Title: New Days New Love
Description: ...I can't describe it
shezu_803 - June 20, 2008 06:28 AM (GMT)
Here goes nothing
Prologue:
Hi my name is Shadow Amane. This is the story about how my life went from normal to well as far from normal as possible. It all started when my step dad made me move to America. If my life wasn’t bad enough already, I’m telepathic because I'm a demon. One day I run into my old friend Kagome Higarishi. Now I am trying to defeat an evil half demon named Naraku who can make reincarnations of himself, and I find out that I am really from the feudal era. I have to travel with a half demon named Inuyasha, a demon exterminator named Sango, a monk named Miroku, a fox kitsune kit named Shippou, and my friend Kagome. now don't get me wrong Kagome and I have one thing in common we are both mikos. Now I find out something about the half demon I travel with. He’s my long lost brother!! During my travels I meet another demon who Inuyasha claims is his older brother. I start training my miko and demon powers so they will work in harmony and not kill me. Along my travels I go to different dimensions. In these new places my ninja training that picked up from Kohana will come in use. I still have to tell Kagome of my horrible encounter. While I was in Kohana I told one of my closest friends that I was a yokai. Bad things happened that I don’t want to happen again. Soooo let the adventures begin!!!
Tell me if i should continue
canongal102 - June 20, 2008 01:40 PM (GMT)
you have peaked my interest
shezu_803 - June 22, 2008 06:10 AM (GMT)
Okay I will post hte first chapter...
Chapter 1
"Damn it! I'm late AGAIN."I yelled as I bolted out of my bed. I'm about 5'5 so my bed is pretty big. I got up and walked over to my mirror. Once I reached it I just stared at my reflection in my mirror.
The boys at my last school said I was the prettiest girl there. My hair is about down to my ankles and is red about mid way down my back my hair gets lighter. Eventually it turns to an eerie shade of moonlight silver. My eyes are like new golden rings with a ruby in the middle. Or thats what my sister says. My ears are pointed and pierced with ruby earrings. To the left side of my forehead there is a Japanese character that stands for ‘ Hate’. Under my eyes there is 1 black streak then a deep plum under the black. A beautiful shade of black, red, and blue grace my eyelids and wrap around my waist. My neck has a half black and half white streak that wraps around it. Red jaggedly wraps around my wrists and ankles. Finally around my right arm there is a deep plum spiral and over my heart there is a deep plum 6 point star.
My room could be mistaken for a boys room because it is all black. The walls are black and at the bottom it is painted to look like real fire. My bed is red with black sheets. My pillows are black, red, and mixture of both colors. On the right side of my room my dresser and full-body mirror rest there. On the left side it is the doors to my to closet. The carpet is black of course.
I jumped out of bed and got dressed in my red jeans, red long sleeve shirt, and black sneakers. I started to brush out my hair. When I was done i started to go down the stairs. I stopped in the middle of the stairs to remember what my dad told me before he died.
~~~~~~~Flashback~~~~~~~
Dad and I was playing a card game and watchin T.V. Then someone set our house on fire. One of the lose boards fell on my dad and i started to scream. "Shadow don’t. I have to tell you something about you. You are a yokai-miko." After he said that he died because of the lack of air. Then before a bored fell on me my yokai powers erected a barrier so I wouldn’t die. I ran out of the house and into the caring arms of my older sister Kaiga.
~~~~~~~~end flashback~~~~~~~
I still miss my step dad. I ran the rest of the way down and met up with my sister Kaiga.
Kaiga was 19 years old. She has long black hair and she always has it in a braid. Like me she has pointed ears but she does have three dark red jewels on her fore head. She always wears a red shirt. Right now she is wearing her favorite red shirt, it is a Abercrombie shirt. She is wearing her plain blue jeans and white sneakers. And her eyes are ruby red.
"Are you ready to go beauty queen?" Kaiga asked since she knew the name 'beauty queen' made me mad.
