me: an eternal slumber is my wish. to never awake from bliss..... I wish to sleep. I wish to dream. until It makes me scream.
* mai has just gotten over the site of ..... whatever it was hurting her poor brother and has made here way into a sort of forest/swamp surronding... . and now she will do absolutly anything to help him*
mai:*looks around* wtf am I.? jeez I need a map or somethin'..... HEY! CAN ANYONE HELP!?
*mai hears a voice coming from a hole in a nearby hill*: I may have a map.....
mai: who said that? (well that's a little to convenient)
borgir: I saied it ma'am.......(he said while coming out of the shadows)
mai: who's "I".....
borgir: how should I know? you haven't introduced yourself.
mai: I mean who are you?.... *she said with a mocking tone*
borgir: if you wish'ed to know why did you not say? I am borgir ...... a map maker
mai:*in an even stronger tone* You a map maker... (he can't be a map maker... I mean look at him...... he only has one hand)
borgir: do you doubt my skill?
mai: I have yet to see any
borgir: hhrmph. then maybe I'll leave you alone to starve in the woods with out my help?
mai: I doubt you can draw a map anyway * she said while walking away*
borgir: then at least let me tell you of slogeth....... a weapons maker..... you'll be needing weapons to fight against.... nonsourent.....
mai:*turns around* who?.......
borgir the one who trapped your brother.....
mai: *walks back and grabs him by the collar of his shirt* IF YOU ARE WORKING WITH HIM I'LL-
borgir: kill me to?......... you shouldn't talk so loud here... because in this place what seems like nothing is something and may just be able to chop your head off

:excited: ~~~that's all I got for now post and tell me what you think~~~~ :excited:

this is getting good! i like the fact that it keeps on getting really suspence full, and that your adding more charaters in that well, add more deph into it! great job, please post more :excited:

then I shall contuinue.................whenever I'm to tired right now

Nice Fan Fic! ^^

thanks.......... hey did you read the first two?
I'm already working on ch 4

Yeah you can tell you working really hard on these fan fics!

of course they are my babies :hehe:
anyway I love to write things and make up chars and all that fun stuffs :kicking:

LOL

*looks hurt*
I was being serious
that is my favorite thing to do I love to draw :inlove: :inlove: :inlove: :inlove:
If I couldn't draw then I'd be writing but I can so I do both

Well, this ones a bit harder to follow along but it hasn't made me uninterested. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK

really....... oh kay I think the next one is easier to follow

damn!! i'm ur fan already...you should make it longer cause i'm gonna be alone again when i finish ch.4... :cryriver:

I'll make ch 5 a long one :excited:
anyway
I'll keep writing if people keep responding

So far so good narakugod..keep up the good work!^^ Oh, have u read my fanfic yet?

Oh yeah...ON TO CHAPTER 4!!!!!!!!

kay....... I think i've read it

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