't think about what she said but went with it anyway.
Inuyasha yelled back at her, "So your blaming me for what happen to you today, well that's fair.''
"INUYASHA, its 100% your fault if you hadn't done what you did I could be happy and being with my friends!" Kaiya yelled.
"Kaiya, I can't help people hate you and at this moment I can see why that wouldn't like you." Inuyasha said but then he noticed that Kaiya started to cry again. "Kaiya, I'm sorry I just lost me temper." Inuyasha said in a soft tone.
Kaiya put her head down and said to Inuyasha, "GET OUT, GET OUT RIGHT NOW!"
"Kaiya I said I'm.....
"Well Inuyasha you can take your sorry and GET OUT OF MY ROOM!" Kaiya said in a very angry voice.
"FINE" Inuyasha yelled.
Inuyasha stomped out the door and slammed it. Kaiya then went to the door and locked to make sure she wouldn't have to listen to another of his stupid apologies.
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Inuyasha headed down the hallway and went into his room and slammed the door and make sure he locked it. Inuyasha looked around his room it was red and only had a couple of pictures of his friends and had plenty of posters. He went and sat on his bed and though, "How could Kaiya be so selfish blaming everything on me."
"I know its fault that someone tried to hurt her and I ended up killing them, but blaming me for people hating her." Inuyasha then laid on his bed and took a nap."
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Ok this is the end of chapter 1. And maybe tomorrow i will do chapter to. I hoped u all like it and i tried to fix my mistakes from the first entry.
Enjoy :kittylove:
Jostanos - May 9, 2008 05:27 AM (GMT)
Again an excellent stoy, Kagome, but there were a few more spelling errors this time.
The correct spelling for some of the words used are as follows:
Mostly (no 'e' ^^)
expects
thier
Knowing
at least (You forgot to put a space between the two words, but 8 times out of 10 that is over looked ^^)
denim (unless "demin" is a type of fabric, then I apologise *bows humbly* )
Please continue when you may, Kagome.
You have a fan in me. :kittylove: :victory:
If you have any questions at all, please do not hesitate to pm me or a moderator/fellow fic writer for help. ^^
Kagome07_16 - May 11, 2008 04:21 AM (GMT)
I am sorry this one is long but its the whole chapter and i may not be about to update for sometime since finals are so close. But i may update part of chapter 3 tomorrow.
Kaiya woke up this morning feeling bad about what she had said to Inuyasha last night before.
Flashback:"Well it's all your fault we had to move here in the first place!"
Even though he was to blame she did need to say it right to his face. Kaiya decided during breakfast she would apologize for what she said. She got out of bed and walked to her white dresser and got ready as fast as she could. Kaiya found a green tee that had the words "Love you later" with a eagle in the middle of the shirt. Then she went over to her closet grabbed a white pair of capris with green sandles. Kaiya ran down the stairs and as she got to the last step Sesshomaru called out,"Time for breakfast!"
"Ok, Sessy but you didn't have to yell i'm right here." Kaiya said well putting her hands on her hips.
"Kaiya, how many times do I have to tell you to stop callin me Sessy!" snapped Sessomaru well smiling and impersonating Kaiya's hands on hip postion.
"Sorry" Kaiya said well laughing.
Kaiya had her bookbag and notebook in hand so she could get going. Then she noticed that Inuyasha wasn't anywhere to be found. She checked the living room but he wasn't there either.
Kaiya then asked, "Sesshomaru, wheres Inuyasha?"
Before Sesshomaru even answer Rin said, "He already left for school, he didn't seem very happy this morning."
"Did he mention why?" Kaiya asked.
"Ok come on Kaiya, you should know why Inuyasha is angry, your one he got into a fight with." Sessomaru said.
Kaiya didn't say anything, but she didn't think Inuyasha was truly that mad at her. Kaiya turned to Sesshomaru and asked, "When did Inuyasha leave?''
"Um, about 10 minutes ago." Sesshomaru answered.
"Oh, okay well I guess I better head to school as well, dont wanna be late."
"Hey, what about breakfast?" Sesshomaru asked.
"I will just get some at school." Kaiya said well walking out the door.
"Ok bye" called Sesshomaru but Kaiya was already gone.
When Kaiya got outside she looked to see how far Inuyasha had gotten. She couldn't see him anywhere, and Inuyasha is usually a slow walker.
I have to apologize before school starts because I have volleyball right after school gets out. Kaiya thought.
