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Title: Poem
Description: Poem...work with me here people!


kaitlyn - March 27, 2005 09:42 PM (GMT)
You are

You sit on the park bench
Tears streaming down you face
I ask what's wrong
You answer .
Someone insulted her?
I admit,she has faults
But loser? Thief?
I pull her in my lap
And start to sing
A lullaby well known...

¨You are my angel
You are my wonder
Nothing bad
Nothing else
You are my peace
You are my hope
Nothing bad
Nothing else
So do not forget
You are my angel
You are my wonder
You are my peace
You are my hope
Keep this in your heart forever ¨

I finish my song
She sits up and blows her nose
Gives me a thank you smile
And walks back to school

The End

And if you want an Inuyasha theme,she walked back to the well............So whadya think.,

Parasite - March 27, 2005 11:23 PM (GMT)
That there is peace of art, I love it, keep going.

kaitlyn - March 27, 2005 11:47 PM (GMT)
It was a poem........but it could become a story.........would you like that?

Parasite - March 27, 2005 11:57 PM (GMT)
Sure, that will sound nice, PM me when after every update.

kaitlyn - March 28, 2005 12:31 AM (GMT)
Okay......Here is the stry derived from the poem.........
Poetic Lullaby Dearest

You are

You sit on the park bench
Tears streaming down you face
I ask what's wrong
You answer .
Someone insulted her?
I admit,she has faults
But loser? Thief?
I pull her in my lap
And start to sing
A lullaby well known...

¨You are my angel
You are my wonder
Nothing bad
Nothing else
You are my peace
You are my hope
Nothing bad
Nothing else
So do not forget
You are my angel
You are my wonder
You are my peace
You are my hope
Keep this in your heart forever ¨

I finish my song
She sits up and blows her nose
Gives me a thank you smile
And walks back to the well.
.....................................
Kagome paced in front of the well,thinking about what had happened. She had lent the jewel shards to Inuyasha. She realized he was going to give them to Kikyo. So she had grabbed the Shards back. Inuyasha had called her a thief. When she answered that he should not give the shards to Kikyo,he told her he prefered Kikyo to her because Kagome was a loser. It had been a slap to Kagome. She vowed then and there to get rid of that jerky look on his face,even if it meant killing him. Sango,Miroku and Kirara had joined her,because Inuyasha had:Spied on Sango naked,and tried to rape her,to Miroku he broke his staff cleanly in two,and the staff being a gift from his father,it caused Miroku a lot of pain. Kirara went with Sango. Shippo joined too,because Inuyasha had broke both of Shippo'legs,which took a week to heal. They were out for revenge.
Kagome was about to jump down the well when she looked at her clothes. They were her school uniform,which would not do. She walked into her house and changed into a demon slayer outfit Sango had managed to get her. It fit perfectly. Making sure her dagger was ready,she jumped down the well. Inuyasha,you will regret choosing that slut over me and hurting my friends.
...............................

Parasite - March 28, 2005 12:34 AM (GMT)
That was really good, I really injoy your writing.

kaitlyn - March 28, 2005 12:36 AM (GMT)
I´m going to say that is an idea of what is happening-look for thw topic I started for the story. Callled Inuyasha and one too may bad descisions...........Look for it.

dark_sango - March 30, 2005 08:28 PM (GMT)
*tear* that is p[rettyful! lol but really it is very well written and great! u got my thumbs up! lol

kaitlyn - March 31, 2005 11:48 PM (GMT)
I am writing a story based on it.............Inuyasha and one too many bad decsiions.

dark_sango - April 1, 2005 12:20 AM (GMT)
lol i have to read that then lol

kaitlyn - April 1, 2005 12:49 AM (GMT)
YAYA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!




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