Sango

I look apond a hill,
Wishing you were here.
Criying in my sleep,
Hoping for your return.

But then I think of pain,
Death, hate, and curse.
I think iI will not last,
With out you at my side.



Lovers

They'll gaze apond a sunset,
Then into each other's eyes.

They'll look apond a seashore,
And play and splash inside.

They'll walk home in moonlight,
Under the stars.

And when they're on the doorstep,
They'll kiss each other goodbye.

For Sango & Miroku

Sango:
Inside any love there will be fights

Miroku:
But onside all lone there is hope

Sango:
There os no way to say how it feels

Miroku:
But there is all the time in the world to wait

Sango:
There is no way to know how the other feels

Miroku:
Enless you ask for truth

Sango:
There will be no you and me

Miroku:
Why?

Sango:
Because you go for every pretty girl you see! *slap*

yeah, i know, they're really bad, but tell me what you think

Kikyo

Apond a hill,
There will be light.

Apond my heart,
There is only dark.

In the dark,
There lies only one.

The one i love,
Is the one i hate.

I wish for happiness,
But get nothing but hate.

My only dear love,
I leave you my fate.

Sweet love, will never go

I think of you,
I wish for him,
I see the day,
I long for night,
But the feeling inside,
Is pain but great,
I think now i know,
What it is,
It's sweet love,
That will never go away.

It's because of your bad spelling-okay poems though.

I like your poemsthe olny problem is the spelling,but other then that they're great :whome:

Spelling, spelling, spelling. Is that all you pple pay attention to? Pple listen to the poems and what they r saying. Not how it is spelled. I think you did a wonderful job! All 3 i mean er..2 thimbs up :whome:

I think you did awsome on them...Don't listin to what other people say about the spellinh thing...they read the poems and make comments about the spelling and what not what the poems mean.If they say that their good except the fact that you didn't spell good,then they're saying to make sure the spelling is correct and it'll be fine.((Not trying to be a hater or anythingXD))

thank you Leo-Kun and forever_demonstar, for being the only ones not making fun of my spelling. i can't spell perfectly! the won't end because i can't spell perfectly!

The Father Who Really Cared

Daddy was there for me
But he left
He left me alone with mommy
And now I’ll never care
He was always there for me
Mommy ‘round the drunken air
He cared and cared for me and mommy so
Mommy didn’t know I existed
She would leave me at home, all alone
Daddy always loved me, no siblings to be heard
He left before mommy knew I was there
She sat around, bottle in each hand
Remembering the good old days, when daddy always cared

Almost ten now I sit at home, mommy never cares
I walk outside, the toughest breeze in my hair like walking through a prickly branch of leaves
Grabbing rope I tie it to the highest tree
Mommy didn’t know I existed, mommy never cared
Jumping off the tire swing, that daddy and I used to swing
Spinning in the air round and round
Mommy never cared
Daddy died on horseback, mommy ‘round the drunken air
He left me alone with mommy, but mommy never cared
I hang there swinging round, mommy never cared
Daddy was there for me, daddy always cared

By: Lynnsey Dobson

I Hope you like it..its very sad and i cried when i made it ...Its based on a picture i found in National Geographic!
The ten year old boy kills himself because he misses his dad for leaving him (dying) with his mother, who was always drunk and never knew he existed.

OMG!!That's so sad!!Where did you get that poem??

I made that poem for my english assignment. I knew it would be a great poem to go with such a sad picture..

Oh wow,your talented.All poems don't have to rhyme and evn when they don't,it's still awsome to read.I write poems but I don't know if anyone would like them...