Right at that thought she started running to try to catch up to Inuyasha before he got inside the school, because she didn't want to make a scene in school. She had ran two blocks and still hadn't caught up with her brother. When Kaiya reached the second block she saw a handsome boy, he had long black hair that was pulled back in a braid. He was wearing faded blue jeans and a blue hoodie. I think his name is Bankotsu from Inuyasha's grade.
Well Kaiya was looking at Bankotsu she hadn't been paying any attention to the sidewalk in front of her. Right then Kaiya ran into somebody and completely pumbled him and herself to the ground. She slowly got up and said, "I'm sorry about that." When she got up she realized it was her brother.
"Oh Inuyasha I have been looking for you." Kaiya said.
"Why so you call yell at me some more!" Inuyasha snapped back well brushing off his clothing.
"No, so I could apologize for blaming you for everything that went wrong yesterday." Kaiya said in a soft tone. "I had no right to say what I said."
"You got a point, doesn't mean I am gunna except you apology." Inuyasha said well walking away.
"Oh come on Inuyasha, I really am sorry. Kaiya said back.
There was a silence for a minute well Inuyasha was thinking if he should forgive Kaiya or not. Even though she did say some harsh things, Kaiya still was his sister.
"Well Kaiya I guess I could forgive you." Inuyasha said in a kind of sarcastic tone.
"Thank you Inuyasha" Kaiya said happily and started walking to catch back up to Inuyasha.
"Yah, yah, yah." Inuyasha said.
As they were walking and getting close to the school they heard the first bell ring and both ran into the school.
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Kaiya got to her locker almost right away, she put her bookbag into her locker and grabbed her mathbook, her blue notebook, and a pen and pencil, then last but not least her assignment book. Kaiya walked to her class which was right next to her.
I wonder if Inuyasha made it to his class.Kaiya thought. Unlike her Inuyasha had his locker and first hour class in two different area of the school.
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Inuyasha quickly walked up the stairs he got to his locker and threw his things in it. He found his Biology book at the bottom of his already messy locker. Inuyasha grabbed his pencil and headed to class as fast as he could.
The school day went slow, not just for Inuyasha and Kaiya, but for everyone it was a perfect day and they were trapped in the boring school.
(After School)
After school Inuyasha slowly walked to his locker and grabbed all of his homework. Thinking that it would take him a month to finish each subject alone. He didn't understand any of the math or science. "Well at least I have Kaiya to help me with my homework, thank god for letting me have a smart sister. He thought. His thought was soon interrupted when he heard two people saying, "Bye Inuyasha."
Inuyasha looked behind him and saw Kagome and Sango. "Bye Kagome, bye Sango." Inuyasha said back to the girls.
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"So you want to come to my house and do our homework together Kagome?" asked Sango.
"Sure Sango." Kagome said.
Sango and Kagome left the school and after a couple minutes of walking they made it to Sango's house. Sango's house was very close to the close and came in handy after a school dance. It was a huge white house with tons of windows and a huge porch. When they entered the house they went straight up the staircase. Sango and Kagome got upstairs and walked down the long white hallway. Also what Kagome called,"The never ending hallway," because it was so long and had so many doors. When they got to Sango's room her door was shut. The door was plain and white as well as many things in the house.
Sango's room wasn't white like everything else though, it was pink. She had a huge bed with a ton of pillows and pink sheets. There was a huge white dresser with a whole bunch of make-up. Around the mirror that was covered in pictures of Sango and Kagome.
"So lets get started on our homework Sango." Kagome said.
They two girls sat do on the floor and took out their homework.
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After school Kaiya grabbed her homework and put it into her bookbag. Then she headed to the gym to put her volleyball clothing on. She went into the locker room which was covered in girls getting ready for practice. Kaiya headed to the open stall and put her blue shorts and dance tee on.
When she got back to the gym she waited for the two coaches to give them orders of what to do.
One of the coaches had shoulder length blonde hair. She small build, but tall. The other coach had her black her put into a tight bun.
"Girls, please get into a circle and start stretching." The blonde haired one said. "The senior girls will show the stetches." She continued.
So all of the girls formed a circle and did all the stretches. Then of course they had to run three times around the gym. When we were all done running we went to the coaches and the black haired one said, "My name is Coach Soga and this is my assisant Coach Dai." "Today we will start tryouts to see if you will be the on: freshman, sophomore, JV, or Varsity." "Now get a partner and start warming up." She finished.
Kaiya looked around and then a girl with long orangish/brownish hair said, "Hi, my names Ayame want to be my partner."
