your a young female dog demon.
your name's Angel
age: well you look 17
you have breautiful white hair with black streaks a black cresant moon on your forhead and amythist stripes on your cheeks and wrists and beyond that well ...blushes.... you wear a Kemono like Sesshoumaru but insted of were it's red it is black you have two Katanas and a long bow you use a poison attack like Seshoumaru but it's not to potent as his your eyes are so golden

:kittylove: :kittylove: CHAPTER 1 :kittylove: :kittylove:

You and Kagome were walking home from school. Kagome was flustered at houjo for giveing her things to help her get well..."Angel, do you think I should go out with houjo? I mean he's nice, and he's not like Inu- ...uh, never mind.'' you look at Kagome and laughed. '' Kagome your a riot. Houjo is a flirt .He likes you, but he is too tame. You need a hottie! heehee! thats what I think.'' Kagome hit you lightly on the arm blushing. '' Angel, I don't need a hottie! Well... what about? Who do you like?'' You blush and glare at her playfully. " I'm not the one we're talking about. Besides, guys have rabies and cooties. I don't need one that I can do with out.'' Kagome gasped and laughed holding her sides. You glanced at the watch on your wrist, and realised it was getting late. '' Kagome I gotta go home now. See you tomarrow. If your there that is. Your always sick!'' you stuck you tounge out playfuly and walked away. She gave you a rasbarry and laughed. '' See you tomarrow Angel!''

The slowly went from light blue, to dark. You rushed home, hopeing you weren't late. "My dad's gonna kill me!" When you arrived home, you slowly walked in. '' Mom! Dad! I'm home!'' Your dad looked up from reading the paper and your mom smiled at you. '' Welcome home dear. How was your day?'' Your mom set a tray with your favorite snacks in front of you and a glass of milk...''' Oh the usual. Mom I got to study for history.'' Your dad glanced at you with intrest. '' What do you need to study?'' You chewed a strawberry. '' Oh the feudal era dad. We're trying to determine if there were things called 'youki' during that time..'' your dad frowned as you got up and went to your room to study.........

(your parents)
"Lorgin we should tell her soon. I mean if we are to find a way to save the youki race''.. your dad groweled...yes he groweled.... your dad and mom are dog demons in human form...''I know Mina but she is not ready we have sence the rift between world at the Higorashi shrine. We will tell her on her birthday but not now sweatheart......"

:kittylove: :kittylove: Chapter 2 :kittylove: :kittylove:

You were trying to do your homework when a constant burning started in your vains. You didn't know what was happening. Your gritted your teeth, trying hold back the pain. Your stomach fewlt as if it were on fire and your fingers were tingleing like crazy! You droped the pencil and all of a sudden some sort of liquid seeped out of your finger tips. A small drip of the dark liquid landed on the paper and it instantly melted and burned. You gasped and slowly got up from the bed. Your hands were covered in the liquid, but it they didn't melt and burn like the paper. "What's happening to me?" You screamed. Your father came though the door almost breaking it down. '' What is it sweetie? whats wrong?'' You whimper as the pain continued. You know you sounded pathetic but the pain was gettin worse. your dad took your hand and led you to the bathroom. He filled the sink with water then he put both of your hands in the water and your mom came. '' whats going on Lorgin?'' your dad made you sip some ice cold water '' I beleave it's begun...'' your mom gasped and you said '' whats happening to me? why dose it burn so bad?'' your dad put his arms arround your waist and you herd a low sound from him like a low growel. his chest seemed to vibrate with the sound '' I will tell you after this has passed little one. now relax and keep drinking this water. Mina dear, go get some fruit and a peace of meat she will need it.'' your dad continued to hold you while you drank. the burning was going away and your mom came back. your dad took the fruit and meat from your mother. '' eat this sweetheart. it will help with your tummy...'' you ate slowly. the pain had lessend and you felt better. your tummy cooled, your finger tips stoped throbing, and your dad then brought your hands out of the water and dried them. he picked you up and took you back into your room. Laying you on your bed your mom cleaned up the burnt paper.

....in the feudal era....
golden eyes stared at a cresunt moon as the wind blowed softly gentily playing with his long white hair he sat on a bolder and watched the moon and stars a little girl sleeping next to his leg while a toad like creature slept near the fire...he closed his eyes and injoyed the night air he bent his head back as the wind picked up his hair fly'n in a wild desray dance'n with the wind and a half smile played on his lips...Sesshoumaru was content and it showed to no one but him...a low growel escaped his throat......beautiful....sighs...... :daydream:

I love it!!! By the way i wont get mad if you did but did you use my OC Shadow just change her name? if you did i dont care. Please update!

Its spelt as veins, not vains.

Also, only one person can speak per paragraph.

It spelt growled...
And can you use the enter button some times?
It's a little hard to read when all the sentences bunch up.
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I use to do that to... >> <<
But. Shhhh....

I like this story a lot! Please update when you get the chance!