Im just going to show you the preview to what this story will be like. ENJOY!!!


Preview - Oh Cruel Angel

" Why do you call me that? Is a name you give many of your Tokyo ladies?" said Kagome.

" No, only you." He touched a fingertip- only a fingertip- to her cheek. Her skin was warm even in the night air, and soft, so soft.

Then she stepped away. " I don't beleive you." She said shakly.

Did she sound breathless? He grinned like a demon in the dark, but didn't answer. God he wished he could simply pull her into his arms, open her sweet lips beneath his, feel her breath in his mouth, and her breasts against his chest, He stood and ventured a step towards her, untill they almost touched and she had to turn her pale face up to his.

A lock of her hair bridged the scant inches between them and caressed his throat. She reached her hand out, hesitated, then touched his cheek lightly with one fingertip. He felt the contact sizzle throughout his body down to his very toes.




Tell me if you like and if i should contiue

Oooh, dramatic romance. Hello ~.^ Lol.

I like the idea.

Although, with your writing; why do you put a space between your "s? (pathetically, I don't even know what it means...) and there are some spelling errors.

Other than that, continue ^^ I would like to see how this goes.

I dont know why I do that its just a habit. Any way i will post the first chapter later. and just so you know they will be OOC.

Much improved my friend...This is so much better...Just make sure that your chapters a little longer than your previous story...Nice work, please continue.

pretty good =] please continue the writing

i am gonna post chapter one tomorrow... BELEIVE ME!!!! it will be alot longer. so untill then be painteint. oh and if anyone wants to they can creat a person for it. and is there anything i need to improve on tell me please!


Shadow- till tomarrow

Nice detail. I like very much. Keep it comin...

Not to be a bother (and please forgive me for double-posting, even six days apart) but...
UPDATE!!!

Okay okay i will update... Just so you know everyone in my story will be OOC except for people's OCs like iRNrevrSS's OC. I will start now.



Chapter 1


The dead man at Kagome Higurashi's feetlooked liked a fallen god Apolllo, or more likely Mars, the bringer of war, having taken human form and struck down from the heavens to be found by a miko on her way home. Excetp gods rarely bled. Lr died for that matter.

"Bankotsu?" Kagome called over her shoulder. She glanced around the lonely road leading from the store to the Higurashi Shrine. It appeared the same as it did before she'd made her discovery: deserted, except for herself; her older brother, walking behind her; and the corpse lying in the ditch. The sky hung low and wintry gray. The light had already begun to leak away, though it was only 5 o'clock. Leafless trees lined the road, silent and chilled.

Kagome shivered and put on her sweater. The dead man sprawled, naked, battered, and facedown. The long lines on his back were marred by a mass of blood on his right shoulder. Below were lean hips; muscular, hairy legs; and curiously elegant, bony feet. She blinked and returned her gaze to his face. Even in death he was handsome. His head, turned to the side, revealed a patrician profile: long nose, high bony cheeks, and wide mouth. An eyebrow, winging over his closed eye, was bisected by a scar. Long silver hair grew down to his ankles, except where it was stained by blood. His left hand was flung above his head. around the body the mud was scuffed, the imprint of a heel was stamped deep beside the dead mans hip. Other than that, there was no sign of who ever had dumped him here like this.






This will be contiued. please don't be mad i have to get off.

I likee.

Please update soon. x3

Very nice my friend...You are showing alot of improvment, keep up the good work. I'm excited to see how you use Fig in your story. Please update soon.

Other than requiring a little spellcheck (try writing in Word if you're not already), this is rather good. Nicely done, can't wait to see what happens next. :faint:

Write more. MOAR!

I like it. :)