Song of the forest…..

Can you hear it...?
Can you feel it….?
Can you see it……?
The song of the forest……

The purity of the forest spring is tinkling like a bell…..
The forest wind is whistling like a flute…..
The rustling leaves in the trees are like a gossamer silk….
The music of the insect is like a choir in harmony…….

Sliver light of the moon is illuminating the beauty of the forest……
Firelights are playing in the trees attracting spirit of the forest….
How fine is the sound...?
The chorus of the song......

Can you hear it...?
Can you feel it.....?
Can you see it.......?
The song of the forest.......

I adore your similes. ^^ Adores them. I think they're cute, and they kind of remind me of Lord of the Rings and my D&D days.
.... Don't make fun of me. xD

The word forest is repeated SO MANY TIMES throughout the poem... and it's insanely annoying.
And elipses are only three periods long, love. :3

Personally if you actually fixed the punctuation so it didn't sound so dreary and long, along with fixing how many times the word forest is mentioned... this would be a pretty good poem. Like I said, your similes are awesome, and I love how the first and last stanza are repeated; it gives it an almost haunting feel too it.

Great job. Keep writing, hun. :3