Title: Through The Looking Glass
Description: New idea that I wanna try out!
_PUNKROCKER_ - May 8, 2008 11:58 PM (GMT)
What would you do if you came home one night and found yourself alone? You're parents are away on vacation and tell you couldn't take you along. What would you do if your so called "Boyfriend" suddenly turned violent. Your only solace is the privacy of your bedroom. But you are not alone. Someone is watching. That someone isn't what you might expect. No they are not a peeping Tom. Just a simple lost soul with a wish. A simple wish to be there with you and hold you when you cry. One problem..he's trapped in the mirror. Yes, he is stuck in a simple mirror in another dimension that you might not be able to comprehend. This is what happens to eighteen year old Alexis Reid. She comes home from school one day and her life is turned completely upside down because of a simple mirror.
This is "Through The Looking Glass"...
princess_jojo_owns_fluffyinu - May 9, 2008 12:45 AM (GMT)
This sounds really Awesome.
Please, please write more.
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_PUNKROCKER_ - May 9, 2008 11:53 PM (GMT)
(WARNING: Mild Language)
Chapter One
She hit the door at 4:35, hair soaking wet and bangs sticking to her forehead. A deep grimace marked her face. She should have seen this coming. Her parents were always so busy. She usually walked home, but today was not so great. Somewhere between last period and setting off toward home, it had decided to rain. Like major downpour! Normally she liked rain, but today she had decided to wear her white 'Blink 182' Cami. Thankfully she had gotten home and away from the prying eyes of the male population. She trudged toward the stairs and was about to climb them when something caught her eyes. She stopped mid-step and walked toward the dining room table. There was a sheet of paper laying on it. She picked it up and read over it.
Dear Alexis,
You're father and I are so sorry for not being there to pick you up today. We had to catch an early flight. You see, me and your father need some alone time. Sorry for the late notice. There is money on the counter for take out if you want. We'll be home in two weeks.
Love you,
Mother and Father
She crumpled up the note and tossed it into the trash can in the kitchen. She then ran upstairs to her room. She slammed the door behind her, tossed her bag on the floor at the foot of her bed, and walked over to her stereo on the floor. She knelt down and sifted through the stack of CD's. She settled on Atreyu's "A Death-Grip On Yesterday". She placed the CD in the player and shut the lid. She pressed the seek button and changed it to track six. The sound of "Ex's And Oh's" filled the room. She smirked on and jumped on her bed. She laid on her stomach, arms tucked under the pillow. She closed her eyes and melted into the music.
He sat cross legged on the floor staring intently through the window. He peered into the room. Red walls, large bed with black and gray checkered blanket and matching pillow. A tall, oak dresser that the window had been connected to. TV on a red oak stand. The music bounced off the walls and made him relax. He loved her taste in music. It was so unpredictable and put him at ease. He smirked and watched her as she laid on the bed. He gently tugged at the collar of his black 'Atreyu' band shirt. It was fitted and hugged his lanky, well built torso. The band logo was on it in white and a few random blotches of hot pink were behind it. He watched her breathe evenly in and out. She had fallen asleep. Steel gray eyes darted toward the door as a sharp tapping noise sounded. His entire body tensed at the voice of the newcomer. "Babe, you in there?" His body tensed more and his hands formed into tight fists.
He watched the girl sit up and rub at her eyes. "Yeah, Nate. Come in." She called out. He watched as a blond haired boy about his age walked into the room. He watched the boy carefully as he walked toward the bed. He sat down next to the girl as she threw her legs over the edge. He didn't pay attention to the conversation, he was too focused on willing this "Nate" to leave. She didn't deserve him. Call it jealousy, but he had a bad feeling about the guy from the first time she brought him home. He watched Nate get off the bed and walked over to the stereo which was right by the window. His hands itched to reach out and punch the boy's lights out. If the window wasn't in his way, he would gladly do it without a second thought. "Why do you listen to this Shxt, Babe?' Nate asked, crinkling up his nose at the music she was listening to. "I listen to it because I like it. Is there a problem?" She asked folding her arms over her chest .
Nate's eyes darkened and in a flash he had her pinned to the bed, arm raised. "Don't you dare speak to me like that!" Nate snarled and slapped her hard across the face. His gray eyes turned darker like the sky before a thunder storm. His clenched his teeth and let out a low growl. He saw tears well up in her eyes and his heart broke. But before he could open his mouth to yell at Nate, Nate's lips collided with her's. His eyes widened and his blood boiled. What was up with this guy? He growled a bit louder and began to pound on the window. "Get off her, you stupid Slime ball!!" he continued pounding on the window, his rage growing more and more each second. "Oh when I get my hands on you, you will not be able to walk let alone have any use of your nose for a month!" He yelled, blood boiling. He pounded harder against the window, but to no avail. It wouldn't break. He wanted out. He wanted to grab Nate and beat the living daylights out of him.
"STUPID MIRROR!!!!!" he shouted at the top of his lungs.
princess_jojo_owns_fluffyinu - May 10, 2008 05:12 AM (GMT)
Jostanos - May 20, 2008 07:05 AM (GMT)
A very interesting story,my friend, and it has caught my interest. ^^
Please continue when you may.
