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Title: Things Undone
Description: A new twist in Inuyasha fanfictions. :]


+Daymare+ - May 29, 2008 06:41 PM (GMT)
Okay, darlinks. I have come up with a weird little idea for a Inuyasha fanficcy.
I won't explain much; because the story will explain itself... or so you will think that.
Mm. I forgot the names of Kagome's friends, so she has two new ones.. Ane and Reina. They won't be in the whole story but they'll play their parts.

Disclaimer: I do not own Inuyasha. Never will. Because if I did... I would be rolling in dough, and lots of it. x]

Title: Things Undone
Genre: Drama/Humor/Adventure
Rated: T
Anime: Inuyasha [Of course.]


[Prologue]


"I can't believe finals are coming up." Kagome moaned to her friends as they roamed the hallway, heading towards the door to go home.
"Neither can I. I can't believe the year is almost over!" Ane said as she smiled as usual.
"Whoot! Summer! Summer!" Said Reina as she pumped her fist in the air as she twirled once, causing the girls to explode into a giggle fit.

-

'Yeah...I really can't believe the school year is over. More time to spend with InuYasha . . . I guess.'
Kagome had long split from her ditzy friends, Ane and Reina, and was walking home.
"I wonder what InuYasha is up too." Kagome blurped aloud as she stopped in her tracks and sighed. She started walking again; unaware that she had gained company.
'There really should be a faster way home... Maybe if I turn down this alley?'
She turned down a worn alley that led onto the next street. Unlike the usual cliche of dark, and dead-end alleys, that one was actually pretty well-lit and hey; It had an outlet.
Kagome stopped. She was only a few feet from the exit but why couldn't she go on? She quickly turned around; And boy what a site to see.
"Little lady.. a little lost aren't we?" A crimson haired boy said in front of her. Kagome couldn't breath at that point, for the boy looked like a spitting image of Inuyasha. . . without ears!
She finally caught her breath. "Urh, no. What makes you think that?"
"You tell me; I've been watching yo-" Whack!
"PERV!" Kagome continue to beat the boy over the head with her bookbag.
"Goddamnit! It's not what you think!" She let him up as he dusted his self off; looking a bit pissed.
"Ah. Sorry." Replied Kagome sheepishly, her cheeks turning a light shade of pink.
"Whatever.." The boy replied, as he crossed his arms. A silence falling before them. A very akward silence.
"Um, so... Just, who are you?" Kagome got the nerve to ask. 'Exactly, who is this guy, and why does he look like Inuyasha... and why are we talking in an alley?!'
"The name's Daiuke." He said nothing else as he suddenly grabbed Kagome's arm and dragged her back the way she came.
"Wait, where, what?" She allowed herself to get dragged. Everything was happening a bit too fast, and she was confused.
What the hell is going on?

-

Yes my readers, what the hell is going on?
Well... you all will just find out in Chapter One.
:]
Hope you enjoyed that little taste.

shezu_803 - May 30, 2008 01:11 AM (GMT)
Me: I like it!!

Shadow: Wat the HELL is goin on.

Rikku: Calm down Shadow they will explain it in the next chappie.

Brooke(my sis): I just got here wat in the HELL is goin on here?!?!?!

Sekeo (my friend): Well someone who looks like Inuyasha only no ears and red hair is kind of kidnapping Kagome.

Midorika: People just calm down and wait for the next chappie.

Me: FINALLY some one who understands me.

Everyone: MAKE US....

everyone plus me and Midorika: UPDATE OR WE KILL YOU!!!

Me: not kill you just pester you

like_light_to_the_flies - May 30, 2008 08:27 PM (GMT)
I'd have waited till you actually had the first chapter done before putting this up.

And, at the moment, I will not critique it since there isn't a whole lot to critique, so I'll save it for when the first chapter comes up.

Volital - May 31, 2008 12:20 AM (GMT)
Me: *eye twitch* WHY CAN'T I WRITE THAT GOOD!???!!

Alyssa: You do write good, you created us, remember?

Truth: OMFG GOOD STORY CONTINUE NAO!!!!

Me: Truth... good idea!! (to you) CONTINUE NAO!!!

KagomeInuyashasluv - May 31, 2008 12:38 AM (GMT)
Ashieyu: Great!! What will Daiuke do to kagome we'll never know.

Inuyasha: Okay kid your gettin on my nerves and who is Daiuke?

Kagome: Oswari!(Sit) Sorry Ashieyu he has a short temper.

Inuyasha: Damn right I do and I wouldn't need one if you'd stop doing that!

Kagome: Doing what? Saying "Oswari"?

Inuyasha: *Phomph* Fankzz alot wench.

Kagome: Oswari! Oswari! Oswari! Oswari! Oswari! OSWARI!!!

Inuyasha:* Phomph, Phomph, Phomph, Phomph, Phomph, BOOM!!!!*

Me: Update!!

Jostanos - May 31, 2008 04:21 AM (GMT)
You caught my interest, Daymare.

An Inuyasha look-a-like sees and sorta captures Kagome.

What will happen next?

:excited: :victory: Update so that we may find out! :victory: :excited:

KagomeInuyashasluv - May 31, 2008 06:22 PM (GMT)
UPDATE!!!!




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