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Title: my personal fan fic... dream land


narakugod - October 6, 2004 05:04 AM (GMT)
this may sound weird but I decided to do a fan fic of a dream I had.... i couldn't think of any inu ones but hey
DREAM LAND CH1
girl: "a shattered dream an endless eternity...... one is my hell the other my bliss..... into that broken glass I stare longingly for it to mend......... wanting to escape reality and never come back again....."
boy: ARE YOU STILL WORKING ON THAT?
girl: yes and why is it any of your buisness?
boy: ? well I geuss it's not but it's just anno-
girl: I have to finish this you know that
boy: well can you finish it in your room?
girl: why don't you go to your rom
boy: i don't wanna
girl: *glares* fine you annoying little freak
*stamps up to room mumbling* annoying lit...... jeez I just wanna...... GOD!
now lets see........*looks at clock* crap I can't work on this now IT"S 12 a.m.
*gets ready for bed and goes asleep*
me: to dream a dream of peace is a heavanly bliss beyound compare, to dream of evil is a fate worse than death, even though a dream is not reality it may just leave you questioning the rest of your life. this girls name is mai, her bro. is nouta.
and even though it may not seem like it these two are very close
what mai needs to learn is dreams are just as dangerous as reality sometimes.

if you like this dream fic of mine.... and would like to have chapter two plz post possotive replies and we shall see :excited:

Sesshomaru_stalker - October 6, 2004 09:08 PM (GMT)
that's really good so far! please continue it! :excited:

narakugod - October 6, 2004 09:09 PM (GMT)
if i can get more people to give posotive responses then it will

Wind_Scar_Dream - October 7, 2004 02:04 AM (GMT)
That's REALLY good! The wording is SOOOO deep!

narakugod - October 7, 2004 02:11 AM (GMT)
really...... hmm I'm already working on ch2

WingZer0 - October 15, 2004 12:05 AM (GMT)
Looks pretty good

narakugod - October 15, 2004 12:07 AM (GMT)
thank you very much :excited:
the other chapters are already on the forum...... did I already tell you that?
oh well

Cold_blood_ninja - October 15, 2004 12:19 AM (GMT)
really really good...but i don't understand the end..

narakugod - October 15, 2004 12:22 AM (GMT)
you mean to this ch?
yeah It is kinda confusing but I'm proud :excited:

Cold_blood_ninja - October 15, 2004 12:24 AM (GMT)
you should be proud of urself...u may be a director of an Anime show in the future...this Ninja don't have any luck but hope u will get a lot!!!

narakugod - October 15, 2004 12:27 AM (GMT)
i am writting an anime movie and like five different mangas :hehe:

Cold_blood_ninja - October 15, 2004 12:32 AM (GMT)
well...all i can said is good luck and someone have told me SH** in this forum.lol...

narakugod - October 15, 2004 12:34 AM (GMT)
what?




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