i wrote a song here are the lyrics...


She was the girl of his dreams
And she knew it
But he never realized
Deep inside, she triely lost it...

First the closest people to her
Faded away slowly
Then tears of pain bled inside
She fell, feeling so lonely
Her father dissapeared without a trace
no face was ever showing
He might have left his love
Yet still it was dissolving
Never ending lies
Always surrounded her
She wore a mask
And tried to make it better
But now all that's left
Is the memory
She can't seem to define
Her perfect family

She was the girl of his dreams
And she knew it
But he never could tell
Deep inside, she truely lost it...

She tried to make it all alone
She never ceased the daily lie
Nobody noticed all theses years
Deep inside, quite how she cried
No one sems to care about her
No one ever glanced
Everytime she closed her eyes she begged a second chance
"Worry" is as lost as her soul
Everyone forgets it
Her past never truely showed
In her eyes, so softly lit

Though she hid it well
He finally realized
On the outside she was fine
Until he looked into her eyes
"What took me so lang?"
He asked himself
"Why didn't i notice?
I left her by herself...
I was blinded, too stuborn to know this
Consumed by denial
I was oblivious to the fact
She always scented of "suicidal"

She was the girl of his dreams
And she knew it
But he never could tell
Deep inside, she truely lost it...

The blood lying on her bed
Told the story too well
Kept her eyes open
And left a note just so he could tell

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"I'm so sorry
I couldn't do it
This was the only way out
Please, please forgive it
One last thing
I want you to know
I have and will always love you
And i hope it always showed..."

She was the girl of his dreams
And she knew it
He finally noticed
But too late, she already stopped it...

By herself...


wutcha think? is it ok? its called "By herself" it's the last out of m story in poems... plz give feedback!

:yesyes: i like it! :giggle:

I can imagine it.................Greaty! :kisshappy: :kisshappy: :snailride: :snailride: :snailride: :butterfly: :fox:

thats great! i really like it! i can picture it right now...awsome

awsome!!! i love and can picture it lmao its greaty!!!!! now all do thge wave!!!
:wave:

-kagome353 aka Amanda :king: :giggle: