Yup yup! I talked to someone yesterday, and like usual, he inspired me to finish this poem of mine. I've been working on it for a while but didn't know exactly how to do it. It's funny. I forgot how to write poetry until I found him again. <3

Anyways, enjoy this new poem. If you have an ideas of how to improve it and make it a bit more unique, please go right a head and share them with me. =]


Love is Disease

It impairs my judgment
It weakens my body
Pulsing through my veins
Shaking my knees

I’ve been restless for a while
It’s my shortness of breath
It’s what keeps me alive
Hangs me on the brink of death

The pain is immense
The tears never delay
Seeping through my skin
They won’t go away

Will I ever find the cure?
Its spores are nestled in me
Feeding on my tainted heart
Love is nothing more than a disease

... woah. a bit depressing, but true. that's what makes it so sad! the reality of it! oh... and, what format were you going after? Diamonte? Free Verse? Sonett?

To be honest...I have no idea. lol I just write and it flows. I'm not really familiar with any of those words. I'm weird. lol

And thanks. Yeah, its depressing. I was feeling angsty when I wrote it. =]