i luv writin so heres a sample of one of my poems-

Love
It can hurt you.
It can break your heart.
It can never make you feel good again.

But love can also heal.
It can hide the pain from the past.
And it can make you feel truly happy.

Love can brainwash you,
Wiping everything from your mind
Except for that one person.
It can make you think you’re happy
When really, its just hiding the uneasiness you feel inside.
Love can blind you.

Love can also open your eyes,
To a new world out there.
That you never thought existed.
It can expose you to new people.
People who care about you
And accept you for who you are.

Love can do so many things to someone.
Are you loved?

plz tell me wat u think!!!!!!!!! :excited:

IT'S RELE GOOD!!! AND SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO TRUE!!!! :kicking: :excited: :kicking: :hehe: :music:

yep.... its true!!! lol :hehe:

i feel so great that pplz like my poems!!! *does happy dance* :music:

my friend and i wrote an inuyasha fan fiction, but altogether my guess is that without putting it in 3 colomns, it's about 42 pages long!!!! but, it's good, and funny too! but i think it's too long to post on here! unless you really want to read it, i could post a page per day :excited: but, idk, anyway, great poem reina!!!! you peoples are so talented with writing poems!!! (yeah, yeah, i know, i sound like a suck up) :excited:

woah....

anyways.... sesshoumaruismine u posted so much!!! can u wait up 4 me plz?! *puppy eyes*

woah..... reina..... u posted a LOT!!!! *falls over and faints* you rele do have 2 much time on ur hands.... XP

XP yes i do have 2 much time on my hands, but wut do u think about da poem?

yeah, but right now were tied!!! and i was kind of waiting up for you after i made it to 1,100, and now where both at 1,102!!! so were even right now!!!!!!!! :excited: i'm sorry :hug:

sry i posted 1106!!!! i realized wut happenned so i loaded dis one.... SRY!!! :cryriver:

Crushes will come and go
But true love only comes once
There will be ppl out there
Who act like they love you.
But they really don’t.
Love will blind you, making you think
They truly care about you.
But once you find out it’s not real,
That they were cheating on you,
That’s when it hurts.

Some people may never love again.
Some close up tighter than a clam shell.
Never letting any light in.
But keep in mind that no matter what happens,
There will always be a true love for you out there,
Just waiting to be found.

TELL ME WUT U THINK!

KAWAII!!!! [which tecnically...doesnt make sense...but i really liked it!!!] :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship: :worship:

that's okay! i mean, i can always catch up! and were at the same posts!! lol!!! :excited: oh, and great poem! i love it too! :cryriver: peoples, stop posting such awesome stuffs! you make me feel like an amature.....or a suck up, you know, sucking up to you all, lol! jk :peace:

wutz wrong with sucking up? lol -jk...but they r really good so wutz the point of not saying so? :excited:

awww... thx... u like them!!! *passes out hugs*

:hug: thank you

oops, sorry i've posted to much on this one! i'll log off! i'm sorry! i'll let you catch up! sorry! great poems! :excited:

eh-heh... :excited:

*passes out hugs* MAN I FEEL THE LOVE!!!! :hug:

hehe, thank you :hug: :hug:

The feel of the cool breeze on my face
blowing gently, sweeping away the exess worries and thoughts
leaving behind an incredible feeling happiness, joy, and belonging.

falling into the ground, having the soft grass break my fall
looking up at the clear blue sky, with it's soft, fluffy clouds blending in perfectly.
the lavender flower blossoms floating through the air, and I raise my hand
to feel the soft caress of the flowers.

I hear your laughter, see your smile.
extended your hand to me, and helped me up.
I sprung up and you pulled me into a hug.
I am so happy, to be here with you, alone.

I remember the old times, when we were children.
We would hold hands and play in this field of grass, under the same trees, the same sky.
Now, i look up, and see the same sky, the same sun smiling on me.
And the same person sitting next to me, enjoying everything, appreciating it.


heres a poem i wrote... i also posted in the other section.... waddya think?

that is so awesome!! it's really good :hug:

thx!

your welcome! :excited:

:hug: at least someone here enjoys my writing!!! :hug: i feel so loved!

this is the lyrics to "dreaming of you" by selena, and i luv the lyrics!!! theyre so sad and sweet!