"Sure Ayame, my names Kaiya." Kaiya said back. Kaiya was smiling inside because she might finally have her first friend at this school.
The girls spent there first fifteen minute stretchening there arms before the freshman would realize that this was going to the hardest tryouts they would ever have.
(After Volleyball Practice)
After the harsh tryout was over all the girls went into the dressing room, some even took showers. All the others got back into they regular school clothing the wore before, and headed home.
"Bye Kaiya." Ayame said. "Tomorrow lets site by eachother during lunch so we can get to know eachother better."
"Sounds good, bye Ayame." Kaiya said back to her.
Kaiya got home and happily walked onto the porch and opened the door. Inuyasha saw how happy Kaiya asked her, "So, how was volleyball?"Kaiya looked over to Inuyasha who was currently wearing his red kimono. He was doing his homework, which she could totally tell he was having problems with. "It was really good." Kaiya answered.
"So I don't have to worry about you yelling at me tonight?" Inuyasha said smiling.
Kaiya just glared at him and said. "No."
Kaiya then went upstairs and entered her room to do her homework. " I am so tired, that volleyball practice wore me out." Kaiya thought. She walked over to her desk, grabbed all of her books and got started, before she knew she had fallen asleep.
(DREAM)
It was the night of the full moon, the night Kaiya loses her powers let sunset. She was againest the wall being held be a tall man with short black spikey hair.
"Tatsuo, let go of me."Kaiya said in a shaky voice.
"Now why would I do that, so you can run-off with Kyo." Said Tatsuo who was looking straight at her with his red demon eyes.
"I told you we were just talking." Kaiya said in adjitated voice.
"I am sure you were, with the way you were looking at him you were doing much more than talking." Tatsuo said with anger.
Kaiya was now shaking, she didn't know what he was going to do with her. With no one around he could do almost anything and not get caught.
"Kaiya look at me." Tatsuo said grabbing her chin. "I want to make sure you know that you belong to me and no one else."
Kaiya looked at him knowing what he would do. Kaiya started crying hoping though that he would just let her go.
Kaiya never did get let go. Before she knew it she was be raped and their was nothing she could do expect cry but everytime she did she was either smacked in the face or yelled at. Once he was finished he kicked he in the ribs saying "If I can't have you no one can. He just kept on kicking her, it hurt to breath. All she could was watch.
Inuyasha was sitting doing his algebra, he was getting so frusterated because he had no idea how to do any of it. He thought he could go ask Kaiya but she was busy with he own homework. Inuyasha just closed he book, when he heard a deathly scream. Inuyasha without hestitation ran up to Kaiya's room.
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"Kaiya, Kaiya wake up." Inuyasha said well shaking his sister.
Kaiya first looked around then started crying,"Oh, Inuyasha." Kaiya said crying and hugging her brother.
"Kaiya it was just a dream." Inuyasha said well hugging his sister.
"Ya, but it seemed so real."Kaiya said shaking.
This just stood there for a moment, it was totally silent. Then Inuyasha said, "Come on it's supper time, lets go down and eat."
"No, I have to finish my homework." Kaiya said rubbing her eyes.
"Are you sure?" Inuyasha asked.
"Yah, I'm sure." Kaiya said.
Inuyasha headed to the door and went doorstairs. Kaiya then went back to her math homework.
(two hours later)
Kaiya had just gotten started her english when Inuyasha came up with pizza. It was her favorite, pepperoni just like Inuyasha. Inuyasha and her had alot of things in common. Inuyasha tapped on her door and entered. "I brought you some pizza in case you were hungry." Inuyasha said.
"Thank you Inuyasha, I'm starving." Kaiya said gleaming at the pizza.
"Well that's what you get for not coming down for supper." Inuyasha said with a smile.
"Ya, ya, ya." Kaiya said well eating .
"Well I'm going to bed now, Kaiya. See ya in the morning." Inuyasha said while closing her door.
"Night Inuyasha" Kaiya said.
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Please leave comments good and bad, i wanna no if i can change anything, because even when i read over it i do miss stuff.
Jostanos - May 11, 2008 06:13 AM (GMT)
:excited: :victory: :kittylove: Another excellent update, Tomodachi Kagome!
However I did see one flaw at the end.
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"Well I'm going to be Kaiya, saw yah in the morning." Inuyasha said well closing her door.
"Night Inuyasha" Kaiya said.
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That should be:
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"Well I'm going to bed now, Kaiya. See ya in the morning." Inuyasha said while closing her door.
"Night, Inuyasha." Kaiya said. |
Other than that any other flaws that there may have been were trivial by comparison. ^^
Please continue when you may, Tomodachi Kagome. :)
OH!
By the way...
Good luck on your exams! ^^
Kagome07_16 - May 12, 2008 01:34 AM (GMT)
Ok now in chapter 3: we join Kaiya, Inuyasha, Kagome and everyone else about 3 months from now. You will also notice that everyone will now be in the story much more.
Now there will be new characters: some new friends and enemies from Kaiya and Inuyasha's past. Enjoy
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Chapter 3: Trouble Begins
November 3, 2008
Dear Journal,
It's been three months now since we have moved to Tokyo, and I have to say it's going pretty well. I have made new friends but my best friend is Ayame. I meet girl another named Rachel, she is from America. Rachel is japanese it's just she was born America. I have always wanted to go there, Rachel says if I do I have to go to L.A. or New York City.
Inuyasha has been doing good lately as well. He met a girl named Kagome who he was a major crush on. He also has friends named Sango, and Miroku. Theres this dude named Koga (Kagome's boyfriend), Inuyasha hates him. He says that Koga and Kagome have been fighting lately.
Oh wow 6:30 time for supper. Write Later!
~Kaiya~
"Kaiya it's supper time, hurry up I'm starving!" Inuyasha yelled from downstairs.
"Ok, ok Inuyasha take a pill." Kaiya hollered back.
Kaiya headed downstairs where she met he brother Inuyasha sitting on the chair waiting for her and the food. He was tapping his finger on the table when he saw Kaiya and said, "Well, finally." in a saracastic tone.
Kaiya just glared at Inuyasha well she sat down. "Rin, how is school?" Kaiya asked out of no where.
"It's ok, schools just well school." Rin said looking at her empty plate.
Finally Sesshomaru came out with our food, it was chicken and mashed potatoes. "Ok everyone dig in." Sesshomaru said sitting right between Kaiya and Rin. Inuyasha just grabbed the chicken and the spoon for the potatoes, he just stuffed his face. "Inuyasha slow down!" Kaiya said laughing at Inuyasha full mouth, knowing now he couldn't insult her. Inuyasha just glared and wanted to say something evil, but just kept eating his chicken.
After supper Inuyasha went into the living room and watched TV. Rin and Jaken went to go help Sesshomaru before he had to leave for work again. Sesshomaru has a big promotion coming up.
Kaiya went upstairs to her room to watch TV without any interruptions. As usually no one really talked for the night.
As Kaiya was getting ready for bed she heard a knock on her door. "Who is it?" She asked confused, she thought everyone had gone to bed. "Rin, can i come in?"
"Sure, doors unlocked."
Rin ran in and jumped on her bed. "So Rin what did you want?" Kaiya asked. She knew Rin was supposed to be in bed by 9:00 and its already 10:30.
"Nothing I just can't sleep, and I don't know why." She answered back with a yawn.
"Well, would you like to sleep in here tonight?" Kaiya said smiling.
"Are you serious, I would love too." Rin instantly went under the nice warm covers of Kaiya bed.
"Ya." Kaiya said, she walked over to the light switch, turned it off and crawled into bed.
"Night Kaiya."
"Good Night Rin."
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"Kaiya get up, before your late for school!" Inuyasha yelled. Sesshomaru must of already headed to work Kaiya thought.
"Ok, Inuyasha I'm up." Kaiya yelled, she looked around and noticed Rin was gone. She must have already woken up and headed for school with Sesshomaru. I was the only possible explaination.
Kaiya headed over to her dresser as usual. She found a white mini skirt and a blue tanktop. She grabbed he red and black volleyball uniform. It was her last game for the season so far they had been undefeated. It was againest her old school. Kaiya was kinda nervous, Tatsuo might be there. He has to be mad after Inuyasha kill his little brother.
"Kaiya hurry if we dont leave now we will be late!" Inuyasha yelled.
Kaiya grabbed her bag and ran down the stairs. Kaiya and Inuyasha than ran to school and almost didn't make it at all. Right went Kaiya got into the school she ran into Ayame. "Kaiya hurry up I already grabbed your books lets get going."
"Thanks so much Ayame." Kaiya said happily.
Ayame and Kaiya got into class and sat in there desks. Ayame turned around and asked, "So Kaiya are you going to the dance tonight?"
"I don't know it's up to Inuyasha." Kaiya said.