"Ha ha very funny. Are we going to go to school now?" I asked with clear anger and a look that says ‘ call me that again and you die’.
"Sure." We ran out to her red mustang and left for school.
please tell me if i need to improve on anything!!!
Ashita Genki Ni Naare - June 22, 2008 10:26 PM (GMT)
It's pretty well written aside from the fact that it's short. But I have a question, what show is this crossed over with?
shezu_803 - June 27, 2008 02:30 PM (GMT)
Chapter 2- First Day Of School
We were late for our first class Math. I never like Math. Kaiga knocked on the door and a man in his mid 50s opened the door. He was wearing a Dark blue shirt over-coat and a white under shirt. His red tie didn't really look to good either.
"Can I help you?" he asked. He was staring at me. I was starting to get on my nerves too. ‘ I guess it’s because of my hair’ I thought.
"Yes we are the new students." My sister explained. The teacher stepped to the side so we could see into the class room.
"Oh come in." He said. as he sidesteped for us to come in.
We walked into the room and i noticed that there was only 1 other girl. Me and my Kaiga had to stand in front of everybody. I made a mental note. There is fifty students.
"Class we have two more students. Shadow Hitsugia and Kaiga Hitsugia." The teacher introduced us to the class.
I look at the girl and thought 'I know her from somewhere.'
"Shadow why don't you sit by Kagome?" He asked me.
"Okay." I walked over to where she was. The teacher walked up to the board and wrote our assignment and homework. An hour later the bell rang. I got up and walked over to my sister.
"Hey Shadow. Why were you late?"
"I don't really know." I said as we left the class room.
I have history next, then lunch. I went to room 23 and took my seat by Kagome again. we got out our really thick textbooks and read pages 1-14. The bell rang for lunch. I ran to meet my brothers at the door.
" What are you going to eat Shadow?" Kaiga asked as Kagome walked up to us.
"Or are you not going to eat again?" she added.
"I'm not going to eat." We walked into the lunchroom and my sister got her favorite...pizza. She finished eating so I started to leave. Then the bell rang for class. I walked to my Designing class and once again sat by Kagome.
“ What are you going to draw?” I asked her. She on a serious face and thought. She open her mouth and shut it three times and finally spoke.
“ I’m going to draw to draw the priestess Midoriko. What are you going to draw?” She asked Her eyes sparkled with curiosity.
“ Uhhh. The legendary dog yokai family, the Taisho’s. I’m drawing all seven of them.” I simply said.
“ Oh. Wait a minute I thought that there were only three. Who are the other four?” she asked.
“ You wouldn’t believe me if I told you. But three of them is Izayoi, another is Ai, and the last one is a hanyou named Inuyasha.”
“ That’s got to be hard. Tell me who the last one is. And are you going to draw a background?” She wanted to know the exact picture I was going to draw.
“ Ya. For the background I’m drawing the castle of the moon. I‘m taking this class because I‘m an expert drawler.” Her jaw would’ve hit the floor if it wasn’t attached to her head.
The teacher handed out paper. On the board she wrote out the rules of designing class.
I started off by drawing me. I got into detail by showing the hair as individual strands. Not a huge glob. I drew my old kimono that I have at home.
Then I moved on to draw Sesshomaru. I drew his hair as individual strands. I drew his white silk haori and hamakas. Next I drew his crescent moon. I drew his markings. Then I drew his chest plate. I drew his sword Tokijin, which was tricky.
Now to Izayoi her long black hair which was knee length. She is wearing a white kimono too, but on top of her kimono she had a red jacket. The jacket had golden feathers and crescent moons.
Inu Taisho was the hardest one to draw. He looks like a lot Sesshomaru. I drew his crescent moon. His marks are more jagged then Sesshomaru’s. His clothes was like Sesshomaru’s as well. His armor was different though.