Late at night when all the world is sleeping
I stay up late and think of you and I wish on a star
That somewhere you are thinking of me too

'Cause I'm dreaming of you tonight
'Til tomorrow I'll be holding you tight
And there's nowhere in the world I'd rather be
Than here in my room dreaming about you and me

Wonder if you ever see me and I wonder if you
Know I'm there (Am I there)
If you looked in my eyes would you see what's inside
Would you even care

I just wanna hold you close, but so far
All I have are dreams of you
So I wait for the day and the courage to say
How much I love you

I'll dreaming of you tonight

'Til tomorrow I'll be holding you tight
And there's nowhere in the world I'd rather be
Than here in my room dreaming about you and me

(BRIDGE)
Ahh-Ahh
I can't stop dreaming of you
I can't stop dreaming
I can't stop dreaming of you

Late at night when all the world is sleeping
I stay up and think of you
And I still can't believe that
You came up to me and said
I love you
I love you too

I'll be dreaming with you tonight
'Til tomorrow and for all of my life
And there's nowhere in the world l'd rather be
Than here in my room dreaming with you endlessly

Cool.

i just luv that song

........................... anyone care 2 post?

Moon Child-

The sunlight creeps up my skin.
I can feel the burn.
My skin is on fire, blazing with pain.
I can't stay by the sun
I am a child of the moon.

All my life, I have been hiding.
Hiding from the sun, in the night.
I iwsh I could feel the sun
withouth the pain.
But I can't, I'm a child of the moon.

(there is a disease like this out in the world actually. I dont no the whole term, but the shortened is called XP. its when victims of XP have something wrong with their DNA, and they get severely burned whenever they feel any UV rays. most XP victims die young, and there is not much research going on to save this. Which is really sad, because not many people know about it, and can donate money to the researh centers.)

ill post some more later, g2g now

I like so much you're poem. I'll read them again. But its so real. I got of couple of thing that look like your poem.


I love this.

omg u are so awesome!!! :hug:

:hehe: :hehe: . But so it's nice.

thank yas!!!

look at this-

I'll stop loving you when
Diamonds never sparkle
And flowers cease to grow
When thunder doesn't echo
And rivers do not flow
When hearts no longer wonder
And hands are never held
When smiles are only memories
And hope is never felt
When trees no long blossom
And the stars refuse to shine
When autumn has no falling leaves
And winter no longer dies
When time has no more tomorrows
And rainbows have no hue
When God alone commands me
Then I'll stop loving you

its so good!! i didnt write it though...

:angel: it's good

thank yas!!! i didnt write it though :angel:

i wanna post a song I wrote......... just let me find it

ok it's called bled for you
[chorus:whisper]
don't you know i bled for you
i slice my wrist and die for you
but i know you still don't see
what the F*CK you look right through me
i bleed for you
i bled for you
you don't see
look through me (<x3: get louder)
[lead]
maybe only say last time? (<quiet again)
YOU DON'T SEE
ALL THE SH*T I'VE DONE
for you
I've bled
i've cried
I've wasted my life
and thrown it away
THROWN IT AWAY
i've cried your name
put myself to shame
ALL IN YOUR F*CKING NAME
AND YOU STILL PASS BY ME
WHY [reapet chorus: yell]
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ok it's not written in the order it's sang in buuutttt wtf

thats good! but depressing, but very good!

it's ment to be that way. i had a song called "la la la i can't hear you" but i lost it and i don't remember the lyrics. i could post kill yourself and death by sound to. oh and there are no angel/.......... or the one i wrote last night
i think it's dreams so real.... yeah and here it is

((one of those really short songs and [BU] means back up]))
every night i start to dream x6(<start at quiet whisper and get louder)
all my dreams the feel so real
[bu]
every night i start to dream
[lead]
My dreams make me hurt and feel
[bu]
all my dreams make me scream
[lead]
in my dreams i cut my wrist and scream
[bu]
i see blood spill as i sleep
[lead]
my corpse floating in blood filled streams
[bu]
than as i slowly wake x4 (<whisper)
[chorus:yell]
IT'S NOT A DREAM JUST REALITY

nice....