"Why is it up to Inuyasha he ain't your parent." Rachel said, she was sitting right across from Kaiya. Ayame and Rachel both looked at her waiting for to answer.
"He likes to act like he is, besides Sesshomaru is gone alot so he kind of his." Kaiya answered.
The bell rang and the girls looked straight ahead ready for Mr. Kadono to teach them so math.
"Damn I'm going to be late for class if I don't hurry it up." Inuyasha thought.
He saw his sister leave with her friends. Inuyasha got to his locker and grabbed his books and headed to his classroom. Inuyasha stepped into the classroom right as the bell rang and sat in his seat. Mr. Kadono wasn't in the classroom yet so everyone was talking.
"So, Inuyasha are you going to the dance?" Kagome asked.
"I don't know yet Kagome, if I go then Kaiya will have to go as well." Inuyasha said.
"Why can't Kaiya come, she has friends that will watch over her. Kagome said looking at him. "You don't need to be so protective." she then continued.
"Oh, yes I do she's my little sister." Inuyasha said.
Kagome just looked at him wondering why he was so over-protective of her. Brothers usually are but not in that sort of manner, "something had to have happened to make him like that." Kagome thought to herself.
[I](After School)
As usual Inuyasha headed home with Miroku and Sango well Kaiya went to practice. He looked over to his right and saw Kagome getting ready to head to the gym as well. She was in Volleyball just like Kaiya, except Kagome had made Varsity. Inuyasha just stared at her beauty then saw Koga and just starting glaring.
"Hey Inuyasha stop fantisizing about Kagome and lets get going." Miroku said well laughing.
Inuyasha turned around and saw Miroku smiling and Sango laughing. Inuyasha walked over to Miroku and pushed him into the locker and walked off.
Miroku ran to catch up and said,"Geez, Inuyasha I was only kidding."
Inuyasha looked at Miroku and started laughing. Sango was behind, shaking her head well saying, "Men."
(In the school's gym)
"Come on Kaiya lets get to the gym to warm-up." Ayame said. The girls ran to the gym to get ready for the game. Warm-ups had started already started went they got there.
"Hurry up girls." Coach Soga said.
The Kagoshima team was already here. Kaiya and Ayame ran to the locker and changed into there uniform. Were they ran back into the gym to they noticed there team had already started strentching. Kaiya looked around and saw Kagome and Koga. Kagome got to just sit and watch for now because she didn't play for another hour and a half. They're a cute couple but Koga has anger issues. Kaiya had to wave to Kagome and Kagome smiled and waved back. Kaiya and Ayame made JV so they didn't play the first game.
They went into the diner to get some snacks, then sit by the rest of the team and watch the Freshman/Sophmore team play.
Kaiya watched as the other girls played. She saw her friends Mayu, she had shoulder length hair in pigtails. Momiji and Botan were also on the team. There uniform were blue and white.
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The freshman team scored ended up being 22 to 25; Kagoshima winning. The JV girls strentched again, ran three times around the side of the gym, and did there spiking practice. Ayame and Kaiya were parnters as always. Kaiya had a couple of other friend on the freshman team like Nazuna, she had medium length black hair and was tiny figured. The other is Ruri she had long black hair which she always kept up.
Their game started out pretty boring just serving back and forth. It was finally my turn to serve. I hit straight toward the lebro but she hit back straight to our setter Sayo, she hit it to Ayame and Ayame spiked it. Kaiya ended up hitting it 5 consecutive times. The game got more exciting, by the end of it we won 25/16.
At the end of the game we went our locker room and the coach talked to us about what we did good and what could have done better. Alot of the girls either left with their uniforms on and some changed. Kaiya was the only girl that took a shower. "Kaiya, I'm going to leave ok." Ayame said well sitting on the bleacher.
"Ok Ayame, See you tonight at the dance." Kaiya yelled from the shower.
"Bye." Ayame said.
"Bye." Kaiya said back.
Kaiya finished washing her hair, she grabbed her towel and headed toward the stall to get redressed. She put her mini skirt and blue tank top with her white sandals. Kaiya went to the mirror to brush her long black hair. She put her hair into a messy bun so she could straighten it when she got home.
Kaiya grabbed her bag of things and left the locker room. She saw Koga and Kagome and first thought they were there waiting for her tell she saw Koga holding Kagome againest the wall.
Koga said something then slapped Kagome and threw her to the floor. Kaiya gasped she didn't want to say something but she couldn't help it.
"HEY, LEAVE HER ALONE!" Kaiya yelled and ran toward Kagome. "Kagome, are you ok?" She said well trying to help her up.
"Yea, but Kaiya you should've just ran." Kagome said shaking.
Koga glared and got even more mad and took it out on Kaiya. He threw Kaiya againest the wall so hard that it knock the air right of her. He said, "You didn't see nuttin so you don't say nuttin, got it." Kaiya just shook her head. "Good, if you do you're going to wish you hadn't." He just walked off after that.
Kaiya just shook her head then looked at Kagome. "Kaiya are you alright?" Kagome asked well getting up off the ground.
"Yah, I think so." Kaiya said well rubbing her back.
"Good." Kagome said.
"Well, I gotta get ready for the dance." Kagome said knowing that if she didn't show up it would get worse.
"Ok, and Kagome." Kaiya said.
"Yah." Kagome answered well turning around.
"Be careful."
Kagome smiled the walked off in the same direction Koga did. Kaiya headed home thinking what would happen to her if she told Inuyasha. Kaiya walked home scared knowing she would see him at the dance as well.
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End of Chapter 3; but i am bored so i may right chapter 4 tonight because it isn't going to be that long.
Next: Chapter 4: The Dance
Kagome07_16 - May 12, 2008 03:25 AM (GMT)
Chapter 4: The Dance
I can't believe Inuyasha is letting me go to the dance. Kaiya thought. Kaiya was brushing her hair just after straighting it. She kept on thinking about Koga and what he had said, her ribs and back still hurt from him throwing her againest the wall. She never did tell Inuyasha and truly wasn't planning on it. It was going to be an awesome night and she didn't need any destractions.
Kaiya still was wearing her white mini skirt still but added a blue tube top. She ended up leaving her hair down. She had already changed into her demon form so her hair was now a grayish/white. Kaiya always thought thought that this color match her skin tone better. Her friends love her little dog ears exspecially when the twitch.
Kaiya was just about to start her make-up when the doorbell rang. "Hey sis can you get that?" Inuyasha called from his room.
"Yah, it's probally Ayame anyway." Kaiya said back.
Kaiya headed downstairs through the kitchen and to the door. When she opened the door she saw Ayame standing there, she was wearing a blue jean mini skirt and a red halter with black sandals. "Hey Ayame, I love your outfit." Kaiya said as Ayame entered the house.
"Thanks, I love yours too, where did you get that mini?" Ayame said well pointing to her skirt.
"Wet Seal, it was on sale." Kaiya said. "Hey, you want a soda?"
"Um, sure i'll have pepsi." Ayame said getting ready to head upstairs.
Kaiya headed toward the fridge and grabbed two pepsi's. She handed Ayame hers, then they headed upstairs to finish getting ready for the dance.
When the girls got to Kaiya's room Ayame went straight to her dresser to check out her earrings. One pair in particular caught Ayame's eye, they were silver hoops with stars in the middle.
"Hey Kaiya can I barrow these earring." Ayame said well showing Kaiya the pair.
"Oh, sure." Kaiya said well putting on regular gold hoop earrings.
Kaiya was putting on clear lipgloss when Inuyasha entered the room, "Kaiya, are you guys ready to go?"
"Yah, just give us one more minute." Kaiya turned and said to her brother.
After a few minutes the girls headed downstairs where they found Inuyasha sitting on a chair. Inuyasha looked up where he saw the girls standing there waiting for him to get up so they could go. Inuyasha stood up and just headed to the door, he was wearing a black t-shirt that said "Born to Rock and Roll" in red with rip blue jeans.
"Come on girls, we don't have all day." Inuyasha said impatienly from outside of the door.
Ayame and Kaiya just looked at eachother and headed toward the door. It was quite as they started walking down the sidewalk to the school gym.
"So Kaiya, what are you going to do this weekend?" Ayame asked.
"Umm, nothing really just doing homework and stuff." Kaiya said. "How about you?"
"Nothing really just sitting at home, more or likely I will be on the computer chatting on MSN." Ayame said smiling.
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I can't believe Kaiya is wearing that, is she trying to attract every guy in the school. Inuyasha thought well look at how short her skirt was.
As the group kept on walking they start to her the beat of the music coming from the school. As they approached the doors of the gym the each got out there two dollars to get into the dance. Inuyasha them separated from Kaiya and Ayame. Right now "Pon Da Replay" was on. The girls were looking for the rest of the group before they started dancing.
Hey Kaiya, hey Ayame." Rachel said walking up to them.
"Hey Rachel." Ayame and Kaiya said at once.