Next to Inu Taisho I drew my mom Suki. She has fire red hair put in a high pony tail. Her eyes are dull and red. If you look really close you can see little flames in them. I drew her long royal blue kimono. Next I drew her marks, a flame was resting on her hands and feet.
Next to Suki I drew Inuyasha the middle child. I drew his long moonlight white hair, and stopped at his butt. Next his little doggie ears that rested on his head. His red haori and hamakas fit his style perfectly.
Someone seen my drawing and shouted “ Everyone look at what Shadow drew!” The person who said that took my paper when I wasn’t looking.
He took the paper to the teacher and showed her.
“ My, my! Shadow this is better than what I can do. You must have experience.” The teacher praised. That must be hard for a teacher to admit that a student is better than them.
I walked up to the front of the room and retrieved my paper. I walked back to my seat and sat down. And finished by drawing the back ground.
I started to color my picture with colored pencils. There was some time left before the bell rang. So I drew and colored an exact replica picture.
The bell rang and we turned in our pictures. I kept the spare.
I walked down the hall to my Karate class. I was the only girl there though. I walked up to the teacher. He looked at me like I was crazy!
“ Yes how can I help you?” He asked still staring at me. Hearing the teacher talk to someone made the boys look up from what they were doing.
“ Yeah can I my karate uniform?” I asked anger flaring in my eyes. His eyes went wide. His mouth was wide open. “ Hey shut your mouth you’re attracting flies.”
“ Right. Now why are you taking karate?” curiosity laced his words.
“ Well I need at least two good classes. The stress of the day will be let out during this class.” I explained clearly angered at the thought of him not thinking I could handle this class.
“ Okay before you can take this class though you need to prove that you can handle karate.” He said pointing al the fighting ring.
“ Okay. This won’t take long.” I said to myself while walking into the ring. Someone else walked into the ring with me to fight.
“ His name is Shun.” the teacher said “ And you are?” both he and Shun asked.
“ I’m Shadow, Nice to beat you.” I said confident that I would win. The teacher Coach Kyle stood at the right of the ring rambling on about the rules.
“ Now Shun is our best karate student here so don’t feel bad if you lose.” coach Kyle said. “ Begin!” He screamed as the bell rang for the fight to begin.
“ I won’t go easy on you.” I said as I charged at him. I dropped down to the floor and smirked when he got in the right spot I plunged my left fist into his stomach. I threw him into the air. I leaped up above him and brought my left foot down in the middle of his back. He crashed into the ring and I landed gracefully. He tried to get up but only knocked the wind out of him.
“ It’s over.” I said walking over to the coach. “ Now about that uniform…” I said already bored. He started shaking because the match was only thirty seconds long.
“ Here.” He said. I left to go change into my new uniform. ‘The belt’s a little long but it’ll do.’ < Anyone else want to fight me?> I asked telepathically. The boys looked around then at me.
“ Yeah I do!” shouted a boy from the back. He walked up so I could see what he looked like.
His hair was as red as blood, and laid down. His skin was light but not white. On his forehead there was red writing that said ‘ Love’. his eyes were dull green with no pupil. Around his eyes it was black like he hasn’t slept in forever. His shirt was royal red as was his jeans. And to top it off he was wearing black sneakers.
‘ Is this a boy version of me’ I asked myself. “ Okay I accept you challenge. Come by my mansion after school.” he nodded his head as if to say Ok.
‘ First up after me was that guy who challenged me. Wonder what his name is.’ I thought.
“ Next is Gaara! Verses Kiba!” The coach said. He walked to the side of the ring again and screamed “ Begin!”
‘ His fighting style is like mine.’ I thought.
Without a word he charged at this Kiba guy and knocked the wind out of him. Next he swiftly brought his hand down on the back of his neck. I heard something crack.
“ The match is over.” I said for Kiba’s sake. “ Let me take you to the nurse.” I said as I walked over to him. I put his arm around my neck as I practically dragged him out.
If there is anything thats needs improvement tell me please.