Title: my last poem on this site
Description: it's me the real narakugod
narakugod - March 30, 2005 05:25 PM (GMT)
here it is i was mad when i wrote it
a maggt crushed by my shoe
your nothing but sh*t
nobody loves you
your not even worth my piss
the words i say
cannot express my rage
i'll rip your throat out as you lay
my concious is not a friend but a cage
this cage protects you not me
i'll slit your throat
and f**k the wound clean
rage is my ocean i'm in the boat
throw you over and let you float
than i laugh as you slowly choke
:yesyes: :yesyes: thank you thank you no applause....... :creepysmile:
Parasite - March 30, 2005 07:13 PM (GMT)
dark_sango - March 30, 2005 07:46 PM (GMT)
Sango Evers - March 30, 2005 09:23 PM (GMT)
Andrew!!!! What happened? :pigcry:
augi - March 30, 2005 09:31 PM (GMT)
Eh, the rhyme was definently forced. Also, anger doesn't fuel a good poem.
Kougagurl - March 30, 2005 09:51 PM (GMT)
That was awesome........Whatever could have made you so mad? *feels bad* It wasn't me was it? :bigeyescry:
Sango Evers - March 30, 2005 10:00 PM (GMT)
It was a good poem. But What happened?
Savira N. - March 30, 2005 10:19 PM (GMT)
The was the best anger poem I've ever heard. I have two poems made from anger myself. Of course, I only posted the one of them. They are called "The Hell-Born Child" and "Freedom".
sangorules - March 30, 2005 10:59 PM (GMT)
don't worry ashley, you're not the reason, but i only know a little on why, i think....
that was a great poem!!!!! it's better then anything i could do! :cheer: :cheer: :cheer: :cheer: :cheer: :cheer: :cheer: :cheer:
Sesshoumaru'sSister - March 31, 2005 12:18 AM (GMT)
Aika - March 31, 2005 04:52 PM (GMT)
Augi is right. Anger doesn't fuel a good poem, but, atleast you got your anger out before you did anything rash. o.O
dark_sango - March 31, 2005 08:13 PM (GMT)
i think i might kno y but i wont say nething just incase im wrong..... and it might take him a while to reply cuz he can only get on at school.... i think
narakugod - April 1, 2005 05:11 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (augi @ Mar 30 2005, 04:31 PM) |
| Eh, the rhyme was definently forced. Also, anger doesn't fuel a good poem. |
meh my poems aren't that great i draw more than anything
narakugod - April 1, 2005 05:13 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Kougagurl @ Mar 30 2005, 04:51 PM) |
| That was awesome........Whatever could have made you so mad? *feels bad* It wasn't me was it? :bigeyescry: |
no one on this site makes me mad. you guys are all good people from what i can tell. than again i hardly no anyone anymore
narakugod - April 1, 2005 05:17 PM (GMT)
| QUOTE (Sango Evers @ Mar 30 2005, 05:00 PM) |
| It was a good poem. But What happened? |
really,.......... some one just said somestuff........ that's it
narakugod - April 1, 2005 05:26 PM (GMT)
anyways hows this one than?
another lie
i can't breathe as sour milk is poured
down my throat, but no taste as i choke
down into my gut, and lungs, i'm scared
as i try to cry, i cant i broke
the curdling milk i cannot taste
i open my mouth to talk
i open my mouth and i make
another lie, in my mouth shove more chalk
i want to tell the truth, i can't
the taste gets worse, don't know when
tell the truth, i just know i can't
but i know i'll be happy then.
.............................................................
say what you want. i like the poems i write.
dark_sango - April 1, 2005 09:30 PM (GMT)
ok i kinda figured but i didnt want to say nething....
narakugod - April 4, 2005 03:20 PM (GMT)
uhhhmmmm what? .... i don't get what you mean by that..... what did you figure?
xFallenxLoverx - May 9, 2005 01:52 AM (GMT)
it was great as always, i miss your poems. I wouldnt happen to be the cause of anything would I?
xFallenxLoverx