The girls walked over to where the rest of the group was, thats where they met up with Aika. Aika had her long blonde hair it a high ponytail and was wearing mini shorts and a orange tank top that said "Baby Girl". Well there friend Hana who had short black hair and was wearing a blue tank top and a white mini skirt. They said, "Hey." and waved.
"Hey Hana, Hey Aika." Ayame said.
Right when they said, "Hey" the song "Low'' came on, the girls got in a circle and started dancing.
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When Inuyasha walked in the gym he looked for Miroku. When he spotted him in the back of the gym standing next to Sango with arm wrapped around her waist just getting slower and slower. By the time Inuyasha got over there he heard a loud smack and on the right side of Miroku's face was a huge red mark.
"Hey Miroku." Inuyasha said trying not to laugh.
"Hey Inuyasha." Miroku said rubbing his check.
Inuyasha spotted Kagome coming this way with that jerk Koga. Man, Kagome looks sexy with that black mini skirt. Inuyasha thought. Koga walked off real quick to go get a drink well Kagome approached the group.
"Hey Kagome." Inuyasha said smiling.
"Hi Inuyasha." Kagome said studdering then walked over to where Sango was sitting.
"What's her problem?" Inuyasha asked looking at Miroku.
"I don't know." Miroku said.
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"What's wrong Kagome, you would usually walk up and flirt with Inuyasha." Sango said looking at Kagome knowing something had to be wrong.
"Yah, I know I just didn't feel like it." Kagome said twittling her thumbs.
"Are you sure, something seems off with you Kagome." Sango said.
"Yep, I'm sure." Kagome said.
Koga walked over and sat next to Kagome and everything got quite. Inuyasha and Miroku walked over to the girls and Inuyasha just looked at Kagome and was going to say something and Koga went crazy. "I don't want you looking or saying anything to Kagome." Koga yelled.
''I think that's up to Kagome." Inuyasha said getting all up in Koga's face.
"I don't see why she would want to talk to a loser like you." Koga said smirking.
Inuyasha just completely lost it he through a punch and hit Koga right in the right eye. Koga was just about to through a punch when Miroku got in the middle of them. "Come on guys lets not get mad over something stupid lets just go dance and have a good time." Miroku said. Inuyasha couldn't hold in his anger but did agree with what Miroku said. He walked off angry looking for his sister but was having no luck.
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It was already almost the end of the dance and Kaiya was ready to go. She couldn't find Inuyasha so he thought he already went home. Kaiya said, "bye" to all her friends and headed out the door. She knew a shortcut that you had to go through the ally. She really didn't care about going through it she just wanted to get home. By the time she reached almost the center she could swear someone was following her.
"Inuyasha?" Kaiya said but when nobody answered she turned around and started walking again.
When she heard it again she quickly turned around found no one there. So she kept on walking but this time someone come behind her and threw her againest the wall, then she heard a familiar voice, Tatsuo .
"Hey baby, do you remember me?"
Jostanos - May 12, 2008 02:22 PM (GMT)
*chuckles* Sometimes, Kagome, I wonder if you make the minor mistakes that you do just so that I could catch them.
Any way..
A "MAJOR" Mistake was calling "CHAPTER 4: Dance" "CHAPTER 5:DANCE".
Other mistakes, minor as they may have been, were as follows:
1) You posted:
| QUOTE |
| I was the only explination |
instead of:
| QUOTE |
| It was the only explination |
*chuckles* There may be others, but it may take me awhile to sort them out and post them.
Kagome, Your story is an excellent one. Please continue to update it when you may, but I ask one simple favor of you:
Please spellcheck while you are posting it.
Or use Microsoft word.
Or, if needs be, heve some one "Beta check it".
( :hehe: that is a new term for me that I have seen in a couple of my fellow fic writer's fanfics. please ask them, or a moderator, for more information about it. *bows humbly*)
^^ Ja ne
Kagome07_16 - May 13, 2008 03:09 AM (GMT)
Chapter 5: The Dance (continued)
Kaiya couldn't say anything she was so shocked to see him here. She just looked straight at him wondering. "I asked you a question!" Tatsuo said shaking her with frustration. Kaiya was shaking and didn't want to say anything but if she didn't she knew there would be even more trouble.
"What.....how did you get out?" Kaiya was just shocked. Tatsuo just put his finger over her lips.
Kaiya shook knowing without any powers she was completely defenceless againest him. Inuyasha had to be so mad at her for what she said at the dance. Tatsuo must of found out and knew the perfect time to stike.