By the way:
FLAWLESS VICTORY ^__^
Ninja.girl - May 24, 2008 10:43 PM (GMT)
_PUNKROCKER_ - May 25, 2008 04:00 PM (GMT)
Chapter Two
Nate pulled back and looked around the room. His icy blue eyes scanned the area for the source of the voice. "What was that?" Nate asked, eyes still darting. He got off Alexis and stood by the bed. Alexis sat up and looked around too. She had heard the voice, but she was confused about how Nate heard it. "I don't know, Baby." Alexis said, calmly. Nate rolled his eyes and leaned in. He planted a soft kiss on her lips and walked toward the bedroom door. "I'll see you around, Babe" He said, opening the door. All she could do was nod and watch the door close. She listened closely and heard the front door close and the engine to Nate's car start up and fade out. She breathed a sigh of relief and laid back down. She threw her arms above her head and stared at the ceiling. "Where did that voice come from?" She thought, closing her eyes. Her eyes shot open and she looked toward her dresser that had a huge mirror attached to the top of it. She furrowed her eyebrows, wondering if the voice came from there. No one was home so it was unlikely that it came from outside her room. She watched the mirror for a moment more, then her eyes began to grow heavy again. She turned on her side and fell into a peaceful sleep. A small cat nap wouldn't hurt...would it?
He rested the palm of his hand on the window. It figures that it would be a one-way window right now. It was daylight, so of course she couldn't see him. But he could clearly see her. He sighed and rested his forehead against the cold glass. He closed his eyes and thought things over. He was sure the headmistress would not be pleased with what he was doing. But he could really care less. He wanted out of there. He wanted to be out there with her. He opened his eyes and a smile came to his face when he saw that she was asleep. He let out a soft laugh and stood up. He stuffed his hands into the pockets of his tight, baby blue jeans. He looked behind him as a voice in the distance sounded. he groaned, knowing full well who it was. He ran his hand through his coal black hair. "Alexander, Alexander! There you are!" another male voice called as they came closer. Alexander turned as a boy with dark brown hair with blond lowlights slid to a stop in front of him. The boy leaned over, resting his hands on his knees and breathed heavily. Alexander smirked at the boy and waited until he was ready to speak. "Good day to you too, Markus. How are you on this fine day?" Alexander chimed, casually. Markus straightened up and glared at Alexander. "Don't give me that. You know you're not supposed to be here in the daylight." Markus hissed, his eyes narrowed. Alexander rolled his eyes and placed a hand on Markus' shoulder. "Markus, Markus. You need to calm down. You worry way too much, you know that?" Alexander replied, his dark gray eyes lightening up and a smile came to his face. Markus just sighed and crossed his arms over his chest. Alexander shook his head and looked back at Alexis. "So this is the girl you can't stop talking about." Markus asked with a smirk. Alexander nodded and watched her turn her back to him. "Ouch...that must have hurt. a new voice chimed. Arms were thrown over the pair's shoulders. This new voice made Alexander nearly jump out of his skin and Markus laugh.
"BRETT DON'T DO THAT!!!" Alexander cried, placing a hand over his racing heart. Markus and Brett laughed. Alexander made a small 'hmph' and looked back at Alexis. "Sorry, Dude. i couldn't resist." Brett explained. Alexander simply rolled his eyes. "So, I take it that Sir Panics a lot over here informed you on the rules about this? You're already dancing on the Headmistress' last nerve. Don't push it by getting caught." Brett warned, staring Alexander down with dark Mocha colored eyes. "Yeah, Yeah. I know." Alexander droned, looking back at Brett, his gray eyes darkening a bit. "Hey, I don't panic that much!" Markus shouted, finally joining the conversation. This made Alexander laugh and Brett snort. Uh..Yeah you do, Markus." Alexander said, simply. Markus pouted and turned his head away. Brett laughed and ran a hand through his dark blond hair with brown roots. Alexander turned back to Alexis, who was starting to wake up. 'That's our cue, let's go!" Brett hissed, grabbing Markus and Alexander and pulling them out of the room.
((There you have it! The almighty update! Thanks to all the great comments. It helps a lot! TADOW!!! :boxing: :victory: ))
Jostanos - May 25, 2008 04:10 PM (GMT)
:victory: :cheer: :kittylove: Another excellent update, amigo!
Picking up directly from where you left off without a hitch.
:hilarious: That abusive fool didn't know where that vengefull voice was coming from either!
But I think the girl may be beginning to get the idea.
:hehe: we will just have to wait and see won't we?
Please update when you may.
Ninja.girl - May 25, 2008 09:16 PM (GMT)
Thats odd.
A society on the other side of mirrors...
In-ter-est-ting.
More soon.
Volital - May 26, 2008 01:30 AM (GMT)
^^ I finally clicked the link on your sig! And I am glad I did so!
Alyssa: Wow.
L: *pushes up nerd glasses* You need to make a paragraph for the Four T's: Topic, Time, Territory, and Talker. Otherwise it gets confusing. Like this:
Truth: What's up? L: nothing much, you? Alyssa: I feel odd. Truth: Lol sugar rush! L and Alyssa: YAY!!!!! Al: I shall drown cats. Alyssa: O.o wtf? Ed: HEY! I WAS GOING TO DROWN CATS! Everyone: O.O"
See? It's odd. Well.. Actually, it's just me being odd. But seriously, add a line after you change talkers. Much simpler.
But seriously, IT'S AWESOME!! T.T Why can't I make up good fictions like that? I can only do fanfictions and complete crack...
EDIT: Are you going to continue soon?