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Title: Binded
Description: A new poem of mine...name might change


Lady ZeiKumi - June 18, 2008 04:24 AM (GMT)
Okay! This is a brand new poem that I'm working on. I finally got inspired today so this is just the rough draft. Help would be appreciated. ^___^ I don't know about the title...it might change. I need help with that too.

Binded

I’ve always been here
I’m to scared to move on
Afraid to be without you
I don’t want to be all alone

The clock ticks so slowly
Days, months, seasons pass
When will it finally happen?
My hope refuse to fade, it lasts

Tarnished by the swiftness of time
Hurt by my own inhibitions
Blindly I continue to chase this dream
I am my own competition

He’s the one for me
I can’t let him slip away
It’s futile to try
His mind can’t be changed

Maybe I’m crazy
That’s what I feel
With this indelible emotion
My will power of steel

When will be freed?
Only time will tell
While my wish still follows me
Burning like the flames of hell

Ashita Genki Ni Naare - June 18, 2008 05:05 AM (GMT)
I dunno. Binded sounds odd to me. Bound would just sound better if I was writing it...

On the actual poem, I like it a lot! It's very nice sounding and flowing to me. I don't read poetry though, so don't listen to me.

Lady ZeiKumi - June 18, 2008 06:09 AM (GMT)
I didn't know what to put as a title so I just put binded. If it's not a word then, OOPS! I always say binded. >.< lol

Maybe I'll change the title anyway. I'm glad you like it. :]

Ashita Genki Ni Naare - June 18, 2008 06:23 AM (GMT)
Binded and Bound can both be used. You can say "I was binded to him in so many ways." or you could say "I was bound to him in so many ways." But as a stand alone phrase, the word bound just sounds more appealing to the ear. But Binded is much more unique. It all depends on the way you want your title to appear to the audience.

Lady ZeiKumi - June 18, 2008 02:55 PM (GMT)
I like the way Bound sounds better. ^___^




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