FlashBack
"Come lets go!" Inuyasha said grabbing Kaiya's arm.
"No, Inuyasha I don't want to leave." Kaiya said pulling back.
"NO, WE ARE LEAVING!" Inuyasha yelled.
"I am not leaving because of your girlfriend problems." Kaiya yelled back.
"I do not have girlfriend problems!" Inuyasha yelled.
"Whatever, I ain't leave with you, are you going to kill Kouga just because Kagome didn't want to talk to a loser like you." Kaiya yelled.
Kaiya didn't mean a work she said, she was just mad and she didn't want Kouga to get made at Kagome again. She didn't want Kouga to come after her either.
"OH, so your going to be that way FINE; always have to bring up the past."
Inuyasha walked out angry, Kaiya felt bad but didn't leave yet because she was hoping Bankotsu would ask her to dance. Which never did happen.
End of Flashback
When she came out of her flashback she saw Tatsuo looking straight at her with an evil glare. "Tatsuo, please let me go." Kaiya said shaking.
Tatsuo laughed and said, "I'm sorry Kaiya but I just can't let you go, let alone let you live." Tatsuo just laughed and held her tighter againest the cold brick wall. She look down and saw that he was grabbing something out of his pocket. She started to shake even more than she was.
He grabbed a knife and held it a neck. "Well this should be the last time we meet Kaiya." Tatsuo said laughing.
Tatsuo held the knife just starting to cut the skin. Kaiya started to twitch and try to get her hands free. Moving just made it worse on her part though. Kaiya started crying because of how much it hurt and knowing that she was going to die.
"Tatsuo please let me go." Kaiya said in a shaky crying tone.
Tatsuo just left and was just about to kill her when he heard something. Before Tatsuo could turn around he heard "Iron Reaver Soul Stealer."
Kaiya looked and said in a very soft happy tone, "Inuyasha." But she was weak and the cut on her neck was small but deep. She lost enough blood were she felt dizzy. When Tatsuo got hit in the back he ended up throughing her againest the ground making her passout.
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"Grr I can't believe Kaiya, she always brings up the past just to make me mad.'' Inuyasha thought as he walked down the sidewalk.
As Inuyasha was walking he found a rock and started to kick it. He didn't make it to very far. As he turned the corner he smelled something familiar it was his own sister's blood. Inuyasha ran looking to see where the scent was coming from. He could tell by the strength of the scent that it wasn't anything minor.
When he found her with that asshole Tatsuo. He was holding a knife to her neck, which made it him even more mad.
He ran and toward used "Iron Reaver Soul Stealer" to let go of his sister. Tatsuo might be a full demon but he was weak. He fell to the ground throwing his sister though to the ground with him. He was going to make sure this time though that that Tatsuo wasn't going to hurt her again.
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Kaiya woke up and saw Inuyasha holding her taking her home. She has happy that Inuyasha came and rescued her."I'm sorry." Kaiya said softly.
"No problem sis and I am sorry too." Inuyasha said smiling.
Kaiya smiled back and fell back into a deep sleep.
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Short but sweet, thats all for tonight because i have a huge 400 point project due none the less i have a pre-final that i have to get a 100% before i can take my actually final.
wish me luck
enjoy give me comments
~Heather~
Jostanos - May 14, 2008 12:59 PM (GMT)
Heather, for once I may honestly tell you these two words...
FLAWLESS VICTORY! ^__^
Good luck with your pre-exam and Final exams. ^^
And take..your..time..
There is not any rush to continue your fanfiction. :fan:
Kagome07_16 - May 20, 2008 04:26 AM (GMT)
Gunna am going to update after finals tomorrow; been working extra hard.
Kagome07_16 - May 23, 2008 04:22 AM (GMT)
Sry i have been busy and now its summer vacation i can update ASAP
Jostanos - May 24, 2008 04:20 AM (GMT)
Take your time, Heather. ^^
By the way..
How did you do on your exams?
Kagome07_16 - June 4, 2008 05:42 AM (GMT)
Sry I haven't been on I have been in japan. I will seriously update when I wake up tomorrow
Ohhh an straight A's
Jostanos - June 4, 2008 06:13 AM (GMT)
:cheer: :excited: :victory: YAISEE!
CONGRATULATIONS, HEATHER! ^^
Sleep well and take your time. :)
We will wait as long as necessary for you to update your wonderful fic, Heather. ^^
Tyls: >_> Sure we will. *gets bopped on the head* OW!
Slyt and Styl: *whistles innocently*